應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作講評(píng)假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)筆友Patick寫(xiě)信告訴你，每當(dāng)別人向他求助時(shí)，他總是不會(huì)說(shuō)不，這極大地影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。請(qǐng)你給他回信，幫他解決這一問(wèn)題，內(nèi)容包括:1.安撫對(duì)方;2.提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意:1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。安撫對(duì)方：說(shuō)明你很善良、友好；

這是很多人都會(huì)遇到的狀況，很普遍正常過(guò)渡句：However,kindnessandgenerosityshouldhavealimit.

Theproblemisnotdifficulttotackle.提出建議：何時(shí)說(shuō)不？怎么說(shuō)不？且說(shuō)明這樣建議的理由Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentences拒絕/說(shuō)不neversay“no”turnsb.down/declinesb’srequestforassistancedenyone’srequestforhelprefuseone’srequestforaid被......困擾bebothered/influencedby…befacedwith/beconfrontedwith/encounter

leavesb.inamessexertanegative/adverse/severeimpacton...每當(dāng)別人向他求助時(shí)，他總是不會(huì)說(shuō)不，這極大地影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。Arequirementisaqualityorqualificationthatyoumusthaveinordertobeallowedtodosomethingortobesuitableforsomething.Whatistheminimumentrancerequirementforthiscourse?Yourrequirementsarethethingsthatyouneed.Potatoescanprovideone-thirdofourdailyrequirementofvitaminC.Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentences句型1adj+tohearthat…,I’mwritingto…Sosorry/upset/sorrowfultohearthat

yourstudyandlifearegreatlyinfluencedwiththepresentsituationwhereyouneverdaretosay“no”

whensomeonefrequentlyturntoyouforhelp,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructive/sensiblesuggestionstohelpyouout.Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentencesYourlastletterinformedmethat

you’reconfrontedwithabothering/distressingproblemthatyouneverdaretodenyone’srequest

whentheyturntoyouforhelp.

Upsetandconcerned,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyoualleviate/getridof/address/tackleit....However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyouadoptthefollowingsuggestions.句型2無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)+名詞性從句+狀語(yǔ)從句,I’mwritingto…Ihopethisletterfindsyou.Recentlyyouhaverelatedtomethatyouareconfrontedwithadistressingproblemthatyouareunabletodeclineothers’requestwhenaskedtoofferahelpinghand.Acquaintedwithit,Itakegreatdelightindroppingyoualinetohelpyouresolveit.(江俊)Para.2comfortandsuggestions幫助別人不是壞事，說(shuō)明你很善良、大方，大家都信賴你。句型3It’s+adj./n.+todo,which(非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)It’snotabadthingforyoutolendahelpinghandtothoseinneed/adversity,which

showsyourkindness,generosityandreliability.

句型4非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做主語(yǔ)+which(非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)Helpingtheneedypeopleisindeedpraiseworthy,fromwhichpeoplesenseyou’rekind,generousandreliable.

Nevercoulditbedeniedthatyourkindnessandgenerosityareyourmarvellousmeritsandyoushouletakeprideinbeing

endowedwithsuchfabulousnature.(佳馨)過(guò)渡：但是，幫助人是有限度的，所以你要學(xué)會(huì)跟人說(shuō)“不”。句型5

無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)/therebe句式/插入However,kindnessandgenerosityshouldhavealimit.However,thereshouldbealimitofyourkindnessandgenerosity.However,frommyperspective,youshouldsetalimittoyourkindnessandgenerosity.

AsfarasIamconcerned,itisyourkindnessthatpromptsyoutoextendahelpinghandtothoseinneed,whichisworthpraising.However,everythingshouldhavealimit.(煒晉)建議：超出你能力的時(shí)候，你不方便的時(shí)候，你都應(yīng)該勇敢的說(shuō)不。句型6either…orSay“no”withouthesitationeither

whenyou’reincompetent

or

it’sinconvenientforyou.

句型7It’ssuggestedthat…/WereIyou,…It’ssuggestedthatyou(should)expressyourrefusal/rejection

whenyoufeelit’soutof/beyondyourcapability

or

it’snotatyourconvenience.

WereIyou,Iwoulddenyhis/herrequest

whenIfeelit’soutofmycapability

or

it’snotatmyconvenience.

事情超出你能力范圍時(shí)拒絕Don’tbeshytosaynowhenyouconsidertherequestsaretoodemanding,

whichplace/putyouundergreatpressure/whichexertgreatpressureonyou.與你個(gè)人生活相沖突時(shí)Whentherequestsfromothersruncountertoyourownpersonallife,itissensibleofyoutosay“no”inapolitemanner.（祺昕）be/run/gocountertosth與......相反如何拒絕：禮貌拒絕Youarerecommendedtorefuseothers’requestinapolitewayandprovidesomegenuinereasons,whichisofgreatbenefittoeaseyourmentalpressureandcomfortothersatthesametime/simultaneously.(綺雯)句型8What…isthat…;it句式再者，你需記住的是你沒(méi)有義務(wù)去幫忙解決所有問(wèn)題，每個(gè)人都有自己獨(dú)立解決問(wèn)題的能力。Whatyoushouldkeepinmindisthatit’snotyourdutyto

solve/address/tacklealltheproblemsandeveryonepossessestheabilitytotacklethetaskindependently.

Para.2comfortandsuggestions總結(jié)陳詞:只有這樣，你才能從困境中走出。句型9Onlyinthisway…倒裝Onlyinthiswaycanyouwithdrawfromtheawfulsituation.

Para.3politeending希望我的建議能對(duì)你有用。Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!Sincerelyhopethatyoufindmysuggestionspractical,whichcouldhelpyougetridofthistroubleassoonaspossible.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.(雅煊)Inanutshell,Ihopemysuggestionscouldbeconstructiveforyou.Dohope

thatyoucanwalkoutofthatshadowandembraceyourlifehappily.(韻怡)

DearPatrick,Sosorry/upsettohearthat

yourstudyandlifearegreatlyinfluencedbythepresentsituationwhere

youneverdaretosay“no”

when

someonefrequentlyturntoyouforhelp,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyouout.Helpingtheneedypeopleisindeedpraiseworthy,fromwhichpeoplesenseyourkindness,generosityandreliability.However,

frommyperspective,youshouldsetalimittothem.Whatyoushouldkeepinmindisthatit’snotyourdutytosolvealltheproblemsandeveryonepossessestheabilitytotacklethetaskindependently.Therefore,it’ssuggestedthatyou(should)expressyourrefusalwhenyoufeelit’soutof/beyondyourcapabilityorit’snotatyourconvenience.Onlyinthiswaycanyouwithdrawfromtheawfulsituation.

Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua參考范文一：

DearPatrick,

Knowingthatyouareconfrontedwiththeproblemthatyoudon’tknowhowtosaynotoothers’request,which

negativelyimpactyourstudyandlife,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionstohelpyoutackleit.Itisobviouslyavirtuetobenice,kindandhelpfultowardothers,butthereisapointwherepeoplecanenduptakingadvantageofyou,andyoushouldbeawareofsettinglimitsandmaintainingyoursenseofwellbeing.Thefollowingsuggestionmaybehelpful.Tellpeo