PAGEPAGE71對(duì)比分析題型作文對(duì)比分析題型作文在大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試中多次出現(xiàn)，包括兩種：1）要求作者客觀地分析并闡述某一事物的利與弊，即正反兩方面，然后指出自己的看法。常見提綱形式：=1\*GB3①某某事物為我們帶來許多好處；=2\*GB3②然而也有弊端或存在某種問題；=3\*GB3③你的體會(huì)。作文套用格式：=1\*GB3①提出要評(píng)論的事物或觀點(diǎn)；=2\*GB3②分別陳述這一事物的利與弊；=3\*GB3③歸納得出作者的結(jié)論2）指針對(duì)某個(gè)問題，有兩種不同觀點(diǎn)，要求考生對(duì)這兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析，說明理由。常見提綱形式：=1\*GB3①有些人認(rèn)為……；=2\*GB3②而另有些人則認(rèn)為……；=3\*GB3③你的觀點(diǎn)作文套用格式：=1\*GB3①目前存在某個(gè)問題，人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)；=2\*GB3②兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的理由；=3\*GB3③我的看法。Writing11993年1月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledPositiveandNegativeAspectsofSport.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.運(yùn)動(dòng)的積極因素2.運(yùn)動(dòng)的消極因素3.你的體會(huì)PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSportSportsbenefitusinmanyrespects.Whentakingpartinsports,wegetthechancetotrainalmostallpartsofourbodies.Thereisnodoubtthatpropersportsactivitieskeepourphysicalfitness.Furthermore,sportscanenrichourlifeandmaintainourpsychologicalhealth.Throughparticipation,everyonecanlearnthatontheplaygroundhenotonlystrugglesforhimselfbutalsofightsforhisteam.Sportsteachusaboutconsideration,cooperationandoptimismtofailure.Butsportscandosomeharmtothosewhocannotplantheiractivitiesproperly.Toohardtrainingmayhurttheirbodies,exhausttheirvigor,andevencausethemtobecomesick.Ingeneral,Ilovesports.Ienjoysports.Forsportsnotonlyhelpmetoliveawell-balancedlife,butalsoprovidemewithopportunitiestogetclosertonature.SportsaddhappinesstomyeverydaylifewhenIperforminadecentway.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要求考生對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的積極和消極因素進(jìn)行闡述。第一段，開門見山的指出運(yùn)動(dòng)有很多好處。運(yùn)動(dòng)不僅能夠鍛煉我們的身體，可以豐富我們的生活，保持心理健康。參與運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們將受益匪淺。maintain“保持維持”、consideration“關(guān)心”、cooperation“合作”、optimism“樂觀”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第二段，運(yùn)動(dòng)不當(dāng)會(huì)傷害身體，甚至導(dǎo)致他們生病。exhaust“消耗殆盡”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第三段，綜述我的觀點(diǎn)。運(yùn)動(dòng)不但幫助我過上良好平衡的生活，而且還提供接近大自然的機(jī)會(huì)。decent這個(gè)詞用得恰到好處，在這里也正是“恰到好處”的意思。Writing21996年1月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheTwo-dayWeekend.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.雙休日給大學(xué)生帶來的好處

2.雙休日可能給大學(xué)生帶來的問題

3.我應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣過好雙休日TheTwo-dayWeekendThetwo-dayweekendhasbroughtalotofbenefitstocollegestudents.Itnotonlyoffersusmoretimetogetridoftirednessandhaveagoodrest,butalsogivesusmorechancestotakeupsomehobbies,suchasfishing,reading,orgardening.Fromtheseactivitieswecanlearnmanythingsoutsidetheclassroom,whichwilladdtoourknowledge.

Despitetheconvenienceitbringsus,thetwo-dayweekendhasalsogivenrisetoquiteafewproblems.Themostseriousoneisthattheweekdaysarefilledwithmorelesson,sometimestoomany.BecauseourclassesarelimitedtoMondaythroughFriday,wehavetotakemorelessonseachdaythaninthepast.Thisleavesuslittletimetocatchourbreathduringtheweekdays.

Inordertobenefitmostfromthetwo-dayweekend,Ihavedecidedtomakeagoodplanforthetwo-dayweekend.OfcourseIshouldtakethischancetorelax.Butduringtheweekend,Iwillstillsetasideenoughtimetostudy.Bydoingso,Icanhaveagoodtimeaswellasmakeprogressinmystudies.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要求考生對(duì)雙休日的好壞進(jìn)行闡述。雖然此文題目并未包含標(biāo)志性的詞組advantageanddisadvantageof…或positiveandnegativeaspectsof…,但是從提綱中一望即知這屬于利弊類的文章。第一段是寫好處，文中提到兩個(gè)方面，用到notonly…,butalso…。第二段是寫帶來的問題，學(xué)習(xí)的時(shí)間比較緊湊。第三段是寫為了過好雙休日，我需要制定計(jì)劃，做到勞逸結(jié)合。Writing32006年12月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonTeCCTVSpringFestivalGala.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜晚看春節(jié)晚會(huì)；2.有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)；3.我的看法。TheCCTVSpringFestivalGalaThereisalwaysaheateddiscussionovertheissueoftheSpringFestivalGalaorganizedbyCCTVbeforeandaftertheChineseLunarNewYear.Somepeopleareinfavoroftheprogram,whileothersmaintainthattheprogramisawasteofmoneyandtime.Intheeyesofthefirstgroupofpeople,theSpringFestivalGalashouldbeencouragedforthefollowingreasons.First,thegalahasbecomeatraditionformostpeopletospendtheholiday,andtheyfeelthattheycanfindnothingelsetodo.Besides,theprogramcanoffersometalkingmaterialsfortheirfamily,friendsandrelatives.However,thosewhoargueagainstthegalaandproposetocancelitalsohavetheirreasons.Tobeginwith,thegalacostsalot,butthequalityisnotasgoodasexpected.What’smore,peoplemaydosomethingelseifthegalaiscancelled.Forexample,thefamilymayplaygames,orchatwitheachothertotherelationbetweeneachmuchcloser.Asisdiscussedabove,itisobviousthatthereissometruthinbotharguments.Inmyopinion,theprogramdoesmoreharmthangoodifwatchingitastheonlythingtodoontheeveofthelunarnewyear.Itislikelytomakethismostimportantfestivalboringandmeaningless.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇作文對(duì)某個(gè)問題的兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析，說明理由。第一段指出問題，人們對(duì)春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)的舉辦意見不同；第二段分析了許多人喜歡在除夕夜晚看春節(jié)晚會(huì)的原因；第三段分析了有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)的理由；第四段得出作者自己的看法，春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)弊多于利。本文內(nèi)容切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言通順。Writing41999年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.有人認(rèn)為讀書要有選擇

2.有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書

3.我的看法ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively范文：

Somepeoplethinkwhenwereadweshouldreadselectively.Thatistosay,weshouldselectsomebooksweareinterestedinandignoretheothers.Readingselectivelycanhelpusconcentrateourlimitedtimeandattentiononthoseselectedbooks.

Othersthinkweshouldreadextensively.Nomatterwhatkindofbookitis,weshouldlookitover.Weshouldreadvariouskindsofbooks,whetherweareinterestedinthemornot.Theymaintainthatreadingextensivelycanhelptoenlargeourviewandgraspthegeneralknowledgeindifferentfields.

Inmyopinion,thetworeadingwayshavetheirrolesrespectivelyinourreading.However,thedisadvantagesofeachmethodsareeasytosee.Ifweonlyreadthebooksweselectorprefer,theframeworkofourknowledgemaynotbecomplete.Ourknowledgewouldberatherlimited.Andifwereadwithoutselection,wemaynothavesomuchtimeandenergytobespecializedinoneparticularfield.Therefore,thecombinationofthetwomethodsismorereasonable.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是選擇類題目?？梢园凑杖问?。第一段，開門見山的指出讀書要有選擇。concentrate“集中”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第二段，應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書。第三段，綜述我的觀點(diǎn)。文章簡(jiǎn)潔明了。respectively“分別的”、framework“結(jié)構(gòu)框架”combination“結(jié)合”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。Writing52008年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledRecreationalActivities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.娛樂活動(dòng)多種多樣2.娛樂活動(dòng)可以使人們受益，也可能有危害性3.作為大學(xué)生我們的看法RecreationalActivitiesWiththedramaticdevelopmentofoursocietyandourlivingstandard,thereareavarietyofrecreationalactivitiescomingtoourlives.SomemaygotoKTVwiththeirfriendsonweekendstogetrelaxedafterfive-dayintensework.Meanwhile,othersmightchoosetosurftheinternettokilltimeandappreciatevastresourcesontheinternet.Everythinghastwosidesjustlikeacoin,andentertainmentisnoexception.Ontheonehand,amusementactivitiescanenrichourlives,broadenourhorizon,andcultivateourmind.Ontheotherhand,wecouldmakeourtimewastedandourmindcontaminatedifwefailtoapproachrecreationproperly.Asfarascollegestudentsareconcerned,wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofthebenefitsfromdiverseentertainmentactivities.Inaddition,itisessentialtobeself-disciplinedandsteerclearoftheadverseinfluences.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要求考生對(duì)校園中的學(xué)生的課余娛樂進(jìn)行闡述，屬于議論文當(dāng)中的“權(quán)衡利弊”考題。第一段：引出談?wù)摰氖挛锛霸掝}；第二段：①任何事物都有兩個(gè)方面②分清主次地列明優(yōu)點(diǎn)與缺點(diǎn)；在表達(dá)任何事物都有兩個(gè)方面的時(shí)候有一個(gè)很重要而常見的句型：Everythinghastwosidesjustlikeacoinandisnoexception.此外，在描述事物優(yōu)點(diǎn)與缺點(diǎn)時(shí)，同學(xué)不要忘了要使用結(jié)構(gòu)性連接詞，比如onthecontrary等。第三段：表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。就話題內(nèi)容而言，在描述娛樂活動(dòng)益處時(shí)，enrichourlives,broadenourhorizons,andcultivateourmind（豐富人們生活、開拓人們視野、陶冶人們的情操）。而關(guān)于娛樂活動(dòng)的表達(dá)“娛樂”進(jìn)行同義詞替換：entertainment/recreational/amusementactivities.2現(xiàn)象解釋題型作文現(xiàn)象解釋型作文要求考生對(duì)某一社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行解釋分析，并加以評(píng)論。作文套用格式：=1\*GB3①說明現(xiàn)狀；=2\*GB3②闡述這種現(xiàn)狀產(chǎn)生或存在的原因；=3\*GB3③做出分析總結(jié)Writing62010年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledDueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫

2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpellingTeachersingrowingnumbersarebeginningtorealizethatspellingproblemsinEnglishareofimportancetoourdailylanguagelearning.Studentsalsofinddifficultiesinpreciseexpressiononpapers.Meanwhile,thereisgeneraldiscussionontheabove.Therearealotofreasonsresponsibleforit.Ontheonehand,theyoungmenaremisguidedbythepresentspoken-English-centeredillusion.Inotherwords,theypaylittleattentiontospellingorwrittentraining.Ontheotherhand,peoplewhomerelyfocusonoralEnglishmaynotrealizethatwrittenEnglishisabaseforfurtherlanguagestudies.Andtheyshouldhaveknownthattoexpressideasclearly,exactlyandcorrectlyisofgreatsignificance.Judgingfromtheevidenceoffered,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatthecorrectandexactspellingoughttobetheprimaryconcerninEnglishteaching.Teachersaretoplayanimportantroleintheaboveissue.Tosumup,itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisonspellingandthegroundworkforthelanguagelearning.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是考察的是大學(xué)生群體在學(xué)習(xí)英語過程當(dāng)中最常見的拼寫問題，要求學(xué)生分析原因并提出有效的建議措施。這個(gè)題屬于問題解決型文章。第一段說明現(xiàn)象：當(dāng)今大學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫。文中precise“精確的”、generaldiscussion“交流”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第二段探討這種現(xiàn)象背后的原因：可能需要從現(xiàn)在的英語教學(xué)過分地強(qiáng)調(diào)口語教學(xué)，口語能力成為招聘面試的重點(diǎn)也會(huì)影響學(xué)生忽視英語拼寫這些方面入手，網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代打字代替了動(dòng)手拼寫，現(xiàn)在學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)當(dāng)中以選擇題為主要練習(xí)題型。文中misguided“使誤入歧途”、illusion“錯(cuò)覺”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第三段談?wù)摳淖冞@一狀況的對(duì)策：首次意識(shí)到拼寫的重要性，在平時(shí)記憶單詞時(shí)加強(qiáng)拼寫能力的培養(yǎng)；其次改變學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度，深知一分耕耘，一分收獲；同時(shí)教師在課堂教學(xué)中也應(yīng)該加以強(qiáng)調(diào)，給學(xué)生以正確的方向。primary“主要的”、groundwork“基礎(chǔ)”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。Writing72007年12月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSelectingCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2.學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3.以你自己為例……SelectingCoursesRecently,peopleingrowingnumbersshowtheirconcernaboutselectingcourses.Insomecolleges,studentsarepermittedtopickouttheircourse’sprofessorsfreely.Thereasonsarelistedasfollows:Inthefirstplace,studentscanchoosetheteacheraccordingtotheirinterests,whichwillbehelpfulfortheirfuturecareers.Besides,selectingcoursescanreducetherateofstudents’absenceindirectlyforstudentsusuallychoosetheirfavoriteteachers.AsfarasIamconcerned,everycoinhastwosides.Ontheonehand,studentsmaylearnthecoursebetter,becausetheymaychoosetheprofessortheyliked.Ontheotherhand,iftheprofessorwhoisverypopularandagreatnumberofstudentswouldliketoattendhis/hercourse,theclassroommustbeovercrowded.Itwillhaveabadimpactontheclass.點(diǎn)評(píng)：第一段說明現(xiàn)狀：各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課；第二段闡述這種現(xiàn)狀產(chǎn)生或存在的原因：學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課；第三段以自己為例來做出總結(jié)。文章層次清楚，語義連貫，內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰。3問題解決題型作文問題解決型作文也是大學(xué)英語四級(jí)考試中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的題型。這類作文是關(guān)于某個(gè)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象或社會(huì)問題，要求作者分析該問題所產(chǎn)生的原因或造成的后果，并得出結(jié)論或提出解決辦法，該類作文的寫作方法通常以演繹的順序展開。如在圖表作文中，第一段要求大家對(duì)圖表描述，而往往在第二段、第三段就要求分析原因和提出解決方法。至于提綱型作文則很大以部分是提出一個(gè)問題，讓考生進(jìn)行分析并提出建議等。作文套用格式：=1\*GB3①提出某個(gè)社會(huì)問題或現(xiàn)象；=2\*GB3②解釋其產(chǎn)生的原因或分析造成的后果；=3\*GB3③給出解決問題的辦法或建議，或?qū)δ壳盁o法解決的問題提出展望。Writing81996年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicGlobalShortageofFreshWater.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:

1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的(提示:雨水、河水、井水……)；2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染……）；3.我們應(yīng)該怎么辦。GlobalShortageofFreshWaterGenerally,peoplethinkthatfreshwaterisinexhaustible.Thereisplentyoffreshwaterintheriversandlakes.Whatismore,wehavealotofundergroundwater.Suchanopinionleadstoashockingwasteofwater.Actually,freshwaterisinashortsupply.Duetotherapidpopulationincrease,freshwaterconsumptionremainsgreat.Besides,withthedevelopmentofindustry,morewaterisneeded.Moreover,alotofourriversandlakeshavebeensopollutedthatwaterfromthemisundrinkable.Wemusttakesomemeasurestosolvetheproblemofwatershortage.First,populationgrowthshouldbesloweddowntoreducefreshwaterneeds.Second,pollutionshouldbecontrolledtopurifyfreshwaterintheriversandlakes.Whatisthemostimportantofall,weshouldcherisheverydripofwaterinourdailylife.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇作文是屬于問題解決型。首段給出一種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象――人們以為淡水是取之不盡的，指出這會(huì)導(dǎo)致嚴(yán)重浪費(fèi)水源，inexhaustible“用之不盡”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯；第二段分析淡水非常緊缺的原因；第三段提出解決水源短缺應(yīng)采取的措施。本文內(nèi)容切題，文理通順，表達(dá)正確，語義連貫，無重大語言錯(cuò)誤。Writing92008年12月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBags.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.一次性塑料袋曾被廣泛的使用2.造成的問題3.限制使用的意義LimitingTheUseofDisposablePlasticBagsThesedaysdisposalproductsoftenhittheheadlinesofnewspapersandhavebeenbroughtintofocusofthepublic.Indeed,itiswidelyacceptedthattheyhavegainedincreasingpopularityamongpeopleinallwalksoflife.Takingalookaroundyou,youcanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist:Whenyouwalkonthestreet,youcanseeplasticbagsflyingoveryourhead;Whenyouramblealongtheriver,youcanfindplasticbottlesfloatingonthewater;Whenyoustrollintheparkwithyourlover,youcannoticewastepaperthrowneverywhere.Amongthemostimportantreasonsoftencitedbypeopleisthequickeningpaceofmodernlife.Theyareoftentoobusytowashdirtydishesorglasses,asaresulttheycandonothingbutusedisposalproducts.Alsoplayingapartistheimprovementofpeople'slife.Asaresultofthepolicyofopeningandreform,anincreasingnumberofpeoplearemuchricherthanbeforeandcanafforddisposalproducts.Admittedly,theymightbenefitusinashortterm.Unfortunately,theywilldousharminmorethanoneway.Themajorharmis(that)theyaresuretopollutetheenvironment.Tomakemattersworse,theyarelikelytohavepotentialharmtopublichealth.Toillustratethispoint,IcanthinkofnobetterexamplethanHP,theriverthroughS.Asaresultofdisposalproductsinit,thewaterhascausedsomediseasesinthelocalpeople.Tosumup,forthefactorsmentionedbefore,wecansafelyreachtheconclusionthattheprevalenceofdisposalproductsisboundtocauseachainofundesirableeffects.Inviewofthepresentsituation,itishightimethatthegovernmenttriedeverymeanstoprotecttheenvironment.Onlyinthisway,canwehaveabrightfuture.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這個(gè)題目屬于社會(huì)類話題與大學(xué)生的生活密切相關(guān)。題目依然采取了三段式的結(jié)構(gòu)，有描寫現(xiàn)象——闡釋問題——說明意義。第一段需要點(diǎn)明現(xiàn)象，現(xiàn)在塑料袋的普遍使用。disposalproducts“一次性產(chǎn)品”、hittheheadlines“成為頭條新聞”、numerous“大量的”、ramble“漫步”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第二段需要分析一下塑料袋使用的原因。一般提兩點(diǎn)就可以，比如改革開放使人民生活水平的提高以及人們生活的高節(jié)奏。quickening“復(fù)蘇的、加速的”第三段塑料袋使用的影響。它會(huì)導(dǎo)致whitepollution,影響人們健康，harmpeople'shealth，Admittedly“不可否認(rèn)”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯最后一段是限制塑料袋的意義。prevalence“流行普遍”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。事實(shí)是我們國(guó)家已經(jīng)于6月1日剛實(shí)行超市的"限塑令"，因此在這里我們可以談兩點(diǎn)意義，比如提高了群眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)，當(dāng)然需要用到我們?cè)谡n堂上反復(fù)提及的"enhancepeople'sawarenessforenvironmentalprotection"。此外最重要的是要盡量避免拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤，比如這里很多同學(xué)可以需要用到convenient,來解釋人們使用塑料袋的原因，或者是phenomenon現(xiàn)象來開題，尤其是題目中的關(guān)鍵詞，一次性塑料袋，disposableplasticbags,在英文標(biāo)題中本有出現(xiàn)，應(yīng)充分利用。Writing102002年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:StudentUseofComputers.Studythefollowinggraphandwriteacompositioninnolessthan120words.Remembertowriteneatly.Yourcompositionshouldmeetthefollowingrequirements:1.本題圖所示為1990年、1995年、2000年某校大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化；2.請(qǐng)說明發(fā)生其變化的原因(可從計(jì)算機(jī)的用途、價(jià)格或社會(huì)發(fā)展等方面加以說明)；3.你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在使用計(jì)算機(jī)中有什么困難或問題。Hours/weekAveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek.StudentUseofComputersStudentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays.Readingthischart,wecanfindthattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply.In1990,itwaslessthan2hours;andin1995,itincreasedtoalmost4hours;whilein2000,andthenumbersoaredto20hours.Obviouslycomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Thereareseveralreasonsforthis.First,computersfacilitateusinmoreaspectsoflife.Also,thefastdevelopmentoftheInternetenlargesourdemandsforusingcomputers.WecaneasilycontactwithfriendsinremoteplacesthroughtheInternet.Besides,thepricesofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower,whichenablesmorestudentstopurchasethem.Alongwiththetimespentoncomputers,therearisesomeproblems.ThemostseriousoneisthatmanystudentsarespendingsomuchtimeplayingPCgamessothattheyignoretheirstudies.Itisurgenttoletthestudentsusecomputersinaproperway.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇問題分析型的圖表作文。第一段通過描述圖表指出大學(xué)生使用計(jì)算機(jī)的時(shí)間越來越多；第二段分析計(jì)算機(jī)越來越流行的原因；第三段指出大學(xué)生把時(shí)間花費(fèi)在電腦上會(huì)出現(xiàn)的問題并提出解決問題的建議即要教育學(xué)生合理使用電腦。本文利用圖表中的圖形、數(shù)據(jù)等去說明主題，說服力強(qiáng)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，層次清楚，語言通順。Writing11-2010年12月真題Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.為了幫助孩子獨(dú)立，父母應(yīng)該……HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

Currently,manyparents,ifnotmost,caretoomuchabouttheirchildren,whichmaketheirkidsnotasindependentaswedesire.Undoubtedly,thegrowthofeachkidexertsaprofoundimpactfortheentirefamily.Timeaftertimenewspaperscarryarticlespertainingtotheeducationalstyle,andthusthemediaandofficialsaresupposedtostriveforahealthywaytoeducateourchildren.

Thepresentsituationbeingsoserious,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasuresanddonotkeepturningablindeyetothem.Thefirstandkeypointisthatparentsthemselves,ratherthananybodyelse,havetheresponsibilitytoprovidetheirchildrenwithamoreindependentlivingatmosphere.Anothermethod,similarlyindispensable,isthatitishightimethatchildrenenhancetheirawarenessofbeingindependent.Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheproblemwillbeaddressedinthenearfuture.

Itistruethatchildrenneeddelicatecare.Nonetheless,childrenwillonedaygrowupandfacethecruelworldontheirown.Inordertomakeourchildrenadapttothefiercecompetitionwhentheybecomemature,thewholesociety,especiallyparentsareboundtogiveourchildrenamoreindependentsurrounding.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：

本文是要求考生對(duì)父母包辦一切這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行闡述。該題目屬于辦法類作文，可以采取提出問題(背景介紹+公眾觀點(diǎn))分析問題(原因，危害，影響等)解決問題(表明問題可以解決+相關(guān)的解決措施)的思路。

第一段先介紹關(guān)于家長(zhǎng)溺愛孩子這一現(xiàn)象的普遍存在，并指出其危害。文章中用到插入語ifnotmost,caretoomuchabouttheirchildren，被動(dòng)語態(tài)和同位語從句。exert“運(yùn)用，發(fā)揮；施以影響”、pertaining“關(guān)于”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第二段是主體段落，提出具體解決措施。分析措施時(shí)，從宏觀和微觀入手。既涉及到家長(zhǎng)和社會(huì)，“Thefirstandkeypointisthat”，又關(guān)乎孩子自己“Anothermethod,similarlyindispensable,isthat”。imperative“勢(shì)在必行的”、indispensable“責(zé)無旁貸的”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第三段在結(jié)尾段中，我們應(yīng)該把重心放在問題是可以解決的，并在此呼吁整個(gè)社會(huì)給孩子一個(gè)獨(dú)立的成長(zhǎng)環(huán)境。delicatecare“精心的照料”、Nonetheless“盡管如此”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。Writing122001年1月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:面試在求職過程中的作用2.取得面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識(shí)、自信、實(shí)事求是HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,inanevertighterjobmarket,greatimportancehasbeenattachedtoaninterviewbyboththeemployerandtheapplicant.Theinterview,sotospeak,hasbecomeindispensableforgettingasatisfactoryjob.Ontheonehand,theinterviewercantakeadvantageoftheoccasiontolearnaboutthecandidates,suchastheirworkexperiences,educationandtheirpersonalities,soastopickouttherightpersonforthecompany.Ontheotherhand,theintervieweecanmakeuseoftheopportunitytogettoknowthejobheisgoingtotakeup,thesalary,theworkingconditionsandmanyotherthingsaboutthejobheisinterestedin.

Therefore,thejobinterviewisveryimportanttoajob-hunter.Buthowcanonesucceedinit?Firstlyofall,theintervieweemustpayattentiontohisorherappearance.Thefirstimpressionisalwayswherewestart.Getdressedproperlyandneatly.Secondly,goodmannersareequallyimportant.Don’tbetooproud,andneithertootimid.Justbecourteous.Thirdly,theintervieweemustdemonstratehisaptitudeandskillsforthejobandhisknowledgeaboutehjob-relatedareas.Beconfident.Lastbutnottheleast,theintervieweeoughttobehonestabouthisorherpersonalaswellasacademicbackground,forhonestyisthebestpolicy.

Tosumup,thejobinterviewisindeedimportant,butthereisnoneedtobenervous.Aslongastheintervieweehastheabilityforthejob,withcarefulpreparationandafairlyconfidentandhonestperformance,hisorhersuccesscanbeensured.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要求考生對(duì)于面試在求職過程中的作用以及取得成功所具備的因素進(jìn)行闡述。首段主要提出面試在求職過程中的作用，“Ontheonehand”，“ontheotherhand”。第二段寫了四種方法。job-hunter“找工作的人”、demonstrate“證明”、aptitude“資質(zhì)”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。第三段用兩句話作為總結(jié)，非常簡(jiǎn)潔。4支持同意題型作文該類題型作文要求考生對(duì)社會(huì)上存在的某種積極的現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析，說明其重要性或價(jià)值，也就是通過擺事實(shí)、講道理的方式，來說服讀者信服某個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，它是論說文的一種。其常見形式是：=1\*GB3①目前存在某種積極的現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)；=2\*GB3②該現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)的作用、意義或價(jià)值；=3\*GB3③呼吁結(jié)尾。在大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文考試中

此類題型經(jīng)常和問題解決題型結(jié)合考查。Writing13Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCreateaGreenCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.建設(shè)綠色校園十分重要

2.綠色校園不僅指綠色環(huán)境

3.為了建設(shè)綠色校園我們應(yīng)該……CreateaGreenCampus“Greencampus”is,tosomeextent,arelativelynewconcepttous.Itnotonlymeanscreatingagreenenvironmentoncampus,butalsoreferstothatthestudentsshouldbeeducatedandhaveanenvironmentalsenseintheirmind.Ofcourse,thisconceptisveryimportantforthestudentsbecauseitsetsgoalstowardthefutureoftheworld.

Theyounggenerationisundertheburdenofsevereenvironmentalproblemsandthehopesofenvironmentalimprovementarelyinginthem.Therefore,campusplaysamoreimportantroleineducatingtheyounggeneration.Thecreationof“Greencampus”willgreatlystimulatestudentstotakepartinvariousenvironmentalprotectionactivities;mostimportantly,studentswillbeeducatedtotakeenvironmentalproblemsseriouslyastheirownmissionandresponsibility.Undersuchstimulations,studentsmaygraspthechancetolearneverynecessarycoursefortheharmoniousandsustainabledevelopmentoftheworld.Tobring“greencampus”toitsfullplay,effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken.First,basedonitseducationfunction,campusshouldbringthetheoryof“sustainabledevelopment”intoclassrooms,setenvironmentalmanagementrulesandconductenvironmentaleducationactivities.Second,campusalsoneedstostrengthenitstieswiththesociety,triestocommunicatewithparentsandexpertssoastoensurethatstudentscouldhaveabetterparticipationinthepracticalactivities.Onlybytheco-effortsofthewholesocietycould“greencampus”worksmoothlyandbringbenefittopeople’swell-beings.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題要求考生對(duì)綠色校園的建設(shè)以及樹立環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)進(jìn)行闡述。第一段：著重寫“綠色校園”的概念，文中用到“notonly…,butalso…”從其概念引出“綠色校園”的重要地位。

第二段：此段的重點(diǎn)就是“綠色校園”的重要性，它能夠促進(jìn)學(xué)生們積極地參與到實(shí)際的環(huán)境問題中去，而且還能樹立學(xué)生們的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)，對(duì)社會(huì)做出重大的貢獻(xiàn)。文中stimulate“激勵(lì)鼓舞”、mission“使命”、harmonious“和諧的”sustainabledevelopment“可持續(xù)發(fā)展”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。

第三段：鑒于“綠色校園”的重要性，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)采取措施來建設(shè)“綠色校園”，把“綠色校園”的作用發(fā)揮到最大。文章中用到倒裝句。conduct“實(shí)施”為亮點(diǎn)詞匯。Writing141990年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetitle:MakeOurCityGreener,yourcompositionshouldbebasedonthefollowingoutline:1：城市綠化的狀況2：綠化的好處（如：清潔空氣，美化城市，改善氣候）3：怎樣才能實(shí)現(xiàn)綠化范文：MakeOurCityGreenerInrecentyearsmanytreeshavebeenplantedinthecitiesandmuchcarehasbeentakenoftheplantedtrees.Inspiteofallthis,thegreeningprocessisrelativelyslowcomparedwithcitiesinmanyothercountries.Wecanbenefitmuchfrommakingourcitiesgreenerbyplantingtrees.First,treesabsorbcarbondioxidetoproduceoxygenwhichisessentialtothehealthofhumanbeings.Second,treesandothergreenerymakeourcitiesmorebeautiful.Third,treescanalsoimprovetheclimateofthecities.Sincewecangetsomuchfrommakingourcitiesgreener,weshouldsparenoefforttodothat.Weshouldplantmoretreesandtakebettercareofthem.Wealsoshouldnotcutdownthetrees.Inaword,weshoulddoeverythingtoaddtothegreeningofourcities.點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇支持同意型的作文，作者支持城市綠化這種積極的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。第一段指出目前城市綠化的狀況；第二段分析了綠化的好處；第三段得出結(jié)論，我應(yīng)該盡到一切努力使我們的城市得到更好的綠化。文章內(nèi)容切題，說理充分，令人信服，無語言錯(cuò)誤。5記敘文題型作文要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對(duì)事件進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單分析。其常見形式是：=1\*GB3①總結(jié)描述，交代清楚故事涉及的人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；=2\*GB3②第二段具體描述，具體描述事件發(fā)生的原因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果：起因＋經(jīng)過＋結(jié)果；=3\*GB3③第三段對(duì)事件的分析，分析句1+分析句2+分析3。Writing152003年9月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:簡(jiǎn)單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病（或受傷）的情況2．同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的3．人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是……TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured)DuringtheSARSperiodinthisspring,theyearof2003,oneofmyclassmates,LiMing,wasstruckdownbythevirusandwasimmediatelysenttohospital.Thenewsspreadquicklyoncampus.Atfirst,wewereterrifiedandwonderedifwewereinfectedtoo.However,throughourgovernment'spublicityonmassmedia,wegraduallyconqueredthefearandsetouttotryourbesttohelpher.SometeachersprovideddailynecessitieswhilesomestudentsrecordedtheEnglishclasscontentsforhimsothatLiMingcouldnotbeleftbehind.Withourcareandconcern,LiMingrecoveredquickly.Suchanincidentteachesusagoodmoral.Oursocietyisfulloflove,warmandpeaceful,inwhichpeople-frommantowoman,fromindividualtoindividual-lendothersahand.Justlikeafamoussonggoes,"theworldwillturnittoheavenonlyifeveryonecontributesalittle."andIdobelievethatit'smygreathonortoliveinthislove-filledparadise!點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要求考生寫一篇記敘文，描述事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、人物及結(jié)果，最后對(duì)事件進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單分析。第一段交代故事涉及的人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)單結(jié)描述同學(xué)生?。ɑ蚴軅┑那闆r，語言簡(jiǎn)練；第二段具體描述同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的，形象生動(dòng)，層次清晰；第三段對(duì)事件的分析：人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受，感情真摯。Writing162003年6月真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident假設(shè)你在某日某時(shí)某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。

見證書須包括以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、車禍發(fā)生的時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)

2、你所見到的車禍情況

3、你對(duì)車禍原因的分析AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident

MynameisLiming.Iamstudyingatcollege.AweekagoIsawatrafficaccident,whichisstillvividinmymind.

Itwasatabout9:00onSaturdaymorning,June15th,whenIwentoutoftheuniversitytovisitafriendofmineatanotheruniversity.Iwaswalkingleisurelyonthesidewalkwhe