讀后續(xù)寫原文：Ilookedaroundattheotherpatientswaitingtoseethedoctor.Maybetheyallhadmoreromanticplansfortheevening

onthisValentine'sDay,butfornowthegroup

seemedanti-social.

Threepeoplehadtheirheadsdown,staringatcellphones.Anotherwas

absorbedinamagazine.Thereceptionisttappedathercomputer.

Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld.ButIcouldn’tjudgethemforit.

Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo—ifIhadn'tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday,adayofloveandfriendship.Instead,Isatpatientlyinmyplasticchairasacoupleof

newpeopletookdistantseats.“Roberta?Thedoctor’sreadyforyou,”thenursecalled.Atleast

I'llhavesomekindofhumanconnection,Ithought.Mycheckupwentwell,andIbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittle

Honda

inaspacerightoutfront.Igotinandturnedthekey.Nothing.Oh,no.Notagain.I'dsentthecartothegarageseveraltimesalreadyforthisveryproblemandthoughtithadfinallybeenfixed.IreachedformycellphonetocallAAA—thenremembereditwasdead,likemycar.Iwouldhavetousethephoneinside.AfewpeopleglancedupwhenIcamebackintothewaitingroom,thenquicklywentbacktowhattheyweredoing.Iwentstraighttothereceptiondesk,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.SoIturnedbacktothepeopleinthewaitingroom."Iwouldn’tnormallydothis,”Isaidtothegroup,hopingthatIsoundedapologetic.Severalpeopleturnedtowardmetolisten."Butmycarwon'tstart”Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom."Youintrouble,Roberta?”shesaid.“I'llgoandtakealook.”Ifollowedthenurseoutside.AsIpassedthroughthedoor,Ifeltsomeonewasbehindme.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.改寫版:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Alittleconfused,Iwenttomycarandgotintothedriver'sseat.Oneofthemshouted,"Openyourenginecover!",soIpushedthebutton.Severalothersbentatthewaist,probablytoleaninandchecktheengine."Thethingisabitloose,"oneofthemassuredme,"trustme.Iusedtobeacarmechanic."Aftertakingthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantoturnit.Beforelong,hewassittingupandrubbinghisback.Unexpectedly,theotherpatients,despitetheirownhealthconditions,volunteeredtotakehisturn.Whenthe"mechanic"gavethethumbsup,theyallshoutedinagreement,"Tryitnow!Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theenginestartedimmediately.Acheerwentup.Severalhandsclosedtheenginetop."Don'tstoponthewayhome,"saidthe"mechanic"."Keepthecarrunninguntilthebatteryiswellcharged."Ipulledmycaroutofthelot,thenstoppedtowavetothecrowdofpeoplewho'dsavedtheday.MyHondaneverbrokedownagain.Itturnedoutthatmywaitingroomteamhaddoneabetterjobthanmygarageeverdid.Iguessthat'swhathappenswhenpeoplegettogether.Andthere'snobetterValentinethanthat.情感線：IsolatedEveryonewasintheirownlittleworld.thirstforconnectionItwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday,adayofloveandfriendship.InsteadIsatpatientlyinmyplasticchairasacoupleofnewpeopletookdistantseats.AtleastI'llhavesomekindofhumanconnection,IthoughtAfewpeopleglancedupwhenIcamebackintothewaitingroom,thenquicklywentbacktowhattheyweredoingtendtobeconnected.Iwentstraighttothereceptiondesk,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.SoIturnedbacktothepeopleinthewaitingroomConnected“l(fā)oved"Severalpeopleturnedtowardmetolisten.AsIpassedthroughthedoor,IfeltsomeonewasbehindmeTheme:Love&Friendship情節(jié)走向：Whydidtheyfollowme?>Upset?Doubtful?Appreciative?What'smyfeeling/thinking/reaction?>Upset?Doubtful?Appreciative?Didwesolvetheproblem?How?Bythenurse/onepatient/AAA?Together?What'stheresult?>Failed?Successful?Whatwereeveryone'sreaction?>CheerfulWhat'smyfeeling/thinking/reflection?>Grateful,Connected,BeLoved關(guān)于修車的語言積累：1.Thecarroaredinathrillingvoiceandmyheartfinallyfounditsnormalbeat.2.Surroundedbymanyconcernedeyes,theengineworked.Mycarsurvived!Itseemedtobeamiraclethatmycarcouldstartagain.3.Thecarstarted.Themomentthecar'sheadlightslitup,thunderousapplausearose.4.Fortunately,thesoundoftheengineyelledoutthetriumph,tearingthesilenceofgroundintopieces.5.Earsfilledwiththeboomoftheengine,IwasinrapturewhenIfoundmylittleHondawassuccessfullyfixed.虛擬語氣對比現(xiàn)實(shí),表達(dá)內(nèi)心遺憾Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo--ifIhadn'tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday.adayofloveandfriendship.InsteadIsatpatientlyinmyplasticchairasacoupleofnewpeopletookdistantseats.前后情形好壞對比，長短句結(jié)合否定詞/副詞表達(dá)強(qiáng)烈情緒Mycheckupwentwell,andIbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHondainaspacerightoutfront.Igotinandturnedthekey.NothingOh,no.Notagain.Idsentthecartothegarageseveraltimesalreadyforthisveryproblemandthoughtithadfinallybeenfixed.原文語言積累：tappedatthecomputerstrikeupaconversationpassthetimedistantseatbreezedoutturnedthekeyglancedupsoundedapologeticpoppedherheadintosaidaquickprayer敲電腦搭訕、攀談消磨時間遠(yuǎn)處的座位輕盈而自信地走轉(zhuǎn)動鑰匙拾頭看聽起來很抱歉探頭到...快速祈禱下水文：Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.“Igrewuponafarm,”oneofthemensaidasIslidintothedriver’sseat.“Somethingwasforeverontheblink.”“Popyourhood!”someonecalled.IpressedthefirstbuttonIsaw,

butImistakenlyopenedthefueldoor,whichmadeeveryonelaugh.Eventually,severalpeoplecheckedtheengine,andoneformermechanicamongthemclaimedthatthebatteryterminalwasloose,offeringtofixitwithtoolshehadinhistrunk.However,duetohisneuropathy,heneededsomeonetotwisttheterminal.

Aguyinavestandtievolunteered.“Idon’tknowdiddlyaboutcars,”hesaid.“ButIcantwistsomething!”Hedisappearedunderthehood.Whenthemechanicgaveathumbs-up,everyonecalledoutinunison,“Try’ernow!”Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineturnedoverimmediately.Acheerwentup.Severalhandsshutthehood.“Don’tmakeanystopsonthewayhome,”thefarmersaid.“Keepthecarrunningtillthebatterygetsagoodcharge.”Ibackedmycaroutofthespace,thenpausedtowaveatthecrowdofpeoplewho’dsavedtheday.MyHondaneverstalledagain.Turnsout,mywaitingroomteamhaddoneabetterjobthanmygarageeverdid.Iguessthat’sjustwhathappenswhenpeoplecometogether.Andthere’snobettervalentinethanthat.原范文：Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.

Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver'sseat.Oneofthemcalled“Popyourhood!”

(打開引擎蓋)SoIpressedthebutton.Severalothersbentatthehip(彎下腰),presumably(估計(jì)是)leaningintochecktheengine.“Thescrewisloose,”oneassuredme,“Trustme.Iusedtobeamechanic”.Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.Unexpectedly,theotherpatientsjustvolunteeredtotakehisturndespitetheirownhealthcondition.Whenthe“mechanic”gaveathumbs-up,everyonecalledoutinunison,“Tryitnow!”Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.

Theengineturnedoverimmediately.Acheerwentup.Severalhandsshutthehood.“Don’tmakeanystopsonthewayhome,”the“mechanic”said.“Keepthecarrunningtillthebatterygetsagoodcharge.”Ibackedmycaroutofthespace,thenpaused