高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分大招：三大步，八小步速成作文法【一三大步】三步的核心即：審題構思潤色審題：審人稱時態(tài)情節(jié)結構銜接構思：組織材料。圍繞全文思想展開情節(jié)構思，但要與所給各段落開頭語銜接合理。潤色：本著語言形象生動的原則，把構思句子進行修改，使得行文流暢，邏輯合理，語法正確，可以使用無靈主語句。避免句式單一，可以靈活使用高級句型，非謂語短語，獨立主格結構，從句。過渡詞如What’smore,notonly...butalso，personally等。最后，務必整潔地寫在答題卡上?！径诵〔健縧情緒：消極情緒l細節(jié)：進一步解釋描寫l轉折：個人的努力或借助外界l轉機：事情似乎有了轉機，并抱有希望，感到欣慰l失望：但是問題還是沒有解決或出現了新問題l新法：突然有了一個想法（一句話說明這個想法）l結局：過了一段時間；事情有了最后的轉折l總結：點題，呼應前文讀后續(xù)寫，大部分都是圍繞conflict，solution來運轉的。大部分文章都是這個模式：【三高考真題典例剖析】第1步情緒：情緒描寫第2步細節(jié)：進一步解釋描寫情細節(jié)描寫∶笑緒描寫∶笑smilebrightly;laugh;beam;light(sth)up;lightupwith;burstintolaughter;burstoutlaughing;wearabright/broadsmile;givesbasmile看到直升飛機，Jane高興地笑了起來。（1）Atthesightofthehelicopter，Janebeamedwithwildjoy.（2）Seeingthehelicopter，Janebeamedwithwildjoy.（3）Themomentshecaughtsightofthehelicopter，Jane'seyes/facelitupwithdelight.情緒描寫∶哭cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one'seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtears細節(jié)描寫∶哭（1）Hiseyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.他淚眼模糊。（2）Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的雙眼哭得通紅。（3）Heisclosedtotears.他快要哭了。（4）Tearsrolleddown/coursed/trickled/streamedhercheeks.眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來。情緒描寫∶害怕frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one'skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat細節(jié)描寫∶害怕我感到很害怕。(1)Ifeltveryfrightened/scared/panicked.(2)Iwasin(a)panic/wasfulloffear.(3)Istoodrootedtothespot,brimmingwithfear/filledwithfear.(4)Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(5)Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.(6)Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror;mypalmssweating.情緒描寫∶高興激動v.dance;jump/leapwithjoy;feelasurgeofhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;whistle;beovercomewithhappiness/delight/joy/excitement;(one'seyes)twinkle;(one'sheart)beat/poundwildlyadj.happy;delighted;overjoyed;excited;thrilled;wildwithjoy細節(jié)描寫∶高興激動當她知道考試結果時，她興奮極了。(1)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited/thrilled.(2)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.(3)Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,herheartwaspoundingwithwildjoy.(4))Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,awildexcitementtookholdofher.(5)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shefeltasurgeofexcitement.(6)Knowingtheresultofthetest,shewasovercomewithexcitement.情緒描寫∶傷心痛苦sad;bitter;sorrowful;feelasurgeofsadness;(sadness)surgewithinsb;one'sheartache;beovercomewithsadness細節(jié)描寫∶傷心痛苦她傷心不已。(1)Samfeltextremelysad.(2)Asadnesscameoverher.(3)Herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(4)Numbwithgrief,shebecamespeechless.(5)Feelingasurgeofsadness,shecouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.(6)Sadnesssurgingwithinher,sheburstintotears.情緒描寫∶生氣憤怒felt/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger/rage/fury;eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm/sayangrily;sthmakessbbloodboil;sthmakessbextremelyangry;claspone'sfists/teeth;speechless細節(jié)描寫∶生氣憤怒Sam感到非常生氣。(1)Samfeltveryangry.(2)Samstoodrootedtothespot,hiseyesblazingwithanger.(3)Samfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(4)Boilingwithrage,Samshookhisfistatme.(5)Filledwithfury,Samwasunabletoutterasingleword.第3步轉折：個人努力或借助外界（由“負”變“正”）鼓起勇氣;他人的鼓勵Pluckup/take/gatherone'scourage(todo….)毫不猶豫(1)sbcouldhardlywaittodosth(2)withoutasecondthought(3)withouteventhinking(4)withoutdelay(5)withouthesitation_典例分析_費爾法克斯先生深夜開車回家，途中又累又困，于是違章停車，想休息一下，結果被警察逮住，接下來怎么寫呢？Mr.Fairfaxloweredhisheadwithasigh,readyforaticket.(費爾法克斯先生嘆了口氣，低下頭，準備接受罰款。)Unexpectedly,thepoliceadded,“ButI’llfigureoutsomeplaceforyouhaveagoodrestthough.”(出乎意料的是，警方補充說，“不過我想給你找個地方好好休息?！?Wildwithjoy,Fairfaxacceptedhisofferwithouthesitation,followinghimtodrivehiscartosomewherewarm(費爾法克斯毫不猶豫地接受了他的提議，跟著他開車到溫暖的地方。)這個例子屬于“負”變“正”的模式。主人公由開始的“焦慮”，原以為會被警察罰款，最后變“感動”：警察幫他找到溫暖的地方。第4步轉機：事情似乎有了轉機，并抱有希望，感到欣慰似乎(1)Itwaslikedoingsth(2)Itseemedasif/that希望(1)hopingthat..(2)see/feelaglimmerofhope(3)tryinghardtodosth欣慰(1)…..breathedasighofrelief-sighedwithrelief松了—口氣(2)(awaveofrelieffloodedthrough/washedoversb(3)toone'srelief…使人欣慰的/放心的是……第5步失望：但是問題還未解決或出現了新問題（由“正”變“負”）不幸的是(1)butbadluckforsb,.….(2),butinvain(3),butwithoutsuccess(4),butnouse不知道做什么(1)sbdidsth,wonderingwhattodonext.(2)sbdidsth,notknowingwhattodonext.(3)sbdidsth,unsureofwhattodonext.(4)sbwasatalosswhattodo.(5)sbwasinadilemmaaboutwhethertodoornot._典例分析_感謝好心人：故事中，主人公的戒指被清潔工撿到后，物歸原主，想要感謝這位好心人。你怎么繼續(xù)描寫。Iexpressedmygratitudeandpromisedhimawell-preparedgiftforthanks.(我表達了感激之情，并答應給他一份精心準備的禮物，以表示感謝。)However,heimmediatelyrefusedandhungupthephone.(然而，他立刻拒絕了，掛斷了電話。)這個例子屬于“正”變“負”的模式。想要感謝清潔工，屬于“正向”，但是對方拒絕了，變成了“負向”。這個例子屬于“正”變“負”的模式。想要感謝清潔工，屬于“正向”，但是對方拒絕了，變成了“負向”。第6步想法：突然有了一個想法（一句話說明這個想法）某人想到/明白/有了主意（1）Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat+從句（2）Ithitsbthat+從句（3）Itstrucksbthat+從句（4）Itdawnedonsbthat+從句（5）（idea，thought..）occurred/cametosb（6）..came/flashedintoone'smind-...crowdedinone'smind（7）one'smindbegantorace第7步結局：過段時間，事情有了最后的轉折過了一段時間(1)notlongafterthat,..=shortlyafterwards,….beforelong,….=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore+從句=Ittooksometimebefore+從句(2)foraninstant/moment事情有了轉折(1)Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat+從句(2)Butonsecondthoughts,….(3)Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.第8步總結：點題，呼應前文主旨升華直到……才意識到（1）倒裝句∶Notuntil+時間狀語+didsbrealize/noticethat+從句（2）強調句∶Itwasonly+時間狀語+thatsbrealizedthat+從句還記得某人的話；還在某人的腦海中(1)One'swords(echoed/rangout)inone'sears.(2)One'swords/voice/songlingered/whisperedinone'smind/head.(3)One'sheadwasstillfullof..經歷與教訓(1)Whata/anvaluable/useful/great/painfullessonsbtaughtme/sblearnedfromsb!(2)Whata/anenjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuableexperiencesbhad!(3)Downdeepinone'sheat….在某人的內心深處第二部分“八步法”實戰(zhàn)應用：高考真題講解_典例分析1_故事梗概：父親帶兒子去西部荒野的一個朋友家體驗農場生活，見父親和叔叔騎馬，兒子也很想騎，于是親身上馬體驗。臨走叔叔告誡我們不要走偏了路（"Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!"）。一路上，風景優(yōu)美，讓人陶醉。閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.注意：（1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數應為l50左右；（2）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.八步法思路1.Awaveofnervousnesssweptovermeespeciallywhenthehorseranlikecrazy.（情緒）2.Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,aninnervoicetoldmethatIhadtocalmdown.（細節(jié)詳述）3.Thoughinapanic,Ipluckedmycouragetopullonthereigns.（轉折：個人努力）4.Luckily,itdidn’ttakelongbeforeIsettleddownthehorse.（轉機：成功，希望來了）5.Justatthatmoment,Dadranover,gaspingforair.（銜接句：新問題來了）6.“Boy,wearewayoffthetrack.”Hesaidseriously,alookofconcernspreadingacrosshisface.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.1.Hungryandfrustrated,wetriedtofindawayoutbutinvain.(努力，失敗)2.Itsuddenlydawnedonmewecouldrodedowntherivernearby.（突然有了辦法）3.Unexpectedly,theriverbroughtustothefamiliartrackatlast.（開始做）4.Afterwhatseemedtwohours,UnclePaul’sfarmhousedidcomeintosight.（成功了）5.Myfather’sfacebrightenedup,sodidmine.（感受）6.Uponourarrival,UnclePaulcouldn’twaittoaskedus,“Wherehaveyoubeen?Iamjustcalling911.”（幽默對話）7.“ToAlice’sWonderland”myfatheranswered,winkingatmewithabiggrin.8.Whatanunforgettableexperiencewehad!_典例分析2_故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子獨自離開，述路在樹林里，直升飛機來了幾次授救但沒有看見她。她感到很失望。閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._______________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._________________________________________________________________________第一段：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(但是沒有直升機來了，天又黑了。)讀后續(xù)寫續(xù)寫1.Awaveofterrorsweptoverher.一陣恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。1.情緒2.Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.她的心劇烈地跳動著，手心冒汗，一個內在的聲音告訴她，她必須找到一個