1、話題寫作（九）快樂(lè)成長(zhǎng)第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理話題寫作（九）第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理【話題點(diǎn)睛】該話題主要包括成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程、成長(zhǎng)煩惱及成長(zhǎng)感悟等。涉及的要點(diǎn):(1)成長(zhǎng)體驗(yàn)及感悟;(2)成長(zhǎng)煩惱與困惑;(3)關(guān)于更好地成長(zhǎng)的方法與建議?！驹掝}點(diǎn)睛】該話題主要包括成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程、成長(zhǎng)煩惱及成長(zhǎng)感悟等?！緟⒖贾V語(yǔ)】1.Time flies.時(shí)光易逝。2.All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。3.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上無(wú)難事,只要肯登攀。4.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者

2、。常用表達(dá)【參考諺語(yǔ)】常用表達(dá)【亮點(diǎn)句型】成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷1.Im sorry to hear that you didnt pass the exam because of your illness.2.As long as you work hard, you can be a success.3.We believe youll become the top student later if you do your best to study math.4.We need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other

3、.【亮點(diǎn)句型】成長(zhǎng)感悟1.As the saying goes, failure is the mother of success.2.Study plays a key role in their life.3.Most students believe its necessary to study hard.4.Reading can make our life colorful.5.There are many ways to realize our dreams.成長(zhǎng)感悟成長(zhǎng)建議1.You can learn a lot from the show.2.You should treat

4、 it in a proper way.3.You should study hard at knowledge, pay attention to social news and develop interest and hobbies.4.You should often communicate with your family.成長(zhǎng)建議.根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思完成句子。1.你一犯錯(cuò),就必須馬上改正它。As soon as you , you must correct it at once.2.每個(gè)青少年都應(yīng)該為未來(lái)做個(gè)好的計(jì)劃。Each teenager make a good plan for

5、the future.3.我們將能夠提升我們的能力來(lái)解決問(wèn)題。We will be able to our ability to .基礎(chǔ)寫作make a mistakeis supposed to improve solve problems.根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思完成句子?；A(chǔ)寫作make a mistak4.一些學(xué)生花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間看電視。Some students much time .5.對(duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō),讀書很無(wú)聊。It is for them books. spend watching TVboring to read4.一些學(xué)生花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間看電視。 .用括號(hào)內(nèi)所給提示將下列句子譯成英語(yǔ)。1.沒(méi)有必要

6、放棄你的愛(ài)好。(give up)2.有一天,我們將會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢(mèng)想。(achieve ones dream)3.我的父母和老師努力鼓勵(lì)我。(try to do sth)4.聽(tīng)說(shuō)你下學(xué)期要來(lái)中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí),我很高興。(be glad to do)There is no need to give up your hobbies.We will achieve our dreams one day.My parents and my teacher tried to encourage me.Im very glad to hear that you will study in China next te

7、rm.用括號(hào)內(nèi)所給提示將下列句子譯成英語(yǔ)。There is n5.你必須在你的業(yè)余時(shí)間做更多的運(yùn)動(dòng)。(in ones spare time)假如你是李華,你的好朋友 Lisa 不久前參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰了,她為這次失敗所困擾,無(wú)心學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封電子郵件,建議她正確看待達(dá)人秀節(jié)目,享受參與的過(guò)程而不必太在意結(jié)果;提醒她實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的途徑有很多,只有努力才能獲得成功;鼓勵(lì)她好好學(xué)習(xí),也不要放棄個(gè)人愛(ài)好,開(kāi)心地度過(guò)每一天。典例分析You must do more sports in your spare time.5.你必須在你的業(yè)余時(shí)間做更多的運(yùn)動(dòng)。(in ones s要求(1)包含以上所有要點(diǎn)

8、,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(2)詞數(shù):60-80(開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(3)不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。要求Dear Lisa,Im sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show.Hope youll be happy every day!Yours,Li HuaDear Lisa,Hope youll be happy【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是鼓勵(lì)經(jīng)歷失敗的朋友重拾信心,可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi):(1)鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方以正確的方式面對(duì)失敗,享受過(guò)程,正

9、視結(jié)果;(2)實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想的方式不是只有一種;(3)失敗是成功之母,鼓勵(lì)對(duì)方善于從失敗中學(xué)習(xí)。2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)3.確定人稱:第二人稱【思路點(diǎn)撥】【寫作架構(gòu)】【寫作架構(gòu)】【佳作欣賞】Dear Lisa,Im sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. Here are some of my opinions.From my point of view, you should treat it in a proper way, and enjoy the process

10、 instead of the result. Besides, there are many ways to realize our dreams. As the saying goes, failure is the mother of success. You can learn a lot from the show. As long as you work hard, 【佳作欣賞】Dear Lisa,you can make your dreams come true. Last but not least, as a student, you should study hard f

11、irst. Meanwhile, there is no need to give up your hobbies. Just relax and have fun!Hope youll be happy every day!Yours,Li Huayou can make your dreams come 【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 1.開(kāi)頭第一句“Im sorry to hear that”表達(dá)了對(duì)朋友的同情,然后開(kāi)始給對(duì)方提建議。2.從句式上看,文章運(yùn)用了靈活多樣的句式。如:there be句型,as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)(如besides, last but not leas

12、t, meanwhile)的運(yùn)用,使文章銜接自然。3.文中運(yùn)用了諺語(yǔ)“Failure is the mother of success.”,為文章增色不少。【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A2019遂寧在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中,青少年面臨越來(lái)越多的煩惱,主要體現(xiàn)在精神壓力太大。請(qǐng)以此為話題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。要點(diǎn)提示(1)導(dǎo)致青少年精神壓力大的主要原因:學(xué)業(yè)與他人相處(2)減少壓力的措施:積極參加課外活動(dòng)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A2019遂寧多與他人交流溝通(3)簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀銓?duì)壓力利弊的看法。(至少一點(diǎn))注意(1)文章開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);(2)文章必須包含所給要點(diǎn)提示,要求語(yǔ)句通順,行文連貫;(3)不可逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)有獨(dú)自的

13、見(jiàn)解并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(4)文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。多與他人交流溝通We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.Here are two main reasons. One is the problems in schoolwork. The other is the problems in getting on with other people. However, too much pressure is not good for teenagers development. So how to deal wi

14、th these pressure? Taking part in the after school activities is a very useful way. Besides this one, more communication often works.All in all, we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy in body and mind.We teenagers have more and morB2019徐州質(zhì)檢假設(shè)你是Tim,在美國(guó)游學(xué)期間與住家孩子Simon、鄰居孩子Danie

15、l成為好友,并結(jié)伴表演京劇大鬧天宮。幾天前,因Simon嘲笑Daniel,兩人發(fā)生爭(zhēng)吵?，F(xiàn)在Simon想修復(fù)友誼,但不知如何處理,所以特地發(fā)來(lái)郵件尋求你的幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),給Simon回一封電子郵件。B2019徐州質(zhì)檢現(xiàn)狀分析嘲笑他人是錯(cuò)誤的;很高興Simon想改變現(xiàn)狀;提供建議1.應(yīng)該盡快道歉;2.隨郵件發(fā)送一個(gè)視頻節(jié)目,建議和Daniel一起看;節(jié)目簡(jiǎn)介1.節(jié)目名稱為友誼(Friendship);2.以孫悟空(Monkey King)為原型,讓自己想起在美國(guó)時(shí)三人一起的愉悅時(shí)光;節(jié)目最后,孫悟空做總結(jié)。闡述希望1.2.現(xiàn)狀分析嘲笑他人是錯(cuò)誤的;很高興Simon想改變現(xiàn)狀;提供建注意事項(xiàng)

16、(1)郵件須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),要求語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫;(2)孫悟空講的話用2-3句展開(kāi)合理想象,作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(3)詞數(shù)90詞左右,郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意事項(xiàng) Dear Simon,Thank you for your letter. I hope I can help you. It is wrong to laugh at others. Im glad youre considering changing. You should say sorry to Daniel as soon as possible. Im sending you a video called Friendship with the email. Youd better watch it with Daniel. It was based on Monkey King. It reminded me of our happy time in America. At the