Unit2We’reFamily!SectionB2a—2b寫作課本課學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)本節(jié)課結(jié)束時(shí)，學(xué)生能夠：1.能夠基于寫作目的和要求，在教師的指導(dǎo)下有效開(kāi)展寫作準(zhǔn)備，梳理回帖文本結(jié)構(gòu)，列出介紹家庭成員的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2.

能夠?qū)⒈締卧鶎W(xué)的詞匯、目標(biāo)結(jié)構(gòu)、句型以及各類功能表達(dá)遷移應(yīng)用到自己的寫作之中；3.通過(guò)自評(píng)和互評(píng)，不斷改進(jìn)自己的作品，使之完善，改進(jìn)初稿的結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言。Review粉色的(形容詞)_______ 2.英俊的(形容詞)_______3.帽子(名詞)_____ 4.在他的膝蓋上(短語(yǔ))_______5.在晚上(短語(yǔ))________ 6.在中間(短語(yǔ))__________7.我喜歡彈吉他。___________________________8.我的爺爺奶奶有三個(gè)孫子孫女。_______________________9.她又漂亮又善良。___________________10.我認(rèn)為他們對(duì)我們所有人說(shuō)同樣的話。______________________handsomepink按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。hatonhiskneeatnightSheisbeautifulandkind.inthemiddleMygrandparentshavethreegrandchildren.Iliketoplaytheguitar.Ithinktheysaythesamethingtoallofus.sister

cousinparentsgrandparentsgrandfather/grandpagrandmother/grandmafather/dadmother/momuncleauntdaughterbrothersonfamilytreeDoyouknow?Aretheseyourparents?No,theyaren't.They'remyuncleandaunt.Isthatyourbrother?Yes,itis.Who'she?He'smycousin-myuncle'sson,Eric.Isthisyoursister?Yes,itis.Who'sshe?She'smycousin-myuncle'sdaughter,Kate.cousinmyuncle'sdaughtercousinmyuncle'ssonAskandanswerinpairs.AFamilyPhoto...appearance（外貌personality性格hobby愛(ài)好age年齡

FamilyMembers（家庭成員）…Howdoyouintroduceyourfamilywithafamilyphoto?Freetalkintroducev.介紹

Writingtask（寫作任務(wù)）

假如你叫李強(qiáng)，Helen是你的英國(guó)朋友，她想了解你的家庭情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的全家福，給Helen發(fā)一封電子郵件，介紹一下你的家庭。要求：1.

介紹家人的身份、外貌、性格和愛(ài)好等內(nèi)容，內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確；2.

適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和校名。DearHelen,I'mexcitedtosharewithyouaboutmyfamily.Inthephoto,therearefiveofus.Mydad,John,isinthemiddle.He'stallandsmilesalot.Helikestotakecareofplants,especiallyrosesoutside.Mymom,Emily,hasmedium-lengthbrownhairandisverynice.Shecooksgreatfood,likeapplepie,whichwealllove.Mybigbrother,Michael,isontheleft.He'sgoodatsports,likesoccer,andhasshortyellowhair.Helovesgoingoutanddoingfunthings.Nexttohimismylittlesister,Lily.Shedrawsreallywellandwantstobeagreatartistsomeday.Wekeepherdrawingsonthefridge.I'mtheoneontheright,wearingglasses.Ienjoyreadingbooks.We'realldifferent,butwelovebeingtogether,eatingandlaughing.Ihopeyougettoknowusbetternow.Canyoutellmeaboutyourfamilytoo? LiQiang Person（人稱）02030405060701Tense(時(shí)態(tài)）Initial(首字母）Spelling(拼寫）Complete（完整性）Punctuation（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)）SkillsDiscussingroups:PresenttenseICapitallettercorrectCompleteUsecorrectlyHandwriting（書寫）PresenttenseStandard(規(guī)范）

I'mexcitedtosharewithyouaboutmyfamily.Inthephoto,therearefiveofus.Mydad,John,isinthemiddle.He'stallandsmilesalot.Helikestotakecareofplants,especiallyrosesoutside.Mymom,Emily,hasmedium-lengthbrownhairandisverynice.Shecooksgreatfood,likeapplepie,whichwealllove.Mybigbrother,Michael,isontheleft.He'sgoodatsports,likesoccer,andhasshortyellowhair.Helovesgoingoutanddoingfunthings.Nexttohimismylittlesister,Lily.Shedrawsreallywellandwantstobeagreatartistsomeday.Wekeepherdrawingsonthefridge.I'mtheoneontheright,wearingglasses.Ienjoyreadingbooks.We'realldifferent,butwelovebeingtogether,eatingandlaughing.Ihopeyougettoknowusbetternow.Canyoutellmeaboutyourfamilytoo?Task1Readandanswer.Question：Howmanyparagraphsarethereinthepassage?123BeginningBodyEndingTask2Readandfinishthemindmap.MyfamilyphotoSelf-introductionBeginnigIntroducethetopicBodyEndingExpressyourfeelingAskquestionIntroduceeachmemberPersonalityJobHobbyAgeAppearanceNumberIlovemyfamily.Whataboutyou?Mynameis…/Iam…Thisisaphotoofmyfamily.Think:Howcanwemakethesentencessmoother（更流暢的）?WritingTip:Usethelinkingwordsand、but.What’sthemainidea(主旨）ofeachparagraph（段落）?Youcandobetter.Beginning:A:Thisismyfamilyphoto.B:Hereisaphotoofmyfamily.A:She/Heis15yearsold.B:His/Herageis______.HobbyA:like/love....B:befondof...Can:A:...canplaybasketball.

B:Her/Hishobbyis_______(doing).Like:A:...likefruitandvegetables.B:...likefruitandvegetables,becausethey’regoodfor____.Age:….....favorite_____is_______.Becauseit’s_______.EndingIhopeyougettoknowusbetternow.Canyoutellmeaboutyourfamilytoo?GoodBetter2aCompletetheintroduction

belowwiththeinfromationaboutHuXiao’sfamily.completev.完成introductionn.介紹below在……下面handsomeplayingfootballkindanimalsbigeyesreadingnextto緊挨著gohiking徒步2bListsomekeywordstodescribeeachofyourfamilymembers.Thenintroducethemwithafamilyphoto.keyword關(guān)鍵詞describev.描述Introduceyourfamilyphoto.Requirements:1.Donotshowrealnamesandplaces.2.Nolessthan80words.Evaluationstandards(評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)):15’Beautifulhandwriting(書寫美觀)7’3’2’Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）：Doyouhavethreeparagraphs?Richcontents(內(nèi)容):Doeachparagraphhavemainidea?Doyouintroducebasicinformation?Language:Doyoumakeanyspellingorgrammarmistakes?Doyouuseand、but?3’Workinpairs.

Evaluateyourdeskmate’swritingwiththehelpofthestandards.DearHelen,I'mexcitedtosharewithyouaboutmyfamily.Inthephoto,therearefiveofus.Mydad,John,isinthemiddle.He'stallandsmilesalot.Helikestotakecareofplants,especiallyrosesoutside.Mymom,Emily,hasmedium-lengthbrownhairandisverynice.Shecooksgreatfood,likeapplepie,whichwealllove.Mybigbrother,Michael,isontheleft.He'sgoodatsports,likesoccer,andhasshortyellowhair.Helovesgoingoutanddoingfunthings.Nexttohimismylittlesister,Lily.Shedrawsreallywellandwantstobeagreatartistsomeday.Wekeepherdrawingsonthefridge.I'mtheoneontheright,wearingglasses.Ienjoyreadingbooks.We'realldifferent,butwelovebeingtogether,eatingandlaughing.Ihopeyougettoknowusbetternow.Canyoutellmeaboutyourfamilytoo?Bestwishes, LiQiang 謝謝大家愛(ài)心.誠(chéng)心.細(xì)心.耐心，讓家長(zhǎng)放心.孩子安心。樣，也可能因討厭一位老師而討厭學(xué)習(xí)。一個(gè)被學(xué)生喜歡的老師，其教育效果總是超出一般教師。無(wú)論中學(xué)生還是小學(xué)生，他們對(duì)自己喜歡的老師都會(huì)有一些普遍認(rèn)同的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，諸如尊重和理解學(xué)生，寬容、不傷害學(xué)生自尊心，平等待人、說(shuō)話辦事公道、有耐心、不輕易發(fā)脾氣等。教師要放下架子，把學(xué)生放在心上。“蹲下身子和學(xué)生說(shuō)話，走下講臺(tái)給學(xué)生講課”;關(guān)心學(xué)生情感體驗(yàn)，讓學(xué)生感受到被關(guān)懷的溫暖;自覺(jué)接受學(xué)生的評(píng)價(jià)，努力做學(xué)生喜歡的老師。教師要學(xué)會(huì)寬容，寬容學(xué)生的錯(cuò)誤和過(guò)失，寬容學(xué)生一時(shí)沒(méi)有取得很大的進(jìn)步。蘇霍姆林斯基說(shuō)過(guò)：有時(shí)寬容引起的道德震動(dòng)，比懲罰更強(qiáng)烈。每當(dāng)想起葉圣陶先生的話：你這糊涂的先生，在你教鞭下有瓦特，在你的冷眼里有牛頓，在你的譏笑里有愛(ài)迪生。身為教師，就更加感受到自己職責(zé)的神圣和一言一行的重要。善待每一個(gè)學(xué)生，做學(xué)生喜歡的老師，師生雙方才會(huì)有愉快的情感體驗(yàn)。一個(gè)教師，只有當(dāng)他受到學(xué)生喜愛(ài)時(shí)，才能真正實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的最大價(jià)值。義務(wù)教育課程方案和課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）簡(jiǎn)介新課標(biāo)的全名叫做《義務(wù)教育課程方案和課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》，文件包括義務(wù)教育課程方案和16個(gè)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版），不僅有語(yǔ)文數(shù)學(xué)等主要科目，連勞動(dòng)、道德這些，也有非常詳細(xì)的課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。現(xiàn)行義務(wù)教育課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，是2011年制定的，離現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)十多年了；而課程方案最早，要追溯到2001年，已經(jīng)二十多年沒(méi)更新過(guò)了，很多內(nèi)容，確