Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation？單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度度假＂三步五要素法＂寫游記本單元主要話題是節(jié)日與假期，與本單元相關(guān)的寫作題目可以與節(jié)假日里的旅游相結(jié)合。命題內(nèi)容以游覽為主，根據(jù)提示記敘在節(jié)假日里旅游的大致情況。寫作時應(yīng)注意游記的內(nèi)容、格式以及事態(tài)的運用。內(nèi)容一般從以下幾方面著手：1.Wheredidyougo?2.Howwastheweather?3.Whatdidyoudo?4.Howwasthefood?5.Howwasthepeople?6.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?寫作步驟◆步驟一：在第一行寫明日期（年月日與星期）和天氣等信息。◆步驟二：正文用一般過去時態(tài)描述當天發(fā)生的事情。◆步驟三：在日記的最后描述自己的感受和體會。游記三個段落內(nèi)容要點：I.何時與何人到何地；II.交通方式；天氣；活動（美食、觀光、拍照、購物...）；III.感受。【詞匯積累】1diary(n.日記;記事簿)-(復(fù)數(shù))diaries2bored(adj.厭倦的,煩悶的)-boring(adj.沒趣的,令人厭倦的)3enjoy(v.享受······的樂趣;喜愛)-enjoyable(adj.有樂趣的;令人愉快的)-enjoyment(n.樂趣;樂事)4activity(n.活動)-(復(fù)數(shù))activities5decide(v.決定;選定)-decision(n.決定;抉擇)6build(v.建筑;建造)-building(n.建筑物;房子)-builder(n.建筑者)7trade(n.貿(mào)易v.做買賣;從事貿(mào)易)-trader(n.商人)8wonder(v.想知道;琢磨n.驚嘆;驚奇)-wonderful(adj.精彩的;絕妙的)-wonderfully(adv.精彩地)9different(adj.不同的)-difference(n.差別;差異)10.like(v.喜歡n.喜好;愛好)-(反義詞)dislike［v.&n.不喜愛(的事物);厭惡(的事物)］11below(prep.&adv.在······下面;到······下面)-(反義詞)above[prep.&adv.在(·····)上面］12hunger(n.饑餓;渴望)-hungry(adj.饑餓的;渴望得到)【句式積累】總體概括ThebestplacethatIhaveevervisitedisBeijing替換地名.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentslastsummer.我去過的最好的地方是北京。去年夏天我和父母去了北京。Itisbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.Today,I’dliketosharemysummerholidaywithyou.

讀萬卷書，不如行萬里路。今天，我想和大家分享我的暑假。ItwassunnyonMay1st.Iwentonatripwithmyparents替換同行人.5月1日，天氣晴朗。我和父母去旅行了。OnthefirstdayofNationalDay,IwentforatriptoShanghaiwithmyparents.國慶節(jié)的第一天，我和父母去上海旅游。MyfamilyandIwenttoXi’anduringtheMayDayholiday.Everythingwasgreat.我和家人在五一假期去了西安。一切都很棒。IamsoexcitedtotellyousomethinginterestingIhaveexperiencedinsomeplace替換地名.我很高興告訴你我在某地有趣的經(jīng)歷。Ihadagoodtimewithmyfamilylastsummerholiday.去年暑假我和家人玩得很開心。旅游活動Wewenttherebytrain/plane...Westayedthereforfivedays.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.我們是坐火車/飛機去的...我們在那里住了五天。我們參觀了一些名勝古跡。Theflowersonthemountainwereverybeautiful.Itwasnotcoldorhotthosedays.Ilikedtheweatherverymuch.山上的花很漂亮。那幾天不冷不熱。我非常喜歡這里的天氣。Therewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.總是有陽光和柔和的風(fēng)，這使我們?nèi)绱耸孢m。4.Itwasanexcellentvacation.Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm.這是一個極好的假期。我是坐火車去的，我的火車之旅很輕松。天氣晴朗溫暖。5.Onthefirstday,...Onthesecondday,...Onthethirdday,...6.Wesawbeautifulgreenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.我們看到了美麗的青山綠水等等。7.ThefoodinChangchunisverydelicious.Peoplearealsoveryfriendly/kindandwarm.長春的食物很好吃。人們非常友好和熱情。8.ChangchunliesinthenorthofChinaanditisareallybeautifulplace.長春位于中國的北部，它是一個非常美麗的地方。9.WewentbacktoChangchunbyplane.Itwasfasterandmorecomfortablethanbytrain.我們坐飛機回長春。比坐火車更快，更舒適。10.Weenjoyedthetripandatelotsoflocalsnacks.Whatawonderfultripwehad!我們很喜歡這次旅行，吃了很多當?shù)氐男〕?。我們的旅行真是太棒了?1.IclimbedtheWestHill.Itwasalittledifficulttoclimb,butIwasveryhappy.我爬上了西山。爬起來有點難度，不過還是很開心。12.Wetookmanyphotosthere.Welivedinafive-starhotelatnight.我們在那里拍了很多照片。晚上我們住在五星級酒店。13.Myparentstookmetotasteallkindsofdeliciousseafood.

父母帶我去品嘗了各種美味的海鮮。旅游感受1.Myvacationtherewasreallyexciting.Xi’anisreallyanancientcitywithalonghistoryandIplantovisitthereagain!

我在那里的假期真的很令人興奮。西安真的是一座歷史悠久的古城，我打算再去一次！2.I’minterestedinthetraditionsindifferentplaces.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.我對不同地方的傳統(tǒng)很感興趣。我期待著再次去那里。3.Weweretiredbutreallyhappy.Wehadagreattime.

我們很累，但真的很開心。我們度過了一段美好時光。4.WehadawonderfultimeinChangchun.Ilookforwardtogoingthereagain./Ihopetovisitthereagainsomeday.

我們在長春度過了一段美好的時光。我期待著再去那里。/我希望有一天再去那兒?！局V語積累】1.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.讀萬卷書，行萬里路。2.Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。3.Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海內(nèi)存知己，天涯若比鄰?！救f能寫作模板】模板敘事和經(jīng)歷類書面表達通過敘述事件的起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果表現(xiàn)主題。寫景狀物類書面表達通過對事物和景點的描述表現(xiàn)主題。文章宜采用總—分—總的結(jié)構(gòu)或總—分的結(jié)構(gòu)，模板如下：介紹景觀介紹景觀介紹旅行經(jīng)歷總結(jié)旅行感受…isoneofthemostbeautifulsceneryspots.Ivolunteeredaguidetointroduce…ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy.寫好敘事類文章的開頭的四種方式1.

＂開門見山＂式開頭

一般來說，文章的開頭應(yīng)盡量做到＂開門見山＂，即要用簡單明了的語言引出文章的話題，使人一開始就能了解文章要說明的內(nèi)容。

對于敘事類的文章，可以在開頭把人物、時間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。如＂A

Trip

to

Huangshan(黃山之旅)＂的開頭可以是：Lastmonth,myfamilywenttoHuangshanbytrain.Ittookustenhourstogetthere.Whatalongandtiringjourney!Weweretiredbutthebeautifulsceneryexcitedus.2.回憶性開頭在描述事件或游記類的文章中，采用回憶性的開頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類型的開頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯，如neverforget(永遠無法忘記)、remember(記得)、unforgettable(難以忘懷的)、exciting(令人激動的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad(難過的)...如＂ATriptoHuangshan(黃山之旅)＂的開頭還以這樣寫：IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoHuangshan.或ItwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceIhad.3.疑問性開頭在敘事類或論述性的文章中，都可采用疑問型開頭，這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂PlantingTrees(種樹)＂的開頭可以是：Haveyoueverplantedtrees?Don’tyouthinkplantingtreesis...再如＂TravelingAbroad(出國之旅)＂的開頭可以是：Ifyouhaveanopportunitytotravelabroad,whynotconsiderSingapore?4.倒敘式開頭在有的文章，特別是敘事類的文章中，可以采用倒敘的寫作手法，先寫出事件的結(jié)果，再陳述過程。如＂CatchingThieves(捉賊)＂的開頭可以這樣寫：Ilayinbedinthehospital.Ismiledatmyfriendseventhoughmylegshurt.Doyouwanttoknowwhathappenedtome?Letmetellyou.It’sa...story.寫一篇游記。寫作提示：時間、地點、人物、出行方式、游覽順序、感受。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】時間、地點、人物L(fēng)astweekIwithmyparentswenttoBeijingforaholiday.出行方式、游覽順序ItismyfirsttimetovisitBeijing.ThecityisthedreamcityforalltheChinese.IttookusaboutfivehoursfromChangchuntoBeijingbytrain.Theweatherwassunnyandwarmduringmyvacation.Onthefirstday,myfamilyvisitedtheGreatWallandTian’anmenSquare.IwassoexcitedwhenIclimbedTheGreatWall.ThenextdaywewenttothePalaceMuseumandWangfujing.Iboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.HowhappyIam!WehadBeijingDuckonthelastday.Itwasreallydelicious.感受WereallyenjoyedthistripandIwilltakealongtourtoBeijingnexttime.一、寫出下列單詞1._______________adj.厭倦的；煩悶的2._______________pron.某人3._______________n.日記；記事簿4._______________adj.有樂趣的；令人愉快的5._______________n.活動6._______________v.決定；選定7._______________v.&n.嘗試；設(shè)法；努力8._______________n.鳥9._______________n.自行車；腳踏車10._______________n.建筑物；房子11._______________n.商人12._______________v.想知道；琢磨13._______________n.差別；差異14._______________n.頂部；表面15._______________v.等待；等候16._______________n.傘；雨傘17._______________adj.濕的；潮濕的；下雨的18._______________prep.&adv.在……下面；到……下面19._______________adj.&adv.足夠的（地）；充足的（地）；充分的（地）20._______________adj.饑餓的重點短語1.___________________________去度假2.___________________________待在家3.___________________________參加夏令營4.___________________________相當多；不少5.___________________________當然6.___________________________大多數(shù)時間7.___________________________玩得愉快8.___________________________記日記9.___________________________給……的感覺；感受到10.___________________________因為11.___________________________在過去12.___________________________乘火車13.___________________________到達14.____________________________決定做某事 15.____________________________做一個決定 16.___________________________盡力做某事 17.________________________等待 18.________________________足夠的錢 19._________________________另外兩個小時 20.___________________________與…相同 三、重點句子1.很久不見了。_______________________________2.在那里我們拍了大量的照片。_______________________________3.我給父母買了一些東西，但是什么也沒給自己買。_______________________________4.我真的沒有看到我喜歡的東西。_______________________________5._______________________________似乎仍然沒有人覺得無聊。6._______________________________天氣晴朗炎熱，因此我們決定到我們旅館附近的沙灘去。7._______________________________我感覺自己就像是一只鳥兒。8._______________________________我想知道過去這里的生活是什么樣子的。9._______________________________一天的差異是多么大啊！10._______________________________我的雙腿很累，我想停下來。四、連句成文上個月2號(8月2號)，周五，天氣晴朗，你和父母去北京觀光旅游，游覽了北京天安門廣場、紫禁城和長城等幾個地方，玩得非常開心。要求：1.寫一篇英語日記，注意格式；2.詞數(shù)不少于70。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________佳句欣賞與模仿：1.ItismyfirsttimetovisittheGreatWall.【one'sfirsttimetodosth.意為“某人第一次做某事”】這是他第一次贏得了這個比賽。________________________________________________________________________2.Ialwaysgotoschoolwithmysisteronweekdays.【goto...意為“去……地方”，with介詞表示“伴隨，跟著”】上個月，我和我的家人去了貴州度假。________________________________________________________________________3.Intheevening,wewenttothebeachandenjoyedourselvesthere.【and連接并列的謂語】下午，我們?nèi)ヅ郎搅?，在那里我們欣賞到一些特別的東西。________________________________________________________________________4.ThebookissointerestingthatIdecidetoreaditagain.【so...that...意為“如此……以至于……”】他是如此好的一個老師，以至于我們都喜歡他。________________________________________________________________________（一）1．假如你是LiMing，你第一次收到美國筆友Paul的來信，信中他提了一些問題想要了解你。請你仔細閱讀下面的郵件，針對郵件中的問題進行回復(fù)。要求：語言通暢得體，詞數(shù)80左右。DearLiMing,It’ssoexcitingtobeyourpenpal.Wehaven’tseeneachother,wouldyouliketoshareyourlifewithme?Whatdoyouusuallydoinyourfreetime?Howoftendoyoudothem?Whichactivitydoyoulikebestandwhy?AsIknow,youhada7-dayholidayinOctober.Whatdidyoudoandhowwasyourholiday?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!PaulDearPaul,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing2．寒假即將來臨，你一定想做一些有意義的事情來度過一個輕松、愉快的假期，例如鍛煉放松，拜訪親友，陪父母聊天、做家務(wù)，認識更多的人等等！請以“MyWinterVacation”為題，根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。參考詞匯：knowledge知識socialactivities社會活動提示：1.Whereareyougoingtospendyourwintervacation?2.Whatareyougoingtodoforyourself,yourfamilyorothers?要求：1.要點齊全，并適當發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80個左右；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。MyWinterVacationThewintervacationiscoming.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．三年初中生活即將結(jié)束，近期畢業(yè)生QQ群里正在談?wù)撽P(guān)于即將來臨的暑假活動安排,請你根據(jù)QQ群里采集的信息以及你自己的想法，寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：1.詞數(shù)100個左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當發(fā)揮。RecentlywehadadiscussiononhowtospendourcomingsummerholidayintheQQgroup.Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．在新學(xué)期開始之際，校英語報發(fā)起了題為“AWonderfulVacation”的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你的暑假中一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，向校報投稿。內(nèi)容提示：l.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudothere?3.Howdidyoulikeit?要求：90詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．三年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束，暑假即將來臨。你打算過一個什么樣的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意義的(meaningful)？……你準備在這個暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩樂？學(xué)習(xí)？做志愿者？旅行？……)請你以MySummerVacation為題寫一篇短文，說說你的計劃和安排。寫作要求：1、先填好標題，再圍繞標題展開作文；2、100詞左右；3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名；4、短文內(nèi)容與標題相符，文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)合理，字、詞、句、語法使用正確。My________SummerVacation_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.（2022·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)們拍了一個畢業(yè)活動視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚”的國際中學(xué)生vlog作品展。請給該視頻寫一段解說詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.海邊活動：下午：①沙灘排球；②……；晚上：搭帳篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享會。2.活動感言。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點齊全，可適當發(fā)揮；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名；4.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范。參考詞匯：沖浪surf

帳篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.2.（2022·寧夏·統(tǒng)考中考真題）暑假臨近，你有什么計劃嗎？你校英語社團正在開展以“MySummerVacationPlan”為主題的征文活動。請根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)勀愕氖罴儆媱?。要求?.文中須包含思維導(dǎo)圖中的所有信息；2.補充至少兩條計劃；3.合理增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。提示詞語：takepartin參加socialpracticeactivities社會實踐活動MySummerVacationPlanThesummervacationiscoming.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2018·四川瀘州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）暑期將至，我們都應(yīng)該制定合理的假期計劃。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，以“MySummerVacationPlan”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。要點提示：1.放松自己：聽音樂，看電影，鍛煉身體等；2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，與父母交流等；3.做志愿者：看望老人，贈送禮物，為他們唱歌等；4.努力學(xué)習(xí)：閱讀書籍，復(fù)習(xí)知識，為以后學(xué)習(xí)做準備等；5.個人觀點：……。要求：1.詞數(shù)110詞左右（短文首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點提示均須涉及，可適當增加內(nèi)容；3.字跡工整，卷面整潔，文意連貫，語言流暢；4.不用真實姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語：relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________