第第頁(yè)滬教版（五四學(xué)制）（2024）六年級(jí)下冊(cè)英語(yǔ)期末復(fù)習(xí)：作文練習(xí)題一、U6單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：與名人對(duì)話/雜交水稻之父/歷史名人1．學(xué)校讀書會(huì)組織開展“與名人對(duì)話”活動(dòng)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生積極閱讀魯迅先生的作品。魯迅先生是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的奠基人之一，他不僅是一位作家，也是一位思想家和革命家，對(duì)中國(guó)文化和社會(huì)產(chǎn)生了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。魯迅的作品《朝花夕拾》(DawnBlossomsPluckedatDusk),《吶喊》(CalltoArms)，《彷徨》(Hesitation)等，至今仍被廣泛閱讀和研究。請(qǐng)以“AconversationwithLuXun:InsightsfromaLiteraryGiant”為題，根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，不少于60詞。Suggestedquestions:(1)IntroduceLuXunandhissignificanceinmodernChineseliterature;(2)DescribeoneofLuXun’sfamousworksandexplainitsimpactonsociety;(3)DiscusshowLuXun’sideasandwritingscontinuetoinspirepeopletoday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：AconversationwithLuXun:InsightsfromaLiteraryGiantLuXunwasasignificantwriterinmodernChina,knownforhisdeepinsightsintosocietyandhiscriticalspirit.OneofhismostfamousworksisDawnBlossomsPluckedatDusk,acollectionofmemoiressaysthattakeusthroughhischildhoodandyouth.Theseessaysnotonlytellpersonalgrowthstoriesbutalsoreflectthesociallandscapeofthatera.IfIcouldhaveaconversationwithLuXun,Iwouldaskhimabouttheinspirationbehindhiswritingandhowhelookedupontheworldaroundhim.Iwouldalsoinquireaboutthemessagehehopedtoconveythroughhisvividandpoignantmemories.Itwouldbefascinatingtohearhisthoughtsonhowliteraturecanbeamirrortosocietyandatoolforchange.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，注意字母大小寫以及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。[寫作步驟]第一步、介紹魯迅及其在現(xiàn)代中國(guó)文學(xué)中的重要性；第二步、描述魯迅的一部著名作品并解釋其對(duì)社會(huì)的影響；第三步、討論魯迅的思想和作品如何繼續(xù)激勵(lì)當(dāng)代人。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①notonly…butalso不僅……而且②haveaconversation交談③hopetodosth.希望做某事[高分句型]①Oneofhismostfamousworksis DawnBlossomsPluckedatDusk,acollectionofmemoiressaysthattakeusthroughhischildhoodandyouth.(oneof+the+形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù))2．古今中外的名人猶如一顆顆明星一般閃耀在歷史的星空中。請(qǐng)選擇一位你了解的歷史名人，談?wù)勀銓?duì)他/她的看法，60詞以上。包括但不限于以下內(nèi)容：●對(duì)他/她的簡(jiǎn)要介紹；●他/她的主要貢獻(xiàn)；●他/她身上值得學(xué)習(xí)的品質(zhì)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AlbertEinsteinwasafamousGermanscientist.Hediscoveredthetheoryofrelativity,whichchangedhowweseetimeandspace.HealsocameupwiththefamousequationE=mc2whichshowshowenergyandmatterarerelated.IadmireEinsteinforhiscuriosityandbravery.Heneverstoppedaskingquestionsandshowedusthatit’sokaytothinkdifferently.Healsobelievedinpeaceandusedhisfametospeakupforwhatwasright.Inconclusion,AlbertEinsteinwasanamazingpersonwhomadetheworldabetterplace.Weshouldlearntobecurious,braveandkind,justlikehim.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，先寫一下對(duì)他/她的簡(jiǎn)要介紹；第二步，寫一下他/她的主要貢獻(xiàn)；第三步，最后寫一下他/她身上值得學(xué)習(xí)的品質(zhì)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thinkdifferently不同的方式思考②believedin相信③abetterplace一個(gè)更好的地方[高分句型]①HealsocameupwiththefamousequationE=mc2whichshowshowenergyandmatterarerelated.（定語(yǔ)從句）②Heneverstoppedaskingquestionsandshowedusthatit’sokaytothinkdifferently.（and連接并列成分，賓語(yǔ)從句）3．2021年5月22日，“雜交水稻之父”袁隆平院士在湖南長(zhǎng)沙與世長(zhǎng)辭，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的袁隆平院士的信息簡(jiǎn)介，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：1.書寫規(guī)范，語(yǔ)法正確。2.不少于五句話。FactBox:YuanLongping____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

FactBox:YuanLongping

YuanLongpingisafamousscientist.HewasborninBeijingin1930.Hedevelopedanewkindofricein1976.Hetravelledaroundtheworldandtaughtpeopletogrowricein1980.HewonWorldFoodPrizein2004.Helivedtobeninety-oneanddiedin2021.IthinkMr.Yuanisagreatperson.Heissoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.Iwillneverforgethim.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏題目中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹袁隆平的生平事跡；第二步，談?wù)剬?duì)袁隆平的評(píng)價(jià)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bebornin出生于②teachsb.todosth.教某人做某事③livetobe活到……歲[高分句型]①IthinkMr.Yuanisagreatperson.(賓語(yǔ)從句)②Heissoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.(so…that…“如此……以至于……”)二、U5單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：綠色社區(qū)/環(huán)保在行動(dòng)4．以“MyGreenNeighbourhood”為題，寫一篇短文。描述你所在的綠色社區(qū)的樣子，人們?yōu)榻ㄔO(shè)綠色社區(qū)做了哪些事情，以及你對(duì)綠色社區(qū)的感受。詞數(shù)60詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyGreenNeighbourhoodMyneighbourhoodisagreenandlovelyplace.Therearemanytreesandflowerseverywhere.Wehaveabigcommunitygardenwherepeoplegrowallkindsofplants.Tomakeitgreener,peopleheredoalot.Theysortrubbishcarefullyandrecyclethingslikebottlesandpaper.Somealsousebicyclesinsteadofcars.Ireallylovemygreenneighbourhood.Itmakesmefeelrelaxedandcomfortable.It’sgreattoliveinsuchaplace,andI’mproudtobeapartofit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：結(jié)合題干介紹社區(qū)環(huán)境、居民環(huán)保行動(dòng)以及個(gè)人感受。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹社區(qū)的整體環(huán)境；第二步，介紹社區(qū)居民具體的環(huán)保行為；第三步，介紹自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①allkindsof各種各樣的②carefully小心地，仔細(xì)地③like像④insteadof代替，而不是[高分句型]①Therearemanytreesandflowerseverywhere.（therebe句型）②Tomakeitgreener,peopleheredoalot.（動(dòng)詞不定式表示目的）5．Writeadiaryinatleast50words（假設(shè)你是一名關(guān)注環(huán)保的學(xué)生，近期開始嘗試在日常生活中實(shí)踐綠色生活方式。請(qǐng)以日記的形式，記錄你采取的一項(xiàng)環(huán)保行動(dòng)以及這些行動(dòng)對(duì)你的生活方式、環(huán)保意識(shí)或周圍人產(chǎn)生的積極影響。不少于50詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】(forreference)April17th

SunnyTodaymarksanewbeginningforme.Idecidedtostartbeingmoreeco-friendly,soIusedmyownwaterbottleinsteadofbuyinganewplasticone.Itfeltreallygoodtodosomethinggoodfortheplanet.Whenmyfriendssawit,theyaskedmewhy.Itoldthemabouthowplastichurtstheenvironmentandhowwecanhelpbyusingless.Theywerereallyinterestedandsaidtheywouldtryittoo.Itmakesmehappytoknowthatevensmallthingslikethiscanmakeabigdifference.I’mgoingtokeepdoingmyparttohelpprotectourplanet.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇日記；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的一項(xiàng)環(huán)保行動(dòng)——自己帶水喝；第二步，闡述這一活動(dòng)對(duì)自己和他人的影響；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)決心。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①decidetodo決定做某事②insteadof代替，而不是③makeabigdifference產(chǎn)生很大影響④keepdoing堅(jiān)持做[高分句型]①Whenmyfriendssawit,theyaskedmewhy.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)②Itoldthemabouthowplastichurtstheenvironmentandhowwecanhelpbyusingless.(how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)③Itmakesmehappytoknowthatevensmallthingslikethiscanmakeabigdifference.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)6．Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegiveninformation(根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)OneofyourfriendsPhilldoesn’tunderstandwhyit’simportanttohaveagreenneighbourhood.Writeane-mailtotellhimthereason(你的朋友Phill不明白綠色城區(qū)的重要性，請(qǐng)寫一篇電子郵件向他解釋人們可以怎樣保持健康的環(huán)境以及這么做的理由)Suggestedquestions:(1)Whyareyouwritingthise-mail?(2)Whatdopeopledoinyourneighbourhoodtokeepitgreen?Whyarethesethingsimportant?(3)What’syourownexperiencewithgreenneighbourhood?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearPhill,I’mwritingthise-mailbecauseIwanttosharewhyagreenneighbourhoodmatters.Inmyarea,peopleplanttreesandflowers,recyclewaste,andridebikesinsteadofdriving.Theseactionsreducepollution,cleantheair,andprotectnature.Forexample,recyclingsavesresources,andtreesgiveusfreshoxygen.Myfamilyalsohelpbyusingreusablebagsandsavingwater.Lastweekend,Ijoinedaparkcleanupandfeltproudtomakeourareacleaner.Agreenneighbourhoodkeepsushealthyandhappy.

Let’sworktogethertoprotectourenvironment!Bestregards,[×××]【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞提示要點(diǎn)寫作，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開篇直接說明本郵件的目的是分享綠色社區(qū)很重要的原因；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從社區(qū)居民的做法、我家人的做法、這樣做的好處等幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹綠色社區(qū)很重要；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。呼吁大家一起保護(hù)環(huán)境。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①planttrees植樹②recyclewaste回收垃圾③insteadof代替④reducepollution減少污染[高分句型]①I’mwritingthisemailbecauseIwanttosharewhyagreenneighbourhoodmatters.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；why引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）②Let’sworktogethertoprotectourenvironment!（不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）三、U4單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：四季的樂趣/我是天氣預(yù)報(bào)員7．假如你是李華，是學(xué)校的播音員，你每天為學(xué)校播報(bào)天氣情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格信息，為大家播報(bào)近三天的天氣狀況。星期FridaySaturdaySunday天氣建議適合課后進(jìn)行室外活動(dòng)?？梢栽诩易黾彝プ鳂I(yè)，幫父母做家務(wù)。適合和家人去參觀農(nóng)場(chǎng)。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息；4.詞數(shù)：不少于40詞。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）參考詞匯：dothehousework做家務(wù)Goodmorning,boysandgirls!NowI’dliketotellyoutheweatheronFriday,SaturdayandSunday.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening!【答案】例文Goodmorning,boysandgirls!NowI’dliketotellyoutheweatheronFriday,SaturdayandSunday.It’scloudyonFriday.Soit’scool.It’sagoodtimetoplaybasketballafterclass.ButonSaturday,it’sarainyday.Youcanstayathometodoyourhomework.Alsoyoucanhelpyourparentstodothehousework.OnSunday,it’sasunnyday.Youcangotothefarmwithyourfamily.That’sall.Thankyouforyourlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為天氣信息播報(bào)；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：注意不要遺漏表格中給出的要點(diǎn)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。表格中列出了三天的天氣，為同學(xué)們播報(bào)天氣信息。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。首先點(diǎn)出本次播報(bào)的主題是周五、周六和周日的天氣；其次具體介紹這三天的天氣情況及活動(dòng)建議。第三步：書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表示感謝收聽。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①stayathome呆在家里②playbasketball打籃球③gotothefarm去農(nóng)場(chǎng)④dohousework做家務(wù)⑤dohomework做家庭作業(yè)[高分句型]①Youcanstayathometodoyourhomework.（情態(tài)動(dòng)詞后跟動(dòng)詞原形）②It’sagoodtimetoplaybasketballafterclass.（it為形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式為真正的主語(yǔ)）8．一年有四季，各季節(jié)天氣不同，帶給人們的樂趣也不同。根據(jù)以下表格內(nèi)容介紹一下你的家鄉(xiāng)的四季及人們的活動(dòng)。seasonweatheractivity(活動(dòng))springwarmflykitessummerhotgoswimmingautumncoolhelpthefarmerswintercoldmakesnowmen寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)。3.字跡工整、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。4.至少50詞。TheFourSeasonsinOurHometown_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheFourSeasonsinOurHometownTherearefourseasonsinayear.Theweatherindifferentseasonsisverydifferent.Peoplecandodifferentactivitiesinourhometown.Itiswarminspring.Wecanflykitesinthepark.Insummer,itishot.Wecangoswimmingintheriver.Inautumn,itiscool.Wecanhelpthefarmersgetthecropsin.Itiscoldinwinter.Wecanmakesnowmen.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭引出本文主題；第二步，介紹不同季節(jié)的天氣以及人們所做的活動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①flykites放風(fēng)箏②goswimming去游泳③helpsbdosth幫助某人做某事④makesnowmen堆雪人[高分句型]①Therearefourseasonsinayear.（therebe句型）四、U3單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：難忘的節(jié)日/節(jié)日美食9．Writeacompositioninatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“AnUnforgettableFestival”（以“一個(gè)難忘的節(jié)日”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）節(jié)日常常給人們帶來(lái)溫暖和特別的回憶。描述一個(gè)你慶祝過的、給你留下深刻印象的節(jié)日。分享你的慶?；顒?dòng)和感受并說明這個(gè)節(jié)日令你難忘的原因。GuidingQuestions:1.Whatwastheunforgettablefestival?2.Whatdidyoudoduringthefestival?3.Whywasthefestivalunforgettable?（注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分；2.照抄閱讀語(yǔ)篇不得分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableFestivalThemostunforgettablefestivalIexperiencedwastheSpringFestivallastyear.Onthatday,myfamilydecoratedthehousewithredlanternsandpapercuttings.Wecookeddumplingstogetherandenjoyedabigfamilyreuniondinner.Atnight,wesetofffireworksintheyard,lightingupthedarkskywithcolorfulsparks.Thisfestivalwasspecialbecausemygrandparents,wholivefaraway,cametocelebratewithus.Theirlaughterandstoriesmadethedaywarmandhappy.Eventhoughthefireworksfadedquickly,thejoyofbeingtogetherstayedinmyheartforever.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過去時(shí)”為主；③提示：應(yīng)注意題干給出的要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己最難忘的節(jié)日是春節(jié)；第二步，根據(jù)題干的要點(diǎn)，描述春節(jié)期間的活動(dòng)，介紹為什么這個(gè)節(jié)日令人難忘；第三步，給出評(píng)價(jià)并收尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①setoff引發(fā)②eventhough雖然[高分句型]①Wecookeddumplingstogetherandenjoyedabigfamilyreuniondinner.（and連接并列句）②Thisfestivalwasspecialbecausemygrandparents,wholivefaraway,cametocelebratewithus.（定語(yǔ)從句，原因狀語(yǔ)從句）10．假如你的好朋友李華是學(xué)校英文記者團(tuán)的一員，他正在征集“Chinesefestivalfoodspreadsaroundtheworld”的文章，請(qǐng)你寫一篇不少于60詞的短文介紹你最喜愛的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日美食。Suggestedquestions:(1)WhatisyourfavouritetraditionalChinesefestivalfood?(2)Whatdoesthisfoodtastelike,andwhatdoesitlooklike?(3)Whydoyoulikethisfood,andwhydoyouthinkitcouldattractforeigners?(4)Howdoyouthinkthisfoodrepresentsthecultureandtraditionsofthefestival?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ChinesefestivalfoodspreadsaroundtheworldMyfavouritetraditionalChinesefestivalistheMid-AutumnFestival,andthefoodIlovemostismooncakes.Mooncakesareroundpastriesfilledwithsweetorsavouryfillings,suchasredbeanpaste,lotusseedpaste,orevensaltedeggyolk.Theyhavearich,densetextureandabeautifuldesignontop.Ilikemooncakesbecausetheynotonlytastedeliciousbutalsoshowfamilyunityandtogethernessduringthefestival.Ithinkmooncakescouldattractforeignersbecauseoftheiruniqueflavoursandtheculturalstorybehindthem.Theyareaperfectblendoftraditionandtaste,makingthemadelightfultreatforanyoneinterestedinChineseculture.ThisfoodtrulyrepresentsthespiritoftheMid-AutumnFestival,whenfamiliesgathertocelebrateandsharehappinessunderthefullmoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：圍繞最喜歡的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日美食——月餅展開介紹，涵蓋月餅的外觀、口味、喜愛原因、對(duì)外國(guó)人的吸引力以及其代表的節(jié)日精神等要點(diǎn)，無(wú)明顯遺漏要點(diǎn)，突出了月餅這一寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明寫作主題，明確闡述了自己最喜歡的傳統(tǒng)中國(guó)節(jié)日是中秋節(jié)，最喜歡的節(jié)日美食是月餅；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹了月餅的外觀、口味，闡述了喜歡月餅的原因，并分析了月餅對(duì)外國(guó)人的吸引力；第三步，通過總結(jié)再次強(qiáng)調(diào)月餅真正代表了中秋節(jié)家人團(tuán)聚、共享幸福的節(jié)日精神，對(duì)月餅進(jìn)行了評(píng)價(jià)，認(rèn)為它完美融合了傳統(tǒng)與美味，是展現(xiàn)中國(guó)文化的絕佳美食。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①pastries糕點(diǎn)②savoury咸香的③texture質(zhì)地④unity團(tuán)結(jié)⑤delightful令人愉快的[高分句型]①M(fèi)ooncakesareroundpastriesfilledwithsweetorsavouryfillings,suchasredbeanpaste,lotusseedpaste,orevensaltedeggyolk.(過去分詞短語(yǔ)filledwith…作后置定語(yǔ)修飾)②Ilikemooncakesbecausetheynotonlytastedeliciousbutalsoshowfamilyunityandtogethernessduringthefestival.(notonly…butalso…連接并列謂語(yǔ))五、U2單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：校規(guī)/家規(guī)11．近來(lái)，為了進(jìn)一步加強(qiáng)學(xué)生在校的管理，許多學(xué)校制定了新的校規(guī)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容提示，用英文給你的筆友Mark寫一封信，介紹你校的新校規(guī)，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)新校規(guī)的看法。作業(yè)按時(shí)完成手機(jī)禁止進(jìn)校睡眠約9小時(shí)閱讀一周一本好書鍛煉一天1小時(shí)安全1.不打架2.……(至少補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))你的看法……寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)70左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearMark,How’sitgoing?I'mgladtosharemynewschoolruleswithyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyourschoolrules?Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearMark,How’sitgoing?I’mgladtosharemynewschoolruleswithyou.Wemustfinishourhomeworkontime.Wecan’tbringmobilephonestoschool.Weshouldgetabout9hours’sleepaday.Wemustreadagoodbookonceaweek.Doingexerciseisalsoimportant.Wemustdoexerciseanhouraday.Wemustkeepsafefirst.Don’tfightwitheachotherandnevergoswimmingalone.Ithinktheseschoolrulesaregoodforus.Wemustfollowthem.Whataboutyourschoolrules?Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為信件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中學(xué)校新規(guī)則的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡(jiǎn)單問候朋友，說明寫信意圖，引出重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容“學(xué)校新校規(guī)”；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。簡(jiǎn)述學(xué)校新校規(guī)并談?wù)撘幌履銓?duì)新校規(guī)的個(gè)人看法；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)希望收到對(duì)方來(lái)信的期望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begladtodo很高興做某事②sharesthwithsb和某人分享某事③ontime準(zhǔn)時(shí)④fightwithsb和某人打架⑤goswimmingalone獨(dú)自去游泳⑥begoodfor對(duì)……有好處⑦whatabout…?做某事怎么樣[高分句型]①Doingexerciseisalsoimportant.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))②Don’tfightwitheachotherandnevergoswimmingalone.(祈使句)③Ithinktheseschoolrulesaregoodforus.(賓語(yǔ)從句)12．根據(jù)所給提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的英語(yǔ)文段寫作。文中已給出內(nèi)容，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名：國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。沒有規(guī)矩不成方圓。假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Peter在郵件中詢問你家的家規(guī)，并讓你談?wù)剬?duì)這些家規(guī)的看法或感受。請(qǐng)根據(jù)Peter所提出的問題，給他寫封回信。提示詞語(yǔ)：can’t,haveto,necessary,strict,important,unfair提示問題：1.Whatrulesdoyouhaveathome?2.Whatdoyouthinkoftherules?Why?DearPeter,I’mgladtohearfromyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】例文：DearPeter,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Herearesomerulesinmyfamily.First,Ican’tstayuplatebecausemyparentsthinksleepisimportantforhealth.Besides,Ihavetofinishhomeworkbeforeusingmyphone.Althoughthisfeelsstrictsometimes,Iknowit’snecessarytofocusonstudies.However,Ithinktherule“can’teatsnacksafter8PM”isabitunfair–I’malwayshungrywhilestudying!Whataboutyourfamilyrules?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Bestwishes,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，開頭已給出，引出本文主題；第二步，介紹家里的規(guī)矩；第三步，談?wù)勀銓?duì)這些規(guī)則的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①stayuplate熬夜②lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]①First ,Ican’tstayuplatebecausemyparentsthinksleepisimportantforhealth.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）②Althoughthisfeelsstrictsometimes,Iknowit’snecessarytofocusonstudies.（Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）六、U1單元話題期末熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)：身邊的人/每個(gè)人不同的活動(dòng)13．假如你是王濤，今天是星期六，天氣很好，你和你的同學(xué)現(xiàn)在正在公園里玩耍。請(qǐng)發(fā)揮你的想象，介紹一下你和你的同學(xué)們都在做什么，還可以介紹你看到的動(dòng)物在做什么。要求：1.條理清晰，語(yǔ)義連貫,時(shí)態(tài)正確；2.合理發(fā)揮想象，人物姓名自擬，不少于60詞。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________