2023年10月浙南聯(lián)盟應(yīng)用文評(píng)析原題目呈現(xiàn)：審題：議論文文體/體裁全校學(xué)生寫(xiě)作對(duì)象寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)1.描述現(xiàn)狀:所用時(shí)態(tài)thepresenttense寫(xiě)征文投稿需要注意什么？①寫(xiě)作的姿態(tài)。投稿類(lèi)文章需要客觀(guān)、辯證、審慎的態(tài)度，描述現(xiàn)象要真實(shí)可信，表達(dá)觀(guān)點(diǎn)要理性有邏輯，行文整體文風(fēng)要正式得體。②寫(xiě)作的格式。切勿寫(xiě)成給英文報(bào)的信件，開(kāi)篇宜切入正題，中段分析現(xiàn)象提出個(gè)人看法，最后呼吁，遵循“發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題——分析問(wèn)題——解決問(wèn)題”的邏輯框架建構(gòu)起全文脈絡(luò)。③寫(xiě)作的語(yǔ)氣。寫(xiě)此類(lèi)投稿類(lèi)文章，不可一味指責(zé)，而是因?yàn)橥高^(guò)現(xiàn)象看本質(zhì)，用一種合理的方法對(duì)待，語(yǔ)氣不可純粹批判，而是要滲透批判性思維。描述現(xiàn)狀可以從什么角度入手？核心句是什么？現(xiàn)狀的描述其實(shí)就藏在題干中，即“目前學(xué)生們不重視英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)”，表達(dá)方式可以是多元的，核心意思不可變更，也可以再寫(xiě)一句作補(bǔ)充或進(jìn)一步闡釋?zhuān)邕@種“不重視”體現(xiàn)在具體什么方面等。謀篇布局：Para.1描述現(xiàn)狀目前學(xué)生們不重視英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)Currently,moststudentsattachlittleimportancetooralEnglishasitisexcludedfromexams.Para2:論述觀(guān)點(diǎn)觀(guān)點(diǎn):英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)很重要ThereisnodoubtthatoralEnglishplaysanimportantroleinlife.ItiscrucialtorecognizethesignificanceoforalEnglishskills.理由:23條AgoodknowledgeoforalEnglishmakesitpossibletofluentlymunicatewithforeignersandfullyappreciateEnglishfilms.Aspartoflanguagepetence,oralEnglishhasgraduallybeenincludedintheentranceinterviewsectionbymoreandmorekeyuniversities.ProficiencyinspokenEnglishcontributestoeffectivemunicationwithforeigners.4.Effectivemunicationskillsempowerstudentstoexpressthemselveswithconfidenceandengageinglobalconversations.5.AgoodmandoforalEnglishopensdoorstobetterjobopportunitiesandglobalconnectivity.Para.3表達(dá)祝愿1.Inconclusion,revivingoralEnglishwithstudentsisessentialfortheirpersonalandprofessionaldevelopment.IdohopethateveryonecanmunicateeffectivelyandfluentlyinEnglish.2.IhopeeverystudentcanbeawareoftheimportanceoforalEnglishandgainbetteroralEnglishskills.PossibleversionCurrently,moststudentsattachlittleimportancetooralEnglishexcludedfromexams.Frommyperspective,oralEnglishisofgreatsignificance.TobeginficiencyinspokenEnglishcontributestoeffectivemunicationwithforeigners.Besides,agoodmandoforalEnglishempowersstudentstoexpressthemselveswithconfidenceinconversations.Also,improvingoralEnglishopensdoorstobetterjobopportunities.Inconclusion,revivingoralEnglishwithstudentsisessentialfortheirpersonalandprofessionaldevelopment.IdohopethateveryonecanmunicateeffectivelyandfluentlyinEnglish.鞏固練習(xí)一．句子填空：1.

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oralEnglishmakesitpossibletofluentlymunicate

withforeignersandfullyappreciateEnglishfilms.

2.

__________________________(作為語(yǔ)言能力的一部分),oralEnglishhasgraduallybeenincludedintheentranceinterviewsectionbymoreandmorekeyuniversities.3.

___________________________(精通口語(yǔ)）

contributestoeffectivemunicationwithforeigners.4.

____________________________(有效的交流技能)

empowerstudentstoexpressthemselveswith

confidenceandengageinglobalconversations.5.

_____________________________(掌握)

opensdoorstobetterjobopportunitiesandglobalconnectivity.二．語(yǔ)篇填空：Currently,moststudents

___________________(不重視)

oralEnglishasitisexcludedfromexams.

Frommyperspective,oralEnglishis

_________________(很重要）.Tobeginwith,proficiencyinspokenEnglish

________________(促進(jìn))

effectivemunicationwithforeigners.Besides,agoodmandoforalEnglish

_______________(賦予力量)

studentstoexpressthemselveswithconfidenceinconversations.Also,improvingoralEnglish__________________(為....打開(kāi)大門(mén))

betterjobopportunities.

Inconclusion,revivingoralEngl