高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)父親的教誨：關(guān)于身邊的朋友1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasabout12,Ihadanenemy,agirlwholikedtopointoutmyshortcomings.Weekbyweek,littlebylittle,herlistgrew:Iwasverythin;Iwasn'tagoodstudent;Italkedtoomuch;Iwastooproud;Ididn'tliketohelpothers;Ididn'tfinishmyhomework;Ididn'tcareforanyoneandsoon.ItriedtohearalltheseaslongasIcould.Atlast,Ibecameveryangry.AndIwastooupsetanddidn'tknowwhattodonext.IfeltIwastheworstgirlintheworld.Lifewashardformeatthattime.Irantomyfatherwithtearsinmyeyesforhelp.4續(xù)寫原文Helistenedtomequietly,andthenheasked,“Arethethingsshesaidtrueornot?Janet,didn'tyoueverwonderwhatyou'rereallylike?Well,younowhavethatgirl'sopinion.Thatisagoodthing.Goandmakealistofeverythingshesaidandmarkthepointsthataretrue.Paynoattentiontotheotherthingsshesaid.ThatisOK.”ThenIdidasmyfathertoldme.Tomygreatsurprise,Idiscoveredthatabouthalfofthethingsshesaidtomeweretrue.SomeofthemIcouldn'tchange(likebeingverythin),butagoodnumberofthethingsIcould—andsuddenlyIwantedtochange.ForthefirsttimeIgotofairlyclearpictureofmyself.Ineverfeelupsetnow.IbroughtthelistbacktoDaddy.Herefusedtolookatit.Ifeltverysurprised.5段首句Para1：“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.

Para2：Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8本文以人物為線索展開，講述了瑪麗向父親抱怨自己有一個(gè)“敵友”，面對瑪麗的抱怨，瑪麗的父親并沒有說什么，反而是引導(dǎo)自己的女兒自己去發(fā)現(xiàn)問題，最后得到教育的故事。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“‘那是給你的，’他說?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫父親建議瑪麗要傾聽，做她認(rèn)為正確的事。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“爸爸的建議在許多重要時(shí)刻都回響在我耳邊?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫瑪麗對父親的教誨銘記。11續(xù)寫思路分析續(xù)寫線索父親教誨——接受批評——感謝——感悟12續(xù)寫素材可用詞匯：行為類①充滿：becrowdedwith/befilledwith/befullof②.充耳不聞：ignore/shutyourears③.指引：direct/guide/pilot/lead情緒類①.生氣的：upset/mad/angry②.感激的：appreciative/grateful13續(xù)寫素材[高分句型1].

Ourworldisfullofpeoplewhothinktheyknowyourduty.（由關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）[高分句型2].Itisyouwholeadmetoamagnificentlife.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句）14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)“That's

just

for

you，”he

said.“Youknowbetterthananyoneelsethetruthaboutyourself.Butyouhavetolearntolisten,notjustcloseyourears,feelingangryandupset.Whensomethingsomeonesaidaboutyouistrue,you'llfinditwillbeofhelptoyou.Ourworldisfullofpeoplewhothinktheyknowyourduty.Don'tshutyourears.Listentothemall,buthearthetruthanddowhatyouknowistherightthing.”16范文呈現(xiàn)Daddy's

advice

has

returned

to

me

at

many

important

moments.Inmylife,I'veneverhadabetterpieceofadvice.Riverspushmetothevastsea;thedawnbringsmebrightmorning;mydeardaddy,youhelpmealot.Itisyouwholeadmetoamagnificentlife.Thankyouforilluminatingmyvoyageoflifewithyourownlightoflife.Andmygratefulsentimentcomesfromthebottomofmyheart.17范文譯文“那只是給你的，”他說?！澳惚热魏稳硕几私庾约旱恼嫦唷５惚仨殞W(xué)會傾聽，而不僅僅是閉上耳朵，感到憤怒和沮喪。當(dāng)有人對你說的話是真的時(shí)，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)這對你有幫助。我們的世界里到處都是認(rèn)為自己知道責(zé)任的人。不要閉上耳朵。傾聽他們所有人的聲音，但要聽到真相，做你知道是正確的事情?！卑职值慕ㄗh在許多重要時(shí)刻都回到了我的腦海里。在我的一生中，我從未有過比這更好的建議。河流把我推向浩瀚的大海；黎明給我?guī)?/p>