寫作技法點撥系列七、精研材料,輕松駕馭提綱作文【核心點撥】常用句型1.開篇句(1)Withthedevelopmentof...隨著……的發(fā)展(2)Iamoftheopinionthatbothargumentsholdsometruth.我認為兩種觀點都有點道理。(3)Atpresent,thereisawidespreadconcernthatteenagers’usingmobilephonesinschoolwillaffecttheirstudy.目前,人們普遍擔心青少年在學校使用手機會影響他們的學習。(4)Iamverygladtohavethechancetospeakhere.我很高興有機會在這里演講。2.連接句(1)Amongallthegivenreasons,oneshouldbefocused.在給出的所有原因中,有一點必須被強調(diào)。(2)Themainreasonwhy...isthat...……的主要原因是……(3)Anotherconsiderationinthiscaseisthat...對這種情況的另一種考慮是……(4)Besides,weshouldn’tneglectthat...此外,我們不應該忽視……3.結(jié)尾句(1)Ifwedothosethingswell,wewillbeabletogrowuphappilyandhealthily.如果我們把那些事情做好,我們就能夠快樂健康地成長。(2)Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinharmonywithnature.只有以這種方式我們才能與大自然和諧相處。(3)Inshort,weliveinanagefullofchallenges.總之,我們生活在一個充滿挑戰(zhàn)的時代。(4)Ihopethesemeasureswouldhelpdealwiththeseproblemsandhaveagoodeffectonoureducation.我希望這些措施能幫助解決這些問題并且對我們的教育有良好的影響?！镜漕}示例】(2016·全國卷Ⅲ)假定你是李華,與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店,因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:

1.表示歉意;2.說明原因;3.另約時間。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫?！緦忣}謀篇】文章體裁應用文中心人稱第一人稱I,we;第二人稱you主要時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時信息要點1.與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店;2.因故不能赴約寫郵件表示歉意;3.說明原因,另約時間?！驹~句構(gòu)建】1.詞匯漢語一般詞匯高級詞匯參加會議haveameeting_______________帶來麻煩bringtrouble____________動身start______閑著free________attendameetingcausetroublesetoutavailable2.句式①我們可以早些動身這樣我們就有更多的時間來閱讀、選書。一般表達:Wecanstartearlysowe’llhavemoretimetoreadandchoosebooks.高級表達:Wecan______early______we’llhavemoretimetoreadand_____books.(用高級詞匯代替start,so,choose)setoutsothatselect②如果你不方便的話,告訴我一個最適合你的時間。一般表達:Ifit’snotconvenientforyou,letmeknowwhatisyourmostsuitabletime.高級表達:_____,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(狀語從句省略)Ifnot③下周放學后我都有空。一般表達:Iwillbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.高級表達:I_________________anytimeafterschoolnextweek.(高級詞匯代替free)shouldbeavailable【連句成篇】DearBob,

I’msorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendanimportantmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.

ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe’llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua【即時應用】(2016·天津高考)假設(shè)你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學生開展了為期兩周的交流活動?，F(xiàn)在,他們即將回國,你將在歡送會上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

(1)回顧雙方的交流活動(如學習、生活、體育、文藝等方面);

(2)談?wù)勈斋@或感想;

(3)表達祝愿與期望。注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右;

(2)可適當加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫;

(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends,

Howtimeflies!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thankyou.

【參考范文】Dearfriends,

Howtimeflies!Ithasbeentwoweekssinceyoucametoourschoolfortheexchangeprogram,whichhasbenefitedallofus.

Duringthepasttwoweeks,wehavestudiedinthesameclassroomandlivedinthesamedormitory,whichhasenabledustoknoweachotherbetter.Doingthesamesportsontheplaygroundgivesustheopportunitytopromoteourfriendship.Whatimpressesusmostareyourartskills,inwhichyoushowedoutstandingtalent.Webelievethatthestudentsinourschoolhavelearnedalotfromtheexchangep