閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Janewasstillasleepwhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sheopenedhersleepyeyesandlookedattheclockonthetable.Itwasalreadynineo'clock!AlthoughJanewasstillverysleepy,sheknewshehadtogetupbecausehermotherwasworkinginherofficeandshecouldn'texpectheryoungerbrotherTom,whowasalwayssleepinglikeapig,toanswerthephone.Shequicklyputonacoatandrantothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthephone,ontheotherendcamethewarmgreeting,“Goodmorning!”Itwasfromherfather,whowasasailorandrarelycamehome.Suddenly,Jane'ssleepinessdisappeared.Bornintoanotsorichfamily,JaneandTomfeltthestressoflife,buttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraightAstudentsandtookpartinvariousafterschoolactivities.Theyweretheprideofthefamily.“Goodmorning,Dad.Whyareyoucallingussoearlyontheweekend?”Janesaid,pretendingtobeannoyed."TomandIhavebeenverynicerecently.”"Mydear,todayisyourmother'sbirthday,andIhaveorderedacakeonlineanditwillbesenttoourhomelatethisafternoon.Doremembertotakethecake.Itismysurpriseforyourmother.”Hearingherfather'swords,Janefeltalittleashamed.Howcouldsheforgethermother'sbirthday?Whileshewaschattingwithherfather,Janelookedaroundtheroomandsawalotofdirtyclothesonthesofa.Thefloorhadnotbeencleanedfordays,sincehermotherhadbeenatworkallweek.Shelookedattheclockagainandwassurethatshestillhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforhermother.“Well,Dad,nowI'mgoingtowakeTomup.WewillgiveMumasurprise,too!”Janesaidandhungupthephone.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答。Paragraph1:JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、續(xù)寫分析第一段續(xù)寫分析首段以“JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.”開頭，核心任務是展現(xiàn)兄妹二人如何分工協(xié)作完成驚喜準備。需通過細節(jié)描寫體現(xiàn)兩人的默契與行動力：喚醒湯姆：可描述湯姆賴床的樣子（如用枕頭蒙頭、嘟囔抱怨），Jane如何軟硬兼施（如掀開被子、威脅“不給蛋糕”）讓他起床，體現(xiàn)兄妹間的日?；?。分工計劃：Jane作為姐姐主導全局，分配任務（如湯姆打掃客廳、整理雜物，自己負責洗衣、布置餐桌），突出兩人的責任感。過程細節(jié)：插入小插曲，如湯姆被臟襪子熏到皺眉，Jane在廚房發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽未吃完的面包（暗示媽媽忙碌），增強畫面感。情感鋪墊：通過對話（如“媽媽上次說客廳窗簾該洗了”）展現(xiàn)兄妹對媽媽的觀察與關心，為后文驚喜做情感伏筆。第二段續(xù)寫分析次段以“‘Happybirthday,Mum!’JaneandTomshouted...”開頭，重點刻畫媽媽回家后的反應及驚喜氛圍：場景呈現(xiàn)：描述煥然一新的房間（如潔凈的地板、疊好的衣物、餐桌上的鮮花），蛋糕與爸爸的禮物（如圍巾）的擺放，突出“家”的溫馨感。媽媽的情感變化：從疲憊開門到震驚落淚，通過動作描寫（手捂嘴巴、撫摸孩子頭發(fā)）和語言（“這是我收到的最好的禮物”）展現(xiàn)媽媽的感動。電話驚喜：爸爸來電時，全家圍坐聽電話，補足“父親缺席但愛在場”的情感線，強化家庭凝聚力。主題升華：以Jane的心理活動收尾（“幸福不在于物質，而在于用心陪伴”），點明平凡生活中的親情溫度。二、故事線晨起危機：Jane被電話吵醒，發(fā)現(xiàn)周末賴床錯過接電話，意識到要獨自應對。父親委托：爸爸來電透露媽媽生日驚喜（蛋糕），Jane因忘記生日而愧疚，決定加碼驚喜。兄妹協(xié)作：Jane喚醒湯姆，分工打掃房間、準備禮物，過程中穿插日常互動與對媽媽的觀察。驚喜時刻：媽媽回家收到雙重驚喜（整潔的家+蛋糕禮物），感動落淚，爸爸電話補位祝福。情感升華：通過平凡的家庭小事，展現(xiàn)親情的溫暖與“用心經營愛”的主題。三、短語積累sleeplikeapig

睡得很沉（非正式表達）pretendtobeannoyed

假裝生氣feelalittleashamed

感到有點愧疚hangupthephone

掛斷電話wakesb.up

叫醒某人shareaplanwithsb.

與某人分享計劃inahurry

匆忙地taketurnsdoingsth.

輪流做某事foldtheclothes

疊衣服setthetable

布置餐桌aburstoflaughter

一陣笑聲holdbacktears

忍住眼淚wrapsb.inahug

緊緊擁抱某人onthephone

在通電話cherisheverymoment

珍惜每一刻四、主旨升華句（含漢意）Themostpreciousgiftsinlifearenotboughtwithmoney,butcraftedwithloveandcare.

（生命中最珍貴的禮物不是用錢買來的，而是用愛與關懷精心打造的。）Inthehustleandbustleofdailylife,takingthetimetonoticeothers’needsisthebestwaytoshowlove.

（在日常生活的忙碌中，花時間留意他人的需求是表達愛的最佳方式。）Acleanhomeandasharedmealarenotjustchoresandfood—theyarethethreadsthatweaveafamilytogether.

（整潔的家與共享的餐食不僅是家務和食物，更是將家庭凝聚在一起的紐帶。）Evensmallactsofthoughtfulnesscanlightupsomeone’sdayandcreatememoriesthatlastalifetime.

（即使是小小的貼心舉動，也能照亮某人的一天，創(chuàng)造永恒的回憶。）Familyiswhereloveturnsordinarymomentsintoextraordinarymemories.

（家庭是愛將平凡時刻化作非凡回憶的地方。）寫作示范示范一Paragraph1:

JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.“Wakeup,lazybones!It’sMum’sbirthdaytoday,andweneedtomakethehousespotlessbeforeshegetshome!”sheshouted,yankingtheblanketoffhisbed.Tomgroaned,buryinghisfaceinthepillow.“Fivemoreminutes...”hemumbled.“Noway!Dad’ssendingacake,andwe’regoingtosurpriseherwithacleanhouse.Youcleanthelivingroom,andI’lldothelaundry.Go!”Janeordered,pushinghimoutofbed.Grumblingbutpliant,Tomshuffledtothelivingroomandstartedpickinguptoysandbooks.Meanwhile,Janesortedthedirtyclothes,noticingatearinMum’sfavoriteshirt—shemadeamentalnotetofixitlater.Astheyworked,Tomaccidentallyknockedoveravase,buttheylaugheditoff,determinedtofinishbeforethecakearrived.Paragraph2:

“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Mumfroze,staringatthesparklingcleanroom,theneatlyfoldedclothes,andthevaseoffreshflowersonthetable.“I...Idon’tknowwhattosay,”shewhispered,hereyeswellingup.Justthen,thedoorbellrang—thecakehadarrived.Janelitthecandles,andTomproudlypresentedthegiftthey’dmade:ahandmadecardwithphotosofthefamily.AsMumblewoutthecandles,thephonerang—itwasDad.“Happybirthday,mylove,”hesaidthroughthespeaker.“Thankyou,everyone,”Mumsaid,huggingherchildrentightly.“Thisisthebestbirthdayever.”Janesmiled,realizingthatlovewasneveraboutgrandgestures,butaboutshowingup—eveninpajamasandmessyhair.示范二Paragraph1:

JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.“Tom,listen!Dadcalled—today’sMum’sbirthday,andweforgot!”sheexclaimed.Tomjoltedawake,hiseyeswide.“Ohno!Whatshouldwedo?”“First,wecleanthehouse.Yousweepthefloor,andI’llwashthedishes.Then,we’lldecoratewiththeleftoverstreamersfromTom’sbirthday,”Janesaid,alreadygrabbingabroom.Astheyworked,TomnoticedapileofMum’soldphotoalbums.“RememberwhenDadtookustothebeach?”hesaid,flippingthroughapage.Janenodded,smiling.“Let’sputsomeofthesephotosonthewall—it’llmakeMumhappy.”Together,theyhungpicturesoffamilytripsandsillymoments,turningthelivingroomintoagalleryofmemories.Paragraph2:

“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Mumgasped,hergazesweepingoverthedecoratedroomandthephotos.“Youremembered,”shesaid,hervoicetrembling.Janeledhertothetable,wherethecakesatbesideawrappedpresent—Dad’sscarf,andacouponbookthey’dmade:

“GoodforonenightofcookingbyJaneandTom.”

“Ican’tbelieveyoudidallthis,”Mumsaid,huggingthemboth.Justthen,Dad’svideocallpoppedupontheTV.“Surprise!”heshouted,wavingfromhisship.Astheysang“HappyBirthday,”JanesawMum’stearsofjoyandrealizedthatlovewasthegreatestgiftofall—onethatnodistancecouldeverdiminish.示范三Paragraph1:

JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.“Tom,we’vegotthreehoursuntilMumgetshome.Let’ssplitthechores:youtacklethekitchen,andI’lldothebedrooms.Andnoslacking!”shesaid,pokinghisarm.Tomrolledhiseyesbutgrabbedasponge.“Fine,butonlyifyoupromisenottostealmycookieslater.”Astheyworked,JanefoundahalfeatensandwichinMum’soffice—evidenceofherbusyweek.Herheartached;Mumalwaysputeveryoneelsefirst.Shedecidedtoaddaspecialtouch:ahandwrittennoteonMum’spillow,saying

“Weloveyoumorethanallthestars.”

Meanwhile,Tomscrubbedthekitchensink,hummingatuneoffkey,andevenpolishedthesilverwareuntilitshone.Paragraph2:

“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Mum’stiredexpressionmeltedintodisbelief.“Youcleaned

everything?”sheasked,runningahandoverthespotlesscounter.Janenodded,leadinghertothelivingroomwherethecakewaited,toppedwithMum’sfavoritestrawberries.“Andthere’smore!”Tomsaid,pullingoutaplaylistofMum’sfavoritesongs.Asthemusicplayed,theypresentedthenoteandthescarf.Mumreadthenoteandhuggedthemfiercely.“Youtwoaremygreatestblessings,”shesaid.Justthen,Dad’svoiceboomedfromthewindow—he’dsentadeliveryofroses.Janesmiled,understandingthathomewasn’tjustaplace;itwaswhereloveturnedchaosintoharmony.示范四Paragraph1:

JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.“Tom,weneedtomaketodayspecialforMum.She’sbeensobusylately,”Janesaidsoftly.Tomnodded,suddenlyserious.“Let’smakeherfavoritedinnertoo—spaghettiwithmeatballs.”Janegrinned.“Perfect!Youstartthesauce,andI’llpreptheveggies.Butfirst,let’shidealltheclutterinthecloset—wecandealwithitlater.”Theyworkedquickly,chattingaboutMum’squirks:howshealwayshummedwhilefoldingclothes,howshekeptaluckypennyinherpurse.Astheycooked,Tomaccidentallyspilledflouronhisshirt,makingJanelaugh.“Youlooklikeasnowman!”sheteased,tossinghimatowel.Paragraph2:

“Happybirthday,Mum!”JaneandTomshoutedwhentheirmotheropenedthedoor.Thearomaofspaghettifilledtheair,andMum’seyeslitup.“Youmademyfavorite!”sheexclaimed.Janepointedtothetable,setwithherbestchinaandthecake.“Dadhelpedwiththecake,”Tomsaid,“butthedinner’sallus.”Mumtookabiteandsighedhappily.“It’sdelicious,kids.”Afterdinner,theyexchangedgifts,andDadcalledtowishherwell.AsMumblewoutthecandles,Janenoticedhowrelaxedshelooked—nostress,nohurry.“Thankyouformakingthisdaysospecial,”Mumsaid.Janesqueezedherhand.“No,thank

you

foreverythingyoudo.”Inthatmoment,Janeknewthatlovewasaboutseeingthepeopleyoucareaboutandshowingthemtheymatter—onemessy,wonderfulmomentatatime.六、參考答案Paragraph1:

JanehurriedtoTom'sroomandsharedherplanwithhim.“Tom,wakeup!It’sMum’sbirthday,andweneedtogetthehousereadybeforesheesback,”shewhisperedurgently,shakinghisshoulder.Tomsatup,rubbinghiseyes.“Whatdoweneedtodo?”heasked,yawning.“Youcleanthelivingroomandfoldtheclothesonthesofa,andI’llsweepthe