EnglishWriting保定市第十三中學(xué)楊琳1/33TobeabletowriteanEnglishcompositonThewaysofcompositionwriting.Usethewaystowriteacomposition.

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河北農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)93級(jí)學(xué)生李寶元因病于1996年逝世。他所在班級(jí)26名同學(xué)決定共同幫助李寶元父母.十五年來(lái)，他們寄出15張匯款單和56封信。他們真情將一直延續(xù)……Canyoutellusthetruestory?3/331.

Talkabouthowyoufeelaboutit.2.Saysomethingaboutwhatyoucanlearnfromit.I’mreallymoved.Discuss4/33From:Lihuachina@Date:22/06/3:30PMTo:Davybritain@Subject:TrueLoveHiDavy,I’dliketotellyouatruestory.LiBaoyuan,astudentofHebeiAgricultureUniversitycamefromapoorfamily.Unluckily,he__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua5/33I'dliketotellyouatruestory.LiBaoyuan,astudentofHebeiAgriculturalUniversitycamefromapoorfamily.Unluckily,hebecameillanddiedin1996.However,allhis26classmatesdecidedtohelpBaoyuan’sparents.Inthepastfifteenyears,they’vesent15moneyordersand56letterstohisparents.Andtheirtrueloveisstillgoingon...Thetruestory6/33

HiDavy,

I'dliketotellyouatruestory.LiBaoyuan,astudentofHebeiAgriculturalUniversitycamefromapoorfamily.Unluckily,hebecameillanddiedin1996.However,allhis26classmatesdecidedtohelpBaoyuan’sparents.Inthepastfifteenyears,they’vesent15moneyordersand56letterstohisparents.Andtheirtrueloveisstillgoingon...

I’mreallymoved.

Asastudent,Ishouldlearnfromthemandtrytohelpothers.Ifeveryonewouldliketodothat,thewholeworldwillbefulloflove!

Whatdoyouthinkofit?Pleasewritesoon!LiHuaAsIfAsastudent,Ishouldlearnfromthemandtrytohelpothers.Ifeveryonewouldliketodothat,thewholeworldwillbefulloflove!7/33

習(xí)作互改評(píng)價(jià)表批改人姓名_____被改人姓名________作文標(biāo)題________批改日期___________評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目得分（在對(duì)應(yīng)處打ˇ）語(yǔ)言單詞拼寫和大小寫使用正確54321用詞恰當(dāng)，防止重復(fù)用詞54321主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)使用得當(dāng)54321字跡工整，標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范54321句法固定搭配使用準(zhǔn)確108642句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，無(wú)殘缺句108642利用各種句式表示108642總分:______（語(yǔ)言________句法______）文章亮點(diǎn):待改進(jìn)地方:8/3391.假如你看到或聽到下面這則消息，請(qǐng)以李華名義,給你英國(guó)筆友Davy發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他這個(gè)感人故事及你感受。河北農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)93級(jí)學(xué)生李寶元因病于1996年逝世。他所在班級(jí)26名同學(xué)決定共同幫助李寶元父母。十五年來(lái)，他們寄出15張匯款單和56封信。提醒：(1)Tellhimthetruestory.(2)Talkabouthowyoufeelaboutit.(3)Saysomethingaboutwhatyoucanlearnfromit.要求：（1）文稿須包含全部提醒內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（2）電子郵件開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）詞數(shù)：60?80個(gè)。參考詞匯：moneyorder(匯款單),goon,bemoved(感動(dòng)),befulloflovestoryfeelaboutlearnfrom

河北9/33中考英語(yǔ)作文類型提醒作文表格提醒(Charts)圖片提醒(Pictures)漢語(yǔ)提醒(Chinese)英語(yǔ)提醒(English)英語(yǔ)提醒（English)10/33EnglishWritingSkills:1.Readthetipscarefully,includingthebackground.2.Whatareyouaskedtowriteabout?Howmanyaspects(方面)？3.Useconnectivestojoinwords,phrasesandsentences.4.Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.11/33LiHua:Yes,Ithinkso.Healthisveryimportant.Davy:I’mreallymoved!It’sapityforLiBaoyuan.Ifhewaswell,…

Oh,health…12/33

健康身心，能使我們友好相處，愉快學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)要求寫一篇60-80詞以上短文。

提醒：1.Ishealthimportant?

2.Whatthingscanmakeushealthy?3.Talkabouthowtokeephealthy？說(shuō)明：題目已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

GrowingUpHeathily!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

邯鄲13/33Independentwork

(1min)Whataffects（影響）ourhealth?HealthBook5Unit4/6Book2Unit7Book6Unit4Book4Unit8dietexercisesleep……feeling……14/33Teamwork

(3mins)Writesentencesasmanyaspossible.15/33dietsleepexercisefeeling

……????????aniceheadanicetailanicebody16/33Waysofbeginning:1.Asweallknow,healthisveryimportant.2.Therearemanywaystokeephealthy.3.Growinguphealthilyisourduty.4.Hello,Iwillgiveyousomeadviceonhealth.5.It’simportantforustokeephealthy/fit.17/33Waysofending:1.Ifyoufollowmyadvice,Ithinkyouwillbehealthierthanbefore.2.Allinall,healthdependsonourlifestyle.3.Inaword,ahealthylifestyleandgettingonwellwithotherscanhelpusgrowuphealthily.4.Tokeephealthyisnotdifficultifyoucareitalot.18/33Healthisimportant.

Ithinktherearemanywaystobehealthy.________,keepabalanceddiet.Don’teatthejunkfood.Drinkmuchwaterinteadofcola._________,getenoughsleep.Earlytobedandearlytorisehelpalottoourhealth.Atthesametime,Ifeelthatyoucangetenoughexerciseeverydayortwoorthreetimesaweek.It’sagoodideato

dosomesports.________thephysicalhealth,wewouldliketobehappyeveryday.Wehopetohavealightheart.

_________,ahealthylifeandgettingonwellwithotherscanhelpusgrowuphealthily.

FirstlySecondlyBesidesInawordaniceheadanicebodyanicetailIt’sveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Weshouldstayawayfrom19/33

習(xí)作互改評(píng)價(jià)表批改人姓名_____被改人姓名________作文標(biāo)題________批改日期___________評(píng)價(jià)項(xiàng)目得分（在對(duì)應(yīng)處打ˇ）語(yǔ)言單詞拼寫和大小寫使用正確54321用詞恰當(dāng)，防止重復(fù)用詞54321主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)使用得當(dāng)54321字跡工整，標(biāo)點(diǎn)規(guī)范54321句法固定搭配使用準(zhǔn)確108642句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，無(wú)殘缺句108642利用各種句式表示108642篇章符合題意，覆蓋全部關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)108642結(jié)構(gòu)合理，細(xì)節(jié)詳略得當(dāng)108642使用了連接詞，以使行文連貫1512963觀點(diǎn)鮮明1512963總分:______（語(yǔ)言________句法______篇章_________）文章亮點(diǎn):待改進(jìn)地方:20/3321/33LiHua:Ofcourse.Hisparentsgetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople.Theythank…Davy:We’regladtoseemoreandmorekindpeoplehelpingLiBaoyuan’sparentsnow.22/33

河北農(nóng)大（HebeiAgriculturalUniversity）果樹9301優(yōu)異畢業(yè)班群體先進(jìn)事跡在社會(huì)引發(fā)強(qiáng)烈反響，假如你是李寶元堂弟李明，請(qǐng)向他母校致一封感激信，提醒：1.感激人：學(xué)校、老師、同學(xué)…

2.感激他們?cè)颍荷罘矫?、學(xué)習(xí)方面…

3.對(duì)他們美好祝福。注意：1.詞數(shù)：60—80詞左右；

2.文稿須包含全部提醒內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3.文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。Dearteachersandstudents,IamLiYuanbao’scousin.Wegetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople.Now,Iwanttoexpressmythankstoyou.First,_______________________________________________________________________________LiMingWeI23/33

Dearteachersandstudents,

IamLiBaoyuan’scousin.Wegetlotsofhelpandlovefrommanypeople.Now,Iwanttoexpressmythankstoyou.First,Iwanttothankourschool.Youprovideahappy,friendlylifeformybrother.Youdomuchforusandgiveussomuchlove.Second,Iwanttothankourteachers.Youarekind,anddohard-working.Whenwehavebigprombles,youaresohelpfulandpatient.Youarefulloflove.Third,Iwanttothankmybrother’sclassmates.Youmakeusfeellesslonely.Andmoreandmorekindstudentshavetakengoodcareofusandhelpeduswithmuchhousework,justlikemybrothersandsisters.Ihopeyouareingoodhealthandhaveahappy,betterfuture.LiMing24/33BCHomeworkDA25/33請(qǐng)以“I’mproudofmyself”為題寫一篇60-80詞短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，不然不予評(píng)分)要求：

1.Whatkindofpersonareyou?2.Whatmakesyouproudofyourself?(Giveanexample/examples.)3.Whyareyouproudofyourself?

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我們周圍環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。假如你是學(xué)生Jone.，請(qǐng)寫出6句關(guān)于保護(hù)環(huán)境預(yù)防污染句子。It’ssoeasy!!27/33

回想三年英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)歷程，豐富多彩英語(yǔ)課堂活動(dòng)一定給你留下了許多難忘印象。請(qǐng)你以“WhatshouldwedoinEnglishclass?”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勗谟⒄Z(yǔ)課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)更有效。提醒：(1)Listentotheteacher.(2)Takepartinactivities.(3)Beconfidentinourselves.要求：(1)文稿須包含全部提醒內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

(2)文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名和地名。

(3)詞數(shù)：60～80個(gè)。參考詞匯：takenotes,workingroupswith…,notbeafraidof…

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假如你叫李華，請(qǐng)你就“英語(yǔ)老師用英語(yǔ)還是用英