讀后續(xù)寫微技能指導(dǎo)

—自然環(huán)境描寫Itwasacoldwinternight,thefreezingwindwhippedcruellyonpeople’sfaces.Apoorly-dressedlittlegirlcrouchedinthecorner,shakingconstantly.FunctionsofNaturalSettingDescription渲染了憂傷的氣氛。揭示了故事發(fā)生的背景。襯托人物內(nèi)心情感。HowtodescribetheNaturalSetting？一.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膭?dòng)詞關(guān)于風(fēng)的動(dòng)詞：blow吹；howl嚎叫；whip鞭打；sting刺痛;kiss親吻Theicywindstarted__________,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.howling關(guān)于雨的動(dòng)詞：fall落下pourdown傾盆；beatagainst..拍打；crashagainst..擊打;Thedreadfulrainwas_______wildlyagainstthewindow.beating關(guān)于雪的動(dòng)詞：float/fall/drift飄落;dance跳舞;meltaway融化；cover覆蓋Thepuresnowflakeswere________gracefullyintheair.dancing關(guān)于星星的動(dòng)詞：shine閃耀;sparkle/twinkle閃耀；blink眨眼睛；

hide躲藏；dot布滿

Theskywasdottedwithsparklingstars.

關(guān)于太陽、陽光的動(dòng)詞：comeout出來;rise升起;set落下；kiss親吻；

floodin照射進(jìn)來；bebathedin沐浴在;

Thebeachwasbathedin

thesunshine.

Morningsunshine________throughtheopencurtains.floodsinItwasatoughrainynight.Thewindwas_______dreadfullyandtherainwas_______fromtheheaven,_______againstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwas_______withaseaofdarkness.howlingpouringcoveredwhipping關(guān)于風(fēng)的動(dòng)詞：howl嚎叫；blow吹；whip鞭打；sting刺痛;kiss親吻關(guān)于雨的動(dòng)詞：beatagainst..拍打；crashagainst..擊打;pourdown傾盆；fall關(guān)于雪的動(dòng)詞：dance跳舞;float/fall/drift飄落;meltaway融化；blanket裹住

cover覆蓋關(guān)于星星的動(dòng)詞：shine閃耀;sparkle/twinkle閃耀；wink/blink眨眼睛；

hide躲藏；decorate裝飾;dot裝飾關(guān)于太陽、陽光的動(dòng)詞：comeout出來;rise升起;set落下；kiss親吻；

floodin照射進(jìn)來；bebathedin沐浴在;一.使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膭?dòng)詞二.使用生動(dòng)的形容詞agentle

warmwindanicyhowlingwindbreeze關(guān)于風(fēng)的形容詞積極形容詞：gentle/soft（輕柔的）;warm(溫暖的)；pleasant(令人愉悅的)消極形容詞：icy/freezing（冰冷的）;

strong/violent（猛烈的）；dreadful可怕的；howling(呼嘯的)；biting（刺骨的）；bone-chilling（刺骨的）二.使用生動(dòng)的形容詞關(guān)于雨的形容詞積極的形容詞：gentle/light小的;pleasant令人心情愉悅的消極的形容詞：icy/freezing（冰冷的）；heavy；dreadful可怕的;讓人討厭的Thelightrainwasstillfallingslowly,butasuddenwarmthhitme.關(guān)于雪的形容詞積極的形容詞：feathery鵝毛般的;pure/clean干凈的純潔的消極的形容詞：icy/freezing（冰冷的）；heavy；dreadful可怕的;讓人討厭的thepurefeatherysnowflakes鵝毛般純潔的雪花關(guān)于星星的形容詞積極的形容詞：lovely;little;sparkling/shining/twinkling亮閃閃的消極的形容詞：pale/faint暗淡的；starless沒有星星的

thefew______stars

零零散散的暗淡的星星

thedark_______night昏暗的沒有星星的夜晚palestarless關(guān)于太陽/陽光的形容詞積極的形容詞：warm；sunny;amber-like像琥珀一樣的;dazzling耀眼的消極的形容詞：burning/scorching火辣辣的thewarmamber-likesunshine溫暖的琥珀色的陽光從名著中學(xué)表達(dá)：1.Thecloudsoverthelandnowroselikemountainsandthecoastwasonlyalonggreenlinewiththegraybluehillsbehindit.Thewaterwasadarkbluenow,sodarkthatitwasalmostpurple.-----TheOldManandSea

陸地上空的云朵仿佛連綿高聳的山峰一樣上升著，海岸也抽成了一條狹長(zhǎng)的綠色的線，岸背后淡青色的小山崗。此刻的海水呈現(xiàn)深藍(lán)色，深的簡(jiǎn)直發(fā)紫。Hemingway2.Alloverthiswindingstretchofwater,whatmeetstheeyesisasilkenfieldofleaves,reachingratherhighabovethesurface,liketheskirtsofdancinggirlsinalltheirgrace.Hereandthere,layersofleavesaredottedwithwhitelotusblossoms,someindemurebloom,othersinshybud,likescatteringpearlsortwinklingstars,ourbeautiesjustoutofthebath.

----MoonlightovertheLotusPondZhuZiqing曲曲折折的荷塘上面，彌望的是田田的葉子。葉子出水很高，像亭亭的舞女的裙，層層的葉子中間，零星地點(diǎn)綴著些白花，有裊娜地開著的，有羞澀的打著朵兒的，正如一粒粒的明珠，又如碧天里的星星，又如剛出浴的美人。Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,andthethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.

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“Anne’sBestFriend”

仿寫：藍(lán)天，白云，鳥鳴，鮮花讓我們驚呆了。Thebluesky,whiteclouds,thesongofbirdsandthefragrantflowersholdusentirelyintheirpower.Thepurefeatherysnowflakesdancedintheair,makingabeautiful

picture.Sparklingstarswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.Summary:描寫______的感官形容詞。視覺sparkling/twinklingdarkdimsteepwindingfeatherythe______lightthe_______starsthe_______nightthe_______snowflakesa_______pathdimsparklingfeatherydarkwinding閃閃發(fā)光的漆黑的昏暗的險(xiǎn)峻的蜿蜒的鵝毛般的Theicybitingwindstung（叮）myface.Thegentlewarmwindkissedherface,comfortingallhertiredness.Summary:描寫的感官______形容詞觸覺硬的輕柔的火辣辣的冰冷的潮濕的絲滑的1.the_______wind2.the_______rainhardsoft/gentleicy/freezingburningwet/dampsilkyThehowlingwindThedeafeningapplauseSummary:描寫_____的感官形容詞聽覺high大聲的low小聲的noisy吵鬧的deafening震耳欲聾的howling怒吼的melodious悅耳的gurgling潺潺的thegurgling

riverthemelodiousvoicethesweetflowersthefreshairSummary:描寫______的形容詞嗅覺smelly/stinky難聞的fragrant香的Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,________rivers,______flowers,_______wind,________beachesand______valleysholdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.windingfragrantdeepwarmsunnyConclusion:sight/touch/sound/smell