第二部分讀后續(xù)寫對點(diǎn)集訓(xùn)上提素養(yǎng) 分基練提能練素養(yǎng)提能升華Writing1閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Ihadtogogroceryshoppingthismorningforthefirsttimeinacoupleofweeks.MyhusbandhadbeeninGreeceforafewweeksandmydaughterswerenotathomeeithersoIhadstockeduponvegetablessaladingredientsandfruitsalongwiththemeatthatIhadinthefreezer.Iamcurious.Whenyouareinlinewaitingtocheckout，doyoucheckoutwhatothershaveintheircarts？Ihatetoadmitit，butIdo.Itrynottojudge，butagain，IsupposeIdotosomeexten七whenIseeafamilyinwhichtheparentsandthekidsareveryoverweightandtheyarebuyingpop（汽水）andhighcaloriesnackfoods.Mybiggestissuewithgroceriesisthatalloftheprocessedfoodsareeasiertogetandcheaperthanfreshproduceandprobablystretchfurther.Itamazesmetoseefamiliesbuying12packsor24packsofdifferentkindsofpop.MostofthepeoplethatIamseeingarebuyingregularpop，notdiet.ButwhenIwasyoung，weboughtpoponspecialoccasions.Forbirthdaypartiesoracampingtrip，wecouldonlyhaveonecanperday.WeboughtShastabackthen.Iamnotevensurewhetheritisstillsoldornot.Wecouldallpickafewdifferentflavorsthatwewantedforthetrip.Butnowadays，popiseverywhereyougo.IamgladtosaythatthehospitalthatIworkforthrewawayalloftheirpopvendingmachines（自動販賣機(jī)）.Theydidn,tthinkhealthcareworkers,patientsorpatients,familiesneededthem.Iwashappyforthechange，butotherpeoplemightnotthinkso.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Iheardapieceofnewsontheradio.Itisreportedthat40%ofAmericanwomenareobese,whoofteneatatrestaurantsandfastfoodplaces.Theyareunwillingtocookathomebecausetheyarelazy.Butinordertostayhealthy,weshouldbuyvegetables,fruitandmeatandmakethemajorityofourmealsathome.WecanfindrecipesontheInternetthataregoodforus.Wecancookvariousfoodsthatwelovetoeat.Whenyourfamilyseeafeastonthetable,theywillfeelgood.Paragraph2：IlovefreshfruitandIlovefish.Infact,Ialwaysgogroceryshopping,buymanyfreshfruitsandcookvariousfishesthatIlike.Ipickafewdifferent-flavorsformyparentsandmyfriends,whichmakesthemhappy.Writing2閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。TawnyNelsonisasinglemotheroffoursweetlittlegirlsaged9,5,2,andoneyearold.It,snoteasytotakecareofthegirlsallonherown.Recently,shesharedastorywithFrankSomerville,anewsanchorfoiKTVUNewsinCalifornia.HewassomovedbyherstorythatheshareditonhisFacebookpage.Tawny,sstoryopenedwithhervisitingthegrocerystore.Itwasarainyandmiserabledayandbythetimeshegotallthegirlsloadedinthetruckandreadytoheadhome,itwasdarkandpouringdown.Whenshetriedtostarthertruck,itwouldn,tstart.Withnoonetocall,Tawnyturnedtoaskstrangersforhelptochargehertruck.Hourspassedandsodidatleasttwentypeople.Theyallignoredher.Tiredandhungry,herdaughtersbegantoactout.Tawnywasfilledwithtearswhensomeoneknockedonherpassengerwindow.Somervillewrites,“IswearIgotchillswhenIreadwhathappenednext."AndyouwilldothesamewhenyoureadTawny,sstory：Iamthesinglemotheroffourabsolutelybeautifullittlegirls.Theyare9,5,2,andoneyearold.Andthingshavebeenparticularlyroughsincemyexleft.OurtruckhadaflattireandIhadtoinflateitconstantly.Thedriversidewindowmotordied.AndIneededanewbelt.Thetruckwasamess.Andwedidn,tdriveanywhereunlesswehadto.Well,theotherdaywedesperatelyneededtogotothestore.SoweloadedupanddrovetotheWinnDixieabout9blocksaway.Whenwegotoutofthestoreitwasfarafterdark.Anditwasrainingheavily.Iloadedmykidsandgroceriesintothetruck.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Pargagraph1：Mybatterywasdead.Myphonebrokedown.IhadnofamilytochatwithandIhadtodoeverythingonmyown.Iturnedtomorethantwentypeopleforhelpbuttheyallturnedmedown.My5yearoldgirlwasveryhungryandbegantocry.Mytwoyearolddaughterwantedtogohomeandmyoldestgirltriedtohelp.IfeltthatIwastheworstmotherever.Paragraph2：Iwascryingwhenagentlemanstoppedandofferedtohelpme.Hehandedmeaplateofchickenandbiscuitsandbottlesofwater.Hesaid,“Feedyourgirls.Ihaveatruckonthewayandmywifewillbeheretotakeyouhome.”Whathesaidwasright.Hiswifearrivedfollowedbyourtruck.Weandthetruckweretakenhome.Thenextmorningthegentlemanreturnedtomyhousewithamanwhoreplacedmybatteryandfixedmywindow.SeeingthesceneIburstintotears.Writing3閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Inmyhome,thereisanoldleatherchairthatIwanttothrowawaybutIcan,t.Ifyoutookatthispicture,you,llseewhy.ThisismydogMaxandhelivesinthe01dchair.Itwasn,talwaysthisway.Maxusedtobeapuppy.Heran,jumpedandplayed.Foryearsitseemedheneversatstill.Buthe,s8yearsoldnowsohe,ssloweddownquiteabitandenjoyshistimeinhisfavoritechairlikeanoldman.EverytimeIleavethehouse,heclimbsupthereandtakesonasadlook.It,safacethatsays,“IhateitwhenyouleavemebutI,llwaitherepatientlyuntilyoucomeback.”Whenhewasyoungerhe,dalwaysbewaitingatthedoorandwavinghistailwhenheheardthesoundofknocking.Thesedayshisoldlegsarehurtabitandgettingupanddownfromthingsisn,taseasyasitusedtobe.SowhenIopenthedooranddon,tseethedogstandingthere,myeyesimmediatelyturntowardthelivingroomandIseehis_bigbrowneyes.ThesadnessiswashedawayfromhisfaceandIimmediatelygoandgivehimahug.Iftherewereamilliondollarssittingonthekitchentable,Iwouldwalkrighttoseehimfirst.Igetdownonthefloorsoweareateyelevel,putmyheadonhisandtellhimwhatagoodboyheis.Hedoesn,tknowalotofhumanwordsbutheknowswhat“goodboy”means.Iboughtthatchair15yearsagoandtheleatherhasstartedtowearaway.Idon,tminditsomuchbutwhencompanycomesover,Idofeelabitembarrassed.IapologizetomyguestsbutexplainthatisMax,schair.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：I'vethoughtaboutgettingridofit.ButthenIwonderwhatMaxwoulddoifIdothat.Wouldhelikeanewchairorwouldhestareattheplacewhereheusedtosleepandplay,lookingbackatmeconfusedly?He,sagreatdogandhedoesn,taskmetodoanythingforhimotherthanto love him.Sonowthat he likesthe01dchair,whenheseesthechair,hecan think ofmyloveforhim.Paragraph2：Iliketoseehimsittinginthechair when Icomeback.IwanttoseehisbigbrowneyesfilledwithloveandIwantmygood boytowaitformeat the door.Iwanttogivehimahug_afterwork.Maxhasbecomeapartofmylife.HeislikemysonandIamwillingtolovehim.Writing4閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Todayishisbirthday.It'saspecialdaythatBrianfeelsthatheisluckytosharewithyou,fortodayheis70yearsold.AboutamonthagoBrianaskedDanielleandNancyifhecoulddowhathewantedtodoonhisbirthday.Hedidn,tknowthenwhathewouldsa,ybuthedidknowthathewantedtosharehisageinaverypublicway.Littledidhesuspectthenthathewouldbesharingnotonlywithhiscoworkersonthe29thfloor,butwiththeentireregion!Revealingageisnotsomethingthatmostpeople,includinghimself,feelcomfortabledoing.Peoplewouldn,tthinkofaskingtheirfriends,associatesorcustomershowoldtheyare.Whyisitthenperfectlyacceptabletoaskachildhowoldheis?Whatchangesbetweenage7andage70?Whenandwhydoesageturnfromsomethingtobeproudlyclaimedtoatopictobeavoided?Hebelievesithappenswhenachildnolongerstateshisageasasimplefac,tjustashisyoungestsonGavinusedtodowithmathematicalprecision精確性）：“Iam6and5/12yearsold.”Thenheinsteadbeginstofocusonbeingseenasolder.Asparents，peoplecontributetothismindshiftbyremarkssuchas“Actyourage”or“You'reolderthanthat."Headmitsthathesaidsuchthingstohisownchildren.Thechildgetsthemessagethatagebringsstatus，powerandautonomy^主權(quán)）.Peoplecelebrateimportantevents.Thensometimeafterage21birthdaycelebrationslosetheirallure吸弓|力）.Nolongerisgettingolderseenasabadgeofdistinction.Instead,peoplebecomeconcernedthattheyaregettingold.Theveryword“old”hasnegativeconnotations.Whatimagecomestomindwhenyouhear“oldage”“oldfolk,shome”“oldguard”or“outwiththeold,inwiththenew”?“You,retooold”willgraduallyturninto"I'mtooold.”Hehasheardthisinnervoicemanytimes.注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Healwaysrecallsthemomentwhenhewas30.Hespentsixyearsstudyingincollegeandthenservedinthenavyforfiveyears.Whenhewas30heworkedinthebank.Hebecameanappraisaltrainer.OncehecamebacktoNewYorkandmethioworkersfromacrossthenation.Hewasbyfartheoldestinthisgroup,andheremembers,"I'mtoooldtostartthisprofession.”Paragraph2：TwentyyearspassedItwashisbirthdayof50,andhewasmarriedwithtwochildren,whowere13and8.Thenhiswifeannouncedthatshewouldgivebirthtothethirdchild.Shewas48,sothiseventwascompletelybeyondexpectation.Hetoldhisfriendsandannouncedthenews.Afterhesentthemessage,thetypicalresponsehegotwas"I'mgladit,syouandnotme,”whichmeans"I'mtoooldtobeafatheragain.”Writing5閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Foraslongasherparentscanremember,11yearold BreanaCarseyhashadthiscrazydream.Shehasalwayswantedamommyhorsewhowouldgivebirthtoababyhorse,whowouldthengrowuptobecomearacingchampion.“Absolutely,thiswasafairytaleforherfromdayone.Weputitoffforfiveyearsbecausewedon,thaveafarm”saidherfather,BrianCarsey,whoexplainedthathisdaughterhas“mewrappedaroundherfinger.”Herhorsewasborninthespringof2013.BreananameditMJBGotFaithforthefaithsheinstantlyhadinhim.“Ireallylovedhim.He,ssupersofttoo,”shesaid.Butthatquickbondposedarealproblemforthisdad.Seeforwhateverreason,Brianthoughtonceheexplainedtohisdaughterthatherhorsecouldneverruninarace—thatitwasaruntfrompoorbreedingstock—shewouldjustagreetosellit.“Shethoughtherhorsewaspriceless,”hesaid.“SoIhadachatwithmywifeandwereallygotourselvesinamesshere.AndIdidn,tknowhowweweregoingtogetoutofthis.Sowetookhimtotheraces,thehorsethatIthoughtweshouldhavegotridofalready.”Brianwasstuck,committedtoboardingandtrainingthislongshottoendalllongshots.Andthisisnotawealthyfamily.Brianrunsasmallcompany.AndOhioracing,whichisharnessstyleracing,isa$900millionayear industry.MJBGotFaithwassoslowthatitwasbarelyevenqualifiedtocompetebutthensomehowwonhisfirstrace,thenhissecond,thirdandfourthqualifyinghimforthestatechampionshipheldinColumbus,Ohio.“AndIsaidtomydaughter,'Ifyoufinishthird,youshouldbesothankful,’”Brianremembered.“Shesaid,'Daddy,ifhefinisheslast,I,mgoingtobethankful.Buthe,sgoingtowin.’”注意：.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1：Thislittlehorsewonanimportantmatch.Breanawenthomewithahundredthousanddollarsthatday.Shecontributedhalfofittocharityandintendedtousetheotherhalftobuyafarm.“IjustwanttohaveafarmandbeabletowalkMJBGotFaith,”shesaid.Sincewefirsttoldthisstorylastyear,Breanahaslivedabetterlife.Shegotanationalhorseracingawardandherstorywasreportedbymanymedia.Paragraph2：HerdadnowhasaracehorsewhosenameisSteveHartmanPerhapsbecauseofmanyreasons,Brianhasnotwonaraceyet.Hopefullyhisdaughterwillallowhimtoliveonherfarm.Hewatcheshisdaughterwalkingthehorseonthefarm.Sometimeshewalkshishorse.Hehadachatwithhisdaughteraboutthefuture.Shesaidshewouldliketotakepartinmorecompetitions.Andshewantedtolivewithherfamilyforever.Writing6閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Myheavenlydreambringsalifetimeofcomfortandpeace.BedtimewasmiserableformewhenIwasseven.Theatticdoorjustoutsidemybedroomhadanunfriendlyhabitofbreakingopenbyitselfinthenight,andIwassurethatitwasbecauseofsomefearfulmonster魔鬼）onitswayouttogetme.“It'sanoldhouse,Lois”mymotherexplainedasshetalkedtomeonenight.“Thedoorisbroken.”Buthercomfortingwordswerenomatchformywildimagination.“Canyoureadtometohelpmegotosleep?”Iasked.Momsatatmybedsideandreadmeastory,andanother,andanotheruntilIfinallygottosleep,withmytoytiger,Mumsy,onmychest.Duringtheday,theatticwasanythingbutfrightening.TheverynextafternoonmyfriendsandIranupanddownitsstepsforfun.Firsttheywereamountaintoclimb,thenaship,ssail,andthenawonderfulcastlestaircase.“See,Mumsy,”Isaid,climbingoverboxesandfurniturewe,dstored.“There,snothingscaryhere.”Butwhennightfell,everythingchanged.Theattic,sroughwoodenfloorandunfinishedwallswereweaklylitbybarebulbsthatmadeeverythinglookambiguous.Thosepi