讀后續(xù)寫四步走第一步：巧用情感句：讀后續(xù)寫一般富有故事性，所以基本要涉及各種情感。情緒類形容詞和名詞：快樂happy--happiness興奮excited--excitement羨慕envious-一envy寬慰relieved--relief惱怒annoyed-annoyance尷尬embarrassed--embarrassment失望disappointed一disappointment恐懼horrible-horror憂慮anxious--anxiety孤獨(dú)lonely--loneliness驚詫amazed--amazement高興delighted-delight滿意，satisfied--satisfaction渴望Eager---eagerness生氣angry---anger悲傷sad-sadness羞愧ashamed--shame絕望hopeless-hopelessness無聊bored-boredom困惑puzzled--puzzlement驚訝surprised→surprise遺憾regretful--regret萬(wàn)能結(jié)構(gòu)：sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒名詞+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.（某人感到一股強(qiáng)烈...在內(nèi)心升騰,奔涌）例:Hefeltagreatsenseofsorrowwellingupinhisheartandsurgingthroughhim.他感到強(qiáng)烈的悲傷涌入心頭。情感句積累：①Thesmileonhisfaceshonelikeadiamond笑容如寶石般閃閃發(fā)光<開心>②wildwithjoy欣喜若狂<喜悅>③Withtearsofguiltflowingdownhercheeks,.....流下內(nèi)疚的眼淚<內(nèi)疚>Withtearsofsorrowrollingdownhercheeks,......流下傷心的眼淚〈傷心〉④Hismouthdroppingopeninastonishment.他驚奇地張大嘴<驚訝>⑤Hisangerwaswithinhiseyes,burninglikeafire.憤怒在眼里像火一樣（憤怒）⑥Hisfacewentwhiteandafloodoffearwelledupinhisheart.<害怕>他臉色蒼白，一股恐懼涌上心頭⑦Theinitialsadnessgavewaytojoy最初的悲傷變成了喜悅<快樂>第二步：巧用對(duì)話：讀后續(xù)寫因?yàn)榫哂斜容^強(qiáng)的故事性，其中可穿插對(duì)話，寫對(duì)話時(shí)會(huì)出現(xiàn)“×××說”,這時(shí)要我可多用其他說法來代替“×××said”,使得對(duì)話情境，人物情緒更加豐滿。①表示“說”的有:(一般都是用過去式）said/uttered說shouted/screamed大叫repeated重復(fù)nodded點(diǎn)頭continued繼續(xù)說emphasized強(qiáng)調(diào)Answered/replied回答道explained解釋道begged乞求說whispered輕聲說murmured低語(yǔ)yelled大叫道②修飾“說”的副詞與短語(yǔ)sadly

傷心地bitterly

傷心地gloomily憂郁地

proudly

驕傲地politely

禮貌地

quietly

輕聲地;

溫和地softly

輕輕地;溫和地;柔和地gently

溫柔地;溫和地eagerly渴望地；熱切地vaguely心不在焉含糊地meekly

溫順地;逆來順受地ina

kind

voice

以親切的聲音ina

loud,firm

voice

以響亮、堅(jiān)定的聲音ina

sweet,musical

voice

以她甜美悅耳的嗓音ina

husky

voice

低沉沙啞地輕聲說話ina

comforting

voice

以安慰的聲音inamazement

吃驚地indesperation

絕望地寫作時(shí)將①和②結(jié)合起來寫例:"wecan'tgoout",sheemphasizedinafirmvoice.對(duì)話積累：①Jackclearedhisthroatandspokeinalow,politetone.Jack清了清嗓子,低聲有禮貌地說,②Thelittlegirlmurmuredsoftly,tryingtoexplainwhathappenedtohermother.小女孩輕聲低語(yǔ)，試著向媽媽解釋發(fā)生了什么。③Shewhisperedtoherfather,softlyandgently.她輕聲地對(duì)父親說…第三步：動(dòng)詞，形容詞，名詞等多個(gè)并列使用＜為避免語(yǔ)句單調(diào)，我們?cè)趯懽鞯臅r(shí)候可以并列使用一些詞匯,比如“漂亮的女孩”可以將“abeautifulgirl”加長(zhǎng)為“akindandbeautifulgirl”還可以用定語(yǔ)從句再次修飾女孩."akindandbeautifulgirlwhowearsglasses.積累：①表示“又…又…”:又累又餓→tiredandhungry又驚又怕→shockedandfrightened既失望又傷心→disappointedandsad例:Tiredandhungry,theydecidedtohavearest.②與其說....不如說(more....than)Moreupsetthanworried與其說擔(dān)心,不如說不安Moreproudthanhappy與其說高興,不如說自豪③多個(gè)動(dòng)詞并列：Hereachedoutahand,grabbedherbythearmanddraggedherback,他伸出一只手,抓住她的胳膊,把她拖回來Shegavemeacomfortingsmileandnoddedwhilelisteningwithpatience、她給了我一個(gè)安慰的微笑,一邊點(diǎn)頭,一邊耐心聽著第四步：萬(wàn)能結(jié)尾句<讀后續(xù)寫一般會(huì)涉及到相應(yīng)地主題,如“幫助他人”“變得自信”等,相應(yīng)的結(jié)尾開華就出來了＞萬(wàn)能結(jié)構(gòu):Thatexperiencewascarvedintomyheartandnothingwouldbeabletoeraseit那次經(jīng)歷深深刻在我的腦海中,什么都不能擦除它。①以哲理結(jié)尾:IbelieveGodisgladtohelpsomeonewhowantstohelphimself我相信自助者天助Lifeisfullofdilemmasandconflicts,butweshouldsmileandnevergiveup生活充滿矛盾與兩難,但我們不該放棄.Manyyearshas

gone

by,but

whenever

Ilookbacktothatday,

Iamstillgratefulforthelessoninforgivenessthatshetaughtme.許多年過去了，但每當(dāng)我回想起那一天，我仍然感激她教給我的寬恕。②以景結(jié)尾:Nomatterhowcoldthewinterwas,allthattheycouldfeelnowwasthesurpassingwarmth.不管冬天多冷,他們現(xiàn)在感受到的是溫暖Intheheavysnow,passionandloveburntastheyhuggedandsmiled.在大雪中，他們擁抱著，微笑著，激情和愛燃燒著。Thewindmurmuredinthetreesandthesunlightfloodedinthroughthewindow,warmingthewholeroom,asifthefreezingicewasallmelted.風(fēng)在樹間沙沙作響，陽(yáng)光透過窗戶照進(jìn)來，溫暖了整個(gè)房間，仿佛冰封的冰都融化了。③自然而然結(jié)尾:Manyyearslater,shestillrememberedthelessonthatshelearned許多年后,她仍然記得那一刻。Withtearsdroppingfromhiseyes,

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