2024年新高考英語I卷小作文對標(biāo)B2U4HistoryandTraditions:視覺、聽覺、觸覺、嗅覺等描述景物選B1U3FascinatingParks：景點(diǎn)及對景點(diǎn)的感受選B3U1Art藝術(shù)價(jià)值和意義第三部分

寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分40分）新課標(biāo)I&II卷假定你是李華，你們班上周五在公園上了一節(jié)美術(shù)課，請給英國好友Chris寫一封郵件分享你的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的作品內(nèi)容；2.你的感想。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua巧謀篇，擬提綱：三段式第一段(導(dǎo)入段)：寫信目的第二段(主體段):

時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件（已給出）；

事件的發(fā)生和發(fā)展；感受第三段(結(jié)尾段):

表達(dá)期待Para1LastSaturdaywitnessedourschool’s25-kilometerhiking,aimingtoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Theaimistoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.背誦活動(dòng)模板第一段Para2你的作品內(nèi)容Whatpicturedidyoudecidetodepict?Whatdidyouwanttoexpress?1.公園本身自然環(huán)境（整體環(huán)境優(yōu)美、生機(jī)盎然的樹木、芬芳撲鼻的花叢、波光粼粼的湖）2.公園路人及行為(年邁夫妻互相攙扶、一家三口散步)3.師生互動(dòng)（教師悉心指導(dǎo)，學(xué)生聆聽）4.。。。。。。作品類型：繪畫、雕塑、手工......作品內(nèi)容：大自然的美平淡的幸福對老師的感激/加強(qiáng)師生聯(lián)系Para2你的作品內(nèi)容：公園本身自然環(huán)境1.

一走進(jìn)公園，我就被安寧且優(yōu)美的環(huán)境吸引了。ThemomentIenteredthepark,Iwasdeeplyattractedbythepeacefulandbeautifulsurroundings.2.因此我選擇去描繪公園本身，著重于茂密的森林、五彩的花叢、以及點(diǎn)綴著些許睡蓮的池塘。SoIchosetodepicttheparkitself,focusingonthethickforest,colorfulflowersandtheponddottedwithseverallilies.畫：draw/paint/sketch描繪：describe/depict/portray記錄：record/capture/catch著重于：focuson/concentrateon/highlight/stressWhatameaningfulactivityitwas!

Notonlydiditsharpenourperseverancebutitalsopromotedourbondwitheachother.Para2你的感受：背誦模板最后一段替換表達(dá)：回憶必修2Unit5Music背誦句子refreshinguniqueunforgettablefruitfulwonderfulperfectexcellent音樂之于我們就像陽光之于地球，給我們的生活帶來色彩。Musicistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.Whatameaningfulactivityitwas!

Notonlydiditsharpenourperseverancebutitalsopromotedourbondwitheachother.Para2你的感受：背誦模板最后一段替換表達(dá)：enrichmyschoollife1親身欣賞并領(lǐng)略大自然的美2培養(yǎng)對藝術(shù)的興趣3提高繪畫技巧4意識(shí)到藝術(shù)的力量去表達(dá)情感和捕捉時(shí)刻5激勵(lì)我探索藝術(shù)天賦6豐富我的校園生活appreciateandexperiencethebeautyofnaturepersonally/inpersondevelopourinterestsinartenhance/improvepainting/drawingskillsrealizethepowerofarttoexpressemotionsandcapturemomentsinspiremetoexploretheaptitudeforartArtistouswhatsunshineistotheearth,whichbringscolourtoourlife.

Throughtherefreshingandmeaningfulclass,notonlydiditenhancemypaintingskills,butitalso

providedmewithaninsightintothebeautyofnature.

Para2問候：期待回信I’meagerlylookingforwardtohearingfromyou.范文I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.

Theaimistoadmirethebeautyofthenatureandrelieveourpressureofthestudy.ThemomentIenteredthepark,Iwasdeeplyattractedbythebeautifulsurroundings,soIchosetodepicttheparkitself,focusingonthethickforest,colorfulflowersandtheponddottedwithseverallilies.//內(nèi)容Duringtherefreshingandmeaningfulclass,Iwastotallyburiedinthepeacefulatmosphereofthepark.Whatanunforgettablea