33幸福2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)高分作文攻略（全國通用版）相關(guān)話題解讀幸福，是-種心理感受，一種滿足的心態(tài)。它可以是父母無微不至的關(guān)愛，也可以是假日里悠閑地品茶讀書的愜意。不同的人對幸福也有著不同的理解。此話題的寫作內(nèi)容比較廣泛，既可以讓學(xué)生談?wù)勈裁词切腋?，什么讓人感到幸福，也可以具體記敘-一個幸福的瞬間，一件讓人感到幸福的小事等。此話題的寫作體裁多為記敘文和說明文。時態(tài)以現(xiàn)在時和過去時為主。相關(guān)話題寫作示例指導(dǎo)實踐案例題目Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopicmakesmehappy'.(請以“____使我快樂”為題，寫篇不少于60個詞的短文。)Questionsforreference:1:hatmakesyouhappy?2.Whydoesitmakeyouhappy?審題這是篇半命題作文。想要寫好半命題作文，首先要報一個恰當(dāng)、新穎的感目。做米說，半命題作文中所需補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容往往是?作的中心內(nèi)容。學(xué)生在將題目補(bǔ)充完整的同時，其實也確定了寫作的素材，明確了寫作的中心。在擬題時，首先要在選材上認(rèn)真思考，題目宜“大題小作”，即選取一個小的切人點，以便寫深寫透，寫出特點。這篇作文的重點在于，要突出題目中所填信息與幸福之間的關(guān)系一為什么這件事能讓我開心?這-點必須在文中有清晰的呈現(xiàn)。本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，需避免出現(xiàn)大量過去時的句子，或以較大的篇幅來敘述過去的事件。段落結(jié)構(gòu)本文可采用“總一分總”的寫作結(jié)構(gòu):第一段:文章的總起，拋出主題“讓我快樂”，橫線上所填部分，可以是一個愛好、一項運(yùn)動等。第二段:分層敘述，對主題展開說明，尤其要說明橫線部分和快樂之間的聯(lián)系。第三段:概括文章內(nèi)容，首尾呼應(yīng)。核心語匯bringhappinesstosb.給某人帶來幸福besatisfied/pleasedwith...對....感到高興linkhappinessto...把快樂...聯(lián)系起來..enablemetodosth.......使我能....benefitfromsth.受益于....beworthdoing值得做....relievethepressureof緩解...的壓力shapeone'scharacter塑造性格參考句型Itismypleasuretodosth.我很樂意做某事。That'swhyI...那就是我...的原因。notonly..butalso...不僅.....而且.....Anadvantageofitisthat....的一個好處.....Itis+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+句子的其他成分正是.....(強(qiáng)調(diào)句)習(xí)作1Travellingmakesmehappy①Iliketravelling.Itmakesmehappy.Duringthewinterandsummerholidays,myparentsoftentakemetomanyplacesathomeandabroad.Icanenjoyalotofamazinglandscapesandhistoricalinterests,deliciousfood,excitingexperiencesandsoonduringmyjourney.Furthermore,travellingisalsoaprocessofdiscovery,whichIenjoyalot.Moreimportantly,travellingcanhelptoreducemystudypressure,tellmehowbigandbeautifultheworldis,andletmeknowmoreabouthistoryandculture.That'swhyitmakesmesohappy.注：①這兩句話可以合并成travellingmakesmehappy點評:本文圍繞“旅游使我愉快”這一主題展開寫作，條理分明，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，甸式多樣。文中從幾個層面闡述了旅游給作者帶來的愉悅，內(nèi)容充實，表達(dá)清晰，總的來說是一篇佳作。個別語句可以合并為-句，比如第一“、第二句話，可以改成travellingmakesmehappy,顯得更為簡潔。習(xí)作2ReadingmakesmehappyI'veformedthehabitofreadingbookssinceIwasalittlegirlForme.,2530readinghasbeenanenduringpleasureinmylife.①IenjoythecompanyofthemagicworldinHarryPotter,ofevilcriminalsandthrillingcasesinSherlockHolmes,ofthousandsofinterestingpeopleIwouldhavenevermetinreallife.Readingnotonlyprovidesmewithknowledge,butalsoenablesmetounderstandtheworldaroundme.Itisaneducationinaclassroomthathasnowalls.Itisreadingthatalwaysbringsmefunandjoy.注①這句話體現(xiàn)了學(xué)生的寫作功底。點評:本文清晰明了地闡述了“閱讀使我愉快”的理由。文章的時態(tài)、語態(tài)以及人稱的使用都非常嫻熟，其中“Ienjoythecompanyofthemagicworld..inreallife"這句句子的表述，不僅增加了說服力，也體現(xiàn)了作者很強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力。文章以一句強(qiáng)調(diào)句收尾，既增添了文采，也起到了點題的作用。相關(guān)話題滿分作文必背（一）題目Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“MySecretsofHappiness.(以“我的快樂秘訣”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。)(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。短文開頭已給，所給部分不計人字?jǐn)?shù)。)Everyonehashisorherownsecretsofhappiness,sodoI.Outlineforreference:1.Tellyoursecretsofhappiness.2.Givethesupportingdetails.優(yōu)秀范文MysecretsofhappinessEveryonehashisorherownsecretofhappiness,sodoI.Oneofmysecretofhappinesstodosportsregularly.IusuallydoyogawithmysisteronSaturdaymorning.Ienjoyyogaverymuchandatthesametime,Icanrelaxmyselfandbecomehealthier.AnothersecreteisthatImakeaneverydaylistofallthethingsandpeopleamthankfulto,sothatIcanbecontentwithwhatIalreadyhave.1wouldenjoymyliferatherthancomplainabouteverythingThesearemysecretsofhappiness,andIhopeitcanbehelpfultoothers.（二）題目Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"I'dliketomake...feelhappy".以《我想使.......高興》為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點符號不占格。Suggestedphrasesandexpressions:notaffordtobuyspend..doingsth.withsb.bakesth.forsb.makeone'sownpresent(s)becomehealthier優(yōu)秀范文I'dliketomakemymotherfeelhappyMotherisalwaysreadytogiveanythingshehastoherchildren,nottoreceive.Therefore,Icanneverdotoomuchtomakemymotherfeelhappyinreturn.AsMother'sDayiscoming,Iwouldliketotakethischancetoexpressmygratitudetomymother.ThoughIcan'taffordtobuysomethingexpensiveforher,Icanmakeapresentforheronmyown.Thesedays,Ihavespentmysparetimepracticingbakingcakessecretly.I'msuremyhome-madecakewillbeabigsurpriseforher.Ijustcan'twaittoseethesmileonmymother'sfaceandshareherhappiness.（三）題目Writeapassageon"Ahappymemoryinmyjuniorhighschool"inatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(似“我初中時期的一次快樂的回憶”為題，寫:不少于60個詞的文章。）Phrasesforreference(以下短語僅供參考):aspringoutingaclassmeetingapartytakepartinplaywithbehappy優(yōu)秀范文AhappymemoryinmyjuniorhighschoolThehappymemoriesIhavehadinmyjuniorhighschoolarecountless.Themostimpressiveoneisthecelebrationofmyfourteenthbirthday.Ourschoolheldapartyinahallforthestudentsofourgrade.Onthatday,Isanganddancedwi