1、UNIT 2TRAVELLING AROUND Sectiom 寫作指導(dǎo)寫作方法指導(dǎo)夯基提能作業(yè)寫作方法指導(dǎo)寫作儲(chǔ)備閱讀教材P30電子郵件，提煉電子郵件的寫作特點(diǎn)。寫作格式有兩種格式：1齊頭式，即日期，正文，署名全在左邊頂格寫。教材中采用的是這種格式。2空格式：日期，署名在右邊，正文每段開頭空兩格。給朋友寫一封有關(guān)旅行計(jì)劃的電子郵件寫作常用詞匯1pack up整理，把打包2around the corner即將來臨3take a bus/train乘公共汽車/火車4go on a tour/sightseeing旅行/觀光5book a ticket訂票6make arrangements f

2、or.為安排7in advance/ahead of time提前8broaden ones view/horizons開闊眼界9take advantage of/make use of利用10as follows如下11set out/off出發(fā)12leave for sp.動(dòng)身去某地13enjoy the scenery欣賞風(fēng)景寫作常用句型1Here/Below is my travel plan.這兒/下面是我的旅行計(jì)劃。2Winter holiday is coming/approaching.I have a plan for it.寒假要來了。對(duì)此我有一個(gè)計(jì)劃。3Im plann

3、ing to travel to Suzhou, a city called Eastern Venice.我計(jì)劃到蘇州旅游，它被稱作東方威尼斯。4May Day is coming/approaching, and I am going to travel to Shanghai to see its beautiful scenery.五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游看看它美麗的風(fēng)景。5Im planning to go there by train and come back by bus.我計(jì)劃乘火車去那兒， 乘公共汽車回來。典例剖析假如你是王林，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容給你的朋友李華寫一封電

4、子郵件，介紹你的國(guó)慶北京旅行計(jì)劃。第一天頤和園第二天長(zhǎng)城第三天天安門、清華大學(xué)和北京大學(xué)第四天國(guó)家游泳中心注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3郵件的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。定要點(diǎn)、關(guān)鍵詞及動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài) 打造一篇要點(diǎn)全面、用詞準(zhǔn)確得體時(shí)態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點(diǎn)一：國(guó)慶節(jié)就要來了。_要點(diǎn)二：我計(jì)劃從10月1日到4日花4天時(shí)間到北京旅行。_要點(diǎn)三：在第一天，我打算參觀頤和園。_The National Day is approaching/coming/around the corner.I am planning to spend 4 days from October 1s

5、t to October 4th visiting Beijing.On the first day, I am visiting the Summer Palace.要點(diǎn)四：據(jù)說它是中國(guó)最大的保存最完好的古代園林。_要點(diǎn)五：在第二天，我要參觀長(zhǎng)城。_要點(diǎn)六：它作為世界七大奇跡之一為世人所知。_要點(diǎn)七：第三天我要早起去天安門看升旗。_It is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China.On the second day, I will visit the Great Wall.It is known to the

6、 world as one of the seven great wonders of the world.On the third day, I will get up early and go to Tiananmen Square to see the flag rising.要點(diǎn)八：然后我要參觀北京大學(xué)和清華大學(xué)。_要點(diǎn)九：我夢(mèng)想進(jìn)入這兩所大學(xué)中的一所。_要點(diǎn)十：第四天我要參觀國(guó)家游泳中心。_要點(diǎn)十一：它也被叫作水立方。_Then, I will visit the Peking University and Tsinghua University.I am dreaming of e

7、ntering one of these two universities.On the fourth day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center.It is also called “Water Cube”詞匯、句式升級(jí) 創(chuàng)造極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級(jí)句式一：用since引導(dǎo)的從句連接要點(diǎn)一和要點(diǎn)二_升級(jí)句式二：用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句連接要點(diǎn)三和要點(diǎn)四_Since the National Day is approaching, I am planning to spend 4 days from October 1st to Oct

8、ober 4th visiting Beijing.On the first day, I am going to visit the Summer Palace, which is said to be the largest and bestpreserved royal park in China.升級(jí)句式三：把要點(diǎn)六改為含有as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句的復(fù)合句。_升級(jí)句式四：用非謂語動(dòng)詞作后置定語合并要點(diǎn)十和要點(diǎn)十一_As is known to the world, it is one of the seven great wonders of the world.On the fou

9、rth day, I will visit the National Aquatics Center, also called “Water Cube”假設(shè)你是王明，寒假即將來臨，你打算和家人去上海玩。請(qǐng)你給你的好友李華寫一封email，分享你的出行計(jì)劃。要點(diǎn)：1.元月21日下午2點(diǎn)左右坐高鐵去上海，到上海后入住預(yù)訂酒店，休息一晚；2第二天進(jìn)上海迪士尼樂園游玩，體驗(yàn)各種游樂設(shè)施，購(gòu)買紀(jì)念品；3第三天上午參觀上?？萍拣^，下午登東方明珠，欣賞上海全貌；4元月24日乘坐高鐵返回。注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2詞數(shù)80左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：high speed railw