讀后續(xù)寫第70期Juggler續(xù)Prediction(4mins)Para1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皺的)pieceofpaper.Whatdidwediscuss?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenIandthejuggleraswellashismom?Whatwasthenumber?WhydidIcallthenumber?[1]ManyyearsagoIvisitedBern,thebeautifulcapitalofSwitzerland.Oneevening,Iwalkedintotheheartofthecity.Oldmenplayedcheckersatstonetablesamid(在...中)musicians,jugglers(變戲法的人)andotherstreetperformers.Istoppedtoenjoythesightsandsounds.[2]AnAmericanaccentrangout①abovethevoicesoftheothers."One...Two...Three!"Heartylaughter②erupted(爆發(fā))fromthecrowdaroundajuggler.Afterthequick-handedmagictricks,hisattentiveaudiencethrewcoinsandmovedon.[3]Asthejugglerbentdown(彎下)tocollectthesmallchange,Isaid,"Ilikedyouract."Thejugglerlookedupwithasurprisedexpression,asifhedidn'texpectanyonetostayaround."Hey,thanks!YousoundlikeanAmerican.''[4]Ilaughed,admittingthatI'dbeendrawn

to③speakwithhimpartlybecauseofhisAmericanaccent.IpolitelyaskedhimwhatpartoftheStateshewasfrom.讀Reading-GivenParagraphs(5mins+3mins)發(fā)出響聲爽朗的笑聲被...所吸引

"California,"thejugglerreplied."Andyou?"Irespondedinthesamegeneralway.“Pennsylvania.OutsidePhiladelphia."Thejugglerstoppedpickingupcoins."Oh...whereoutsidePhiladelphia?"Iwasslightlytakenaback.④WhydidthenameofthetownmatterifhewasfromCalifornia?Feelingstrange,Ianswered."Haverford."[5]Thejugglerwasverysurprisedandhisfacesoftened.Hespokejustaboveawhisper.⑤"IwenttoHaverfordHighSchool.""ButIthoughtyousaidyouwerefromCalifornia?"Isaid.Thejugglerdrewinabreath⑥andpouredout⑦astoryhe'dlockedawayforalongtime.[6]"IdiscoveredIlovedtoperformwhileIwasinhighschool.IwantedtostudytheartsincollegebutmyfatherfeltIshouldstudyaserioussubject,likemedicine.IfeltIhadnochoice,soIwenttocollegeinCalifornia,butIcouldn'tstudywhatIdidn'tlove.Ratherthangohomeandfacemyfather,IlefttheStatestoachievemydreaminEurope.”Withaquietsigh(嘆氣),heconcluded,"Ihaven'tspokenwithmymominsevenyears.'讀Reading-GivenParagraphs(5mins+3mins)我有點(diǎn)吃驚。低聲說話吸一口氣傾吐；傾訴KeyExpressions動作描寫1ringout

2heartylaughter

3bedrawnto

5speakjustaboveawhisper

6drawinabreath

7pourout

心理描寫4Iwasslightlytakenaback.讀Reading-KeyExpressions發(fā)出響聲爽朗的笑聲被...所吸引低聲說話吸一口氣傾吐；傾訴我有點(diǎn)吃驚。讀Reading-5W1HWHOWHEREWHENWHYWHAT/HOWIajuggler“Bern,thebeautifulcapitalofSwitzerland”inEurope.→backhomeManyyearsagosevenyearsafterleavingthecollegeAmericanaccent“IlefttheStatestoachievemydreaminEurope.”“Ihaven'tspokenwithmy

mominsevenyears.”thejuggler’smom讀Reading-Analyse(4mins)PlotConflictEmotionConflictThejuggledidn’twanttogohomeandfacehisfather,sohelefttheStatestoachievehisdream

inEurope.

Hehasn'tspokenwithhismominsevenyears."Misshismomdidn’tobeyhisfather’swordsSolutionThejugglergavemethenumberofhismomandIcalledtohismomtosharehislife.Themedreamandfamily寫WritingPara1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Action:Emotion:Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皺的)pieceofpaper.Action:Emotion:moved,inreliefaskedandgavemethenumberofhismomsurprised,thankfultalkedaboutthecurrentlifeofthejuggler寫

萬能句型--動作描寫Withoutasecondthought,句子。沒有多想/毫不猶豫，....Withoutasecondthought,Inoddedandhuggedwithhimtightly.1.沒有多想，他撿起了地上的食物。Withoutasecondthought,hepickedupthefoodontheground.2.我毫不猶豫地將我知道的告訴她。Withoutasecondthought,IpouredouteverythingIknewtoher.3.沒有多想，他追隨自己的心去追求自己的夢想。Withoutasecondthought,hefollowedhishearttopursuehisdream.寫

萬能句型--情緒描寫Awaveof+情緒名詞+sweptover人.誰感到一陣xx。Awaveofreliefsweptoverhim.1.他感到一陣驚喜。Awaveofsurprisesweptoverhim.2.我感到非常尷尬。Awaveofembarrassmentsweptoverme.3.Jenny感到非常失望。AwaveofdisappointmentsweptoverJenny.wave n.波浪sweep-swept-swept v.掃寫HomeworkFinishthepassageandhandinyourworkonSunday.G103作業(yè)反饋--通病

單詞：1.n.感動2.n.想念

句子：1.他非常想念他的媽媽。？Heverymissedhismom.!Hemissedhismotherverymuch.2.我回家。

？Ibackhome.!Iwentbackhomemovedadj.感動的

movementn.移動 movingn.感動miss v.想念

missingadj.丟失的

longingn.思念G103作業(yè)反饋--通病內(nèi)容：1.不能純對話,不然就是劇本2.對話里的動作不一定是過去時(shí)

細(xì)節(jié)：1.弄皺的紙條一開始并不一定是皺的，第一次出現(xiàn)的要用a2.紙條上有juggler的名字、紙條上對媽媽說的話3.用了各種哭的短語G103作業(yè)反饋--精彩句子1.黃：“Thankyouforyourcare.Ithinkinterestisthebestteacher,Ifeelverymoved”thejuggler’smothersaid.（2-對話描寫）2.陳：Later,Isawtearsrunningoutfromhiseye.(1-動作描寫)Isatonmysofa,justimaginingthatthejugglerwasshowingonthestreetandhismommissedhersoninherhouse.(2-升華主題）3.柯：Tovaluethisopportunitythatletusmeetintheamazingtime,Ipromisedhimtohelptosolvehisdilemmathathehadargumentwithhisfatheranddidn’tconnectwithhismom.(1-升華主題)4.莊：Inclosing,shecriedloudlyandsaidthatshehadbeenwaitingforthiscallformanyyears.5.李：Hopealllongingcanbecomereunion.(2-升華主題）1.鄭：

Ilefttherewiththepaperfilledwithlongingandlove(1-上下文銜接)2.郭：Fortunately,theotherpartyanswered.3.蔡：“myheartputsdownatlast”4.馬：Imisshimdayandnight.5.趙：WhenInoddedatearfulyes,hewashappylikea400-kilogram-heavybabyandgavemeapieceofpaperwithnumber.G103作業(yè)反饋--精彩句子

Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.

Infact,Idrovepastherhomeeverydayonthewaytowork.Westoodinsilence.Thejugglerbrokethesilence.“IfIgiveyoumymom'snumber,wouldyoucallherformewhenyou