2020年初升高英語無憂銜接第三章英語技能銜接專題四應(yīng)用文寫作解析版【寫作練習(xí)一】假如你是李華，你昨天收到好友曉東的來信，他說他上了高中以后感覺很郁悶，很孤獨，學(xué)習(xí)壓力大，作業(yè)完不成，上課聽不懂等諸多學(xué)習(xí)和生活的問題，想放棄。請你幫幫他，給他提些建議。

要點：

（1）和同學(xué)友好相處，多交友，多參加課外活動。

（2）找到適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健?/p>

（3）努力學(xué)習(xí)，課前做好準(zhǔn)備。

注意：

（1）字?jǐn)?shù)80左右；

（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

?（3）可緊扣主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearXiaoDong,

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LiHua【答案】?DearXiaoDong,

Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourmiddleschoollife.However,thesituationisveryeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.

Firstofall,youshouldbefriendlytoanyonewhoyoumeetatthenewschoolandtrytomakefriendswiththem.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.Thatcanmakeyouhappy.Secondly,Whynotchoosesomeproperwaystorelax.Inmyopinion,takingexercise,watchingTVorplayingputergamesisagoodwaytorelaxyourself.Thirdly,Iagreethatyoushouldstudyhardandhaveagoodpreparationforeveryclasssothatyoucanunderstandtheteacher.

Ihopethatyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful.

Yours,

?LiHua【解析】?思路點撥這是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)題干提示給你的好友曉東寫一篇回信，給他的學(xué)習(xí)上出現(xiàn)的問題提些建議。本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)和第一、第二人稱來寫作。注意把提示要點準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更充實。寫作時注意上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。另外注意書寫工整，盡量避免拼寫錯誤，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。二、高分語塊1.havetroublewith在某事方面有麻煩；

2.haveagoodpreparationfor為……做好準(zhǔn)備。三、高分句型

1.However,thesituationisveryeasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

2.Anditisalsoagoodideatotakepartinafterschoolactivities.（it做形式主語）

3.Thirdly,Iagreethatyoushouldstudyhardandhaveagoodpreparationforeveryclasssothatyoucanunderstandtheteacher.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）【寫作練習(xí)二】假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Merry約好一起去長城，但你因故不能赴約。請給她寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括：(1)表示歉意；(2)說明原因；(3)重新預(yù)約時間。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMerry,I’mtrulysorrytosaythat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours，LiHua【答案】

DearMerry，

I'mtrulysorrytosaythatIcannotvisittheGreatWallwithyouthisSaturdaymorning.IhavejustlearnedthatIhavetomeetmyuncleattheairportthatmorning.Ihopethechangewillnotgiveyoutoomuchtrouble.

ShallwegoonnextSundaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoenjoythescenery.Ifit'sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30outsideourschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Yours,

LiHua【解析】一、思路點撥這是一篇書信類作文。假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Merry約好一起去長城，但你因故不能赴約。請給她寫封郵件。內(nèi)容包括:

(1)表示歉意；(2)說明原因；(3)重新預(yù)約時間。材料已給出，寫作的時候關(guān)鍵在于要點不能有遺漏和省略。還要有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗瑫r注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意時態(tài)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。二、高分語塊1.visittheGreatWall參觀長城2.toomuchtrouble太多麻煩三、高分句型1.I'mtrulysorrytosaythatIcannotvisittheGreatWallwithyouthisSaturdaymorning.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)2.IhavejustlearnedthatIhavetomeetmyuncleattheairportthatmorning.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)3.Wecansetoutearlysothatwe'llhavemoretimetoenjoythescenery.（sothat引導(dǎo)狀語從句）4.Ifit'sconvenientforyou,let'smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.(if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)??

【寫作練習(xí)三】假設(shè)你是李華，2022年北京冬奧會正面向全國學(xué)生招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請根據(jù)提示用英文給組委會寫一封信，要點如下：(1)自我介紹：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷等;(2)個人條件：英語好，善于交際等;(3)希望獲得批準(zhǔn)。注意：(1)詞數(shù)80左右；(2)書信格式及開頭均已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）；(3)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSir/Madam,

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LiHua【答案】DearSir/Madam,

MynameisLiHua.Iwouldliketoworkasavolunteerforthe2022BeijingWinterOlympicGames.

IwasquiteexcitedwhenIheardabouttheWinterOlympicGamestobeheldinourcountry.IamafemalestudentinaseniormiddleschoolandIcandoagoodjobforthegames.First,IamgoodatEnglishandIcantalkwithforeigntouristsinEnglishfreely.Second,Iamfamiliarwiththelocalconditions.Third,Igetalongwithotherseasily.AndI'mreadytogivehelpwheneveritisneeded.Shouldyougivemeanopportunityofapersonalinterview,I