英語(yǔ)寫作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤與分析

AddSubtitlesHere..一．不一致（Disagreements）

Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)

..二．修飾語(yǔ)錯(cuò)位（MisplacedModifiers）

IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.

IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillknowtheworldoutsidethecampus

better.

..三．句子不完整（SentenceFragments）

Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.

Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper...四．懸垂修飾語(yǔ)（DanglingModifiers）

Todowellincollege,goodgradesareessential.

Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.

..五．詞性誤用(MisuseofPartsofSpeech)

Nonecannegativetheimportanceofmoney.

Nonecandenytheimportanceofmoney.

..六．指代不清(AmbiguousReferenceofPronouns)

Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.Wecanalsoknowsocietybyservingitourselves...七．連接間斷的句子(Run-onSentences)

Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.或：

Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecanbecomeacquaintedwiththeoutside

world

..八．措詞毛病(TroublesinDiction)

Theincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagriculturealsomakespollution.

Theabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.

..九．累贅(Redundancy)

Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,moneyisjustthethingtobeusedtobuythethingtheyneed.

Diligent,caringpeopleusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.

..十.不連貫(Incoherence)

Thefreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.

Freshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.

..四級(jí)作文模板四級(jí)寫作一般以三段式展開(kāi)，題目要求中通常包含三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，每個(gè)要點(diǎn)為一段（記住，一定要分段），第一段提出問(wèn)題，第二段分析問(wèn)題，第三段解決問(wèn)題。..四級(jí)作文模板寫作模板——說(shuō)明原因型說(shuō)明原因型模塊(1)Currently,xxhasbeentheorderoftheday.thisdoesdemonstratethetheory－－－nothingismorevaluablethanxx.Itisclearthat(1).Ifyou(2),asaresult,yourdreamswillcometrue.Onthecontrary,ifyou(3),failurewillbefollowingwithyou.Itturnsoutthatallyourplanfallsthrough.Noonecandenyanotherfactthat(4).Youdon'thavetolookveryfartofindoutthetruth,sinceweallknow(5).Itwillexertaprofoundinfluenceupon(6).Withreferencetomystandpoint,Ithink(7)...四級(jí)作文模板注釋:

1:xx的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)2:支持xx的做法3:不支持xx的做法4:xx的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)5:舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二6:說(shuō)明xx優(yōu)點(diǎn)三的影響第三天我寫的相應(yīng)作文:

..四級(jí)作文模板說(shuō)明原因型模塊(2)Inrecentyears,xxhascausedaheateddebateon(1).Thefactorsfor(2).Firstofall,(3).then,therecomesacasethat(4).Moreover,(5).Especiallywhen(6).Indeed,theseuniquepointscanbecollectedtoremindpeoplethat(7).Inthisway,weshouldbehavejustlike(8)...四級(jí)作文模板說(shuō)明原因型模塊(3)Formostofustoday,(1).Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhy(2)areasfollows.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,is(3).second,(4).Thethirdreason,actually,is(5).Thesignificancefor(6).Therefore,(7)...四級(jí)作文模板注釋:

(1)人們針對(duì)xx的態(tài)度和舉措(2)歸納現(xiàn)狀(3)第一個(gè)原因(4)第二個(gè)原因(5)第三個(gè)原因(6)重申造成現(xiàn)狀的最重要原因..四級(jí)作文模板PollutionMostofustodayrecognizethatenvironmentalpollutionhasbeenagreatlyseriousproblem.Lotsofplants,trees,cropsaredestroyedbybadair.Manyfishdieofpoisonouswater.Thousandsofpeoplediefromeatingpoisonedfishorbreathingingas.Therefore,environmentalpollutionshouldberesponsibleforthesediseasesthataredisabling,orbringingdeathnotonlytohumanbeings,butalsotowildlife...四級(jí)作文模板Fromabove,wecanfindthatthereasonswhyenvironmentarepollutedmoreandmoreseriouslyareplentiful.Theprimaryreason,Ithink,istheemissionofharmfulsubstancesintoenvironment.Forexample,farmersmakeuseofgreatamountsofinsecticidessoastopreventinsectsandhavebumperharvests.However,inthemeantime,theyalsopollutetheair,waterandland.Second,thegascomingfromcarenginesandfactoriesalsomakeenvironmentbadlypolluted.Thethirdreasonisactuallytheresultofagrowingpopulationintheworld.Everyday,somuchlitterandwastepouredoutfromhousesalsopollutetheenvironment...四級(jí)作文模板Thesignificanceforcontrollingpollutionnotedthatit'shightimethatmoreeffectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.Therefore,newlawsshouldbepassedtolimittheamountofpollutantsfromfactories.Moreover,inthehouseholds,thereisanobviousneedtoreducelitterandwaste.Let’smakegoodefforts,andtheworldwillbeasaferplacetoliveforus...四級(jí)作文模板說(shuō)明原因型模塊(4)Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(1).itiscommonthat(2).whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotects?foronething,(3).foranother,(4).whatismore,since(5),itisnaturalthat(6).tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworthtrying.weshoulddosomethingsuchas(7)toimprovehepresentsituation,andIdobelieveeverythingwillbebetterinthefuture...四級(jí)作文模板(1)提出論題(2)說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀(3)理由一(4)理由二(5)理由三(6)理由三引起的后果(7)解決方法..四級(jí)作文模板寫作模板——圖表式作文itisobviousinthegraphic/tablethattherate/number/amountofyhasundergonedramaticchanges.ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears(asxvaries).atthepointofx1,yreachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).whatisthereasonforthischange?mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.firstofall,…..四級(jí)作文模板(第一個(gè)原因).moreimportantly,…(第二個(gè)原因).mostimportantofall,…(第三個(gè)原因).fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.thetrenddescribedinthegraphic/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime(ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括號(hào)里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢(shì))...四級(jí)作文模板寫作模板——提綱式作文1．對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式a.有人認(rèn)為x是好事，贊成x，為什么？b.有人認(rèn)為x是壞事，反對(duì)x，為什么？c.我的看法。..四級(jí)作文模板somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingx.theypointoutthefactthat支持x的第一個(gè)原因。theyalsoarguethat支持x的另一個(gè)原因。however,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.theyconsideritharmfultodox.theyfirmlypointoutthat反對(duì)x的第一個(gè)理由。..四級(jí)作文模板anexamplecangivethedetailsofthisargument:thereissometruthinbotharguments.butIthinktheadvantagesofxoverweighthedisadvantages.inadditiontotheabove－mentionednegativeeffectsitmightbringabout,xalsomayx的有一個(gè)壞處。..四級(jí)作文模板2．批駁觀點(diǎn)式a．一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。b．我不同意。manypeoplearguethat錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。bysayingthat,theymean對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat一個(gè)例子。..四級(jí)作文模板(accordingtoasurveyperformedbyxonagroupofy,almost80％ofthem贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。3．社會(huì)問(wèn)題(現(xiàn)象)式a．一個(gè)社會(huì)問(wèn)題或者現(xiàn)象b．產(chǎn)生的原因c．對(duì)社會(huì)和我們生活的影響d．如何杜絕。(如果是問(wèn)題的話)e．前景的預(yù)測(cè)。..四級(jí)作文模板nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmentalproblem.(xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic).accordingtoasurvey,調(diào)查內(nèi)容說(shuō)明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。..四級(jí)作文模板thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhasbeenarticulatedinthefollowingaspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。adozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventxfrombringingusmoreharm.同上basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeoplewill……....四級(jí)作文模板辯論式議論文模版1somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that觀點(diǎn)1.butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.theyfirmlybelievethat觀點(diǎn)2.asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.firstofall,論據(jù)1.moreimportantly,論據(jù)2.mostimportantofall,論據(jù)3.insummary,總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)...四級(jí)作文模板asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或:fromabove,wecanpredictthat預(yù)測(cè)...四級(jí)作文模板模版2peopleholddifferentviewsaboutx.somepeopleareoftheopinionthat觀點(diǎn)1,whileotherspointoutthat觀點(diǎn)2.asfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.foronething,..四級(jí)作文模板論據(jù)1.foranother,論據(jù)2.lastbutnottheleast,論據(jù)3.toconclude,總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或fromabove,wecanpredictthat預(yù)測(cè)...四級(jí)作文模板模版3thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleaboutx(爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn))。somepeopleareoftheviewthat觀點(diǎn)1，whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat觀點(diǎn)2。asfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.thereasonsareobvious..四級(jí)作文模板.firstofall,論據(jù)1。furthermore,論據(jù)2。amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.thatis,論據(jù)3。anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或fromabove,wecanpredictthat預(yù)測(cè)...四級(jí)作文模板以歷年的真題為例，2006年12月的題目為SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV，要求：1。許多人喜歡看春節(jié)晚會(huì)；2。但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)；3。我的看法。“喜歡看春節(jié)晚會(huì)”是正?，F(xiàn)象，..四級(jí)作文模板應(yīng)該作為問(wèn)題的開(kāi)端進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)短介紹，“有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)”才是重點(diǎn)，必須給出相應(yīng)的篇幅做詳細(xì)闡述。最后表明我的觀點(diǎn)，其實(shí)就是問(wèn)作者的態(tài)度及解決這個(gè)矛盾的方法。..四級(jí)作文模板TheapproachoftheChineseLunarNewYearposesanationalissueconcerningthenecessityofholdingtheCCTVSpringFestivalGala.Itsestablishedstatusisbeingchallengedbyagrowingnumberofpeople,especiallybyyo