WritealetterofadviceB1U1TeenageLife

ReadingforWritingAsateenager,whatproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?generationgapwithparentspuppylovebeingaddictedtotheInternet/computergamesgreatpressurefromheavyschoolworkfeelinglonelyandhomesickinterpersonalrelationshipwithclassmateshighexpectationfromparentsandteachers......Step1Lead-inFacingtheseproblems,howwillyouseekforhelp?1communicatingfacetofacewiththepersonconcerned2turningtofriendsforhelp3askingforadviceonsocialmedia4writingalettertoaprofessionaladviser5ringinghelphotlines...Step1Lead-in1.Findouttheorganizationoftheletter.2.Markthebodypartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.DateGreetingCloseSignatureBody

Step2ReadingDate,greeting,body,close,andsignature.A.IknowwhattheproblemisB.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.

D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp

C.Thisismyadviceandreason.3.WhatisWorriedFriend'sproblem?4.WhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogivetoWorriedFriend?5.Besidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?Shetalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.

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②③①Step2ReadingLanguageFeatures5.WhatexpressionsdoesSusanLuousetomakesuggestions?Circlethemintheletter.Irecommendthat...Ithinkyoushould...Whynot...

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6.Discusswhatotherexpressionscanbeusedtomakesuggestions?MoreExpressionsWhydon'tyou...?Itcouldn'tbebetterifyoucould...Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucould...I'dliketopropose(建議)thatyoushould...It'sadvisable/recommendedtodo...Youmay/mightaswell(不妨)do...Youmayconsiderdoing...Frommypointofview(依我看來(lái)),itwouldbewise(明智的)/reasonable/agoodideatodo...Step3Conclusion首段Beginning—yourpointofview中段Body—youradvice尾段Ending—yourwishes提出有針對(duì)性的建議，給出理由。Body希望自己的建議能對(duì)對(duì)方有所幫助，同時(shí)闡明你所提供的建議僅供對(duì)方參考。Ending一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對(duì)自己的立場(chǎng)作一些解釋。Beginning建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”：010203

I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenowhavingtrouble(in)doingsth….

知道你現(xiàn)在在……方面有些麻煩,我很抱歉。I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來(lái)信。Myadvice/suggestionsareasfollows./Thefollowingismyadvice./Herearesometipstohelpyou.我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。

Beginning：交代背景+寫信目的SentencepatternsFirst/Firstofall，whynot...？Ifyoudothis，youcan….Secondly/What'smore,youshould/hadbetterdo...Then/Thatway,...Itisalsohelpful/usefultodo...,whichwill…Thirdly/Inaddition/Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaif....Bydoingthis,....AsfarasI'mconcerned/Lastbutnotleast,doing...isabetterchoice.Whenitcomestothisproblem,Isuggestthatyoushould....Body：介紹詳情、提出建議和理由SentencepatternsEnding：提出希望采納建議+感謝+盼望回復(fù)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。Ibelieve/amsurethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’ll….我相信，如果你聽從我的建議，你會(huì)……。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermyadvice.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadiceintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議我將不勝感激。Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.盼望你的早日回復(fù)。SentencepatternsStep4WritingUsewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetooneoftheteenagersbelow.Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①____________vt.建議

②____________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓勵(lì)

④____________adj.有用的⑤____________vt.忠告，建議

⑥________________閑暇⑦_(dá)___________盼望，期望

⑧________________對(duì)……

擔(dān)心⑨____________喜愛

⑩____________對(duì)……上癮?____________集中精力于

?___________________對(duì)……有益處

?____________交朋友

?____________收到……的來(lái)信?___________________玩得愉快

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makefriendshearfromenjoyoneself/havefunStep4WritingDear_________,Bestwishes!/Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursLiHuaIunderstandhowyoufeel.Thisismyadviceandreasons.Iknowwhattheproblemis.Ihopemyadvicewillhelp.While-writingBodyBeginningEndingAreallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganizedingoodorder?Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?Doesthewriterusecommasandst