Unit5FunClubsSectionB2a—2b寫作課

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，本課學(xué)習(xí)目標本節(jié)課結(jié)束時，學(xué)生能夠：1.

能夠基于寫作目的和要求，在教師的指導(dǎo)下有效開展寫作準備，梳理申請社團成員文本結(jié)構(gòu)，列出介紹自己想要加入的學(xué)校社團和理由；2.

能夠?qū)⒈締卧鶎W(xué)的詞匯、目標結(jié)構(gòu)、句型以及各類功能表達遷移應(yīng)用到自己的寫作之中；3.通過自評和互評，不斷改進自己的作品，使之完善，改進初稿的結(jié)構(gòu)、內(nèi)容和語言。

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Review表演(短語)_______ 2.對某事感興趣(短語)_______3.多于(短語)_____ 4.愛上(短語)_______5.照相(短語)________ 6.昆蟲(名詞)__________7.你能照很好的相片嗎？___________________________8.發(fā)現(xiàn)野生動物就在你的鼻子下面。_______________________9.我們收集植物和昆蟲。___________________10.不僅僅是閱讀。______________________________________________________

beinterestedinactout按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。morethanfallinlovewithtakephotosWecollectplantsandinsects.insectDiscoverwildliferightunderyournose!Canyoutakegoodphotos?It’smorethanreading.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，

學(xué)生根據(jù)教師提供的思維導(dǎo)圖復(fù)述學(xué)校社團納新廣告。Trytoretell(復(fù)述）theads.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，themusicclubtheartclubthedramaclubthechessclubthesportsclubthescienceclubthedancingclubthesingingclub俱樂部名稱的寫法join音樂俱樂部藝術(shù)俱樂部戲劇俱樂部棋藝俱樂部運動俱樂部科學(xué)俱樂部舞蹈俱樂部歌唱俱樂部

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，ClubssportsclubchessclubEnglishclubmusicclubswimmingclubartclub--What

club

do

you

want

to

join?Why?--I

want

to

join

the

….becauseIcan…Iamgoodat…Iwanttolearnto..

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Whatclubdoyouwanttojoin?Why?Freetalk

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，2aCompletetheemailwiththewordsintheboxcompletev.完成I’mreallyinteresedinIcanIcan’tIloveI’dlovetoCanII’dloveto=Iwouldloveto我愿意Ilove

I'dloveto

I'mreallyinterestedinCanI

Ican

Ican't

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，2bChooseoneclubfrom1b.Writeanemailtotheorganizerandsaywhyyou’dliketojointheclubchoosev.選擇organizern.組織者

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，

Writingtask（寫作任務(wù)）

假設(shè)你是李華，你校烹飪、讀書和自然俱樂部正在招收新會員。請你根據(jù)實際需求，選擇一個社團并發(fā)送一封電子郵件給俱樂部的負責(zé)人，介紹你自己并表達想加入俱樂部的意愿。注意：①郵件必須包含所給提示信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。②文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。③詞數(shù)：約80詞。郵件首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，DearJenny,Ihopeyouaredoinggreat.MynameisLiHua,andIwanttojointheNatureClubatourschoolbecauseIlikenatureandtakingpictures.Beinginyourclubwouldletmeenjoythesehobbiesmore.IamhappyaboutgoingonhikeseverySundaybecauseIlovebeingoutsideandtakingphotosofbeautifulthings.Ithinkmyphotoskillscanhelptheclub,especiallywhenwewatchbirdsandseedifferentplantsandanimals.Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.Thesearefunwaystolearnmoreaboutwildlife,whichIlove.IknowIcanbringenergyandhardworktotheclub,andIlookforwardtomeetingotherswholikenaturetoo.Thanksforreadingmymessage.IreallyhopetojointheNatureClubandhelpeveryoneenjoyandprotectnature.Bestwishes,LiHua

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Read

the

passage

and

match

the

main

ideas

with

paragraphs.

Expectation(期望)

for

joining

theclub.The

intention(意圖)

ofwritingandreasons

for

joining

the

clubSeveral

strengths(優(yōu)勢)

for

joining

the

teamDearJenny,Ihopeyouaredoinggreat.MynameisLiHua,andIwanttojointheNatureClubatourschoolbecauseIlikenatureandtakingpictures.Beinginyourclubwouldletmeenjoythesehobbiesmore.IamhappyaboutgoingonhikeseverySundaybecauseIlovebeingoutsideandtakingphotosofbeautifulthings.Ithinkmyphotoskillscanhelptheclub,especiallywhenwewatchbirdsandseedifferentplantsandanimals.Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.Thesearefunwaystolearnmoreaboutwildlife,whichIlove.IknowIcanbringenergyandhardworktotheclub,andIlookforwardtomeetingotherswholikenaturetoo.Thanksforreadingmymessage.IreallyhopetojointheNatureClubandhelpeveryoneenjoyandprotectnature.Bestwishes,LiHua

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，DearJenny,Ihopeyouaredoinggreat.MynameisLiHua,andIwanttojointheNatureClubatourschoolbecauseIlikenatureandtakingpictures.Beinginyourclubwouldletmeenjoythesehobbiesmore.IamhappyaboutgoingonhikeseverySundaybecauseIlovebeingoutsideandtakingphotosofbeautifulthings.Ithinkmyphotoskillscanhelptheclub,especiallywhenwewatchbirdsandseedifferentplantsandanimals.Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.Thesearefunwaystolearnmoreaboutwildlife,whichIlove.IknowIcanbringenergyandhardworktotheclub,andIlookforwardtomeetingotherswholikenaturetoo.Thanksforreadingmymessage.IreallyhopetojointheNatureClubandhelpeveryoneenjoyandprotectnature.Bestwishes,LiHuaSum

up

thestructureof

the

applicationletter：IntentionReasonsStrengthsExpectation√√

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Person（人稱）02030405060701Tense(時態(tài)）Initial(首字母）Spelling(拼寫）Complete（完整性）Punctuation（標點符號）SkillsDiscussingroups:PresenttenseICapitallettercorrectCompleteUsecorrectlyHandwriting（書寫）PresenttenseStandard(規(guī)范）

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，第一步:審題：人稱

時態(tài)

_第二步：構(gòu)思整體布局，列框架。_____段式。

第一段：第二段：第三段：一般現(xiàn)在時第一人稱1.對社團的期望2.自身的優(yōu)勢3.期待的結(jié)果三IwanttojointheNatureClubatourschoolbecauseIlikenatureandtakingpictures.Ithinkmyphotoskillscanhelptheclub,especiallywhenwewatchbirdsandseedifferentplantsandanimals.Thanksforreadingmymessage.IreallyhopetojointheNatureClubandhelpeveryoneenjoyandprotectnature.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Read

P1and

answer

the

question.1.WhydoesLiHuawanttojointhenatureclub？Becauseshelikesnatureandtakingpictures.Beinginyourclubwouldletherenjoythesehobbiesmore.Reasons

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Reasons:

Get

Ideas

Ready

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.IamhappyaboutgoingonhikeseverySundaybecauseIlovebeingoutsideandtakingphotosofbeautifulthings.Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.topic

sentences

主題句linking

words

連接詞Reasons:

Get

Topic

Sentences＆Linking

words

Ready

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.Reasons:Get

Words

andExpressions(表達)

ReadyInterest/

Hobby：love

doing

sth.like/enjoy

doing

sth.be

interested

in

doing

sth.be

fond

of

doing

sth.Self-improvement(自我提升)：improve

sth.learn

more

about

sth.IamhappyaboutgoingonhikeseverySundaybecauseIlovebeingoutsideandtakingphotosofbeautifulthings.Also,Iwanttolearnaboutcollectingplantsandbugs,andgoingtoparks.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，申請的原因(2條)：

(主題句)，

(過渡詞),

.(原因①-喜歡自然)

(過渡詞),

.(原因②-

)acting

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Read

P2

and

finish

the

table.Several

stengthsattakingphotos.in

watchingbirds.AbilityExperienceTeamwork團隊合作Personality個性Be_______Have_______________

Work

well

with

_____________.Be

________and__________.

Strengths:

Get

Ideas

Ready

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Strengths:

Get

Ideas

Ready

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Think

about

moredo

well

in

doing

sth.havetalent

indoing

sth.be

experienced(經(jīng)驗豐富的)

in

doingsth.getonwellwithsb.；havea

strong

team

spirit(團隊精神)active,responsible,......Strengths:

Get

Word

and

Expressions(表達)Ready

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Extensivelanguages(1)Ifyouthinkyoucan,youcan.你認為你行，你就行。

(2)Onefingercan’tliftasmallstone.勢單力薄。

(3)Youcannotclapwithonehand.孤掌難鳴。(4)Interestisthebestteacher.興趣是最好的老師。(5)Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。(6)Toyoungpeople,learningmeansmoreopportunitiesforbetterjob.對年輕人來說，學(xué)習(xí)意味著更多的機會去做更好的工作。

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Introducetheclubyouwanttojoin.Requirements:1.Donotshowrealnamesandschool.2.Nolessthan80words.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Evaluationstandards(評價標準):15’Beautifulhandwriting(書寫美觀)7’3’2’Structure（結(jié)構(gòu)）：Doyouhavethreeparagraphs?Richcontents(內(nèi)容):Doeseachparagraphhavemainidea?Doyouintroducebasicinformation?Language:Doyoumakeanyspellingorgrammarmistakes?Doyouuselinkingwords?3’

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Workinpairs.

Evaluateyourdeskmate’swritingwiththehelpofthestandards.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，Peer

assessment(寫作互評表)

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，HomeworkFor

allPolishyourapplicationletterand

handitintoyour

Englishteacher.OptionalThinkabouthowtowritean

applicationletterforbeinga

memberofaclub.

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，謝謝大家教學(xué)的藝術(shù)不在于傳授本領(lǐng)，而在于善于激勵喚醒和鼓舞。

助力教學(xué)僅限個人使用，樣，也可能因討厭一位老師而討厭學(xué)習(xí)。一個被學(xué)生喜歡的老師，其教育效果總是超出一般教師。無論中學(xué)生還是小學(xué)生，他們對自己喜歡的老師都會有一些普遍認同的標準，諸如尊重和理解學(xué)生，寬容、不傷害學(xué)生自尊心，平等待人、說話辦事公道、有耐心、不輕易發(fā)脾氣等。教師要放下架子，把學(xué)生放在心上?！岸紫律碜雍蛯W(xué)生說話，走下講臺給學(xué)生講課”;關(guān)心學(xué)生情感體驗，讓學(xué)生感受到被關(guān)懷的溫暖;自覺接受學(xué)生的評價，努力做學(xué)生喜歡的老師。教師要學(xué)會寬容，寬容學(xué)生的錯誤和過失，寬容學(xué)生一時沒有取得很大的進步。蘇霍姆林斯基說過：有時寬容引起的道德震動，比懲罰更強烈。每當(dāng)想起葉圣陶先生的話：你這糊涂的先生，在你教鞭下有瓦特，在你的冷眼里有牛頓，在你的譏笑里有愛迪生。身為教師，就更加感受到自己職責(zé)的神圣和一言一行的重要。善待每一個學(xué)生，做學(xué)生喜歡的老師，師生雙方才會有愉快的情感體驗。一個教師，只有當(dāng)他受到學(xué)生