1、【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)資料EnglishWriting一、例題精析書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）題目：假設(shè)你叫王平，你認(rèn)識(shí)到HappyTeens是一個(gè)特地經(jīng)過(guò)睜開豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來(lái)解決青少年問題的組織。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給HappyTeens的主席Mr.Holmes寫一封電子郵件，介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入他們的組織。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要點(diǎn)：李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學(xué)校。有時(shí)因父親母親要求太嚴(yán)格而感覺悶悶不樂。幾天前來(lái)向我征采建議。你激勵(lì)他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來(lái)。要求：1.語(yǔ)句暢達(dá)，意思連接。2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)。3.詞數(shù)80左右

2、。DearMr.Holmes,IhaveafriendnamedLiQiang._Ihopeyouwillaccepthimtobeamemberoftheclub.Yours,WangPing【題目解析】（一）審題可得文體：寫信的應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，還有現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。要點(diǎn)掌握：李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學(xué)校。有時(shí)因父親母親要求太嚴(yán)格而感覺悶悶不樂。幾天前來(lái)向我征采建議。你激勵(lì)他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來(lái)。我認(rèn)識(shí)到HappyTeens是一個(gè)特地經(jīng)過(guò)睜開豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來(lái)解決青少年問題的組織。我想介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入你們的組織。

3、（二）要點(diǎn)組織李強(qiáng)是九年級(jí)二班的尖子生。HeisatopstudentofClassTwoGradeNine.正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學(xué)校。Heisanhonestboyandhealwayshelpsothers./Heishonestandhelpful.Hehashelpedtwopoorchildrentoreturnedtoschooltostudy.有時(shí)因父親母親要求太嚴(yán)格而感覺悶悶不樂。Sometimesheisinabadmoodbecausehisparentsaretoostrictwithhim.幾天前來(lái)向我征采建議。Hecametoaskmeforadvi

4、ceafewdaysago.第1頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】你激勵(lì)他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來(lái)。IencouragedhimtojointheHappyTeens.Hecanbehappyagain.我認(rèn)識(shí)到HappyTeens是一個(gè)特地經(jīng)過(guò)睜開豐富多彩的活動(dòng)來(lái)解決青少年問題的組織。IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationtosolvetheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationwhichsolve

5、stheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.我想介紹同學(xué)李強(qiáng)加入你們的組織。Iwanttointroducehimtojoinourorganization.（三）解析題目，寫好開頭和結(jié)尾，合適增加連接句子和連接詞，使文章一氣呵成。DearMr.Holmes,IhaveafriendnamedLiQiang.HeisatopstudentofClassTwoGradeNine.Andallofuslovehimverymuch.Why?Becauseheisanhonestboyandhealwayshelpsothers.Asweallknow,

6、hehashelpedtwopoorchildrentoreturnedtoschooltostudy.However,sometimesheisinabadmoodbecausehisparentsaretoostrictwithhim.Weallareunhappy.Andheisveryworried.So,hecametoaskmeforadviceafewdaysago.Thesedays,IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationwhichsolvestheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.

7、SoIencouragedhimtojointheHappyTeens.Asresult,Iintroducehimtojointheorganizationinorderthathecanbehappyagain.Ihopeyouwillaccepthimtobeamemberoftheclub.Yours,WangPing二、中考考點(diǎn)要求1.依照中文提示，寫一篇70-100字左右的英文表達(dá)。(盡量不要高出150個(gè)單詞)內(nèi)容完滿，用詞正確，句子暢達(dá)、連接、單詞拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，書寫工整。三、作文七注意（一）從整體著眼,大綱挈領(lǐng)扣題意1.審清文體2.選準(zhǔn)人稱3.用好時(shí)態(tài)4.突出要點(diǎn)（二）防備

8、使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以防備重復(fù)和死板。（三）多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句,惋惜句.合適使用復(fù)合句和重申句。別的,要依照文章內(nèi)容需要少量套用一些英語(yǔ)格言警句,諺語(yǔ)等以加強(qiáng)文章的感染力.（四）注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈便運(yùn)用。1）語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要正確無(wú)誤。2）主謂語(yǔ)要一致，主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。3）注意人稱代詞的用法。4）注意冠詞用法。比方：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能夠?qū)懗蒩。5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫。e.g：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,nin

9、th,restaurant,etc.（五）謀篇布局寫好篇章結(jié)構(gòu)【抓兩頭促中間】（六）檢查改正文章:仔細(xì)檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文評(píng)卷是依照要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言正確性、上下文的連接性來(lái)給分，依照錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得特別重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面下手：1）格式可否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3）語(yǔ)言可否用錯(cuò)。4）可否遺漏要點(diǎn)5)時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。6)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。7）人稱可否用錯(cuò)。（七）寫好稿本（若是時(shí)間贊同的話）,爾后再抄到卷面上。書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面齊整。書寫可否工整，卷面可否齊整與得分高低直接有關(guān)。第2頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】四、謀篇布局寫好篇章

10、結(jié)構(gòu)【抓兩頭促中間】（一）作文全能結(jié)構(gòu)表示圖Beginningtopicsentence主題句開頭-說(shuō)出文中的要點(diǎn)、核心問題【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Middlesupportingsentences支持句正文-用例子、實(shí)事或數(shù)據(jù)圍繞主題開展表達(dá)、談?wù)?。【注意使用連接詞】Endingconcludingsentence結(jié)論句結(jié)尾-對(duì)全文的總結(jié)和概括。【結(jié)尾畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾響應(yīng)】（二）開頭、結(jié)尾和正文三大板塊的訓(xùn)練【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Goodbeginningishalfdone.仔細(xì)審題，提煉和概括主題句開頭全能句型：.playsanimportantpartinthe.A

11、sweallknow,.becomesmoreandmore.3)Aseverybodyknows,.isoneofthemost.in.4)Manypeoplesaythat.ButIdontthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe.3.造主題句訓(xùn)練Makeatopicsentence.1）SmokingAsweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdontthinkso.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.2）TheSpringFestivalI

12、willneverforgettheSpringFestival.第3頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdontthinkso.3）LearningEnglishAsweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.ManypeoplesayitsdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdontthink

13、so.4）Tobeavolunteerforthe16thAsianGamesAsweallknow,the16thAsianGamesiscomingsoon.Iwanttobeavolunteerforit.Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinthe16thAsianGames.5）ASchoolTripIwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek.【寫好結(jié)尾畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾響應(yīng)】與開頭響應(yīng)，再次重申自己的看法,注意防備重復(fù)句式。結(jié)尾經(jīng)典詞組、句型：Atlast/Finally.最后Inaword,.總而言之Inshort,.簡(jiǎn)言之W

14、ehopethat我們希望Letstryourbestto.Ibelieveifwecan.,.willbe.Whata.!/How.!3.依照主題概括訓(xùn)練Makeaconcludingsentence1）KeepinghealthyLetstryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,itsimportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.2）HelpingothersIbelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.3）Tobeagreenconsumer(綠色花銷者)L

15、etstryourbesttobeagreenconsumer.Inoneword,itsnecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.4）BeijingHowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?開頭、結(jié)尾的實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練書面表達(dá)在平時(shí)生活中你主動(dòng)幫助你的父親母親做家務(wù)活嗎？請(qǐng)你依照提示用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時(shí)所做家務(wù)以及你對(duì)家務(wù)的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾2.掃地3.幫助媽媽做飯4.洗衣服5.為花澆水6.飯后洗碗要求：語(yǔ)句暢達(dá)，語(yǔ)法正確。不得逐句翻譯。滿分作文（25分）Asweall

16、know,itsimportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisals

17、omyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即總括又說(shuō)明看法）第4頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】【正文：語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，井然有序】1.句短句交織使用最好。2.基一般的同學(xué)要盡量使用句，文章算不上圓滿，但很用，基好的同學(xué)要合適寫些從句提高品位。3.掌握要點(diǎn)，次清楚。4.注意句子與句子、段與段之渡自然，行文，注意合適使用，比方：and,so,or,but,become正文：巧用連接詞，賜予語(yǔ)言靈氣需要熟記的連接詞有：1、按事情展的先后或序1）F

18、irstly,Secondly,Thirdly2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finallysoon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not.until,before,after,when,while,during2、表示并列notonly.butalso,both.and,either.or,neither.nor，on(the)onehandontheotherhand3、表示例或充1）forexample2）besides/whatsmore/whatsworse4、表示折ho

19、wever,but，although,insteadof5、表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because6、表示果asresult(of),so，so.that,such.that,7、表目的inorderto,sothat8、表比thesameas,than,ofall.正文巧用連接詞和從句的實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練Example:生活中充了，有父親母親的，有兄弟姐妹的，有朋友的，有老的.以“Love”，要描述一件生在你身的事。要求：1、言范，寫工整。2、80個(gè)左右（開已出，不入數(shù)）3、文中不要出真的人名，校名和地名Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattenti

20、ontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.基一般的同學(xué)的寫法：Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Oneday,Iplayedfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmeto

21、thehospital.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Wearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.wasdeeplymoved.Icouldntsayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.第5頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】基礎(chǔ)好的同學(xué)的寫法：范文Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtoth

22、eoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Thereisalotoflovearoundus.Oneday,whenIwasplayingfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmetothehospitalatonce.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.”Iwastoo

23、tosayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.正文：巧用連接詞，賜予語(yǔ)言靈氣（上詞句子比較）Whichsentenceisbetter?1.Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.(good)WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.(better)句式富于變化Whichsentenceisbetter?1.Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhe

24、lpeachother.（good）Wearegoodfriendsandweshouldhelpeachother.（better）Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.（best）句式富于變化1.IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldntsayaword.(good)Iwastoomovedtosayaword.(better)五、作文步驟審題解析題目：找出作文的文體、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和文章的要點(diǎn)。依照要點(diǎn)的意思用英語(yǔ)進(jìn)行最貼切的表達(dá)。注意每一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)盡量多樣化，也就是說(shuō)句子種類要多樣化（能力的范圍內(nèi)盡量簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句交替使用），但文章的

25、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)基本保持一致。別的，若是你有些要點(diǎn)不會(huì)直接表達(dá)，則注意轉(zhuǎn)變成你會(huì)表達(dá)的英文去表達(dá)，但不要改變文章原來(lái)的意思更不能夠因?yàn)椴粫?huì)表達(dá)就放棄表達(dá)也許用錯(cuò)誤的表達(dá)。3.多運(yùn)用過(guò)渡詞，連句成文，使全篇結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。每個(gè)點(diǎn)都要寫全，并要有合適發(fā)揮,并按要點(diǎn)來(lái)分段，注意段落的結(jié)構(gòu)，段落不能亂分，要有過(guò)渡。4.寫好開頭和結(jié)尾。5.復(fù)查糾錯(cuò)。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面下手：1）格式可否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3）語(yǔ)言可否用錯(cuò)。4）可否遺漏要點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。6)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和大小寫錯(cuò)誤。7）人稱可否用錯(cuò)。注意書寫，卷面做到無(wú)任何一處涂改。要求：打好稿本，并在稿本上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有時(shí)間，都要稿本，

26、特別是看圖寫句子。六、附：8個(gè)話題作文1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的話題:“HowtolearnEnglishwell?”2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。4.環(huán)境問題5.關(guān)于“人口問題POPULATION”6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn),談?wù)勀愕目捶?.介紹自己的興趣業(yè)余愛好。8.春節(jié)民俗與計(jì)劃,如何過(guò)2010年的春節(jié)。第6頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】.保Itsourdutytoprotectourenvironment。ItisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironmentWeshouldnotthrowlitterontothegroundWesh

27、ouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetreesWeshouldplantmoreflowersandtrees。WemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbinIfeveryonemakescontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.二、旅游1.LastSunday(Saturday,),itwassunny(rainy,windy,foggy,)2.Igotupveryearly(late).Afterbre

28、akfastIwenttowithmyfriendsbybike,bus，Weenjoyedourselves.Weforgotthetime.Wedidntcomebackuntil5oclock。Weallfeltverytired,butwewerehappy.IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.7.Lastsummer,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays。Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest.Wehadagoodtimethere.Weboughtalotofthings.Thecl

29、othesherearegoodandcheap.三、比賽LastSunday,ClassOnehadafootballmatchwithClassTwo.Allofuswenttowatchit.Thematchwasveryexciting.Infact,Ihaveneverseensuchanexcitingmatchbefore。Thescorewas5-3.Ourteamscoredthreegoalsinthelastfifteenminutes.ClassOnewonthismatch.ClassTwolost.ClassOneplayedwell.Theydeservedtow

30、in。TheirPEteacherwasverypleasedwiththeirperformance.四、健康Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.Howcanwekeephealthy?Wecantgotosleeptoolate.Wecantgetuptoolate。Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.Weshoulddomoreexercise.LastTuesdayIgotacoldandhadapaininmyhead。Ididntfeellikeeatinganything.Idecidedtoseethedoctor.Inthedoc

31、torsoffice,thedoctorlooksovermecarefully.Hesaid:Nothingserious.Andhetoldmetotakearestanddrinkmorewater.Anursegavemeaninjection.Itwasalittlepainful.Thedoctoraskedmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday.Afewdayslater,Ifeltbetter.FromthenonIbelievethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.五、學(xué)科Myfav

32、oritesubjectisEnglish。MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.第7頁(yè)共8頁(yè)【分界一中英語(yǔ)校本教材】ChinahasjoinedtheWTOandtheOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.Englishbecomesmoreandmoreuseful.5.SoEnglishisveryimportantandIlikeEnglishverymuch。WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass.IhopeIcangoabroadone