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原題重現(xiàn):閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Myhearingaidwasaboxthatwastiedtomyshouldersandhungfrommyneck.IcarrieditbecausewhenIwasyoung,Ibecamedeaf.Afterconsulting(協(xié)商)withalotofeducationalexperts,doctors,andparentsofotherdeafchildren,myparentsdecidedtosendmetoaschoolwhereallofmyclassmatesandteacherswouldhavenormalhearing,insteadofsendingmetoaprivateschoolforthedeaf.SoIwastheonlydeafchildatBlueCreekElementarySchool.IexperiencedgreatanxietythroughoutElementarySchoolbecause,inadditiontotheproblemsof“fittingin”withtheotherstudents,Ialsostruggledwithmostofmyschoolwork.IseemedtospendeverysparemomentdoinghomeworkjustsoIcouldkeepup.Icouldfeelthatmyparentsandteachersweredeeplydisappointedinmebecauseofmyacademicstruggles.Theteachersdidn'tknowwhattodowithmenordidtheyshowmuchinterestinanyofmypoorperformances.Myhearingdisabilityrequiredmetoaskeveryonefromtimetotime,“Whatdidheorshesay?”Iworriedthateveryonewouldsoongrowtiredofrepeatingeverythingbacktome.Whenthekidsmadefunofme,Ihadnowaybuttoacceptit.IwassurethatIwasabadperson;myselfesteem(自尊心)wasquitelow.Isawmyselfasanuglykidwearingaboxaroundhisneckwhowasn'tevensmartenoughtokeepupwiththerestoftheotherkids.Mrs.Jordan,my5thgradeteacher,changedallofthatwithasimpletwowordphrase.Onemorning,sheaskedtheclassaquestion.Ireadherlips(嘴唇)frommyfrontrowseatandimmediatelyraisedmyhand.Icouldn'tbelieveit—foronceIknewtheanswer.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。But,whenshecalledonme,Iwasafraid.Forthefirsttimeinmyyounglife,Iwasastarinmyclass.Mainideaofthetext:Thecontinuationtextbelongstothecategoryofpersonalgrowth,andthemainideaisthatassomeonewithhearingimpairment,Iattendedaregularschool.Apartfromtheinconvenienceoflife,Isufferedmoredifficultiesinmystudiesthananormalchildclassmatesmockedme,teachersignoredme,parentsdisappointed,untilImetMrsJordan,theproblemhasonlybroughtaboutaturningpoint.Textanalysis:Thefirstparagraphdescribesthatmyhearingimpairmentbeganinchildhood,butmyparentsstillinsistedonsendingmetoanordinaryschool.Myhearingaidwasaboxthatwastiedtomyshouldersandhungfrommyneck;Classmatesandteacherswouldhavenormalhearing,nowofsendingmetoaprivateschoolforthedead.Thisparagraphistheopeningofthestory,layingthegroundworkfortheemergenceofcontradictionsinthefollowingtext.ThesecondparagraphemphasizesthatalthoughIworkedhard,mylisteningproblemsstillledtoacademicfailure,myparentsweredisappointed,andmyteacherwashelpless.Theproblemsof"fittingin"withtheotherstudents,Ialsostruggledwithmostofmyschoolwork;SpendeverysparemomentdoinghomeworkjustsoIcouldkeepup,myparentsandteachersweredeeplydisappointedinme;Theteachersdidn'tknowwhattodowithmenordidtheyshowmultipleinterestsinanyofmypoorperformance.Thisparagraphisaboutthedevelopmentofthestory(buildup),whichdrivesthedirectionofthestory.Thethirdparagraphdescribeshowmyhearingimpairmentwasridiculedbymyclassmates,myselfesteemwasseverelyaffected,andmyselfevaluationwasextremelylow.Everyonewouldhavegrowntiredofrepeatingeverythingbacktome,thekidsmadefunofme,Ihadnowaybuttoacceptit;Iwasabadperson,myselfesteemwasquitelow,wasnotevensmartenoughtokeepupwiththerestoftheotherkids.Thisparagraphisstillthebuilduppartofthestory.Inthetext,theaccumulationofemotionshasmademeunbearable,reachingthebrinkofcollapse.Thefourthparagraphistheturningpointandclimaxofthestory.WithaquestionfromMrs.Jordan,sheraisedherhandforthefirsttime;Asimpleevaluationhelpstoregainconfidence.Continuationparagraphanalysis:Thefirstsentenceofthefirstparagraphis"But,whenshecalledonme,Iwasafraid",indicatingthatatthismoment,Iamafraidanddarenotanswer;binedwiththefourthparagraph,IreadherlipsfrommyfrontrowseatandimmediatelyraisedmyhandIcouldnotbelieveitforonceIknowtheanswer.Iimmediatelyraisedmyhand,butthelongterminferiorityplexcausedfearinmyheart;Basedontheprincipleofcontextualcoherenceincontinuationwriting,theendofthefirstparagraphmustbeconnectedtothebeginningofthesecondparagraph.Therefore,accordingtothefirstsentenceofthesecondparagraph,"Forthefirsttimeinmyyounglife,Iwasastarinmyclass,"itcanbeseenthatIovercamepsychologicalbarriers,answeredthequestioncorrectly,andreceivedpraisefromtheteacherandrecognitionfrommyclassmates.So,thecontentdescribedinthefirstparagraphshouldbe:myfear(manifestedthroughheartbeat,sweatingpalms,tremblinglegs,etc.,accordingtotheprincipleofshow),myclassmatesimpatientlywaiting,showingdisdain,andfinallyturningintosurprise,approval,andapplause,aswellastheteacher'ssmileandencouragement.Attention:ThisparagraphhasakeypointthatconnectswiththefourthparagraphMrsJordan'ssimpletwowordphraserequiresakickbacktotheoriginaltext.Attheendofthisparagraph,itmusthavebeentheteacher'spraisethatearnedmetheapprovalandapplauseofeveryone,whichsparkedthefollowingdiscussion.Thefirstsentenceofthesecondparagraphis"Forthefirsttimeinmyyounglife,Iwasastarinmyclass."Thisparagraphcandescribemypsychologicalactivityatthattimehappybutsomewhatawkwardorshy,butthismomentbeesaturningpointinmylife.Next,youcanwriteaboutyourselfslowlyregainingconfidencefromnowon,inMrsJordanraisedhishandmoreandmoretimesinclass,andalsohadmoresmiles.Myclassmatesbegantoacceptme,andmystudiesimproved.Thesublimationpartcanbegratitudetotheteacher,neverbeingstingyinpraisingothersinlife,orpayingattentiontotheweakinlife.參考范文:But,whenshecalledonme,Iwasafraid.
My
head
was
sweating
and
my
heart
was
pounding.
Everyone
in
the
classroom
was
waiting,
silent,while
I
froze
on
my
seat,
still
and
trembling.
A
moment
later,
some
students
began
to
whisper
and
even
shrugged,
showing
impatience
and
disrespect.
However,
Mrs.
Jordan
made
a
stop
sign
and
turned
to
me.
She
wore
a
sweet
smile
on
her
face,
nodding
and
signaling
me
to
reply.
With
her
encouragement,
I
stood
up
slowly
and
offered
my
answer.
“Good
job,”
said
Mrs.
Jordan
with
amazement
and
delight.
My
classmates
were
shocked
at
the
very
beginning
and
then
burst
into
thundering
applause.
(98
words)Forthefirsttimeinmyyounglife,Iwasastarinmyclass.
Hearingsuchtouchingpraiseandwarmapplause,Istoodthere,embarrassedbutexcited.Icouldn’tfindasuitablewordtodescribemyfeelingsthereandthen,butIdidfeeltearsstreamingdownmyface.Allthoseselfdoubtmomentsdisappearedpletelyatthattime.Thatwasaturningpointofmylife.Igraduallycheeredmyselfup,regainedmyconfidenceandneverletmyweaknesspreventedmetrying.SogratefulwasItoMrs.JordanthateventodayIcouldneverforgethersimpletwowordphraseandinspiringsmile,whichmeantalottome.(95words)默寫(xiě)版:But,whenshecalledonme,Iwasafraid.
My
head
was
sweating
and
my
heart
was
pounding.___________________________________________________________________________教室里的每個(gè)人都在等著,一聲不響,而我則僵住了,一動(dòng)不動(dòng),渾身抖.
A
moment
later,
some
students
began
to
whisper
and
even
shrugged,______________________________________________表現(xiàn)出不耐煩和厭惡.
However,
Mrs.
Jordan
made
a
stop
sign
and
turned
to
me._____________________________________
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