1、2022屆高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)精選四篇（含范文）第一篇（2022惠州高三第一次調(diào)研）In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs 一one for Dad, one for Mom, and one for me. In the cellar （地窖），the very last jar of apple jam lay quietly on the shelf, waiting to be turned into an apple pie when Dad came back. Mom sat at one end of th

2、e tabic. I sat in the middle between her and Dad. I tried not to look at Dads empty place. Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.Every night, I lay awake in bed and waited for the train to stop. I waited to hear the creaky （嘎 吱作響的）sound of the gate Dad was going to fix when he ca

3、me home. I waited to hear the sound of his work boots dropping on the step by the kitchen door, and his voice calling, Im home! ”Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains made of empty flour sacks （麻袋）by Mom.Every night, Mom came to kiss me goodnight-after the train had go

4、ne by. She was listening, too. “Go to sleep. Your dad will be home soon. Maybe for the holiday.Time dragging by, finally came the day before the holiday. I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my head, whispering, “Maybe tomorrow, maybe lomorrow.”Early the next morning, the smell of coffe

5、e woke me. I ran into the kitchen. There he was! Dad lifted me onto his shoulders and pretended to stagger from my weight. Hows my boy? Youve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up any more.”He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOURI knew that word. I tried read

6、ing the other: S-U-G-A-R. Dad whistled admiringly and winked at me. Mom and I had been practicing my letters most days. I could see that Mom was pleased with me. Im going to bake a pie fbr your Dads homecoming dinner. Jimmy, bring me that jar of apple jam from the shelf in the cellar, M Mom smiled a

7、t me.注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Hearingthis, Itookthestepstwoatatimetothecellar.Nevermind,boy,accidentshappen,Dadsaidandioipedmytears.【寫(xiě)作思路】 根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容可知，本文以時(shí)間為線索展開(kāi)表達(dá)，講述了 “我”對(duì)美食蘋(píng) 果派的美好期待。“我”期待美食的同時(shí)，也期待著離家多日的父親能早日歸來(lái)。在節(jié)日來(lái)臨 之時(shí)，父親終于回家了，還帶回了制作蘋(píng)果派需要的面粉和糖，一家人很高興，母親決定烤制 蘋(píng)果派以慶祝父親的歸來(lái)。根據(jù)續(xù)寫(xiě)局部所給出的首句提示及原文的結(jié)尾可知，“我”在幫助母親取蘋(píng)果醬時(shí)應(yīng)該發(fā) 生

8、了一點(diǎn)小意外。第一段的重點(diǎn)在于描寫(xiě)“我”取蘋(píng)果醬的細(xì)節(jié)；第二段的重點(diǎn)在于表達(dá)意外 發(fā)生后，父親對(duì)“我”的撫慰及事后的處理，主題應(yīng)遵照原文所給出的家人生活幸福、和諧這 一基調(diào)。One possible version：Hecuingthis, Itookthestepstiooatatirnetothecellar. No problem.n I jumped at the request and rushed downstairs. The jar just stood quietly on the shelf, but it seemed a bit high. I climbed up t

9、he chair nearby and extended my arms as long as possible. When I just grasped the jar. 1 lost my balance and fell down. I couldnt help crying. What made me sad （主語(yǔ)從句）was not the pain but the jam （不是 而是 ）now scattered everywhere （散落一地）.There came Dad*s footsteps and Mom*s voice （完全倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）.Are you hurl?

10、 ” I shook my head slightly.Mom helped me up and asked me to go upstairs.With heavy footsteps, I moved slowly and tears welled up in my eyes （眼睛里飽含淚水）.“ Nevermind, boy, accidentshappen, “ Dadsaidandwipedmytears. But I ruined your homecoming dinner.v Sorrow overwhelmed me and I kept sobbing. No, my s

11、on, n Dad smiled gently, “ My homecoming dinner is not about the pie, but about you and your mom. Hearing this, I stopped sobbing, u But what can we eat tonight? ” uHow about an apple pie without apple jam ? Mom came upstairs and cut in. Dad and I exchanged a glance and nodded. After a while, I foun

12、d myself sitting in the chair（find+賓語(yǔ) + 賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)），and this time, I still sat in the middle between Dad and Mom.Test 2第二篇（2022廣東重點(diǎn)中學(xué)調(diào)研）My mom mentions to the Clarksons that Im sort of a babysitter and that if they ever need me, Im responsible.Three days later, Im playing a matching game with Mr.and Mrs.

13、Clarksons five- year- old son, Billy, while they enjoy dinner and a movie.Things get interesting after lightning brightens the darkening sky followed by a crash of thunder.Billy flies off the sofa and runs to his room.The Clarksons gave me emergency numbers and other instructions, but they didnt tel

14、l me what to do if their kid hides under his bed.Whats wrong, Billy? ” I ask as if I didnt know. “Nothing, he says. “ Then why are you missing ? ” Silence for a moment, then the truth. Im afraid of thunderstorms.n Part of being a great babysitter is being an expert in many ficlds.This time, I need t

15、o be a psychologist.“Billy, lots of people donrt like thunderstorms, but. ” “Im not lots of people, “ he points out.I dont know how to respond.I also dont want Billy to have a terrible night.What can I do? Then an idea hits me. If you dont come out, youre going to miss the funderstorm.v“You mean thu

16、nderstorm, v he corrects. No. I mean funderstorm.Billy sticks his head out. Whats that? uIts having fun during a thunderstorm,I explain. u When the lightning strikes, you see how many things you can do before the thunder comes.” “Like a contest? ” “Yes. At that moment, lightning lights up the room.B

17、illy looks at me expectantly.“How many socks can you put on one foot? Go! He runs to his dresser and starts putting on socks. I count along.He gets to 8 before the thunder booms. Heseems frightened again. Be fore he can dive back under the bed, I yell, “Fruits! How many can you name? ” The sky light

18、s up. Apple, banana, pear. Hes in the middle of listing melons when the round ends. Pretty impressive, I say. u What else? ” he says. uArc you hungry? ” I ask, smiling widely. At the next lightning, go to the kitchen, grab the popcorn, and come back. ” 注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Icanstillseealittleworryinhiseye

19、sandask, “ YouOK? ”“Howdidourboygetthroughthethunderstorm ” Mrs.Clarksonasks.One possible version ：Icanstillseealittlewonyinhiseyesandask, “ YouOK? ” “Yes, he says confidently, surprising me. I yell Go! when a flash of lightning comes. He rushes out of his room. Quickly, he returns, drops the contai

20、ner of popcorn, and falls breathlessly onto the floor. Sixteen seconds, n I say, looking at my watch. Not bad. We dont hear anything for a minute or two. think the storm is going away, “ he says. So is the worried look in his eyes. When the Clarksons return, they apologize for not calling home. They

21、 were in the Iheater and didnt hear the storm.Howdidourboygetthroughthethunderstonn ? ” Mrs. Clarksonasks. Funderstorm , ”Billy corrects immediately, giving me an excited look. Mr. and Mrs. Clarkson both seem very confused. Billy describes our games to his parents cheerfully. At last, he adds, “And

22、I cant wait till the next thunder and lightning! ” Billy is not kidding.I cant take other babysitting jobs if storm clouds start rolling in because I know Ill get a call from the Clarksons. Billy has a lot of records to break.第三篇（2022福州五月質(zhì)檢）Ms Hart stood in front of her class on the very first day o

23、f school and told the children a lie. Like most teachers, she looked at her students, saying that she loved them all the same, treating them all al ike. And that was impossible because there in front of her, right on the third row, was a little boy named George.Ms Hart had watched George the year be

24、fore and noticed he seldom engaged in school games, that he always wore torn dusty clothes and that he constantly needed a bath. As a whole, George was unpleasant.When Ms Hart was required to review each childs records, she put Georges off until last.But his file turned out to be a surprise.His firs

25、t- grade teacher wrote, uGeorge is a bright child with a ready laugh.He is a joy to be around.nAnother teacher wrote, u George is an excellent student well-liked by his classmates, but he is troubled because his mother has a serious illness and life at home must be a struggle.M The next wrote, Georg

26、e continues to work hard but his mothers death has been hard on him.Since his father doesnt show much interest, his home life will soon affect him if some steps arent taken.The last record wrote, “George is silent and doesnt show much interest in school. He doesnt have many friends and sometimes sle

27、eps in class.He could become a problem.By now Ms Hart realized the problem and New Year was coming fast.Her children brought her presents, all in beautiful ribbon and bright paper, except for Georges, which was clumsily wrapped in the heavy, brown paper of a scissored grocery bag.Ms Hart took pains

28、to open it in the middle of the other presents.Some of the children started to laugh when she found a toy bracelet with some of the stones missing, and a bottle that was one- quarter full of perfume.She stopped the childrens laughter when she declared how pretty the bracelet was, putting it on, and

29、wearing some of the perfume on the other wrist.George stayed behind just long enough to say, “ Ms Hart, today you smelled just like my mom used to. ”注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15()左右。AfterGeorge I eft, MsHartdecidedtoca reforh unlikeamother.Manyyearslater, MsHartattendedGeorgeswedding, wearingtheverybracelethegaveher

30、.One possible version：AfterGeorg el eft, MsHartdecidedtocareforhimlikeamother. She thought that she must do something to help George walk out the sorrow for his mothers death. On Friday she would invite George for dinner with her and treat him like her son. In her class she always encouraged George

31、to answer her question and praised him for his progress in study. On Georgers birthday, Ms Hart would gather some pupils to have a party for George and offer a fancy birthday cake. George grew up merrily and became an excellent student again.Manyyearslater, MsHartattendedGeorge siuedding, wearingthe

32、veiybracelethegaveher. When she appeared on the stage, George was excited to see his kind teacher. He saw her wearing his gift given many years ago and he knew she treasured it. He embraced her tightly, whispering, “Thank you, Ms Hart, for believing in me. Thank you so much fbr making me feel import

33、ant. Ms Hart was also excited, and her eyes were filled with tears. Then she gave the best wishes to the new couple. The whole wedding went pleasantly and cheerfully.第四篇（2022河北六校聯(lián)考）An anonymous （匿名的）persons rude note was sent to a struggling neighbor.Prior to receiving the unpleasant letter last mon

34、th, Randa Ragland and her family had been facing a variety of tough challenges.Her husband had lost his job; she had been diagnosed with some health issues; but worst of all, her 3- year- old son Jaxen had been diagnosed with stage 4 neuroblastoma just before his birthday.Jaxen had already suffered

35、seven surgeries and been hospitalized more than 20 times.Being a desperate Mom, Mrs.Ragland had to care for her little son attentively and tried to get in contact with the best doctor in the world for this condition.She and her husband travelled all the way state after state to give her little son a

36、 fighting chancc.Exhaustcd and worn out, she found the sparkle of the hope for lighting the messy situation was to go out.On top of all of these, she opened her mailbox in Pinson, Alabama, to find an unaddressed note from a neighbor criticizing her for the state of her lawn.The note said that since her yard had fallen into disrepair, its appearance was affecting the resale value of their homes and that Ragland needed to do better.At first,