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“活”起來插入

在句中插入某些成分，起補(bǔ)充、說明作用。最明顯的特征是被插入成分前后都用逗號(hào)隔開。YouandIareteenagers.Itoffersteenagersachance.WecanenjoysportsandlearnaboutChineseculture.→Itoffersteenagers,

likeyouandme,achancetoenjoysportsandlearnaboutChineseculture.嵌入

在某一分句中嵌入另一分句，構(gòu)成句中句。最常見的情況是：定語從句嵌入賓語從句中、感嘆句嵌入賓語從句中、名詞性從句嵌入強(qiáng)調(diào)句型中。Wearetoldsomething.Wedoubtwhetheritistrue.Weareinthehabitofraisingdoubts.Wecanfindthecorrectanswer.Wecanlearnmore.→Ifweareinthehabitofraisingdoubts

astowhetherwhatwearetoldistrue,wecanfindthecorrectanswerandlearnmore.

2內(nèi)容“實(shí)”起來遣詞01詞匯的升級(jí)(1)Ithinkthatreadingisimportant.→I

deem

thatreadingis

essential/

fundamental.→I

argue

thatreadingreally

matters/counts.→I

maintain

thatreadingis

crucial.→I

hold

thatreadingis

significant/primary/critical.(2)Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.→Wecan

view

thisprobleminmany

facets/aspects/respects.(5)Ilovereading.→I

amcrazyabout/fondof/into/feellike

reading.→I

possessgreatinterestin

reading.→Reading

exertsatremendousfascinationon

me.→I

amobsessedwith

reading.→I

amcapturedby

reading.

(3)TakeAbrahamLincoln,forexample.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedalimitededucation.Yetthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworld.→TakeAbrahamLincoln,

who

wasborninapoorfamily,forexample,heonlyreceivedalimitededucation,butthroughhispainstakingeffort,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica,

which

alsomadehimoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworldeventothisday.

→…butthroughhispainstakingeffort,

notonlydid

hechangehisownfate,

buthealso

transformedthehistoryofAmerica…

(4)Notyourmoney,butyouinterestmemost.→

What

interestsmemostisnotyourmoneybutyou.→

Itis

notyourmoney,butyou

that

appealtomemost.Ilovenotyourbody,butyoursoul.→

What

Iloveisnotyourbody,butyoursoul.→

Itis

notyourbody,butyoursoul

that

Ilove.

(2)IfIhadthechance,Iwouldmakedonationstoorphanseagertogainfuturesuccessthroughlearning.→

Given/Considering/Seeingthat

Ihadthechance,Iwouldmakedonationstoorphanseagertogainfuturesuccessthroughlearning.→

Providing/Provided/Suppose/Supposingthat

Ihadthechance,Iwouldmakedonationstoorphanseagertogainfuturesuccessthroughlearning.→Iwouldmakedonationstoorphanseagertogainfuturesuccessthroughlearning

onconditionthat

Ihadthechance.(3)Thoughheisachild,heislearned.→

While

heisachild,heislearned.→

Childas/though

heis,heislearned.(3)Allthefishintheriverdidnotdieoutuntilthevillagersrealizedhowserioustheproblemis.→

Notuntil

allthefishintheriverdiddieoutdidthevillagersrealizehowserioustheproblemis.→

Itisnotuntil

allthefishintheriverdiddieout

that

thevillagersrealizedhowserioustheproblemis.

04非謂語和“獨(dú)立”是一家(1)Theteacherwalkedoutofthelab,andsomestudentsfollowedhim→Theteacherwalkedoutofthelab,

(with)somestudentsfollowinghim.→Theteacher,

followed

bysomestudents,walkedoutofthelab.

(2)Whenfalseistakenfortrue,truebecomesfalse.→

With

falsetakenfortrue,truebecomesfalse.→

Falsetakenfortrue,truebecomesfalse.

(3)Ithoughtthathissolutionmightbewrong.Icarefullyanalyzedtheproblem.Itriedtoworkitoutinadifferentway.→Thinkingthathissolutionmightbewrong,Icarefullyanalyzedthe

problemandtriedtoworkitoutinadifferentway.

05修辭手法不可少(1)Tofinishtheworkaheadoftime,theyhavebeenbusyrecently.→Toaccomplishtheworkaheadoftime,theyhavebeen

asbusyasabee

recently.(2)Beijingheldtheopeningceremonyofthe29th

OlympicGamessuccessfullyatAugust8th,2008.→August8th,2008

saw

Beijingholdingtheopeningceremonyofthe29thOlympicGamessuccessfully.(3)Wemusttakeeffectivemeasurestohandle/tackletheproblem.→

Effectivemeasuresmustbetaken

tohandle/tackletheproblem.

（4）Ofthetwo,Ithinkthelatteristhebetter.→Ofthetwo,thelatter

wins

myfavor.

(5)Readingcan

enrich

ourmind,

enlarge

ourhorizons,

andmature

ourpersonality.Humorhelpus

bear

ourburdens,

lessen

ourtension,

overcome

ourfrustration,

relax

ourselves,

andmake

lifeeasier.Many

students,

ifnotmost,finditimpossibletoresistthetemptationtoindulgethemselvesin

playing

games,

enjoying

romancewithgirls,orkilling

timepassivelyinthedorms.Whenitapproachesgraduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordslessimpressive.

06仿寫——似是而非(1)AistoBwhat/asCistoDAbookistothemindwhatfoodistothebody.Apositiveattitudeistolifewhatthesunistotheearth.Honestyistothepeopleaslifeistothecreature.Cleannessistothecanteenwhatwateristothefish.

(2)Helenisthemostbeautifulgirl.→Helenisoneofthemostbeautifulgirls.→HelenisoneofthemostbeautifulgirlsthatIhaveeverseen.→NooneismorebeautifulthanHelenintheworld.Nothingismoreimportantthan

health,becausewithoutgoodhealth,wewouldhavenothing,includinghappiness.Nothingismoreimportantthan

honesty,becausewithouthonesty,wewouldhavenothing,includingloveandevensuccess.

Nothingismoreimportantthan

friends,becausewithoutfriends,wewouldhavenothing,includinghappiness.(3)Dream