閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。MeiMeifrownedasshehelpedhermotherandfathersetoutthecookingsuppliesintheshinysteelkitchen.HerfamilyhadjustmovedherefromSanFrancisco,havingboughtasmallrestaurant,whichwassettoopeninthenextfewdays.“Movingherewasastupididea.IhavelostallmyfriendsinSanFrancisco.WhatshouldIdonow?”MeiMeigrumbled,mostlytoherself.“What'sthat?”Hermotherasked,openingaboxandliftingoutseveralpotsandawok.“Nothing,”MeiMeimumbled.Thegirlhadbeencomplainingaboutthemove,butherparentshadmadethedecisionandwerenowtoobusygettingreadyforthegrandopeningtolistentohercomplaints.Thefirstfewdaysathernewschoolhadn'tbeeneasy,either.Shefoundithardtotalktopeopleshedidn'tknow,anditseemedlikethestudentshadn'tevennoticedher.MeiMeisighedandgotbacktowashingdishes.Onthedayofthegrandopening,MeiMei'sparentswereallsmiles,welcomingcustomersintotherestaurant,brightlydecoratedingoldandred.EvenMeiMeiwasinagoodmoodassherushedaround,seatingguests,handingoutmenus,andpouringtallglassesofwater.Thiswasabigdayforherfamily.AtoneofthetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereaboutMeiMei'sage.Asshefilledtheirglasses,MeiMeirealizedthetwinswereinherclass.MeiMeiduckedherheaddownsoherlonghaircoveredherface,andsheturnedawayfromthetable.MeiMei'smotherfoundhersoonafter,inthekitchenloadingthedishwasher.“Honey,whatareyoudoingbackhere?Weneedyououtfrontwiththecustomers.”注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:“Mom,Idon'twanttobeoutthere!”Paragraph2:MeiMeiputahandfulofcookiesintoasmallplateandleftthekitchen._____________________________________________________________________【解析】【分析】這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫作文?！驹斀狻客ㄟ^閱讀所給文章可知，梅梅一家剛從舊金山搬到不熟悉的地方，梅梅很不適應，她發(fā)現(xiàn)很難與不認識的人交談，而且學生們似乎根本沒有注意到她。而梅梅家里餐廳開業(yè)的那天梅梅也去幫忙，這對她的家人來說是個大日子。結果梅梅遇到了班上的同學和父母來吃飯，梅梅轉身離開了桌子?！厩楣?jié)分析】續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：“媽媽，我不想出去!”所以后文應該是講述媽媽開導梅梅主動去和同學打招呼；第二段開頭是：梅梅把一把餅干放進一個小盤子里，離開了廚房。本段應該寫梅梅將餅干端給雙胞胎，以及他們的反應。我們不難理清故事情節(jié)：movedfromSanFrancisco---openedarestaurant----shewasunhappybecauseshedidn’tknowanyoneinhernewschoolandfoundithardtomakefriendsbecauseshewasshy-----shehelpedinhermother’srestaurant----shefoundtwogirlsinherclassintherestaurantandhidaway.......【點睛】本文描寫詳略得當，使用了高級詞匯和高級句子。如：pleadwith,awkwardsituation,greet等高級詞匯；MeiMeiwhispered,asifpleadingwithhermothernottoletherselffacetheawkwardsituation.方式狀語從句；MeiMeifoundthatshewasaccepted.賓語從句等高級句式?！痉P】①通過所給文章的第一段的首句frowned

，第二段的第一行adumbidea/joyless，

第三段的Thefirstfewdaysathernewschoolhadn'tbeeneasy,either.Shefoundithardtotalktopeopleshedidn'tknow,anditseemedlikethestudentshadn'tevennoticedher.Sophia

sighedandgotbacktowashingdishes.可以看出主人公Sophia在隨著父母搬到一個陌生的地方后，心情是及其孤獨lonely郁悶的depressed，同時她認為父母的這種做法非常不明智stupid.

一般而言，一個人在孤獨郁悶時，最需要的是陪伴，而她的父母卻在忙著新餐館的開業(yè)和做生意。這點在所給文章的第二段這個句子看得出來：herparentswerenowtoobusygettingreadyforthegrandopeningtolistentohercomplaints.家人的陪伴是指望不上了，其實這里也為后面的她的兩個同學的出現(xiàn)埋下了伏筆。②在她父母餐館開業(yè)的當天，根據(jù)所給文章的第4段

sherushedaround,seatingguests,handingoutmenus,andpouringtallglassesofwater.通過這段的描寫，可以看得出來Sophia

是個懂事considerate的孩子，盡管她不贊成父母搬到一個陌生的城市，但是她并沒有因為此而不去給父母幫忙，因為她知道這天對她們?nèi)液苤匾猅hiswasabigdayforherfamily.而且在餐館里幫忙，讓她心情特別好Sophia

wasinagoodmood。

因為她知道自己作為家里的一分子，能為父母分擔一些重擔。③根據(jù)所給文章的第5段Atoneofthetablessatafamilywithtwodaughterswhowereabout

Sophia

'sage.Asshefilledtheirglasses,Sophia

realizedthetwinswereinherclass.

Sophia

duckedherheaddownsoherlonghaircoveredherface,andsheturnedawayfromthetable.而這里也是全文發(fā)展的高潮climax.躲在廚房的Sophia被她媽媽發(fā)現(xiàn)了。當她的媽媽得知事情的真相后，她鼓勵Sophia勇敢地主動地去跟她的同學打招呼。這點在所給文章的第9段這個句子看得出來：That’sgood!Gotakethemsomefortunecookiesandsayhello。④筆者認為她的媽媽這樣做，其實是在給Sophia傳遞著這樣的一個信息：靠自己的雙手勞動賺錢，是光榮的，高貴的。工作沒有貴賤之分。而且這個餅干的名字是

fortune，所以她的媽媽認為會給Sophia帶來一份好運氣。⑤根據(jù)所給文章的第10段：firstshetoreopenawrapperandcrackedacookieopenforherself.其實這個動作刻畫了Sophia的心情很忐忑不安nervousandanxious，她不知道接下來會發(fā)生什么。就在這時她無意間看見了餅干外包裝上的一個句子，也就是所給文章的最后一段：“Manyfriendsarefoundwithasinglesmile,”itread..筆者認為這也是作者想要傳遞的一個情感主線?！敬鸢浮縋aragraph1:“Mom,Idon'twanttobeoutthere!”MeiMeiwhispered,asifpleadingwithhermothernottoletherselffacetheawkwardsituation.“Why?”hermotherasks.“TheyaremyclassmatesandIdon'twanttogreettheminthissituation.”“Youshouldn'tbeafraid.Maybethisisyourchancetomeetthem.Goaheadandgetthemthesecookies,too.”MeiMeihesitatedandacceptedhermother'ssuggestion.Paragraph2:MeiMeiputahandfulofcookiesintoasmallplateandleftthekitchen.Sheservedthemthecookies,andthetwinsrecognizedMeiMei.Theygreetedherwarmly.AndtheytalkedalotaboutMe