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(2021·山東·濟(jì)寧市教育科學(xué)研究院高三期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?!癇ye,Mom;bye,Dad;don’tworry.We’lltakecareofeverything!’’Carlywavedfromthefrontdooroftheshopasherparentsdroveoff.Theywereheadedforawell-deservedvacationfromtheircandystore,andCarlyhadpromisedthemshe’dbeabletorunitbyherself.Herparentsdidn’tquiteagree,however,sotheygaveintoeachotherbyhavingCarlyAuntMaggiecomeoverandhelp.Herparentsoftencalledheraunt“uniquelycreative’’,butitdidn’tmatter;Carlyalwayshadfunwhenherauntwasaround.Maggieblewintothestorehappily.“Allright,Carlymylove,whatdowedofirst?”shesmiledatherniece.Carlyknewclearlythemainjobwastoservecustomers,soshecouldhardlywaittomakeherbestcandies.Seeingthemondisplay,AuntMaggiebitabiteofthechocolatemint-flavoredcandy.“It’sgood,but…unoriginal,”commentedheraunt.“Wecandobetter.”BeforeCarlycouldquestionwhatMaggiemeant,thewomanhadgonetoinvestigatethekitchenintheback.Shortly,shecameback,handsfullofitems.“Weneedtoaddsomeofthesetobetterthatbasictaste.”“Brusselssprouts?(芽甘藍(lán)粉)’’Carlylookedatheraunt,surprisedandpuzzled.Shecouldn’tbeserious!Butshewas.Carly’seyesgrewwideasshewatchedherauntmixittogether.“Andsomespicysauce(辣醬汁)?That’sdefinitelyanicecreamflavor.Thecoldwillperfectlymakecandieslessspicy!”CarlyshookherheadasMaggiecontinuedherstrangecandycombinations:lemonade-flavoredcandy,barbeque-flavoredcandy...Carlylookedupasthebelloverthefrontdoorrang,announcingsomecustomers.Threeboyscameinandapproachedthecounter.“Trysomethingnew!”insistedMaggie,

offeringthefirstboyapieceoftheBrusselssproutcandyshehadmade,thesecondboyaspoonofhotsauceone...Puzzled,buttoopolitetoargue,theboysleftthestore.“Theregoourcustomers.Nobodywillwanttoshophere!”Carlysaidtoherself.Thestorewasquiet.Carlysatbehindthecounter,notknowingwhattowait.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;Withthesoundofthebellagain,theboyscameback.

_________________________________________________________________________________Carlyhadneverseentheshopsobusy!

_________________________________________________________________________________【語(yǔ)篇類型】

記敘文【主題語(yǔ)境】

人與自我——生活趣事【文章大意】

Carly的父母開了一家糖果店,爸爸媽媽外出度假,把店交給了Carly和她的姑姑Maggie管理。

“行為不同尋常的”姑姑制作了各種特殊口味的糖果,如抱子甘藍(lán)奶油軟糖、燒烤味糖果,顧客們會(huì)喜歡嗎?【核心素養(yǎng)】

通過(guò)講述作者的姑姑做出口味獨(dú)特的糖果的故事,鼓勵(lì)考生勇于嘗試,打破常規(guī),培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)新精神?!緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】Paragraph1的開頭是"當(dāng)前門上的鈴響起,宣布一些顧客到來(lái)時(shí),Carly抬頭看了看",且所給短文中講到Maggie制作了特殊口味的糖果,故本段續(xù)寫內(nèi)容可涉及Maggie

讓顧客嘗試新口味的糖果,顧客以及Carly的反應(yīng)等。Paragraph2的開頭是"商店里一片寂靜,只有Maggie在黑板招牌上寫下新特色產(chǎn)品的柔和聲音",由此可知,此時(shí)商店中沒(méi)有顧客,故本段可描述Carly的擔(dān)心以及接下來(lái)店里會(huì)發(fā)生的事,如離開的顧客喜歡新口味的產(chǎn)品,帶來(lái)了他們的朋友一起品嘗等?!军c(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]ItseemedthatthecustomerscouldnotgetenoughofMaggie’scrazycandycombinations.(it作形式主語(yǔ),連接詞that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Whentheyfinallysentthelastcustomeroutofthedoorandturnedonthe“Closed”signthatflashedinthewindow,theywereexhaustedbutinextraordinarilyhighspirits.(由when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)【范文】Withthesoundofthebellagain,theboyscameback.Butthistimetherewasacrowdofkidswiththem.Alinewasformingoutofthedoor!Thesilencewasreplacedwithexcitedchatter.Thekidswerelaughing,pointingatthenewcandyflavors,andpullinghandfulofcoinsfromtheirpockets.“I’llhaveapicklejuicelemonade,please!’’“GivemetwopiecesofBrusselsspoutscandies,please!’’“Thehotsauceicecream,please!’’…Carlyandherauntwereoccupiedservingallthecustomers,andmorelinedupatthedooreveryminute.Carlyhadneverseentheshopsobusy!ItseemedthatthecustomerscouldnotgetenoughofMaggie’scrazycandycombinations.Incredibly!Whentheyfinallysentthelastcustomeroutofthedoorandturnedonthe“Closed”signthatflashedinthewindow,theywereexhaustedbutinextraordinarilyhighspirits.Thatmighthavebeenthecraziestday,ever.Givingherauntathumbsup,Carlysaidsmilingly,“AuntMaggie,you’reagenius.”“Iknow,’’grinnedheraunt,winkingatCarlywiththeusualchildishsmileonherface.。文章原文CarlyandtheCandyShoppe

byRVStaffWriterJ.C.

“Bye,Mom;bye,Dad;don’tworry.We’lltakecareofeverything!”Carlywavedfromthefrontdooroftheshopasherparents

droveoff.

They

wereheadedforawell-deservedvacation

fromtheircandystore,andCarlyhadpromisedthemshe’dbeableto

runitbyherself.

Herparentsdidn’tquiteagree,however,sotheycompromisedbyhavingCarly’sAuntMaggiecomeoverandhelp.AuntMaggiedidn’thaveanyexperiencerunningastore,butCarlydid,and

atleastherauntwouldbegoodcompany.Herparentsgraciouslycalledheraunt“eccentric”or“uniquelycreative,”butitdidn’tmatter;

Carlyalwayshadfunwhenherauntwasaround.

Maggie

blewintothestorelikeaswirlingwhirlwind.Shelookedasifshe’dbeenstitchedtogetherbyachild;shewasadazzlingdisplayofpatchworkpatternsandcolors.

“Allright,Carlymylove,let’sgetthispartystarted,”shesmiledatherniece.“Whatdowedofirst?”

Carly

putonherpinkshopapronandremovedawhiteonefromahook,handingittoheraunt.

“Pleaseputthison.Themainjobistoservecustomers,butwealsomakesomeofthecandyourselves.DadandMomdidmostoftheworkalready,butwehavetofinishupafewthings.I’llshowyou.”

Carlytookherauntbehindthecounterandovertowherethefamilymadesomeoftheirowncandy,suchasfreshfudge,cottoncandy,andicecream.

Theyhadlotsofdeliciousflavorstochoosefrom.

AuntMaggielookedthemoverandnibbledabiteofthechocolatemint-flavoredfudge.

“Hmm,”shesaid.

“What?”askedCarly.“It’sdelicious,right?”Carlyknewthefudgewasperfect.

“It’sgood,but…unoriginal,”repliedheraunt.“Wecandobetter.”

BeforeCarlycouldquestionwhatMaggiemeant,thewomanhadgonetoinvestigatethekitchenintheback.

Carly

heardherrustlingaround,openingdrawersandtherefrigerator.

“Bingo!”calledAuntMaggie,comingbacktoCarlywithherhandsfullofitems.Shespreadthemontheworksurfacewithaflourish.

“Weneedtoaddsomeofthesetojazzupthatbasicfudgetaste.”

“Brusselssprouts?”Carlygaveherauntaquizzicallook.Shecouldn’tbeserious!

Butshewas.Thewoman’shandswerebusychoppingandthenaddingsmallpiecesofthegreenvegetableintothevanillafudgebatte

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