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使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WewerevisitingourdaughterwhenweadoptedourBostonterrier,Tad.Anadorablepuppy,justthreemonthsold,hebecamethefamily’scenterofattention.Eachmorning,assoonasheheardmydaughterKaylamovingarounddownstairs,hehadtobetakendownforplaytimebeforesheleftforwork.Whenshecamehomefromwork,wehadhimwaitingforheratthedoor.
當(dāng)我們收養(yǎng)我們的波士頓梗Tad時(shí),我們正在探望我們的女兒。他是一只可愛(ài)的小狗,才三個(gè)月大,就成了家里的焦點(diǎn)。每天早上,他一聽(tīng)到我女兒凱拉在樓下走動(dòng),就不得不在她去上班之前把他帶下來(lái)玩。當(dāng)她下班回家時(shí),我們讓他在門(mén)口等她。Afterthreeweeksweleftforhome.Onthedrive,weletTadtalktoKaylaonthephoneeachnight.Oncehome,everytimewecalledKaylaorshecalledus,wealwaysputTadon.Hescratchedthephoneandlistenedintentlyandtriedtolookintothephonetoseeher.OneSaturday,Kaylacalledwhilewewereout.Sheleftamessage.TadwasstandingbesidemewhenIpressedthebuttontolistentothemessage.Helistenedtohertalkingandcockedhishead,grinningatme.Iplayeditagainforhim.
三個(gè)星期后我們回家了。在路上,我們讓Tad每天晚上和Kayla通電話?;丶液?,每次我們給凱拉或她打電話,我們都會(huì)接通塔德的電話。他抓著手機(jī),聚精會(huì)神地聽(tīng)著,并試圖透過(guò)手機(jī)看她。一個(gè)星期六,我們外出時(shí),凱拉打來(lái)電話。她留言了。當(dāng)我按下按鈕聽(tīng)留言時(shí),泰德正站在我旁邊。他聽(tīng)著她說(shuō)話,低著頭,對(duì)我咧嘴笑著。我又給他演奏了一遍。Afewdayslater,IwastakingmyshowerwhenIheardtheansweringmachinecomeonandKaylaleaveamessage.IthoughtitwasstrangewhenIheardhermessagerepeatandthemachineannounce,“Endofmessages.”AfewsecondslaterKayla’smessagebeganyetagain.
幾天后,我正在洗澡,突然聽(tīng)到答錄機(jī)響了,凱拉留言了。當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到她的消息重復(fù),機(jī)器宣布“消息結(jié)束”時(shí),我覺(jué)得很奇怪幾秒鐘后,凱拉的信息又開(kāi)始了。Wonderingwhatwasgoingon,Iclimbedoutoftheshower,wrappedatowelaroundmyselfandheadedintothelivingroom.TherestoodTad,listeningtotheansweringmachine.Istoppedandwatched.Whenthemessagefinished,hestoodupwithhisfeetagainsttheedgeofthelowtable,reachedoverwithonepaw(爪子)andslapped(拍打)theansweringmachine.Themessagecameonagain.Hedroppedbackonthefloorandlistenedhappily.Itoldhim“no,”anddistracted(使分心)himfromtheansweringmachinewhileIerased(抹去)themessage.
想知道發(fā)生了什么,我爬出淋浴間,用毛巾裹住自己,走進(jìn)客廳。泰德站在那里,聽(tīng)著答錄機(jī)的聲音。我停下來(lái)看著。消息講完后,他站了起來(lái),雙腳靠在低桌子的邊緣,用一只爪子伸過(guò)去(爪子)然后扇了一巴掌(拍打)答錄機(jī)。消息再次出現(xiàn)。他倒在地板上,愉快地聽(tīng)著。我告訴他“不”,然后分心了(使分心)當(dāng)我把他從答錄機(jī)上抹去的時(shí)候(抹去)消息。注意:1.
續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)150
詞左右;2.
請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Afewdayslater,IwasinthekitchenwhenIheard,“Youhavenomessages.”KnowingwhatTadwanted,IcalledKaylathatnightandaskedhertoleavehimamessage.故事大意:讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)主題是一只小狗猛按電話答錄機(jī)來(lái)聽(tīng)主人的聲音。算是一則生活小趣事,也不需要特意升華。所以寫(xiě)的時(shí)候就偏重小狗聽(tīng)到主人聲音前后的動(dòng)作形態(tài)對(duì)比來(lái)突出小狗的愛(ài)。狗是無(wú)言又忠誠(chéng)的伴侶,對(duì)待主人有執(zhí)著的愛(ài),在寫(xiě)的時(shí)候注意這個(gè)感覺(jué)。續(xù)寫(xiě)情節(jié)發(fā)展-我完全弄糊涂了,想弄清楚到底發(fā)生了什么。是泰德拍了拍答錄機(jī)!我意識(shí)到塔德很想聽(tīng)到凱拉說(shuō)話。-聽(tīng)到發(fā)生的事情后,凱拉同意給塔德一個(gè)驚喜。第二天早上,當(dāng)Tad在外面散步回家時(shí),他跑進(jìn)客廳,再次按下了答錄機(jī)的按鈕。每當(dāng)他想聽(tīng)凱拉的聲音時(shí),他都可以聽(tīng),我們都渴望與我們心愛(ài)的凱拉再次團(tuán)聚。官方范文,
AfewdayslaterIwasinthekitchenwhenIheard,“Youhavenomessages.”
Igotutterlyconfusedandheadedforthelivingroomtofigureoutwhatwasexactlygoingon.ItwasTadwhoslappedtheansweringmachine!Hestoodwithhisfeetontheedgeofthetable,staringatthemachineexpectantly.However,afterrepeatingtheprocessforseveraltimes,Tadwasrunningoutofpatiencewithhispawshittingthebuttonreallyhard.ThenitdawnedonmethatTadwaseagertohearKaylatalking.
KnowingwhatTadwanted,IcalledKaylathatnightandaskedhertoleavehimamessage.
Afterhearingwhathadhappened,KaylaagreedtogiveTadasurprise.Thenextmorning,whenTadreturnedhomeafterawalkoutside,heranintothelivingroomandpressedthebuttonoftheansweringmachineagain.Hisfacelitupwithexcitementasheclearlyheardthesweetandfamiliarvoice:“Idomissyou,Tad.”Thiswasindeedaspecialmessageforhim.HecouldlistentoitwheneverhewantedtohearKayla’svoiceandwebothlongedforthenextreunionwithourbelovedKayla.參考范文一,
Afewdayslater,IwasinthekitchenwhenIheard,“Youhavenomessages.”
“Tadisplayingwiththeansweringmachineagain!”Iletoutasighanddecidedtoignoreit.However,themessagekeptrepeatingitself,accompaniedbydrawn-outdog’swhining,whichnowbotheredme.IsteppedoutofthekitchenhurriedlyandcaughtTadstandingupandslappingtheansweringmachinewithitspaw,itseyessullenanditstaildrooping.
“No,”Itriedtostophimandgethimoutthescene,buthewasjustlikerootedtothegroundand
barkedsadlyandmelancholy.Suddenly,itoccurredtomethathemaybejustmissKaylaandwantedtohearhervoice.
KnowingwhatTadwanted,IcalledKaylathatnightandaskedhertoleavehimamessage.
Kaylafirstlylaughedheartilyatthestorybutsoonquieteddownandmuttered,“Imisshim,too.”Afterhangingthephone,Kaylaleftamessageinherwarmestandhappiesttone.WhenIbroughtTadinthelivingroomandpressedthebutton,thefamiliarvoicesetTadsoexcitedthathejumpedhighintheairanddashedupanddown,itstailwaggingviolently.Well,Iwatchedbythesight,withtearswellingupinmyeyesunconsciously.HejustusedhiswaytoexpresshislongingforKayla.Hewasmorethanafurycompanion,hewasanadditionalfamilymemberwhoseloveforuswasunspokenyetunfathomable.
參考范文二,
Afewdayslater,IwasinthekitchenwhenIheard,"Youhavenomessages."
Intriguedbythesuddensound,IrushedoutofthekitchenandfoundTadpressingtheansweringmachinebuttonwithhispaw.Noticingme,heturnedaroundandgazedatmesadly.Itsearsdroppedandthetail,whichoncewaggedallthetime,restedlow.Icouldn’thelpfeelingsorryforhimandcroucheddown,tryingtocomfortit.However,hedodgedfromandhandandjumpedattheansweringmachineagain.
Suddenly,itoccurredtomethatTadhadgrownaccustomedtotheroutineoflisteningtoKayla'smessages,andtheabsenceofhervoicelefthimanxious.
KnowingwhatTadwanted,
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