1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上語法專題：短文改錯(cuò)1The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was having trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought about leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel ho

2、mesick. Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, more decisive and more creative. Because of Im on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices. In t

3、he other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.2Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. One day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.” Rose was exciting. When Rose went

4、to the managers office, the man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. She couldnt help saying, “OK! How much will you pay for me every month?” The manager thought for a while and sai

5、d, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! I will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless.3I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at te beginning and s

6、omething unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and be couldnt move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it

7、 up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink some water, and ate some food. After while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.4The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. Id l

8、ike to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They dont want me go out. They are afraid Ill be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, o

9、r fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, so I will try to persuade them.5On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the

10、riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but ver

11、y delightful I think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.6Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman，who had been teaching English for more than 20

12、yearsShe is always working hardFor a model teacher for many years， she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. In class，she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possible She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interestingIn her spare She In ti

13、me，she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short playsShe loves us so 10 much as she is always ready to help usIn the fact，she is not only our good teacher but also our good friendWe all respect and love him.7The day is my Dads birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping

14、 center downtown, and bought present for him. Then I took the subway train to home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I hesitated for

15、a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seen her smile, I felt happily. I will always ready to help others in the future.8I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK fro

16、m Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained he

17、avily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.9Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? First, it is necessary to take any exercise every dayResearch shows that get plenty of exercise ma

18、kes the heart beat fast and the lungs work harderSecond, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meatThird, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy. Smoking and alcohol drinking injures ones health a great deal, and therefore should be given up. If people

19、follow these three ways of keeping fit, theyll great improve their health10One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has lear

20、ned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man

21、began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.11Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I dont have enough tim

22、es to do that Im interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. Its the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs se

23、em to express exact how Im feeling. Besides, Im also interested in a fashion and Im always searching something special that can reflect my personality. 12The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways

24、 of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every larg

25、e city purified and reused its water, we still would have enough water. 13One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I

26、didnt know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to her, I saw the man sitting next

27、 to my aunt, smiling at me. 14In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More and more school in China require students to take part community service during the vocations. Students are often seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and

28、 visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what t

29、o work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.15After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning, I phoned to my classmate and asked him to go to see a fi

30、lm in the afternoon. Before the film was over, we returned to school to do our lessons. While we are having a rest in the corridor, I saw Mr. Liu, my head teacher. He told me that we had made some progresses in English, but my Chinese lagged behind, especially my Chinese composition. He suggested I

31、must read more and keeping a diary every day. In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well to improving composition writing. That was really good idea! What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.16Never shall I forget the first English lesson giving

32、 by Miss LiuOne Monday morning, when she entered in the classroom, we found that she was young and beautiful ladyThen she introduced herself and said they shouldnt call her Teacher Liu but Miss LiuLate, she let us go the blackboard and said something about ourselves in English in turnWhen it was my

33、turn, I felt too shy that I didnt dare to say anything before the classShe went up to me and said kind, “Dont be afraidI believe you can do it well” At last, I went to the blackboardShe praised me for that I had done17After shopping, mother and I went to a restaurant for lunchI notice mother looking

34、 at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young coupleThey ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going wellAs we left, mother stopped on their table“Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman“You remind me so many of my motherMay I hug you?” The woman smil

35、ed happily as she accepted to itAfter we left, I said, “ That was very nice of you, motherSo I didnt think she looked like grandma” “Neither did me” said mother cheerfully18Dear Li Mei, With the mid-term exam come, you must get prepared for them. I think that you need is a right study method. What w

36、e all know, there are three stage in studypreview, study in class and review, among which review was the most important. You should first make a review plan, then stick on it. I follow my review plan strictly and have made a progress in my study. It turns out to be good enough. Of course, there are

37、more than one way to review. So long as you review regular, Im sure you can find more ways to study well. If you have any question about subjects, ask me Ill be glad to help you. We may meet in our school library every Friday afternoon. Yours, Li Hua19Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming

38、 a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every t

39、ime. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her. However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears. Up to now, even if he is b

40、usy, she still does it as usual. The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.20Dear Wei Fang，It's a long time since I heard from you in last time. Now I'd like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career. A boy, Li Ming, whom father

41、died a month ago, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him come. After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened. He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At the same time, he apolog

42、ized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students. From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them. Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply. Sincerely,

43、 Zhang Ming答案1The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school. I was decidedhaving trouble get along with my parents. I had about fifty dollar in my pockets, and so I thought getting dollarsabout leaving home. It took me only two weeks away from home while I start

44、ed to feel homesick. whenLiving on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons: being more responsible, totallymore decisive and more creative. Because of Im on my own, I get to deal with my duties without being told. I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to giv

45、e me their advices. to adviceIn the other hand, I could make my own future plan. I have made rules for me to follow.0n myself2Rose wanted a job. She went to many offices and she didnt like any of them. butOne day she saw a board in an office read: “This office needs a typist whom can reading whotype

46、 200 words a minute .” Rose was exciting. When Rose went to the managers office, excitedthe man was writing something. Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head. “Do you need a typist?” asked Rose. “Yes!” he said. Rose clapped her hand. his handsShe couldnt help saying, “OK! How much

47、will you pay for me every month?” Themanager thought for a while and said, “I will pay you 77 dollars for first three the months. Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.” Rose smiled and answer, “Great! answeredI will come and work here three months late.” The manager was speechless. later3I wen

48、t hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer. It was good trip at the beginning andbutsomething unexpected happened half way. One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in hisfriendsstomach and be couldnt move any far. Nobody knew what to do it. One girl tried to call her farthermum in her

49、 mobile pone, but there was no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a Luckilytent with us. We put it up and let him rested in it. He took some medicine. Then he drink somerest drankwater, and ate some food. After/while, he felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us a ourselves

50、on the top of the mountain.4The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at makes torelaxing myself. Id like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play movies the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time Ill have during the

51、 winter holiday! WhatHowever, my parents think different. They dont want mego out. They are afraid Ill be differently toknocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose fallmy way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more f

52、reedom, so I will try to kept so persuade them.5On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an wereenvironmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. caughtThey picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it sho

53、uld die without timely help, they took it up wouldhome. Under their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think its worthwhile for him to do delighted themsuch a thing. Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.in which/that/去掉6Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman, who ha