1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上浙江新高考英語作文指津?qū)ｎ}一 讀后續(xù)寫選材特點(diǎn)1所需閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在 350 以內(nèi)；2多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。評分參考閱卷時主要考慮以下內(nèi)容： 1與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；2內(nèi)容的豐富性和對所給關(guān)鍵詞語的覆蓋情況；3應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性； 4上下文的連貫性。注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；2應(yīng)使用 5 個以上(即至少 6 個)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線(單下劃直線即可)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

2、寫作步驟1精讀文章，確定文章線索，如是以時間為線索還是以空間為線索等，這有利于“順藤摸瓜”。2仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫要求，如字?jǐn)?shù)限制、使用幾處下劃線關(guān)鍵詞語、續(xù)寫段落的首句提示等，做到“心中有數(shù)”。3回扣原文，想象續(xù)寫內(nèi)容?？焖倩刈x短文，揣摩文章的思路，結(jié)合段首的提示語和劃線詞語提示，確定續(xù)寫段落的內(nèi)容。4擬寫草稿，修改錯詞病句。結(jié)合提示語和文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫出草稿，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語言的豐富性，上下文的銜接。5標(biāo)出所使用的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語，最后謄寫文字時，務(wù)必做到“字跡工整、清晰”。方法技巧1在讀懂原文的基礎(chǔ)上，緊扣原文中心，以原文的結(jié)局為起點(diǎn)，寫出故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展和變化。2對

3、原文故事沒有寫出的情節(jié)展開合理的推想，打開思路。多角度地想象出幾種情況或結(jié)局，并從中加以最優(yōu)選擇。3要注意前后照應(yīng)，符合邏輯，防止自相矛盾。必須與上文緊密聯(lián)系，使上下文融為一體。4原文的主要角色，續(xù)文中都要安排“戲”，但不要引進(jìn)影響事件結(jié)局的新角色。注意確保四個一致：1要與原文的主題或作者的本來意圖保持一致。2要與原文的體裁、結(jié)構(gòu)、寫作手法保持一致。3要與原文的語言特點(diǎn)和敘事風(fēng)格保持一致。4主要人物的思想行為、性格特點(diǎn)要與原文保持一致。寫作要求閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was o

4、n the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank，he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried again and again but couldn't get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and aske

5、d，“It looks like you've got a problem，”Arthur said.“I'm afraid so.I'm in a big hurry and I can't start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help？”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said，“Thanks.If you're sure it wouldn't be too

6、 much trouble，you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.I'd be glad to help.”The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat.After placing it on the ground，he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started wa

7、lking，he heard the long loud noise of an alarmIt was from the bankThere had been a robbery(搶劫)!Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front

8、of the bank.People asked each other ， “What happened？” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur，still carrying the suitcase，turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me li

9、ke that ？” He thought.“The suitcase ！ She thinks I'm the bank thief！”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened，and without another thought，he started to run. 注意：1所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；2應(yīng)使用 5 個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1：As he was r

10、unning，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！”Paragraph 2：The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur【經(jīng)典范文】【范文一】As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！” And also at the moment，Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the ban

11、k robberSo Arthur didn't stop，but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it，jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver，“Go to the police station， please.The man shouting behind is the bank thief ！”The taxi raced away like the wind.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station

12、and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously，the police had already learned about the robberyThey opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money inside ， as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase.Later，with the information，

13、the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words：153)【范文二】As he was running，Arthur heard the young man shouting behind，“Stop，stop！” Thinking of the way the young man had behaved，he realized the young man might be the bank robberSo Arthur ran faster and stopped a

14、taxi.The moment he got into the taxi，he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went

15、in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police，he heard a voice outside，“Help！Help！” To the surprise of Arthur，it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and insid

16、e the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words：158)專題二 概要寫作寫概要時，讀者要把文章的具體信息用一些具有概括功能的詞和句表述出來，而不是抄襲文章的原句，更不是把細(xì)節(jié)性信息作為中心，而是要通過對文章中的單詞、詞組和句子進(jìn)行合理轉(zhuǎn)換，對文章的具體信息進(jìn)行概括，再用合適的語言表述出來。 選材特點(diǎn)1所需閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在 350 以內(nèi)；2所選材料體裁沒有限制，以說明文、議論文和記敘文為主。評分參考閱卷時主要考慮以下內(nèi)容： 1對原文

17、要點(diǎn)的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況；2應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；3上下文的連貫性； 4對各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性情況。注意：理解準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋全部要求，完全使用自己的語言，準(zhǔn)確使用相應(yīng)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，得分相應(yīng)比較高。相反，如果概要寫作部分出現(xiàn)兩句以上整句抄自原文現(xiàn)象，得分檔次將會大大降低；所寫內(nèi)容與所提供內(nèi)容無關(guān)不得分。寫作步驟1仔細(xì)閱讀原文，掌握文章的主旨大意。在閱讀過程中，要注意搜尋要點(diǎn)，如議論文中的論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)，記敘文中的發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)局等。2列出文章的要點(diǎn)和各段落的主題句?？梢杂孟聞澗€標(biāo)記，也可做筆記，將要點(diǎn)逐一列出。3分析原文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)，將內(nèi)容分項扼要表述，并注意在結(jié)構(gòu)上的順序。4寫出初稿。根據(jù)列出的要

18、點(diǎn)和對原文的理解，用自己的語言組織內(nèi)容，嘗試寫出概要。5修改、定稿。認(rèn)真閱讀初稿，對照原文，檢查是否漏掉重要內(nèi)容。檢查并確定拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確無誤。檢查是否符合規(guī)定的詞數(shù)要求。方法技巧在掌握一定的解題步驟后，為了順利完成概要寫作，學(xué)生在寫作時還需要注意以下方法技巧。1要點(diǎn)齊全。概要寫作主要考查學(xué)生概括文章主旨大意和準(zhǔn)確獲取關(guān)鍵信息的能力，關(guān)鍵信息獲取不準(zhǔn)確往往導(dǎo)致所寫概要要點(diǎn)不齊全。要點(diǎn)全面是評分的重要方面，因此學(xué)生要訓(xùn)練自己的語篇能力和閱讀能力，既把握文本的整體和部分又把握它們之間的邏輯關(guān)系。2精練簡潔。精練指的是概括的內(nèi)容要高度濃縮。學(xué)生可以利用概括的方法對文本內(nèi)容進(jìn)行提煉，用刪略的方法

19、去換不重要或者不必要的細(xì)節(jié)。簡潔指的是所使用的語言簡練。學(xué)生可以用抽象的、概括性的語言代替具體形象的語言。3靈活轉(zhuǎn)換。語言轉(zhuǎn)換就是用不同的詞或句式來表達(dá)與原有表達(dá)內(nèi)容相同的意義，且重新表達(dá)后能做到簡單易懂。靈活轉(zhuǎn)換包括語言換說和句子重構(gòu)。語言換說可以通過同義、近義和反義變換來替換需要被替換的詞匯；句子重構(gòu)可以改變原有句子中個別詞和詞組在句子中充當(dāng)?shù)恼Z法成分或變換句式來實(shí)現(xiàn)。注意確保四個一定： 1一定要使用第三人稱。2一定不可加入自己的觀點(diǎn)。3一定不可對原文內(nèi)容加以評論。4一定不要引入與原文內(nèi)容無關(guān)的信息。寫作要求閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇 60 詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Getting rid o

20、f dirt，in the opinion of most people，is a good thing.However，there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century，people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease，as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let il

21、ls in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538，the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry ，King of France，was famously dirty.Upo

22、n learning that a nobleman had taken a bath，the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好處) of dirt was long­lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking， clean

23、ing away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet，it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War .Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea： Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer，surface

24、s to shine.Has the hate for dirt，however，gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first­time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt，which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary，Mary Ruebush，an American immunologist (免疫學(xué)家)，

25、encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.【經(jīng)典范文】People have mixed opinions about dirt on our skin.(要點(diǎn) 1)For a long time in history，people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting i

26、ll.(要點(diǎn) 2)However，people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.(要點(diǎn) 3) Yet，some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.(要點(diǎn) 4)【范文點(diǎn)撥】(一)要點(diǎn)分析1文章第一段就是本篇文章的主題句，亮明了總的觀點(diǎn)：“Howe

27、ver，there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.”換句話說：“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt.”再結(jié)合下文談到的主題可知“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin.” 范文中的要點(diǎn) 1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”概括非常精練。2第二段主要談到了在 16 世紀(jì)，人們認(rèn)為“dirt on the s

28、kin was a means to block out disease”尤以英、法兩國的貴族為代表。結(jié)合第三段第一句“Though the belief in the merit(好處) of dirt was long­lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.”可知，直到 18 世紀(jì)之前，人們都認(rèn)為 dirt是很“友好的”，有助于預(yù)防疾病。范文中的要點(diǎn) 2“For a long time in history，people of some Europea

29、n countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.”很好地總結(jié)了這些要點(diǎn)。3 第三段用 “Though” 引出人們對 dirt 觀點(diǎn)的轉(zhuǎn)變“.since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.”再結(jié)合本段最后一部分 “Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea.” 可得出要點(diǎn) 3“However ， people began to change their att

30、itudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.”4文章最后一段第一句指出，現(xiàn)在人們對于 dirt 的態(tài)度還是有所不同，“On the contrary”引出專家的觀點(diǎn)，一位免疫學(xué)家認(rèn)為 dirt 有助于增強(qiáng)免疫系統(tǒng)。這一觀點(diǎn)得到了一些支持。范文中的要點(diǎn) 4“Yet，some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system

31、.”表達(dá)很恰切。(二)要點(diǎn)連接文章概要，在寫完了要點(diǎn)之后，下一步的工作就是要把這些要點(diǎn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行連接，使上下句之間具有連貫性。本篇文章整篇結(jié)構(gòu)是總分結(jié)構(gòu)，要點(diǎn) 2 和要點(diǎn) 3 在觀點(diǎn)上截然相反，因此，兩者之間需要表示轉(zhuǎn)折的連接詞，范文用了“However”恰到好處。要點(diǎn) 3 和要點(diǎn) 4 在觀點(diǎn)上又存在不同，因此，范文用了連接詞“Yet”。專題三 應(yīng)用文寫作類型1| 書信/電子郵件英文書信通常由下列五個部分組成：1信頭(Heading)。包括寫信人地址和寫信日期，通常寫在信箋的右上角。在比較熟識的朋友之間的通信，寫信人的地址?？墒÷?。2稱呼(Salutation)。指寫信人對收信人的稱呼

32、，如 Dear Xiaojun，寫在日期下一兩行，頂格寫，稱呼后面可用逗號，也可用冒號，一般用 Dear.或 My dear. 開頭。3正文(Body)。這是書信的主體部分，即寫信人要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。正文一般在稱呼下方隔兩行處開始寫，正文的首行左邊一般留約 5 個字母寬的空白。4結(jié)束語(Complimentary Close)。它是書信結(jié)尾的恭維話，相當(dāng)于中文書信最后的“祝好”、“致禮”之類的話語。如“Best wishes”等。5簽名(Signature)。簽名通常簽在結(jié)束語下方的中間偏右的位置，在簽名的上方可根據(jù)寫信人和收信人的關(guān)系寫 Sincerely yours/Yours sincere

33、ly(用于長輩或朋友之間)，或 Respectfully yours/Yours respectfully(用于對長輩或上級)，注意開頭字母要大寫，末尾要用逗號。假如你叫李華，你的一位朋友 John 剛從國外歸來，邀請你參加本周日在他家舉辦的朋友聚會，但你不能參加。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封電子郵件：1表達(dá)想?yún)⒓拥囊庠福?忙于準(zhǔn)備高考；3由于感冒，身體不適； 4表示歉意并另約時間。注意：1詞數(shù) 80 左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3參考詞匯：高考 the College Entrance Examination習(xí)作評閱自我修改三檔作文Dear John，

34、I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday.It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I look forward to go to your party and share your experiences abroad. To my regret，I will absent from your party because of the College EntranceExamination is just

35、 around the corner，and I am now really busy prepare for it.What's worse，I caught a bad cold lately and I am really not myself.Anyway，we have many more chances to get1.避免搭配錯誤 把 for 改為 of 2.杜絕語法錯誤go 改為 goingshare 改為 sharing添加 be 動詞刪除介詞 of把 prepare 改為 preparing改為現(xiàn)在完成時 havecaught改為一般將來時 will have 3.

36、要點(diǎn)一定不要遺漏補(bǔ)上處要點(diǎn)：Shall wetogether. (讓我們把時間定在考試之后行嗎？)I am truly sorry and hope you will accept my apology.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours， Li Huamake it after the exam？自我提升向極優(yōu)作文邁進(jìn)Dear John，I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party this Sunday. It is very kind of y

37、ou to invite me to yourhouse and I look forward togoing to your party and sharing your experiences abroad.to my regret，I will be absentfrom your party because the College Entrance Exam ination is just around the corner，and I am now really busy preparing for it.，I have caught a bad cold lately and I

38、am really not myself.Anyway，we will have many more chances to get together.Shall we make it after the exam? I am truly sorry and hope you will accept myapology.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours， Li Hua1.高級詞匯在處加入適當(dāng)過渡詞 What's worse2.高級句型把改為 with 復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)：with theCollege Entrance Examination

39、just around the corner把改為介詞關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句：for which I am now really busy preparing3.一定的修辭意識在下面標(biāo)號后寫出相應(yīng)的修飾詞reallyhappyMuchsincere類型2| 建議信1寫作目的：建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告，觀點(diǎn)要合情合理，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。2寫作方法(1)首段：a簡介自己，不要啰嗦； b說明目的，注意語氣。(2)主體：a提出具體建議；b首先肯定優(yōu)點(diǎn)，再寫需改進(jìn)內(nèi)容，否則變成投訴信； c經(jīng)常進(jìn)行交流，注意對方感受，時時提升你和我，否則容易跑題寫成議論文，因?yàn)閮?nèi)容與議論文相似。(3)尾段：總結(jié)建議，

40、注意禮貌，盼望回復(fù)。假如你叫李華，你的英國朋友 Andrew 下個月要來你校學(xué)習(xí)兩個月。他來信請你對他上學(xué)期間的交通方式提出建議。現(xiàn)在，請你用英語回一封信，按以下各點(diǎn)答復(fù)：1建議騎自行車上學(xué)；2自行車是學(xué)生常用的交通工具；3騎自行車的一些好處； 4騎自行車需注意的問題。注意：詞數(shù) 80 左右。 習(xí)作評閱自我修改三檔作文Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to andfrom school，I'd like to recommend your riding bicycle.Here are some reaso

41、ns. (騎自行車上、下學(xué)在學(xué)生中是很常見的。)As is well­known，buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycle­riding is also a way to do exercises and protect the environment.What you should do careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding an

42、d lock it after you're off it.By this way， you'll feel it simple and relax to ride a bicycle while you're here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.避免詞匯搭配錯誤處 careful 改為 carefully處 By 改為 In 2.杜絕語法錯誤處添加冠詞 a處 exercises 改為 exercise處 relax 改為 relaxing3.要點(diǎn)一定不要遺漏補(bǔ)上處要點(diǎn)：R

43、iding a bike toand from school is very common among the students.自我提升向極優(yōu)作文邁進(jìn)Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to and from school，I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons. Firstly，riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students，fo

44、r buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.Next，parking a bicycle is easy and (便利的)inour school.(事實(shí)上)，bicycle­riding is also a (實(shí)用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you'

45、;re off it.In this way，you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.高級詞匯convenientActually/As a matter of fact practical2.高級句型用 it is common practice to do. 改寫句加黑部分：it iscommonpractice for the students to

46、 ride a bike to and from school類型3| 申請信1申請信的寫作要求(1)應(yīng)符合英語信件的格式，表達(dá)方式符合英語習(xí)慣；(2)申請人的語氣要自信而不傲慢，禮貌而不卑微，即不卑不亢，恰如其分； (3)應(yīng)寫得簡明流暢，言簡意賅。 2申請信寫法：開頭：說明寫信目的(申請原因)，信息來源，對所申請工作或?qū)W校的認(rèn)識，自己的打算。主體：著重介紹自己的背景(教育情況，工作經(jīng)歷，興趣愛好，特長等)。求職信先介紹工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，要突出個人能力及工作業(yè)績；求學(xué)信要重點(diǎn)介紹自己受教育程度。總之，要努力使自己的介紹引起對方的興趣。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)自己的愿望，如希望得到面試機(jī)會等，語氣要自信而堅定。假如你

47、是我市一名高三學(xué)生李華，你打算報考一所外語學(xué)院。你在網(wǎng)上看到上海外國語學(xué)院的招生信息(admission information)，并對此非常感興趣。根據(jù)招生要求，你需要用英語撰寫一份個人申請報告，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1記述自己的個性特長及取得的成果； 2說明進(jìn)入大學(xué)后的努力方向及設(shè)想等。詞數(shù)：80 左右。 習(xí)作評閱自我修改三檔作文Dear Sir or Madam，I read about the admission information while I am surfing the net the other day.I'm interested in it.For one thing，

48、I can get on well with all my classmates.For another，I do well in my most subjects，especially in English.I like reading English poems and enjoying English movies.Speeches，deliver by famous people are also my favorite.I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city was honore

49、d the Best Speaker for my performances. English is so important to me that I intend to learnEnglish (如果我被您的大學(xué)錄取)Iwant to have a job relate to languages in the future.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours， Li Hua1.杜絕語法錯誤處 am 改為 was處 enjoying 改為 enjoy處 deliver 改為 delivered處添加連詞 and處 r

50、elate 改為 related2.要點(diǎn)一定不要遺漏補(bǔ)上處要點(diǎn)：if I am admitted into your university3.規(guī)避中式英語 處“我的大部分學(xué)科”應(yīng)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)成：most of my subjects自我提升向極優(yōu)作文邁進(jìn)Dear Sir or Madam，I read about the admission information while I was surfing the net the other day.I'm interested in it.For one thing，I can get on well with all my classma

51、tes.For another，I do well in most of my subjects，especially in English.I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies.Speeches, deliveredby famous people are also my favorite. ，Ionce won the first prize in an English speech contest1.高級詞匯在處加過渡詞What's moremajor in2.高級句型把改為省略句：whilesurfing t

52、he net the other day3.強(qiáng)烈的修辭意識根據(jù)語境寫出相應(yīng)的修held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my performances.English is so important to me that I intend to (主修)English if I am admitted into your university.I want to have a job related to languages in the future. I'm looking forward to hearing fr

53、om you soon.Yours， Li Hua飾語really/quiteexcellent/outstanding類型4| 邀請信1邀請信是邀請親朋好友或知名人士、專家等參加某項活動時所發(fā)的邀約性書信。在國際交往以及日常的各種社交活動中，這類書信使用廣泛。2一般邀請信具有簡短、熱情的特點(diǎn)。格式一般為：(1)說明與收信人的相關(guān)性與寫作意圖；(2)具體交代情景：包括受邀請的人，邀請朋友干什么、地點(diǎn)以及具體的時間等內(nèi)容。并且強(qiáng)調(diào)為什么邀請收信人而不是別的朋友；(3)表示期待朋友的回復(fù)。假定你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校將在暑假期間舉辦“澳大利亞文化展覽”。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給澳大利亞朋友 Peterso

54、n 寫一封信，請他屆時前來給你們做一次講座。目的：幫助師生了解澳洲歷史與文化內(nèi)容：簡要介紹澳大利亞的風(fēng)土人情日期：8 月第一周內(nèi)任意一天的下午時間：3：005：00，約兩個小時注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使結(jié)構(gòu)完整，詞數(shù) 80 左右。習(xí)作評閱自我修改三檔作文Dear Peterson，Our school is planning to hold an Australia culture exhibition in summer vacation.I'm writing to invite you to come and give a talk on the people and custo

55、m on the continent of Australia. It will help our teachers and students learn more about your history and cultural.You may choose any day of the first week in August.You can give usthe talk that afternoon，that will start from 3: 00 pm.and finish at about 5：00 pm.(請讓我盡可能早的知道，以便于我及時作出安排)I am looking f

56、orward to seeing you and enjoying the talk.Yours， Li Hua1.避免搭配錯誤處 Australia 改為Australian處 custom 改為 customs處 cultural 改為 culture2.杜絕語法錯誤處添加冠詞 the處 that 改為 which 3.要點(diǎn)一定不要遺漏補(bǔ)上處要點(diǎn)：Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements in time.自我提升向極優(yōu)作文邁進(jìn)Dear Peterson，Our school is plann

57、ing to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation.I'm writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.We would like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and culture.You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon， which will start from 3：00 pm.and finish at about5：00 pm.I'm looking forw