最近英語考試中班上部分學生的書面表達共同特點都是遠遠沒有達到100個詞數(shù)左右。10-15分20-25分僅僅完成作文基本主體信息既有基本主體信息又有豐富的內(nèi)容補充Doyouwanttogetascoreof20-25

foryourEnglishcomposition?Question作文主體信息寫完通常只有60-70個字，不足100詞，怎么彌補詞數(shù)？假定你是李華。上周二在校園里撿到一個錢包。請你用英語給你校廣播站的播音員寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡述時間和過程;2.交代錢包相關信息;

3.請求在廣播上面播出招領信息.注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。必須Dearbroadcaster,I’mLiHua.

I’mwritingtotellyouapieceofimportantinformation.IpickedupawalletlastTuesdayoncampuswhenIwaswalking.Idon'tknowwhoownsthewalletwhichcontainsseveralbankcards.

Iwantyoutobroadcastthismessageontheschoolradio.

Yours,LiHua

假定你是李華。上周二在校園里撿到一個錢包。請你用英語給你校廣播站的播音員寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡述時間過程;2.交代錢包相關信息;

3.請求在廣播上面播出招領信息.注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。共計57個單詞Dearbroadcaster,I’mLiHua,anoutgoingstudentinourschool.I’mwritingtotellyouapieceofimportantinformation.IpickedupawalletlastTuesdayoncampuswhenIwaswalking.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonthefloor.Idon'tknowwhoownsthewalletwhichcontainsseveralbankcards.Havinglostthewallet,theownermustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.

SoIneedyourhelp.

Iwantyoutobroadcastthismessageontheschoolradio,so

thattheownercangetitback.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.

I'mlookingforwardtohearingyouontheair.

Yours，LiHua共計118個單詞GroupdiscussionWhatkindofinformationhasbeenaddedtothiscomposition?Dearbroadcaster,I’mLiHua,anoutgoingstudentinourschool.I’mwritingtotellyouapieceofimportantinformation.IpickedupawalletlastTuesdayoncampuswhenIwaswalking.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonthefloor.Idon'tknowwhoownsthewalletwhichcontainsseveralbankcards.Havinglostthewallet,theownermustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.

SoIneedyourhelp.

Iwantyoutobroadcastthismessageontheschoolradiostation,so

thattheownercangetitback.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.

I'mlookingforwardtohearingyouontheair.

Yours，LiHua同位語場景具體化原因心理感受結果交際語大俠，如何豐富作文內(nèi)容？跟著我去看一看就知道了！如何豐富作文內(nèi)容用具體實例補充說明合理增加同位語補充前因后果或目的寫出個人感受、評價或結果補充功能性（交際性）語言具體措施1.用具體實例補充說明(1)我要花一些時間和父母在一起。

I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,_____________________________________________(與他們聊天和做一些家務)(2)IamaheathyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch._____________________________________________(只要有時間，我就會與我的朋友們一起踢足球).chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.WheneverIhavetime,I'llplayfootballwithmyfriends.2.合理增加同位語（1）

IamLiHua,_________________________________(我們學校的學生會主席)（2）Iwanttohaveapenfriend,________________________________________(希望是一位跟我有相同興趣的女孩).ChairmanoftheStudents’Unionofmyschool.hopefullyagirlwithinterestssimilartomine.3.補充前因后果或目的(1)___________________________________________(因為知道你對中國傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣），Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity.______________________________________________________________________(為了獲得一些實踐經(jīng)驗)I’mplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,(2)4.寫出個人感受、評價或后果(1)Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,

__________________________________________________________________(這必將有助于你學到更多的中國文化）(2)Wecansetoutearly,____________________________________(以便我們有更多的時間閱讀和挑選圖書）

(3)Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_________________________________________(變得無法使用)

sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.

whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.makingitimpossibletouse.（1）___________________________________________________________________（如果你能幫我這個忙，我將不勝感激（2）_________________________________（期待著你的早日回復）5.補充功能性（交際性）語言（3）____________________________________________________________________(如果有什么能幫到你的，請不要猶豫告訴我）Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavour.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.

Practice(addreasonabledetails）

1.TherearesomebadbehavioursinBazhongCity.______________________________（用具體實例補充說明）2.I’mLiHua,______________________________.(同位語)

3.Ineedagoodrest___________________.(補充前因后果或目的)

4.Withcuriosity,Iopenedthebox,______________________________.（適當將寫作內(nèi)容詳細化）

5.Yesterday,IboughtanEnglishdictionaryfromyourbookstore________________________________(寫出個人感受、評價或后果)

6.________________________________________________________(若你能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激).SummaryTopic:HowtoenrichthecontentofEnglishcompositioninCollegeEntranceExaminationMethod:adddetailstocompositionsMeasures:用具體實例補充說明(Givespecificexamples)合理增加同位語(Addappositiveproperly)補充前因后果或目的(Addcauseandeffectorpurpose)寫出個人感受、評價或后果(Writeoutfeelings,commentsorresults)補充功能性（交際性）語言(Addfunctional/communicativelanguage)不是每篇文章都需要使用到這5種增加細節(jié)的方法，請根據(jù)實際，進行合理的、適當?shù)脑黾?。Homework假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W好中文。請你根據(jù)下列要點寫封回信。要點：1、參加中文學習班。

2、看中文書刊、電視。

3、學唱中文歌曲。

4、交中國朋友。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語已為你寫好.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.Then,youneedtowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinese.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.Yours,LiHua

DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.

DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereare