高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)兩只小貓帶來的意外歡樂與溫馨1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Mysister-in-lawCarolsaidshe’dalreadypickedoutakittenforme.Iagreedtogowithher…justtolook.Imadenopromisetotakeonehome.Afterall,onlytwomonthshadpassedsinceIlostmybelovedcalicocat,Mandi.MaybeIneededtobepet-freeforawhile.Whenwegotthere,threeofthefourkittensremainedinthelitter.Carolpickeduponeandhandedittome.Thebeautifulfaceandwhitefurontherightsideofhernoseremindedmeofaclown-likemask.HowcouldIresist?Thenanotherkitten,withanevenlybalancedwhiteface,jumpedintomylapandpurred.DrivinghomeinmyBritishsportscarproveddifficultwithtwomischievouskittens.Oneclungtomyleftarmandshoulder,watchingthefast-movingsceneryoutside.Theotherpacedbackandforthfrommylaptothepassenger’sseat,makingithardformetoshiftgears.Bothmewedinaloudduet(二重奏)ofprotest.Ofcourse,Ihadn’tbroughtacage.Ihadnotplannedtotakehomeakitten—ortwo.4續(xù)寫原文Theclown-like-maskedfemaleearnedthenameSqueakettewithhertinyvoicesqueakingabouteachnewdiscoveryassheexploredhernewhome.Themale,lackingonlyablacktieinhisformalclothes,tookthenameSebastianformyfavoritecomposer,JohannSebastianBach.Afewweekslater,aneighborhelpedmecarrydownmysix-footartificialChristmastreefromtheattic(閣樓).Ithankedhimwithabatchofcookies,andthensetupthetreeinthecomerofmylivingroom.SebastianandSqueaketteknockeditdownbeforeIopenedtheboxofdecorations.Aftersettingitupright,Istraightenedthefewbentwirebranchesbackintoplace.AsIcheckedforanyotherdamage,aquickflashofblack-and-whitefurpassedbyme.Uptheywent,branchbybranch.Thetreedancedaroundasthetwokittenstookturnsclimbingittogether.SebastianmadeittothetopamomentaheadofSqueakette.5段首句Paragraph1：Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsstretchedoutlikewings.Paragraph2：Sensingtheirinterest,IfoundasmallerChristmastreeforthem.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了作者在失去愛貓曼迪兩個月后，被嫂子卡羅爾帶去看小貓，最終帶回了兩只小貓，取名塞巴斯蒂安和斯奎基特。回家途中小貓調(diào)皮搗蛋，到家后它們又撞倒了圣誕樹，還在樹上嬉戲玩耍，作者雖無奈但也被它們的活潑可愛所感染，后來作者還專門為它們準(zhǔn)備了一棵小圣誕樹，讓它們盡情玩耍，小貓的到來為作者的生活增添了新的歡樂和生機(jī)，填補(bǔ)了之前失去愛貓的空缺。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsstretchedoutlikewings.它從樹頂向我撲來，爪子像翅膀一樣張開。我急忙伸手接住它，它卻在我懷里興奮地扭動著，還伸出小腦袋蹭我的下巴。斯奎基特見狀，也“喵喵”叫著從樹上跳下來，圍著我的腳打轉(zhuǎn)。我看著它們天真無邪的模樣，心中的無奈瞬間化為烏有，只剩下滿滿的寵溺。我輕輕地?fù)现鼈兊南掳?，它們舒服地瞇起眼睛，喉嚨里發(fā)出咕嚕咕嚕的聲音，那一刻，我知道它們已經(jīng)完全融入了我的生活，成為我生活中不可或缺的一部分。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Sensingtheirinterest,IfoundasmallerChristmastreeforthem.察覺到它們對圣誕樹的濃厚興趣后，我特意找了一棵較小的圣誕樹放在廚房角落。我在樹上掛滿了五顏六色的小鈴鐺和柔軟的毛球，還在樹下鋪了一塊柔軟的墊子。當(dāng)我把小貓們抱到樹前時，它們的眼睛一下子亮了起來，迫不及待地?fù)湎蛐?。它們用爪子輕輕拍打鈴鐺，追逐著毛球，玩得不亦樂乎?？粗鼈儦g快的樣子，我也被這份純真的快樂所感染，坐在一旁靜靜地欣賞著它們的表演，享受著這溫馨的時刻。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Helungedatmefromthetop,pawsoutstretchedlikewings.Hastily,Ireachedoutandcaughthim.Thrilled,hewriggledinmyarmsandrubbedhislittleheadagainstmychinaffectionately.Noticingthis,Squeakettejumpeddownfromthetree,meowing,andcircledaroundmyfeet.Lookingattheirinnocentandlivelyappearance,myinitialexasperationvanishedinstantly,replacedbysheerfondness.Gently,Iscratchedtheirchins,andtheyclosedtheireyescontentedly,purringwithpleasure.Atthatmoment,Iknewtheyhadseamlesslyintegratedintomylifeandbecomeanindispensablepartofit.13范文呈現(xiàn)SensingtheirkeeninterestintheChristmastree,Ideliberatelyfoundasmalleroneandplaceditinthecornerofthekitchen.Iadorneditwithcolorfullittlebellsandsoftpom-pomsandspreadasoftmatunderneath.WhenIbroughtthekittenstothetree,theireyeslitupimmediately,andtheycouldn'twaittopounceonit.Theyplayfullybattedatthebellswiththeirpawsandchasedafterthepom-poms,havingagreattime.Watchingtheirjoyousplay,Iwasalsoinfectedbythispurehappiness.Isataside,quietlyenjoyingtheirperformanceandsavoringthiswarmandsweetmoment.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Inasplitsecond,helaunchedhimselfatmefromthepinnacleofthetree,hispawssplayedwidelikethewingsofafledglingtakingitsfirstflight.Reactinginstinctively,Ishotoutmyhandsandmanagedtocatchhimmid-air.Overwhelmedwithexcitement,hesquirmedwithinmygrasp,histinyheadnuzzlingaffectionatelyagainstmychin.Atthesightofthis,Squeakette,notonetobeleftbehind,letoutaseriesofmeowsandgracefullyleapeddownfromthetree,proceedingtoencirclemyfeetinafigureofeight.Beholdingtheirguilelessandanimatedcountenances,theexasperationthathadinitiallywelledupwithinmedissipatedintothinair,supplantedbyanoverwhelmingsenseofaffection.Withtheutmosttenderness,Icaressedtheirchins,elicitingcontentedpurrsthatreverberatedthroughtheroom.ItwasatthisprecisemomentthatIbecameacutelyawarethattheyhadeffortlesslywoventhemselvesintothefabricofmylife,assuminganindispensableroletherein.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)PerceivingtheirintensefascinationwiththeChristmastree,Ipurposefullyprocuredamorediminutiveoneandcarefullypositioneditinacozynookofthekitchen.ThisIbedeckedwithaprofusionofvividlyhuedlittlebellsandplushpom-poms,andbeneathit,Ilaidasumptuouslysoftmat.ThemomentIintroducedthekittenstothisnewfoundwond