1、如何寫勸說性建議信【單元寫作呈現(xiàn)】Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong. He is also asking for some advice. Read the following letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.Dear Miss Wang,Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. Im not very good at communicating with people. Although I

2、 try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change the situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.Yours,Xiao Dong【寫作分析】 本單元的寫作要求是根據(jù)Xiao Dong的一封來信，假借Miss Wang的口氣寫一封回信。體裁屬于勸

3、說性寫作（persuasive writing）范疇中的“建議信（letter of advice）”。話題“無法融入班集體及交友的苦惱”是中學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)過程中經(jīng)常碰到并感到困惑的問題，題材貼近學(xué)生生活，屬于開放性的話題，思維空間相對(duì)較大，有利于學(xué)生自由發(fā)揮，運(yùn)用自己的思維方式去解決問題。這符合書面表達(dá)的要求，即能夠正確運(yùn)用英語進(jìn)行交際?！緦忣}要素】 寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：1. 確定文體：這是一篇應(yīng)用文，是學(xué)生熟悉的書信，寫作中應(yīng)注意書信的常規(guī)格式。2. 主體時(shí)態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3. 主體人稱：由于是給別人提出建議，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第二人稱為主。4. 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：?jiǎn)栴}介紹；建議一；建議二；建

4、議三；我的愿望。5. 注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)之間邏輯連貫，行文通順。【思路引導(dǎo)】 本題要求寫一封回信，謀篇布局時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)步驟： 首先，回應(yīng)來信中提出的問題，并分析原因。 其次，針對(duì)該問題，提出2-3條合理的建議并說明理由。Ideas Why1. to ask people their likes and dislikes1. to find classmates with the same interests2. to join in discussions and show interest in other peoples ideas2. to get to know dif

5、ferent people and let them see you are friendly3. .3. . 最后，寫一兩句結(jié)束語，如：希望我的建議對(duì)你有幫助等等?！菊Z言積累】1. Introduction: Im sorry (that) you are having trouble / difficulty / problems in making friends. I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. Im glad to receive y

6、our letter asking for my advice on .However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you. / Here are a few suggestions.I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.2. Ideas & Reasons:First(ly), why not .? If you do this, .Secondly, you should / can

7、 . Then / That way, .Thirdly, it would be a good idea if . By doing this, .Last but not least (最后但并不是最不重要的) .3. Conclusion:I hope you will find these ideas useful.As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above.I hope whats mentioned ab

8、ove might be helpful .I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates.I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.【參考范文】Dear Xiao Dong,Im sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change i

9、f you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.Firstly, why not take an active part in discussions? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views.Secondly, you should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly. Last but not least, Im always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I c