2023年1月浙江新高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)試題及范文賞析試卷第=page11頁(yè)，共=sectionpages33頁(yè)年1月浙江新高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)試題及范文賞析第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥(niǎo)),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網(wǎng))andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文賞析下水作文1：Paragraph1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

EverythingfeltasifIhadjustleftyesterday.ThemilkinghouselookedjustasdilapidatedasitwaswhenIwaslasthere,thoughttruetoherword,myfriendhadgottenthewindowfixed.Beingbackatthefarmremindedmeofthesurrealexperienceofrescuingahummingbird.Eventhoughalltracesofsuchanunrealeventhasbeenerased,thememoryofmyfatefulmeetingwiththehummingbirdlivesonvividlyinmymind.Briefly,beforeIwentintothefarmtogreetmyfriends,Iwonderedwhetherthehummingbirdwasstillthriving,andifitstillrememberedme.Paragraph2：Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Asmagicallyasshehadgracedusthefirsttime,shesuddenlyshowedupasIwasaboutsaygoodbyetomyfriendsandgetintomycar.Thistime,asifrecognizingme,shecamestraighttomeandhoveredrightinfrontofmygazeasmyfriendscouldonlylookonindisbelief.Foragoodfewseconds,Ilockedeyeswiththewhimsicalbirdandtimestoodstill.Onceagain,sheletoutasqueakingcallandtookoff,leavingmyfriendsandIenchantedbywhathadjusthappened.AsImovedonandgotreadytoleave,myfriendsaidtome“cherishsuchamagicalmemoryandbond,thishastobeveryrare”.

下水作文2：Paragraph1：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Recollectingmemoriesofmycloseencounterwiththatdelicatepieceofnature,IcouldnothelpbutfeelastrongsenseofnostalgiaasIstrolledpassedthecleared-awayblackberryvines.AsIstaredatthedistantmilkinghousethathadsincethenbeenpatchedup,renovated,andrecommissioned,Ifeltasenseofinternalturmoil;nohummingbirdwouldeverbetrappedagain,andneitherwouldIeverbeabletocrosspathswithsuchmarvelousmomentwiththesemajesticcreatures.

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2:Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Especiallyexcitedandenthusedshewastohaveseenme,andviceversa.TearsbegangatheringatthecornersofmyeyesasIstruggledtoutterasinglewordundersuchhappenstance.AlthoughIwastoldthatanimalshaveshort-termmemories,thishoveringheaven-senthummingbirddefinitelyandproperlyre-educatedme.Now,Iknowthatshewasnotsaying“goodbye”weeksbeforebut“thankyou”.Iremainedsimultaneouslysmilingandcrying,staringatthelittleguyslowlyhoveringhappilyandhealthilybackintotheforest.

下水作文3：Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaround