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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。JeffandIhadmany.conversationsduringtheyear,butIwillalwaysrememberthetimehetoldmeabouthisfamily.Hisfather,asuccessfulphysician,wascoldandstrictinJeff'swords.HisfatherhadevenpavedthewayforJefftoattendthesamecollegefromwhichhehadgraduated.Jeffwastwentysevenandasuccessfulbusinessplanneratapanywithoutadegree.Hispassionwasskiing.Whenhegraduatedfromhighschool,hedecidedtodeclinehisfather'sofferand,instead,toworkwithaskipatrol(滑雪巡邏隊).Withpaininhiseyes,Jefftoldmehestillrememberedthedaywhenhetoldhisfatherhewasgoingtogiveupcollegeandtakeajobataskiresort.HearingJeff'sdecision,hisfatherlookedoffintothedistance.ThencamethewordsthatstillechoedinJeff'smind:“Youlazykid.Nosonofmineisgoingtoworkwithaskipatrolanddoesnotattendcollege.Ishouldhaveknownyou'dneveramounttoanything!”Thetwohadnotspokensincethatconversation.Later,hewasbackintheareanearwherehegrewupandhecertainlydidnotwanthisfathertoknowhewasattendingcollege.Hewasdoingthisforhimself,notforhisfather.Hesaiditoverandoveragain.Jeff'ssisterhadalwaysremainedsupportiveofJeff'sdecisions.Shestayedincontactwiththeirfather,butJeffhadmadeherpromisethatshewouldnotshareanyinformationabouthislifewithhim.Thedaywhenthegraduationceremonycame,Iwalkedaroundtalkingtopeoplebeforeitstarted.Inoticedamanwithaconfusedexpression.“Excuseme,”hesaidashepolitelyapproachedme.“Whatishappeningheretoday?”“It'sgraduationday,"Ireplied,smiling.“Well,that'sodd,"hesaid,“mydaughteraskedmetomeetheratthisaddress."Hiseyessparkledandhesmiled.“Maybeshepletedherassociate'sdegreeandwantedtosurpriseme!”Ihelpedhimfindaseat.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr.Holstrom."Paragraph2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.官方范文

AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”

Thenameringinginmymind,Ifrozeonthespot.JeffHolstrom!Couldthisbethecold,sternfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhishomeagain?Curiosityanddoubtbubblingup,IturnedaroundtogetaglimpseofDr.Holstrom,attemptingtofindsomefacialresemblances.Beamingandscanning,Dr.Holstromseemedtobelookingforhisdaughter.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,invitingthemontothestageonebyonetoreceivetheirdiplomas.(特別注意第一段I和Dr.Holstrom之間,Dr.Holstrom和兒子,Dr.Holstrom和女兒之間的互動、懸念;提與不提都是講故事的技巧

Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy.Suddenly,alonefigurepoppedintohiseyes—Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeffspottedhiminthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.Dr.Holstrom,gazingatJeffthoughtfullyforafewseconds,openedhisarmsasiftoembracetheairaroundhim.Foramomenttimeseemedtostandstill.Jeffcamedown,smilingwithtearsineyes.“Myfatherishere,”hewhisperedtome,“IthinkI’mgoinghome.”默寫版:

AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”

_________________________________這個名字在我的腦海里回響,我當場僵住了.JeffHolstrom!Couldthisbethecold,sternfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhishomeagain?______________________________________好奇和懷疑涌上心頭,我轉(zhuǎn)過身去看了一眼霍爾斯特羅姆博士,試圖找到一些面部相似之處。__________________________________________________________霍爾斯特羅姆醫(yī)生滿面笑容,目光掃視著,似乎在尋找他的女兒.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,invitingthemontothestageonebyonetoreceivetheirdiplomas.(特別注意第一段I和Dr.Holstrom之間,Dr.Holstrom和兒子,Dr.Holstrom和女兒之間的互動、懸念;提與不提都是講故事的技巧

Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,radiantwithjoy._________________________________突然,一個孤獨的身影映入他的眼簾—Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeffspottedhiminthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet._____________________________________________________________霍爾斯特羅姆博士若有所思地盯著杰夫看了幾秒鐘,然后張開雙臂,仿佛要擁抱周圍的空氣.Foramomenttimeseemedtostandstill.Jeffcamedown,smilingwithtearsineyes.“Myfatherishere,”__________________________________他低聲對我說,“我想我要回家了.”參考范文一

AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr:Holstrom.”ThenamegavemeastartandIimmediatelyunderstoodthegoodintentionofJeff’ssister.However,itleftmeinthedilemmaaboutwhethertotellJeff.Butdeepdown,IknewJeffreallycaredabouthisfatherandwantedtogettherecognitionfromhisfather,soIbrokethenews.Hearingthat,Jeffgothotunderthecollar,“Howdarehe?HewassomeantomeandsaidIwasnothing.Ineverwanttoseehimagain.”Imellowedmyvoiceandtriedtoforthim,“soitisthebestchanceforyoutowalkbeforehimwithallyourgraceandhonors,showinghimthathecouldn’tbemorewrong.”Lostinthought,heagreedandwouldliketoteachhisfatheralesson.

Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Expectedly,Dr.Holstromwasfrozenonthespot,hiseyeswideopenandhislipsquivering.Pretendingnottonoticehim,Jeffraisedhisheadhighandproudlyreceivedthedegree.Offstage,hisfathercouldn’twaittolookforhimandapologizedemotionally,“son,I’mreallysorryforwhatIhavesaid.Asafather,Ijustunderstandtoowellwhatitmeanstohavenodiplomaofcollege.IhopeyoucanforgivemeandIreallymissyou.”Hearingthat,Jeffcouldnolongerconcealhisemotionandhuggedhisfathertightly.Theoncemisunderstandingandgrudgenowmeltedaway,replacedbyloveandbond.Istoodthere,smiling.Nothingwasmorepreciousthanthereunionoffamilymembers.

參考范文二

AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr.Holstrom."ThenamestruckachordandIcouldn’tbelievedmyears.ThismanwasJeff'sfatherwhohadplayedasignificantroleinJeff'spastandthesourceofhispain.Curiositydrovemestepforwardandtalkedwithhim.Tomysurprise,Dr.Holstromtalkedwithregrethowhehadlosthissonbecausehedidn’tsupporthischoiceandtheyhadn’ttalkedeversince.Thissituationjustmadehimwonderwhetherhewouldsharehisson’swellbeing,ifhehadsaidsomethingelse.Ijustsealedmylip,wonderinghowthisunexpectedreunionwouldunfold.

Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Dr.Holstromwasshockedtoseehissonreachingforthecollegedegree,asymbolofanachievementhehadlongbelievedwasunattainableforJeff.Withamixofprideandregret,smilingandcryingetchedinhisface,Dr.HolstromfinallyunderstoodhissonandrealizedwhatagreatachievementJeffhadmade.Astheylockedeyes,asilentpauseandthenanacknowledgmentpassedbetweenthem.Inthatsharedgaze,Isensedthepotentialforhealing,abridgebetweentheyearsofsilenceandmisunderstanding.Theapplauseburstout,cheeringforthenewstageintheirlives.ItwasalsoanewchapterforJeffandDr.Holstrom,whereunderstandingandreconciliationmightfinallyfindtheirplace.參考范文三AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname’sDr.Holstrom.”Thenameechoedinmymind,causingmetofreezeinmytracks.CouldthisbethesameDr.Holstrom,thesternandunyieldingfatherwhohadthreatenedtosevertieswithhissonifhedidn'tpursuehighereducation?Intriguedandfilledwithskepticism,IpivotedonmyheelstocatchaglimpseofDr.Holstrom,searchingforanypossibleresemblanceinhisface.Dr.Holstrom,witharadiantsmileilluminatinghisfeatures,appearedtobescanningthecrowd,seeminglyinsearchofhisdaughter.

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