英語(yǔ)應(yīng)用文體書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)河北省淶源縣第一中學(xué)074300李增林【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】.慰問(wèn)信假設(shè)你是李華，你的筆友Tom在升學(xué)考試中未能進(jìn)入自己理想的大學(xué)。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.對(duì)得知的情況表示遺憾。

2.失敗面前要振作。

3.可以選擇另一所大學(xué)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100/120左右2.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】慰問(wèn)信是寫(xiě)給由于某種原因暫時(shí)遭受困難的個(gè)人或集體表示慰問(wèn)和同情的信件.一般地,寫(xiě)好慰問(wèn)信應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面:1.基本格式要正確:慰問(wèn)信和普通信件的基本格式一樣,在此不再贅述.2.慰問(wèn)信的主要內(nèi)容(1)對(duì)對(duì)方的遭遇或不幸表示同情，鼓勵(lì)其努力。(2)用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的原因,可寫(xiě)對(duì)方所遭到的不幸或困難的情況(3)表達(dá)自己幫助對(duì)方的愿望或具體措施.在結(jié)尾處可再次表示寫(xiě)信者的良好祝愿或同情之心.3.語(yǔ)言要親切:根據(jù)不同的對(duì)象、不同的情況，表達(dá)真摯的、親切的慰問(wèn)之情。一句話，只要能打動(dòng)人心，達(dá)到安慰人的目的就行了。常用句型：1.Ijustcannottellyouhowsorry/sadIwastolearnofyourunhappyexperience/injury/accident/divorce.2.IfeltverysorryindeedwhenIwasinformedofyoursickness.3.IwishthereweresomethingIcouldsayordotoeaseyoursenseofloss/tosoftenyourgrief.4.Iknowtherewerenowordsthatcanbeacomforttoyounow.5.Ihopethatyouwillsoonbecompletelyrestoredtohealth/getwellagain.6.Pleasedon‘thesitatetocallonmeifthereisanythingIcandonowandalways.7.Thereislittlethatanyonecansayordoatatimelikethistoeaseyourgrief，butIwouldexpressmydeepestsympathy.8.Itisreallyapitythatyoufailedin…9.Pleasedon’tfeeltoomuchdistressedforthis10.Allofusarewaitingforyourrapidrecovery/returntohealth.11.PleaseletmeknowofanyassistanceIcanrenderyou.12.Wearebothlookingforwardto/hopingandprayingforyourspeedyandfullrecovery.13.Ihavejustheardthatyou’vebeenonthesicknesslastweek14.IfthereisanythingIcandotohelpyou,pleaseletmeknow.15.Iwouldliketoexpressmysorrowattherecent?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earTom:

I'mverysorrytohavelearntthatyouhavefailedtogainadmissiontothekeyuniversityofyourchoice.

Asastudent,failureintheexamisquitecommon.Howtofacefailureplaysanimportantpartindeterminingaperson's

success.Inaword,yourgreatestenemyisyourselfandsometimesyouarebeatenbyyourself.Therefore,youhavetokeepupyourspiritsinthefaceoffailure.

Finally,Isuggestthatyoushouldgotoanotherkeyuniversitytomajorinthesubjectyoulike.Aslongasyouareexcellent,youwillsoonerorlaterstandoutnomatterwhichuniversityyougraduatefrom.

PleaseletmeknowifyouhaveanythingIcandoforyou.

Bestwishes.

Yours,

LiHua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是李華，你的筆友Tom來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。回國(guó)后可能由于太累或氣候不適生病住院。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，內(nèi)容如下：表示慰問(wèn)?；貞浺黄鸲冗^(guò)的快樂(lè)。提一些建議（如休息）注意：1.詞數(shù)100/120左右2.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earTom:I'mverysorrytohavelearnedthatyouhavebeenillsinceyoureturnedhomefromChinaandpleaseallowmetosendmybestwishestoyou.Afewdaysago,youcametoBeijingtoseethesights.Whatawonderfultimewehadtogether.WewenttoclimbTheGreatWallfirst,andthenwetookaboattriponthelakeintheSummerPalace.Youfeelillperhapsbecausethetravelwastoomuchforyoutotolerate,orbecauseyouarenotaccustomedtotheclimateinBeijing.Ifso,Ithinkthatthemostimportantthingforyoutodoishaveagoodrest.Sinceyouarenowinhospitalyoushouldcompletelyrelaxandnotworryaboutyourwork.Ihopethatyouwillbeallrightassoonaspossible.Ifthereisanythingyouneedmetodo,justletmeknow.【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】建議信

國(guó)家鼓勵(lì)課本循環(huán)使用,可是很多學(xué)校根本沒(méi)有實(shí)施。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示給某英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一封信。1.

反映課本循環(huán)使用存在的問(wèn)題。2．分析原因：無(wú)人組織3．你的建議注意：1.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)120/150詞左右?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】建議信是英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作中的一種?？嘉捏w，它是寫(xiě)信人向收信人就某事提出自己的看法、建議或忠告。在建議信中，作者一般要提出自己的建議，并通過(guò)擺事實(shí)、講道理，以證明自己建議的合理性，從而讓對(duì)方或別人接受、采納自己的建議。建議信的寫(xiě)作通常有兩種：1．就某一現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)信給單位、報(bào)社等提出自己的建議：在建議信中，作者一般提出自己的觀點(diǎn)或建議，通過(guò)擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非，以證明自己觀點(diǎn)的正確性或建議的合理性，樹(shù)立或否定某種主張，從而達(dá)到讓別人接受、采納其建議的目的。它是一種議論文體，常用第一人稱(chēng)或第二人稱(chēng)及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。從論證方式看，這種信的寫(xiě)法通常有兩種：（1）正面論證法一般在文章開(kāi)頭直接提出自己的觀點(diǎn)或建議，然后論證其合理性，結(jié)束語(yǔ)部分重申一下主題，以起到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。此方法適合于肯定形式的建議。（2）反面駁論法這種方法先在第一段提出反面觀點(diǎn)或指出所觀察到的某一現(xiàn)象或擺出所面臨的問(wèn)題，接著分析這種現(xiàn)象或問(wèn)題存在的原因，批駁其不合理性，最后提出自己的建議并合理論證采納建議的益處，呼吁大家采納。這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)安排緊湊合理，步步深入，容易達(dá)到說(shuō)服的目的。2．根據(jù)對(duì)方（個(gè)人）來(lái)信內(nèi)容，幫助其解決生活、學(xué)習(xí)上存在的問(wèn)題而寫(xiě)的建議信：寫(xiě)這種建議信，首先要針對(duì)對(duì)方對(duì)自己的信任簡(jiǎn)單表示感謝，亦可表明自己的誠(chéng)意。建議信的開(kāi)頭必須指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對(duì)自己的立場(chǎng)做一些解釋。接著可以圍繞問(wèn)題，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、科學(xué)委婉地提出建議。注意充分考慮對(duì)方的實(shí)際情況，表達(dá)時(shí)應(yīng)該選擇得體的用語(yǔ)。在勸說(shuō)對(duì)方接受你的建議時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意措辭，慎用must等命令性詞匯，切忌用語(yǔ)生硬強(qiáng)制、泛泛而談。最后，希望自己的建議能對(duì)對(duì)方有所幫助，同時(shí)闡明你所提供的建議僅供對(duì)方參考。無(wú)論寫(xiě)哪種建議信，都要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：首先，一定要在認(rèn)真審題的基礎(chǔ)上全面準(zhǔn)確地把握題目所給予的信息，按照建議信的基本模式來(lái)寫(xiě)。第二點(diǎn)，建議信要寫(xiě)出建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由和根據(jù)。理由要合情合理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌。因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確，具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。建議信常用句式1.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceonhowtoimprove…Iwilltrytogivesomeusefulsuggestions.2.Youaskedforadviceconcerning（withregardto）…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.3.Ihavereceivedyourlettersaying…Iwouldrecommendthat…4.IamwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementof…5.Iamwritinginreplyto…/toexpressmyviewsabout…6.Thanksfortrustingme.It'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions.7.Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis8.Iwouldliketosuggestthat…9.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif…10.IfIwereyou，Iwould…11.Youmayconsiderdoing…12.Itwouldseemtomethatyoucould…13.Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.14.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementinthisregard.15.Ibelieve/trustthatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.16.Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.17.Theseareonlymypersonalsuggestions.Ihopeyoufindthesesuggestions/proposalspractical./helpful.18.Iwouldbereadytodiscussaboutthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.19.Whateveryoudecidetodo，goodluckwithyourstudies/work！20.Iwouldliketoextendmyappreciationifyouaresokindastotakemysuggestionsintoconsideration21.I'mwillingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwheneveryouneedhelp.22.Youshouldtakeadvantageofthisopportunityandtrytomakeagoodimpressiononthem。Carefulconsiderationisnecessarybeforeyoumakeyourownchoice.23.Weneedtotakeasecondlookatthematterfromawiderstandpoint,otherwise,wewon’t除上述常用建議句型外，為了能使對(duì)方能夠高興地接受你的勸告或建議，建議信還經(jīng)常使用maybe,perhaps,probably,inmyopinion/view，Ithink，itseems等詞語(yǔ)?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earEditor:I’msorrytooccupyyourtime,butIreallywanttotellyousomethingaboutthereuseoftextbooks.Itissomeyearssincethegovernmentcalledonthestudenttopassonthetextbookfromonegradetonext.Butwhatworriesmemostisthatalargequantityofusedtextbooksisbeingthrownawaytermafterterm，andnoschoolstakeanyaction.Howdoesitcomeabout？Personally，oneofthemajorreasonsisthatnooneororganizationcollectthetextbookandthestudentsdon’tknowwheretosendtheirtextbooks.Inordertosolvetheproblem，IsuggesttheStudents’Unionshouldperformitsfunction.AttheendofthetermtheStudents’Uniongatherthetextbooksandthengivethemoutatthebeginningofthenewterm.Besides,Isuggestthatmaybethegovernmentcancontrolthenumberoftextbooksprintedbythepublishinghouse.Finally,Idohopetthatyouconsidermysuggestionsandexpectthemediatodosomethingforthis.

Yourstruly,LiHua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練】假設(shè)你是某英文報(bào)“煩惱對(duì)我說(shuō)”欄目編輯，收到高三學(xué)生李華的來(lái)信。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)來(lái)信內(nèi)容和下面的要求寫(xiě)一封回信。要求：1.樹(shù)立信心2.躺在床上不要想白天的錯(cuò)誤。3．制定時(shí)間表。注意：1.詞數(shù)100120左右2.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。Deareditor:I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,IfeelmoreandmoreworriedandIcouldn’tfallasleepasusual.WhatshallIdo?Yours,LiHua.

【參考答案】DearLiHua:I’msorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyinfallingasleepoveraperiodoftime.FromyouletterIknowthatstressisthemaincauseofyourproblem.Therefore,youmustbelieveinyourself.Itdoesn’tmatterwhetheryoucangetgoodmarksornotintheexaminations.Aslongasyouhaveconfidenceinyourself,youwillsucceedinthecollegeentranceexaminationintheend.Secondly,whenyougotobed,don’tlietherethinkingaboutthemistakesoftheday.Noristhisthetimetoplanyournextday’sactivities.Otherwise,youmaybecometooanxious.Finally,youshouldmakeatimetableandsticktoyourusualbedtimeandrisingpattern,evenifyou’vehadabadnight’ssleep.Ihopethesuggestionswillhelpyou.Yours,Editor【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】感謝信假設(shè)你是李華，你的朋友John在你生病住院期間，來(lái)看望你并帶來(lái)一本書(shū)。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封感謝信，并告訴他你很快就能出院了。注意：1.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】本題要求寫(xiě)一封感謝信。感謝信就是受到對(duì)方的某種恩惠，如幫助、饋贈(zèng)等之后，用來(lái)向?qū)Ψ奖磉_(dá)感謝之情的信函。該話題結(jié)構(gòu)可以分為第一部分感謝對(duì)方給予的幫助，即直接點(diǎn)明感謝緣由及內(nèi)心感受。在表示感謝時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)單明了，不拐彎抹角；感謝用語(yǔ)要真摯誠(chéng)懇，恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w，既要符合被感謝者的身份，也要符合感謝者的身份。第二部分可以回憶記錄一些具體細(xì)節(jié)，但要注意敘事要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，做到內(nèi)容真實(shí)、情感真切。接下來(lái)可以根據(jù)信件內(nèi)容告訴對(duì)方自己的近況；最后，結(jié)尾時(shí)一般再次向?qū)Ψ奖硎靖兄x，有時(shí)還可發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。常用句型：1.Iwillneverforgetyourkindwishesformy2.Iwishtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourfriendlycare.3.Iwouldliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandassistance.4.Iwouldliketoconveyinthislettermyheartfeltthankstoyoufor…5.Manythanksforallthegoodthingsyouhavedoneinhelpingusto…6.Isincerelyappreciateyourkindnessandgenerosity.7.Thankyouevermuchforthelatestinformation.8.Pleaseacceptoutsincerestthanksforwhatyouhavedoneforus.（heartfeltgratitude）9.Idon‘tknowhowtothankyouforsuchgenerousbehavior.ItissomethingthatIwillcherishforalongtimetocome.10.Iamnowwritingtoexpress/extendmygreatappreciationforthetimelyhelpyouoffered./myheartfeltgratitude./mythanksfor…11.Itwasconsiderateofyoutodomeagreatfavor.12.Iwishtherewereabetterwordthan“thanks”toexpressmyappreciation.13.Manythanksagainforyourgeneroushospitality.14.WordsfailmewhenIwanttoexpressmygratitudetoyou.15.Ifithadnotbeenforyourtimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaid，Ifearthattheconsequencesmighthavebeenmuchmoreserious.16.Ifthereweremorepeoplelikeyou，thisworldwouldbeamuchnicerplace.17.Thanksagain.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!18.ThanksagainandIhopethatIwillhavetheopportunitytoreturn/repayyourkindness.19.IappreciateitmorethanIcansay.Thankyouagainforyourtimelyhelp.【參考答案】DearJohn,Manythankstoyou,mydearfriend,forthesplendidpresentyouhavesentme,andIfeeldeeplymovedbythistokenofyouraffection.Thebookyouchosetooffermeisveryinterestingandinstructive.Ihavewreadafewpageswithgreareagerness.Itisagreatconsolationforme,beingconfinedtothehospitalbyillness.Iamsuretherewillbegreatpleasureandbenefitinstoreforme.IamgladtotellyouthatIammakingrapidprogresstowardshealtheveryday.ItismyhopethatIshallsoonbeabletoinformyouofmycompleterecovery.Lookingforwardtojoiningyouatschoolassoonaspossible.Yours,LiHua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練1】格林教授在北大英語(yǔ)系任教,上周曾到你校就如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)作報(bào)告.假定你叫李華,現(xiàn)由你寫(xiě)封信給格林教授,說(shuō)明你與同學(xué)們非常欣賞上周的報(bào)告,從中學(xué)到很多學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的方法,如要多聽(tīng)、多說(shuō)、多讀。你對(duì)他來(lái)校作報(bào)告表示感謝，并誠(chéng)摯希望他能下月再來(lái)做一次報(bào)告。注意：1.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earProfessorGreenOnbehalfofmyclassmates,Iamwritingtoexpressoursincereappreciation.HowmuchmyclassmatesandIenjoyedyourexcellentlecturethatyougavelastweek!Weallthankyouforcomingtoourschoolandgivingussuchaninstructivetalk.FromthetalkwehavelearnedagreatdealabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Inthepast,weusedtostudyEnglishbylearninggrammar,asaconsequenceofwhich,noneofuscancommunicatewithforeigners.Nowwehaverealizedthatwehavetolistenmore,speakmore,andreadmoreinordertolearnEnglishwell.OnlyinthiswaycanwereallygraspEnglishanduseitfreely.Wesincerelyhopethatyoucangiveusanotherlecturesometimenextmonthwhenitisconvenienttoyou.Thankyouforanearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練2】假設(shè)你叫李華，在英國(guó)旅行期間生病了，得到了房東Jean的照顧并恢復(fù)健康?；貒?guó)后請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封感謝信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.對(duì)她對(duì)你的照顧表示感謝；2.告訴她自己的近況并詢(xún)問(wèn)她的近況；3.邀請(qǐng)她來(lái)中國(guó)旅行。DearJean:ThankyouverymuchforthehelpyouandyourfamilygavemeduringmystayinEngland.IreallyappreciateyourtakingtimeoffworktotakecareofmewhenIwastakenill.IrememberthatitwasyouwhocarriedmetoanearbyhospitalandagainitwasyouwhostayedwithmewhenIwashavinganinjection.Asaresultofyourcarefulattendence,I'mcompletelyrecovered,andI'mfeelinghealthierandmoreenergeticthanever.NextweekI'llstarttowork.Thanksalotagain.Bytheway,howareyougettingalong?IhopethatyoucancometoChinainthenearfuture.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.Yourstruly,LiHua【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】投訴信你從某外國(guó)網(wǎng)站上買(mǎi)了一本名著“OldManandtheSea”，但是閱讀時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有缺頁(yè)，還有很多不清晰無(wú)法理解的地方，請(qǐng)你就此給該網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)封投訴信。內(nèi)容：1.投訴內(nèi)容；2.要求兌換或賠償損失?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】投訴信是對(duì)商家的產(chǎn)品或者服務(wù)等不滿意而向商家提出意見(jiàn)、建議或者要求商家對(duì)顧客作出賠償或者給予道歉的書(shū)信。投訴信的稱(chēng)謂應(yīng)包含公司的名稱(chēng)以及相關(guān)人員的職位。一般地投訴信寫(xiě)作安排步驟如下：首先自我介紹，肯定對(duì)方能夠按時(shí)送貨上門(mén)的做法，隨后提出問(wèn)題，即交代投訴內(nèi)容，表明本信的目的和要求。接著將問(wèn)題清晰、簡(jiǎn)潔、公正地描述出來(lái)，告訴對(duì)方你因此受到的傷害或不便，提出解決問(wèn)題的建議，表明希望如何處理,即要求商家給予怎樣的回應(yīng)。結(jié)尾處表達(dá)希望問(wèn)題得到迅速恰當(dāng)解決的強(qiáng)烈愿望，希望盡快得到滿意的答復(fù)。寫(xiě)投訴信時(shí)態(tài)度要堅(jiān)決,但語(yǔ)氣要客氣禮貌，做到有理有據(jù)，以便得到問(wèn)題的妥善解決。常用句型：1.Iamsorrytosaythatwearegreatlyinconveniencedbythefactthat2.Iamwritingthislettertocomplainabout/tomakeacomplaintaboutIreallymustcomplainaboutthequalityofthe...Irecentlygotfromyourcompany.Youseemtohavesupplieduswithaproductthatfallsfarbelowthestandardweexpect.5.The...Iorderedfromyourstorearrivedbroken.Obviously,nopackinghadbeenplacedintheboxbeforeitwassentfromthewarehouse.6.Itisnowover...sincewemadetheaboveorderwithyou,butthe...weneedbadlynowhaven'tarrivedyet.7.TheproductIpurchasedfromyou...provedtobequiteadisappointment.AlthoughitlooksexactlythesameastheoneIsawinyourcommercial,itactuallydoesnotperformthesameway.8.Itisagreatpitythat

thereissomethingwrongwiththebook.

9.Iwishtoexpress/

Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcern|dissatisfaction|disappointmentabout…10.IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomoveintoanewroomnextterm.11.

Iwouldpreferasingleroom，asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.Iamregrettedtoinformyouthattheheatingsysteminthehousestoppedworkingafewdaysago.IrequestyoutoarrangetoreplacethisWalkmanwithanotherone，whichmustbeinperfectworkingorder.Failingthat，youmusthaveafullrefund.

14.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyouconsiderthisrequestatyourearliestconvenience.IhopeIcangetmyrefundassoonaspossible

.

IhopethatmyproblemwillgetyourkindconsiderationassoonaspossibleItishardformetounderstand…IamafraidthatIhaveacomplainttomake.Ihatetobringthisup，but…Iamnotatallsatisfiedwith…Iwanttocomplaininthestrongesttermabout…Iamreallyannoyedaboutit.Iamregrettedtosaythatsth.wasincorrect.WewouldliketodrawyourattentiontosomethingyouhaveobviouslyfailedtonoticeToimprovethesituation，itisadvisableforyoutotakethefollowingmeasures26.Wetrustthatyouwillnowconsiderthismatterseriouslyandmakeanefforttopreventtherecurrenceofthiskind.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldlookintothematterassoonaspossible.AndIamlookingforwardtoanearlyreply.Ihopeyouwilltakestepstorectifythissituationsoon.Ibelieveyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriously.Iwouldaskyoutogivebackmymoney,orIwouldfilemycomplainttotheauthoritiesconcerned.I'dappreciateitverymuchifyourefundthemoneyIhavepaidforit.AsIhavenointerestinreceivingareplacement,Iamreturningtheproducttoyouanddemandthatafullrefundbemadetome.回復(fù)投訴信的常用句型1.Ifeelterriblysorrytohearwhatyousaid.2.sth.mustbedoneaboutit.3.IwillimmediatelyattendtoitsothatIcangiveyouasatisfactoryresponse.4.Pleaseforgivewhatwedidtoyouandacceptoursincereapology.5.Therearethreewayswecanhandlethissituation.6.Wedowishyoucouldbesatisfiedwithwhatwehavecompensateforthetroublewemade.7.Wehavecommunicatedwiththeconcernedperson，confirmedwhatyouhadcomplained，andpunishedhim.8.Wewillhavehimapologizetoyouonthedayyouappoint.9.Wedovalueyourbusinessandfriendship.Wewouldhaverefundandhopethatyoucouldacceptoursincereapologyforthemesswemade.【參考答案】DearSir:I'mhappythatthebookOldManandTheSeaIorderedfromyourwebsitetheotherdayhasarrivedontime.ButitisgreatpitythatIcan'tenjoyitbecausetherearesomeproblemsinthebook.

Firstofall,I'vefoundthatsomeofthepagesinthebookaremissingwhenreadinghalfwaythroughthebook.Inaddition,whatIcan'ttoleratemostisthatmanysectionsofthebookhasn'tbeenprintedclearly.Inaword,thebookisn'tfittoreadatall.

Therefore,Istronglyrequirethatyousendmeanotherbookforachange,orthatyoucompensatefortheloss.

Thankyouforyourconsideration.

Yours，【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練1】假設(shè)你叫李華,在網(wǎng)上從一家外國(guó)公司買(mǎi)了一臺(tái)IBMXP1500筆記本電腦,但是到貨后發(fā)現(xiàn)有很多問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你按以下提示給該廠家的經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封投訴信。要點(diǎn)提示:1.未按時(shí)到貨,且沒(méi)有鼠標(biāo)和使用說(shuō)明書(shū)；2.和在網(wǎng)上定購(gòu)的型號(hào)及顏色不一致；3.請(qǐng)予以退貨并給予賠償。注意:語(yǔ)言流暢,語(yǔ)法正確；詞數(shù):120-150。參考詞匯:說(shuō)明書(shū)instructionmanual/bookletDearManager,_____________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaLiHua

【參考答案】DearManager,I’mwritingtomakeacomplaintaboutyourcompany’spoorservice.IorderedoneIBMlaptop—modelnumberXP1500—fromyourcompanyonAugust7th.IwastoldthatIwouldreceiveitwithin15days.However,Ireceivedthelaptopyesterday.Iwonderwhytheshipmenttook25days.I’msorrytotellyouthatIcouldn’tfindamouseoraninstructionbookletinthepackage.Inaddition,thelaptopIreceivedisnotmodelnumberXP1500,butmodelnumberXP1000.Furthermore,Iorderedawhiteone,butthisoneisblack.Sincetherearesomanyunsatisfactorythings,Iwouldliketoreturnthislaptop,getmymoneybackandreceivecompensationfortheinconvenience.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】--求職或應(yīng)聘信假設(shè)你叫李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的廣告寫(xiě)一封求職信。HelpWanted:FriendshipTravelServicelookingfortravelguides,agedbetween20-35,height:1.65(female),1.70(male),goodatspokenEnglish,andmandarin(普通話),withagoodknowledgeofChinesehistory,geographyandculture,esp.ThoseofBeijing;experiencehelpfulbutnotamust.【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】為了生存人們就要工作。為了能找到一份比較理想的工作，我們就要充分地展現(xiàn)自己。因此，個(gè)人基本情況介紹、性格特點(diǎn)、個(gè)人愛(ài)好等就成為了求職或應(yīng)聘信寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)。具體寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容可分為三個(gè)部分：（1）介紹自己是如何得到所應(yīng)聘職位的信息的，并簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)一下自己想應(yīng)聘該崗位的愿望；（2）介紹自己的個(gè)人信息，包括基本信息（如性別、年齡、學(xué)歷）、性格特點(diǎn)、興趣愛(ài)好等。具體寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容可以分為兩大類(lèi):A.尋友\求職類(lèi):a.簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己,用第一人稱(chēng).b.要求朋友的條件或符合某職位人的條件,較詳細(xì)描述.

B.應(yīng)聘類(lèi)a.根據(jù)對(duì)方信息,較詳細(xì)地介紹自己應(yīng)聘的條件;

b.根據(jù)對(duì)方信息,說(shuō)明自己應(yīng)聘的原因.（3）再次表達(dá)自己的誠(chéng)意，即如能被錄用，一定會(huì)做出自己的努力。常用句型：1.IlearntfromthenewspaperthatyouarewantinganaccountantandIwouldliketoapplyforthejob2.Iwouldappreciatetheopportunitytomeetwithyoutodiscussfurtherhowmyqualificationsmeettheneedsofyourorganization.3.Inreplytoyouradvertisementin…,Irespectfullyoffermyservicesforthesituation.4.Withreferencetoyouradvertisementin...fora/an...,Ioffermyselfforthepost.5.Pleaseconsidermeanapplicantforthepositionwhichyouadvertisedin6.Havingnoticedtheenclosedadvertisementin...,Iwishtoapplyforthepositionreferredto.Inanswertoyouradvertisementin...fora...,Iwishtotendermyservices.7.Youradvertisementfora...in...hasinterestedme.IfeelIcanfillthatposition,becauseIhavebeenforoverfiveyearsintheemployment./Ihavebeeninthebusinessforthelast...Years.8.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.9.Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.Ilookforwardtomeetingyouinthenearfuture.10.Yourpromptresponsewillbemuchappreciated.Ishouldbepleasedtoattendforaninterviewatyourconvenience,whenIcouldgiveyoufurtherdetailsconcerningmyself.與學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活話題有關(guān)的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)I’mdoingwellinmystudies,andreadytohelpothers.IntheschoolIliketotalkwithmyclassmates.I’mahard-workingstudent,whokeepstheschoolruleswell.Duringcollegeyears,heachievedexcellentresultsinstudy.Whileatcollege,hewasextremelysuccessfulinstudiesandtookanactivepartinanumberofsocialactivities.Ihaveaproblemthattroublesmeallthetime.Idon’tknowhowtocommunicatewithothers.I’mapersonoffewwords.What’smore,Ilosemytempersometimes.10.Heis,however,ratherweakinspeakingEnglish,andmustworkhardtoimprovehimselfinthisrespect.【參考答案】DearSir/MadamI'velearnedfromanadvertisementthatyourcompanyisinneedofguides.IfeelIamforforthejob.Iwanttoapplyforthisposition.Iama21-year-oldboy/girl,1.70inheight.AsagraduatefromBeijingTravelSchool,IspeaknotonlymandarinbutalsoexcellentEnglish.InterestedinChinesehistory,geographyandculture,Ihavereadalotaboutthen,especiallythoseaboutBeijing.SoIknowherplacesofinterestverywell.Besides,Iworkedparttimeasaguideforoneyearwhenatschool.Giventhejob,I'msuretomakesgoodguide.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,Lihua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練1】假設(shè)你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到一個(gè)叫RobertBrown的征友帖子。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封Email表達(dá)自己想成為他必有的愿望。內(nèi)包括下面幾點(diǎn)：你的基本信息：19歲，讀高三，畢業(yè)后想成為醫(yī)生。性格愛(ài)好：音樂(lè)、體育3.表達(dá)想成為筆友的愿望。注意：1.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右?！緟⒖即鸢浮緿earIsawyourinformationandIwouldbeveryhappytobeyourpal.Nowpleaseallowmetointroducemyselftoyou.I’maChineseboyofnineteen,studyinginsenior3andwillgraduatefromthemiddleschoolinlessthanayear.Iwantverymuchtobeadoctorinthefuture.Iamanoutgoingboywholovessportsandmusic.IamontheschoolbasketballteamandIhavewonseveralprozesinsingingcontestsinmyschool.IwonderifIcanknowaboutyourlifeandstudyinAmerica.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Withbestwishes.Yourstruly,LiHua【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練2】假設(shè)你叫李華，正在英國(guó)讀書(shū)，周末你想游覽倫敦，向找個(gè)同學(xué)給自己當(dāng)導(dǎo)游，請(qǐng)你在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖尋找陪游。詞數(shù)：120左右。

【參考答案】Hello,everyone!I'mwritingtoaskforhelp.

I'mLiHua,anoverseasstudentstudyinginEngland.I'mfondoftravelling,soI'mplanningtospendthisweekendvisitingsomeplacesofinterestinLondon.Inordertoknowmoreaboutthefamouscity,Iwouldliketolookforatravelpartner.IthinkitisagoodopportunityformetoimprovemyEnglish,makemorefriends,andenrichmylifeduringtheweekend.

Ifyouareaboy\girlsharingtheinterestwithme,andfamiliawiththearea,pleaseemailmeatlihua@,Besides,itwouldbebetterforhim/hertospeakgoodEnglishandbeinagoodcondition.

Bytheway,travelexpenseshouldgodutch.

【強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練3】假設(shè)你在國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)，自己租房子太貴，想求合租，請(qǐng)你介紹自己及房子的情況，寫(xiě)一幅求合租廣告?！緟⒖即鸢浮?/p>

Hello,everyone!I'mwritingtoaskforhelp.

I'mastudentfromChina,studinginOxfordUniversityandliveinarentedflat.TheflatsituatesinabuildingonVictoryStreet,whichisnotfarfromtheuniversity.Actually,it'sonlytwostopsaway.Inaddition,itcovers30squaremeters,withabedroom,abathroomandakitchen,eachofwhichiswellfurnished.Astherent,500poundspermonth,istooexpensiveformetobear,I'dliketolookforaroommatewhocansharetherentwithme.

Asaboyof19,Iamoutgoing,andeasytogetalongwith.Ialsolikemeetingpeopleandtalkingwiththem.Moreover,Ihavetheexperienceofworkingwithothers.IhopeIcanmakeafriendwithanyonewhoisinterestedandhavemuchincommonwithme.I'dappreciateitverymuchifyouemailmelihua@假如你是李華，是你校愛(ài)心俱樂(lè)部（theLovingHeartClub）的成員。最近，你校學(xué)生會(huì)擬招聘五名英語(yǔ)志愿者教師，你對(duì)此很感興趣?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，向?qū)W生會(huì)申請(qǐng)這份工作。1.寫(xiě)信目的；2.自我簡(jiǎn)介；3.你的競(jìng)聘優(yōu)勢(shì)；4.你對(duì)這份工作的認(rèn)識(shí)。注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名等信息；2.詞數(shù)：100左右（書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DeartheStudents’Union,__________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaDeartheStudents’Union,IhavelearntthatyouneedfivevolunteerEnglishteachers.I’dliketobeoneofthem,soI’mwritingtoapplyforthejob.MynameisLiHua,amemberoftheLovingHeartClubinourschool,andIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.IthinkI’mfitforthejobwell,becauseIhaveworkedasanEnglishtutorbefore,whichwillhelpmedothejobbetter.AsfarasI’mconcerned,beingavolunteerteacherishelpfultoimprovemyunderstandingoftheworld.Besides,byhelpingothers,Icanmakeasmallcontributiontosociety.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldpossiblyconsidermyapplication.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】致辭美國(guó)喬治中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)喬治.希爾一行到你?？疾煊⒄Z(yǔ)教學(xué)情況，在你們班聽(tīng)課。請(qǐng)你事先做好準(zhǔn)備，代表全班致歡迎詞。要點(diǎn)如下：歡迎喬治.希爾一行到到來(lái)。接單介紹英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況（全班同學(xué)讀英語(yǔ)很感興趣，大多數(shù)努力學(xué)習(xí)，成績(jī)較好；但部分學(xué)生困難大）（3）請(qǐng)希爾先生對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)提出建議（4）祝考察成功。注意：1.可以增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫。2.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右?！緦?xiě)作指導(dǎo)】致辭是在正式場(chǎng)合接待人時(shí)常用的一種文體，它包括歡迎詞、答謝詞、歡送詞、告別詞等。在正式的接待場(chǎng)合，主人一般總要說(shuō)幾句熱情友好的話，表示歡迎，這就是歡迎詞。這個(gè)場(chǎng)合客人說(shuō)的話就是答謝詞。當(dāng)客人逗留了一段時(shí)間離別時(shí)，主人和客人互相致辭，表示依依不舍之情，這時(shí)主人的話叫歡送詞，客人的話稱(chēng)為告別詞。致辭的寫(xiě)作并無(wú)固定的模式，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要做到下面幾點(diǎn)即可首先要注意稱(chēng)呼語(yǔ)。一般書(shū)面表達(dá)設(shè)題時(shí)提示中會(huì)給出。身份交代必須要清楚。歡迎詞必須交代清楚歡迎誰(shuí)，客人的主要身份，同時(shí)把客人介紹給大家。歡送詞則要說(shuō)清歡送哪一位，客人什么時(shí)候離開(kāi)，客人在逗留期間進(jìn)行了那些活動(dòng)等。英語(yǔ)致辭常用表達(dá)法：1.Firstofall,allowme,onbehalfofallthemembersofourschool,toexpressourheart-feltthankstoyouforyourkindhelp.2.Ihavethehonourtomakeaspeechtowelcometherespected3.WefeelveryhonourabletohaveachancetogettogetherwithProfessorSmith4.Allowmetoextendawarmwelcomeandcordialgreetingstoourdistinguishedguest.5.I'mgreatlyprivilagedtohavehadachancetovisityourwonderfulconutryandmeetwithsomanyfriends.6.I’mglad/happy/delightedtohavethepleasureofmeetingyou7.Wearegladtohaveachancetogettogetherwith…

8.ItiswithgreatpleasurethatIextendawarmwelcometosb.

9.Let’sgiveourwarmwelcometo…

10.Thankyouforyouracceptingourinvitationtocometo…

11.Nowletusasksb.tospeaktous.

12.Iavailmyselfofthisopportunitytoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouagain.13.Maythefriendshipbetween…befurtherdeveloped!

14.Ihopeyouwillhaveaveryenjoyablestay.

【參考答案】RespectedMrHill，Allowme,firstofall,onbehalfofmyclassmates,toextendawarmwelcometoallofyou.Itgivesusagreatpleasuretohaveyouinourschoolforabriefvisit.YouwillbegladtoseehowwellweChineseteachersandstudentsaregettingonwithourEnglishstudy.AllmyclassmatesandIaremuchinterestedinEnglish.Weth