Module7SummerinLosAngeles.單元話題滿分范文必背1．緊張的一學(xué)期學(xué)習(xí)結(jié)束后,同學(xué)們將迎來輕松愉快的暑假。你的暑假計劃是什么呢?假如你是Sandy,請你以“SummerPlan”為題,寫出你和你朋友Tony的暑假計劃。要求:1.內(nèi)容必須包括所有提示信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.不少于60詞(文章開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。SummerPlanNamesActivitiesReasonsSandytravelopenupmyeyeslearntodance/draw/...relaxTonyvolunteergetexperiencelearntoswim/playbasketball/...keephealthySummerPlanHi,I’mSandy.Summervacationiscoming.Whatareyougoingtodothissummer?MyfriendTonyandIhaveoursummerplans.【答案】SummerPlanHi,I’mSandy.Summervacationiscoming.Whatareyougoingtodothissummer?MyfriendTonyandIhaveoursummerplans.IplantovisitShanghaiwithmyfamily.Iwanttoopenupmyeyes.AndI’malsogoingtolearntodanceduringthevacation.IlikedancingandIthinkitcanmakemerelaxed.MyfriendTonywouldliketovolunteerinahospitalbecausehewantstobeadoctor.Hecangetsomeexperiencefromvolunteering.Hewantstolearntoswimaswell.Itcanhelphimtokeephealthy.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇圖表作文。內(nèi)容是假如你是Sandy，以"Summer

Plan"為題，寫出你和你朋友Tony的暑假計劃。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱主要為第一，第三人稱。在寫作過程中，首先要將表格內(nèi)提示信息用英語正確的表達(dá)出來，要涵蓋表格中提到的所有要點，同時注意理順要點，防止漏寫。為了使句子更通順完整，需要用上適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞。同時注意語句要通順，詞匯書寫無誤，注意不要出現(xiàn)語法錯誤。寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文。其次考生可以按照圖表所給出的內(nèi)容從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：1．我；旅行，開闊眼界；學(xué)習(xí)跳舞，畫畫等，放松2．Tony；志愿者，獲取經(jīng)驗；學(xué)游泳，打籃球等，保持健康用到的重點短語：plantodosth：計劃做某事openupone'seyes：開闊眼界makesb+adj：讓某人怎樣aswell：也helpsbtodosth：幫助某人做某事2．假如你是Tony，你為即將到來的暑假做了規(guī)劃，具體內(nèi)容見下表。請以"Myplanforthesummerholiday"為題寫一篇90詞左右的短文介紹你的暑期計劃。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyplanforthesummerholidayTimeJuly10thtoSeptember1st.KeepgoodhabitsGotobedearlyandgetupearly.Dosportseveryday.ActivitiesFinishmyhomework.Readsomewonderfulbooks.Visitmygrandparents.Helpwiththehousework.Goonatrip.參考詞匯：energetic精力充沛的MyplanforthesummerholidayThesummerholidayiscoming.Itwillstart________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thesummerholidayiscoming.ItwillstartonJuly10thandendonSep.1st.Ihavemadesomeplansforit.Firstly,Iwillkeepgoodhabits.IplantogotobedearlyandgetupearlyinthemorningsothatIwillbeenergeticduringtheday.Tokeephealthy,Iwilldosportseveryday.What'smore,Iwillnotonlyfinishmyhomeworkcarefullybutalsokeeponstudyingsuchasreadingsomewonderfulbooks.Besides,whenIamfree,Iwillvisitmygrandparentsmoreoftenandhelpmymotherwiththehousework.Iftheweatherisgood,Iplantogoonatripwithmygoodfriends.I'msureIwillspendacolorfulandmeaningfulsummerholiday.【解析】【詳解】1.思路點撥：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)表格提示描述自己的暑期計劃。表格中包含了時間，保持好習(xí)慣和活動三個要點，每個要點中的小點都是得分點，一定要寫清楚明白。同時參考詞匯也要運用到作文中去，注意詞數(shù)控制在90詞左右。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：我們首先要注意人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般將來時為主。其次在寫作時，可以采取總——分——總的結(jié)構(gòu)，首先簡要概述暑假將至自己為之做了一些計劃，然后再詳細(xì)介紹暑假計劃，最后再簡要表達(dá)自己的希望。注意邏輯合理，語言通順。3．請你以“MySummerHoliday”為題寫一篇英語短文，回憶暑期的游玩經(jīng)歷和感受，選擇一次游歷來寫作。要求：（1）短文需包含表格中所有信息,省略部分需按照表格意圖適當(dāng)發(fā)揮2）詞數(shù)：70個左右。開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入次數(shù)。時間：……地點：……路程：……活動：……感受：……參考詞匯：delicious,tired/tiring,takephotos,goshopping,buygifts,watchthemovies,inthemorning,intherestaurant...MySummerHoliday____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MySummerHolidayLastsummer

holiday,ItraveledtoBeijingwithmyparents.Westayedthereforthreedays.We

visitedtheGreatWall,the

Summer

PalaceandthePalaceMuseum.Wetookmanyphotos.Onthelastday,wewentshoppinginWangfujing.Weboughtmanygiftsforourfriends.We

enjoyed

ourselves

in

Bejing.IamlookingforwardtovisitingBeijingagain.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“MySummerHoliday”為題，寫一篇英語短文，回憶暑期的游玩經(jīng)歷和感受。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。2.例文點評：本文時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點：短語：travelto，takephotos，goshopping，enjoy

oneself，lookforwardto。句型：We

enjoyed

ourselves

in

Bejing．我們在北京玩得很開心。enjoy

oneself玩的開心。IamlookingforwardtovisitingBeijingagain.我期待著再次參觀北京。look

forward

to

doing

sth期待做某事4．暑期就要到了，請你以Jill的名義給英國筆友Linda發(fā)一封電子郵件談?wù)勀愕氖罴侔才?。要求?、自主發(fā)揮，語言通順。2、80詞以上。郵件的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearLinda,I’mveryhappythatthesummerholidaysarecomingsoon._______________________Pleasewritebacksoon.Yours,Jill【答案】Onepossibleversion:I’mveryhappythatthesummerholidaysarecomingsoon.Istallhaveenoughtimetodomanythingsofmyown.First,Iamgoingtospendaweekinthecountrysidewithmygrandparents.Ireallymissthem.ThenI’lltraveltoGuilinwithmyparents.I’msurewe’llhaveagreattime!Afterthat,I’llcomebackandfinishmyholidayhomework.I’llalsogoingtotakesomeextralessonstoimprovemystudies.Besides,I’lltakeenoughexerciseeverydaytokeephealthy.Howaboutyourvacationplan?Pleasewritebacksoon.Yours,Jill【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。給出的材料比較簡略，我們所要做的首先是圍繞要點組織材料，然后應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。考點：考查應(yīng)用文的寫作點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。5．假設(shè)這周你班英語角活動的主題是“我的周末生活”。假設(shè)你是李梅，請你以Myweekends為題寫一篇短文，簡單描述一下自己通常是如何度過周末的。要點如下：1．參加補習(xí)班；2．約朋友一起出去玩；3．去圖書館看書；4．幫父母做家務(wù)；5．看電視、上網(wǎng)。參考詞匯：tutorcentre;hangout;reading;housework;watchTV注意：1.詞數(shù)80～100；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學(xué)校名稱。Myweekends_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyweekendsMynameisLiMei.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Myweekendsarealwayswonderful.EverySaturdayIgotoatutorcentretostudyEnglishfortwohours.Sometimes,Ihangoutwithmyfriends.Wemayseemovies,playbasketball,goshoppingandsoon.Sometimes,Igotothelibrarytodosomereading.Sometimes,Ihelpmyparentswiththehousework.Sometimes,IstayathomewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternet.

Inmyopinion,it'simportantforustohavehappy,relaxingweekends.Therefore,wecanworkharderinthefollowingdays.【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。以“我的周末生活”為題，描述自己通常是如何度過周末的。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時。先介紹個人信息，再描述周末生活，最后發(fā)表自己的觀點。寫作時要保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強，無語法和標(biāo)點錯誤。6．近兩個月的暑假結(jié)束了。假設(shè)你叫HanMei，你給好朋友LiuMing寫了一封郵件告知你是如何度過這個暑假的，并且想知道他在暑期做了哪些事情，感覺如何?注意：1.表達(dá)有條理，書寫正確，規(guī)范。2.70詞左右，開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.以下信息僅供參考，請適當(dāng)加以補充。activitiesWhatdotheythinkHanMeivisitgrandparentsinthecountry;takeathree-weekafterschoolclassquiet,naturalboringbutusefulLiuMing…………DearLiuMing,Howwasyoursummervacation?Didyouhaveanyfun__________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!HanMei【答案】例文：DearLiuMing,Howwasyoursummervacation?Didyouhaveanyfunactivitiesduringthesummerholiday?NowIwanttotellyousomethingaboutmine.Inthefirstmonthoftheholiday,Ivisitedmygrandparentsinthecountry.IfeltveryhappybecauseIhadn’tseenthemforhalfayear.Whatinterestedmemostwasthenaturalbeautyofthecountry.It’sreallyawonderfulplacetobequietandrelaxmyself.What’smore,Itookathree-weekafter-schoolclassbecauseofmypoorEnglish.Forme.It’sboringbutuseful.That’sallmyactivitiesduringthevacation.Whataboutyours?Pleaseemailmeifyou’refree.Lookingforwardtoseeingyou!HanMei【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，題目要求HanMei給自己的好朋友LiuMing寫一封電子郵件，主要講述自己暑假的經(jīng)歷并詢問對方的經(jīng)歷及感受。根據(jù)題目可知，本文以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般過去時。例文點評：本文開篇點題，介紹作者的寫作意圖；正文部分以第一人稱為主講述了“我”的暑期經(jīng)歷及感受；文章最后總結(jié)全文，并且表示對LiuMing來信的期待。全文層次清晰，言語順暢，緊扣題目要求。高分亮點：短語：naturalbeauty；What’smore；becauseof；lookforwardto。句型：IfeltveryhappybecauseIhaven’tseenthemforhalfayear.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）Whatinterestedmemostwasthenaturalbeautyofthecountry.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）7．假如你是LiHua，暑假即將來臨，你有什么計劃和打算，請用英語給你的朋友Bob寫一封電子郵件分享你的并詢問他的暑期計劃。內(nèi)容包括：1.和父母去杭州旅行參觀名勝古跡，如茶藝博物館，欣賞茶藝表演……2.成為動物醫(yī)院的志愿者，并懂得保護瀕危動物的重要性……3.關(guān)心父母，與父母多溝通，分擔(dān)家務(wù)……要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。DearBob,Howisitgoing?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBob,Howisitgoing?Thesummervacationiscoming.Ihavesomeplanstosharewithyou.Tobeginwith,Iwillgotosomeplacesofinterestwithmyparents,suchastheNationalTeaMuseuminHangzhou.Watchingtheteaartperformancemustbeenjoyable.Inaddition,Iplantobeavolunteerinalocalanimalhospital.Iknowmanyanimalsareendangerednow,sowemustunderstandtheimportanceofsolvingthem.What’smore,Iwillcareaboutmyparentsandhelpthemdosomechores.IfIhavesomeproblems,I’llcommunicatewiththem.Howaboutyou?Whatisyourplanforthesummervacation?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇電子郵件，向朋友Bob分享暑假的計劃和打算，并詢問他的暑期計劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時態(tài)采用一般將來時；人稱以第一人稱為主。寫作時涵蓋要點提示，不要遺漏，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫，確保無單詞語法錯誤，語句通順。8．暑期就要來臨了。假設(shè)你是李華，你在新西蘭的筆友Henry來信詢問你暑期旅行的計劃。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語給他回一封信。要求：1.短文須包含所給內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語句通順，語法正確；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)：80個左右。DearHenry,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________