Assessments&PracticeofWriting---Variedgrammaticalstructures(豐富的語法結構)Whatmakesagoodcomposition?Whatmakesagoodcomposition?1.Neatwriting2.Advancedvocabulary3.Variedgrammaticalstructures4.Propertransitionalwords5.Well-organizedtextstructures

VariedGrammaticalStructures豐富的語法結構AttributiveClause定語從句NounClause名詞性從句AdverbialClause狀語從句Notonly…butalsoInversion倒裝NonPredicateVerbs非謂語動詞with復合結構假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Jack下學期將作為交換生來你校學習，他想學習傳統(tǒng)中國畫。請你寫封郵件給他建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.選修你校開設的中國畫課程；2.上課時間和地點；3.工具和材料：毛筆、墨和宣紙等；參考詞匯：選修課optionalcourse中國畫ChinesePainting毛筆Chinesebrush注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Howdoyougradeit?Why?51010Tip1.(狀從、非謂語短語作狀語、同位語從）2.Knowing/Hearingthatyouwillcometomyschoolasanexchangestudent,I’mmorethandelighted.1.Youwillcometomyschoolasanexchangestudent.Ihearthenews.Iamveryglad.3.I’mmorethandelighted/thrilledtohearthenewsthatyourwillcometomyschoolasanexchangestudent.1.WhenIhearthenewsthatyouwillcometomyschoolasanexchangestudent,I’mmorethandelighted/thrilled.(黃文龍)Tip2:定從1.I’mgladtotellyoutherewillbeanoptionalcourseaboutChinesepaintingthisterm.Youmustbeinterestedinit.I’mgladtotellyoutherewillbeanoptionalcourseaboutChinesepaintingthisterm,whichyoumustbeinterestedin.2.I’mgladtotellyoutherewillbeanoptionalcourseaboutChinesepaintingthisterm.youmustbeinterestedinit.

A:Thehousehasbeenturnedintoapartments.B:Iwasborninthehouse.

Thehouseinwhich/whereIwasbornhasbeenturnedintoapartments.Tip2:定從Tip3:TherebeTherearesomanythingsyouneedtoprepareinadvance,includingChinesebrushes,inkandpaper.(亓澤清)3.It’ssomethingimportantsuchasChinesebrushes,inkandpaperthatisnecessaryforyourstudy.你需要準備一些工作和材料，如：毛筆、墨和宣紙等。YoushouldprepareChinesebrushes,inkandpaperbeforetheclass.(趙鑫)Asforthepreparations,ChinesepaintingrequiressomespecialtraditionaltoolssuchasChinesebrushes,inkandXuanpaper.（孔海榕）Tip4.notonly…butalso…(倒裝句）Youwillimproveyourpaintingskillsandbroadenyourhorizons.Youcanmakemorefriends.YouwilllearntopaintChinesepaintings.YouwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.Notonlywillimproveyourpaintingskillsandbroadenyourhorizons,butalsoyoucanmakemorefriends.(趙鑫)NotonlywillyoulearntopaintChinesepaintings,butalsoyouwillgetabetterunderstandingofChineseculture.(許嘉程)

______________________________(隨著春節(jié)的臨近),peoplewillholdallvarietiesofactivities.WiththeSpringFestivaldrawingnearTip5.With復合結構Withalotofhomeworktofinish

________________________

(有很多作業(yè)要完成),theboyisverybusy.

Tip6.主語從句我希望上面所提到的能對你有所幫助。Ihope________________________canbeofanyhelptoyou.whatismentionedaboveWhetherhecancome他是否能來還不確定。_______________isnotcertain.

A:Wegotthefirstprizeinthecompetition.B:Itmadeusveryhappy.Wegotthefirstprizeinthecompetition,whichmadeusveryhappy.定語從句

豐富的語法結構NounClause名詞性從句AttributiveClause定語從句AdverbialClause狀語從句Inversion倒裝Notonly…butalsoNonPredicateVerbs非謂語動詞with復合結構

Assessmenttable(Formedaccordingtothewritingrequirements)ContentsScales

1Allthepoints

requiredareincluded.12345

2Whetheritiswrittenintwoorthreeparagraphs.12345

3Thestatementofeachparagraphisclear.12345

4Nogrammaticalmistakes.12345

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