讀后續(xù)寫試題原題第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料,

根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。EveryOctober,myneighborhoodhasaHalloweencostumecontest.AndeveryOctober,myneighborOllieandIracetotheannouncementboardintheparktofindoutthetheme.Oneyear,thethemewas“Dressupasyourfavoritebookcharacter.”Anotheryear,itwas“Besomethingscary.”Butthisyear,thethemewaskindof,well,themeless.“Becreative?”Isaid,readingtheannouncementboard.“That’snotreallyatheme,isit?”O(jiān)lliehoppedoffhisskateboardstogetacloserlook.“You’reright,”heagreed.“Ithinkmyfavoritethemeeverwas‘Superheroes’.IlovedmySuper-ForceFlyingEaglescostumesomuch,Ikeptthatthinghanginginmyclosetforyears!”“Myfavoritethemewas‘FarmAnimals’.”Igiggled.“RememberhowyouinsistedonbeingaStegosaurus(劍龍)?”“WhenIwasfive,dinosaursweremyworld.”O(jiān)llielaughed.“IwouldhavelovedtoseeaStegosaurusoutgrazingwiththecows.”“Nowthat’sthecreativespiritweneedforthischallenge!”Isaid.“Maybe,sincewedon’tknowexactlywhatwewanttobeyet,weshouldstartbychoosingsomecoolcostume-makingmaterials.”“I’vegotit!”O(jiān)lliesaid,scoopingupabunchoffallenleaves.“Really?”Isaid.“You’regoingtomakeanentirecostumeoutofleaves?”“Whynot?”hesaid,scoopingupsomemore.“They’retotallyfree,andIcanguarantee,noonewillbeatreeasgreatasme.”“Don’tyoumean,atreeasgreataswe?”Igrinned.“Um,first,thatgrammardoesn’tsoundright,”saidOllie.“Andsecond,noway!Thinkofyourowncreativeideas.”“Aw,comeon,”Isaid.“YoushouldbeflatteredthatIlikeyourideasomuch.Plus,Ijustthoughtoftheperfectwaytomakebranches.”Finally,OlliesaidOK.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答Weendedupfillingtwojumbobagswithdifferentkindsofleaves.__________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenthebigmomentcame._______________________________________________________________________試題分析1.主要人物:①Ollie:myneighbor②I2.視角：第一人稱3.主題：人與社會①競爭→合作②關(guān)鍵詞：creative4.故事背景：EveryOctober,myneighborhoodhasaHalloweencostumecontest.AndeveryOctober,myneighborOllieandIracetotheannouncementboardintheparktofindoutthetheme.5.前文故事梗概:每年萬圣節(jié)，當(dāng)?shù)囟加胁煌黝}的盛裝比賽，但今年卻沒主題，要求有“創(chuàng)意”就行。我跟鄰居小伙伴Ollie談?wù)撈鹆宋覀兊脑O(shè)想。Ollie決定用樹葉把自己裝扮成一棵樹，而我也很欣賞他的想法，想跟他一起參加，但Ollie拒絕了，說讓我要有自己的創(chuàng)意。不過，在我的極力溝通后，他也同意了。……6.故事線分析：競爭→合作→出彩7.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:

Weendedupfillingtwojumbobagswithdifferentkindsofleaves.①（與前一句銜接）感謝大自然的饋贈②（過渡）開始縫制樹葉衣服，試著裝扮自己并練習(xí)③（承上啟下）“行走的樹”基本完工第二段:

Thenthebigmomentcame.①（與前一句銜接）盛裝比賽的場面②（過渡）我們的表現(xiàn)③（收尾）參加活動后的感悟下水作文Weendedupfillingtwojumbobagswithdifferentkindsofleaves.Soamazingwasthenaturethatitofferedussuchmarvelousgifts!Inthissplendidworld,we’dgotenoughleavesfordifferentpartsofanentirecostume.BacktoOllie’shome,inthesmartboy’sworkshop,webegantochoosesuitableleavesforthemodelofatree.Threehourssawourcreativeworkcomeintobeing.Wetriedtheleafcostume,afterwhichItiedthewiresattachedwithleavesaroundsuitablepartsofhisbodytoshowvividimageofawalkingtree.Allover,wepracticedthecostumewalktilltooursatisfaction.(96words)Thenthebigmomentcame.Theneighborhoodparkwasdecoratedcolorfully,filledwithpeopledressedincostumesofanykinds:plants,animals,heroesinthefairytales,andcharactersofHalloween.Thecostumecontestcamesmoothly.Sooncameourturn.Westeppedontothestageandattractedpeople’sattentionimmediately,forthecreativedesignanditseco-friendlymaterials.Thefinalexcitingmomentconfirmedourefforts.ThisHalloweenwasnotonlyagrandtraditionalfestivalbutalsoacreativeandcollaborativeonetous.Itprovidedanewangelforustocreateasharedversionoffriendshipandlife.(94words)續(xù)寫題目TheveryfirstspeechIhadgivenchangedmylifemorethanIcouldeverhaveimagined.Iwasathird-graderwhenIchoseSusanB.Anthonytobethetopic.WhenIgottheassignment,IwenttothelibraryandbeganresearchingtheWomen'sFightfortheRighttoVote.Ineverreallythoughtaboutatimewhenwomenhadnovotingrightsandthattheiropinionsdidn'tcount.IlearnedthatSusanB.Anthonyledthefighttogivewomenasayinoursociety.Sheovercamealotofobstaclesinordertodothat.Aboutaweekaftergivingmyschoolspeech,mymomreadanewspaperarticleaboutastatuehonoringSusanB.Anthony.Theproblemwasthatfewpeopleevergottoseethestatue.Itwasdedicated(落成)in1921,butwithintwenty-fourhoursitwastakendowntothebasementandstoredwhereithadremainedfornearlyeightyyears.WhenIreadthatarticle,Iwasgettingangry!Thisstatuebelongedinaplaceofhonor.IfeltthatitshouldbeintheRotunda,alongwiththestatuesofAbrahamLincoln,MartinLutherKingJr.andGeorgeWashington.Thearticleaskedfordonationsbecauseitwouldtake$74,000tomovethethirteen-tonstatueoutofthebasement.Idecidedtowritealetterwithaself-addressedenvelopeaskingmyrelativesandfriendstosendaSusanB.Anthonycoinora$1billtometocontributetotheWomen'sVotingStatueCampaign.EverydayIrantothemailboxafterschool.Butamonthlater,mypiggybankwasstillfarfromfull.Soeverynight,aftermyhomework,Iwrotemorelettersatthekitchentable.Prettysoonthewholefamilygotinvolvedintheproject.Myseven-year-oldbrother,David,preparedstampsandenvelopes.MymotherandgrandmotherfoundaddressesforpeopleIwantedtocontactandmy

daddrovemearoundandgavemetonsofencouragementwhenIspoketobiggroups.Para1:

Ipassedaroundapiggybankfordonationsattheendofeachspeech.Para2:

IwasinterviewedonTV.Para1:Ipassedaroundapiggybankfordonationsattheendofeachspeech.Everyclinkingcoinchippedawayatmyfearandanxiety.Withtime,theinitialsupportfromlovedonesblossomedintoafull-fledgedmovement.Classmatesorganizedbakesalesandcarwashes,theirenthusiasmechoingmyown.Thelocalnewspaper,whichhadfirstignitedmypassionwiththeirarticle,ranaheartwarmingpiecefeaturingmeandmymission.Evensoci