1、應(yīng) 用 文 寫 作二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)Practical writing1. To analyze the writing precisely.2. To express key points completely.3. To use language beautifully.一、學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)How to write a better invitation？全國卷近五年應(yīng)用文寫作文體話題考查一覽表（2015-2019）年份卷別文體話題 2019I卷申請(qǐng)信在倫敦申請(qǐng)做當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館舉辦的中國畫展的志愿者II卷告知信告知隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽III卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)英國朋友Allen參加學(xué)校的音樂節(jié) 2018

2、I卷介紹信向外國人介紹來中國家庭做客的禮儀、習(xí)俗等II卷通知為校宣傳欄寫一則通知，介紹一部英語短片III卷介紹信向?qū)Ψ浇榻B自己學(xué)校的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況 2017I卷告知信告知外國朋友下次上課的計(jì)劃II卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)外教參觀中國剪紙藝術(shù)展III卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)留學(xué)生朋友加入校乒乓球隊(duì) 2016I卷求助信請(qǐng)外教幫忙修改申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷II卷邀請(qǐng)信為攝影展征稿III卷道歉信為不能赴約道歉 2015I卷約稿信請(qǐng)朋友為“外國文化”欄目寫稿II卷邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)外教去敬老院陪老人們過重陽節(jié)二考情一覽全國I卷近五年應(yīng)用文文體考查201520162017201820192020約稿信求助信告知信介紹信申請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)信（？）文體預(yù)測(cè)

3、：全國一卷文體考查多樣化！邀請(qǐng)信會(huì)成為考查文體嗎？話題預(yù)測(cè)：中外交流、中國傳統(tǒng)文化和社會(huì)主義核心價(jià)值觀的結(jié)合全國I卷近五年應(yīng)用文話題關(guān)鍵詞201520162017201820192020外國文化外教幫忙上課計(jì)劃中國做客中國畫展？一、評(píng)分原則1. 本題總分為15分，按五個(gè)檔次進(jìn)行評(píng)分。2. 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從內(nèi)容組織、詞匯語法和篇章結(jié)構(gòu)三個(gè)方面考慮，具體為：(1) 對(duì)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的覆蓋情況以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。(2) 使用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性、恰當(dāng)性和多樣性。(3) 上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。三、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔：(13-15分)能寫明全部要點(diǎn)；語言基本無誤；行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚；第四檔：(10

4、-12分)能寫明全部或絕大部分要點(diǎn)；語言有少量錯(cuò)誤；行文不夠連貫, 表達(dá)基本清楚；第三檔：(7-9分)能寫明基本要點(diǎn)；語言雖有較多錯(cuò)誤，但能基本達(dá)意；第二檔：(4-6分)能寫出部分要點(diǎn)；語言錯(cuò)誤多，影響意思表達(dá)；第一檔：(1-3分)只能寫出一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)；語言錯(cuò)誤很多，只有個(gè)別句子正確。二、各檔次的給分范圍和要求如何寫一封完美的邀請(qǐng)信？審題要準(zhǔn) （precise）要點(diǎn)要全 （complete）語言要美（beautiful）四、考點(diǎn)突破假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左

5、右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.（2020年1月 浙江高考真題）邀請(qǐng)信寫作關(guān)鍵之一：Analyzing審題要準(zhǔn)Precise三 審審文體: 審人稱：審時(shí)態(tài)：假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。邀請(qǐng)信第一人稱和第二人稱一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，一般將來時(shí)為輔審題失誤邀請(qǐng)信寫作關(guān)鍵之二：Key points要點(diǎn)要全CompletePara 1: state our purposePara 2：give detailed descriptionsPara 3：express our expect

6、ation1. Background2. Purpose列 要 點(diǎn)1. .2. .3. .假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。列 要 點(diǎn)1)Background： school.hold.contest. 2)Purpose： Im writing to invite. Para 1：Para 2：Para 3：1)比賽時(shí)間： It will start at. in.2)演講話題： Its topic is.3)報(bào)名方式：sign upExpectation: look forwar

7、d to.假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。首段缺少背景介紹 首段缺少寫作目的 How are you doing recently? Our school is going to hold., so Im writing the letter to invite you to.假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。結(jié)尾沒有表示出期待或希望 I hold the belief

8、that your participation will add color to the contest. Looking forward to your reply.假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。23缺少要點(diǎn)假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。213順序顛倒at 3 o clock this Saturday afternoon, lasting about two

9、hours.假定你是李華，你校將舉辦外國學(xué)生中文演講比賽，請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友George寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.比賽時(shí)間；2.演講話題；3.報(bào)名方式。時(shí)間籠統(tǒng)邀請(qǐng)信寫作關(guān)鍵之三：Language語言要美beautifulInner beautyOuter beautyInner beautycorrect 語言正確proper 語言得體 coherent 語言連貫concise 語言簡(jiǎn)潔 pure 語言地道will be heldwhich is to be語言要正確地道longing for語言出錯(cuò)The contest will take place in our school h

10、all next Sunday. All should center around the topic ”Dream in my heart”. If you are interested in it, do not hesitate to call Students Union to sign up.語言要簡(jiǎn)潔連貫has過于啰嗦套語使用要得體不合語境How to polish our writing1. Im writing the letter to invite you to join in the contest.（From Lin Shuai）Im writing the lette

11、r to invite you to _ in the contest.Knowing that you _ Chinese, I would like to invite to compete in the contest.2. Knowing that you are good at Chinese, I would like to invite you to compete in the contest. (From Chen Jie)participatehave a good command ofI詞匯高級(jí)化晚詞優(yōu)先學(xué)以致用I sincerely hope that you will

12、 _my invitation_ .take2. I hold the belief that the activity is beneficial to Chinese learners. (From Zhang Chang)I hold the belief that the activity is _ to Chinese learners.1. I sincerely hope that you will consider my invitation.(From Wang Yu) 2短語優(yōu)先化into considerationof benefit 短語優(yōu)先活學(xué)活用1. Good ne

13、ws never fails to come on time. (From Shao Mingyang)3. A Chinese speech contest is going to be held in our school. (From Sun Hao)2. So pleased am I to hear it that I write to invite you to participate. (From Wang Bingyu) 4. Knowing that there will be a contest, I cant wait to tell you about it.（From

14、 Wang Siya）III句式多樣化肯定不如雙否好陳述不如倒裝妙主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧分詞結(jié)構(gòu)不能少1. To begin with, you are talented in making a speech. (From Ren Feiran)3. However, you should sign up on our school website by yourself.(From Teng Ziyue)2. A month later, you will get the opportunity to show your Chinese. (From Sun Peiyao) 4. In a word

15、, I do hope you will accept my invitation and perform well.(From Wang Zhengyang)4行文連貫化起-創(chuàng)造良好開端承-順勢(shì)承上啟下轉(zhuǎn)-巧妙轉(zhuǎn)折過渡合-完美結(jié)束文段Outer beautybeautiful handwriting 注重外表，美化書寫813行文連貫化句式多樣化詞匯高級(jí)化短語優(yōu)先化五作品賞析14句式多樣化12詞匯高級(jí)化conveniencecontestorganize13行文連貫化One possible versionDear George, How are you getting on these da

16、ys? Our school plans to hold a Chinese speech contest for foreign students and wed like to invite you to compete in it. The contest is a good chance for you to show how well youve learned Chinese. It will take place in the school hall from 9:00 to 12:00 on the morning of January 18. The topic is “Traditional Chinese Culture”. If you are interested, sign up on our school website before January 10. I am looking forward to your reply. Your