專題15讀后續(xù)寫之各種精彩收尾段落

一、讀后續(xù)寫收尾的方式：

>1.畫面定格

>2.對(duì)話收尾

>3.主題升華

>4.結(jié)尾留白

>5.首尾呼應(yīng)

二、畫面定格

1.人物動(dòng)作的畫面定格

如：（2020杭州高級(jí)中學(xué)等五校聯(lián)考）Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfor

therushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverand

momentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwith

apparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother'sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackinto

thedeluge.

如：Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythe

brooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditin

Dora'shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightly

intoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.

如：Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,"No."Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid,"Tomorrow

youcanbecomehumanagain.^^Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfor

therestofmylift...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopof

themountain,sheseemedtoinjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(1)Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightand

dayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.

天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個(gè)美麗

的時(shí)刻。黎明已經(jīng)來臨。(黎明到來的畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(2)Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpathfromtheshore

tothehorizon.

黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸到地平線橫亙而過的金

色道路。(黎明到來的畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(3)ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorange

paintonabluecanvas.

當(dāng)我涉過水晶般天藍(lán)色的輕柔的水時(shí)，日落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料。(美好日落時(shí)的

畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(4)Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight,resemblingapitch-black

curtaindrapedoverthes⑶逗留在天際的最后一縷陽光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空

被一層漆黑的幕布覆蓋。(日落時(shí)的畫面)

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(5)Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneand

hungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.

被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無盡的黑暗

吞噬了一切。（描寫夜空的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（6）Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistance

glistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.Itooka

fewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.

抬頭一看，我看到太陽比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見遠(yuǎn)處有一棵樹反射著太陽光，

發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識(shí)隨著熱度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現(xiàn)實(shí)中，

恢復(fù)了知覺。（特殊寓意）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（7）Dottedwithglitteringstars,thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality.綴

滿星光的天空，午夜的藍(lán)色，給了這一場(chǎng)景一個(gè)童話般的質(zhì)量。（神話般美麗的夜空畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

（8）Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweet

smellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssofte:油廠ace.潮濕的地面走起來很

冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟

的懷抱里。（雨后清新的畫面）

Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeam好.雨水打著窗戶，

向最后一縷陽光告別。

（雨水來臨的畫面）

2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面

(9)TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewould

fallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步時(shí)，樹葉在

我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會(huì)從我身邊掉下來，輕輕地?fù)u晃，緩緩落到到地面。(描寫

落葉的畫面)

三、對(duì)話收尾

(1)Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butboth

brothershadchangedtheirlastnames.doesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetold

methathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,“hesaid.Chestersaidhisbrotherhas

sinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhis

fatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,“Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymore

tripsnow.^^

(2)WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Ninasfamily

hadmovedtoabiggerapartment/Tveheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs5loyalty,butInever

imaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdog

traveledsuchalongdistancetofindus,“saidNina,“Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendaway

again.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis-animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.

Theyneedourloveandcare.^^

(3)HerhusbandspoketothedirectorofHeightvale,DoloresHaworth.Soonsheofferedhimajob

workingforthecompany.Shesaid,"Hejusthadabrilliantworkingattitudeandisdefinitelythe

typeofemployeewearelookingfor.Iwastold,"Ifhedoesthisforfree,imaginehisjobsifhewas

beingpaid.'Imethimandhewasalovelyandpoliteyoungmanandhehasalreadystarted

workingforus.”

(4)...Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtolead

atoughlifewithme?”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsof

stuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,"Yes!Forme,itisnotasufferingtolive.^^

四、主題升華

(1)Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmy

mom.Shehasbeauty,brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,Iwould

havenoideawhetherIcanbeafamousdancer.Someday,whenIamolderandhavechildren

ofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.(母愛的深遠(yuǎn)影響)

(2)....Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn'tequalhappiness.Andfreelife

stylealsodoesn'tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoes

everythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthink

moneyiseverything.Inmyopinion,moneycan'ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,

yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表達(dá)自己的價(jià)值觀)

(4)“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,“theteacheranswered."'First,you'vealmostmastered

oneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisfor

youropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.As

aproverbsays,"Everycoinhastwosides.5Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.

Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairto

everyone.”(借用名言警句來升華主題)

五、結(jié)尾留白

(1)Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans?”I

explainedthatI'dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital-gaveGraceandher

husbandsometimealonewithbaby."Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat?”I

asked.'Tdloveto,“shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningof

theendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy'sdeath.(故事結(jié)尾留白，給予讀者想象空

間）

(2)Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“Whocares?

Hewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.Withthat,heunwrappedthewhite

tissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohardrockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfell

ashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.

六、首尾呼應(yīng)

⑴

開頭：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsuprisesandamusements,allbecause

ofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.Onestrangefaimlytripwetook

whenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

結(jié)尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,

shewasstillakindandnicemom.

⑵

開頭：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedto

takemeonatriptotheWildWest.

結(jié)尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWild

Westwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.

⑶

開頭：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.

結(jié)尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious

搞笑的experience.

附：名言警句升華主題

1.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成。

2.Wellbegunishalfdone.好的開端是成功的一半。

3.East,west,homeisbest.金窩、銀窩,不如自己的草窩。

4.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.學(xué)無坦途。

5.Lookbeforeyouleap./Firstthink,thenact.三思而后行/摸著石頭過河

6.Itisnevertoolatetomend.亡羊補(bǔ)牢，猶為未晚。

7.Lightcome,lightgo.來得容易，去得快。

8.Timeismoney.時(shí)間就是金錢。

9.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真交。

10.Greathopesmakegreatman.遠(yuǎn)大的希望，造就偉大的人物。

11.Afterastormcomesacalm.雨過天晴。

12.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。

13.Artislong,butlifeisshort.人生有限，學(xué)問無涯。

14.Sticktoit,andyou'llsucceed.只要人有恒，萬事都能成。

15.Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.

早睡早起，富裕、聰明、身體好。

16.Agoodmedicinetastesbitter.良藥苦口。

17.Itisgoodtolearnatanotherman'scost.前車之鑒。

18.Keepingisharderthanwinning.創(chuàng)業(yè)不易,守業(yè)更難。

19.Let*scrossthebridgewhenwecometoit.船到橋頭自然直。

20.Morehaste,lessspeed.欲速則不達(dá)。

21.Nopains,nogains.不勞則無獲。

22.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無難事，只要肯登攀。

23.Wherethereislife,thereishope.生命不息，希望常在。

24.Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。

25.Wemustnotliedown,andcry,nGodhelpus.”求神不如求己。

26.Aplantmayproducenewflowers;manisyoungbutonce.

花有重開日，人無再少年。

27.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.自助者，天助之。

28.Whatmaybedoneatanytimewillbedoneatnotime.明日待明日，明日不再來。

29.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作，不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。

30.Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess.勤奮是成功之母。

31.Truthisthedaughteroftime.時(shí)間見真理。

32.Takecareofthepence,andthepoundswilltakecareofthemselves.

積少自然成多。/小事留意，大事順利

33.Nomaniswiseatalltimes.智者下慮，必有一失。

34.Neverputofftilltomorrowwhatyoucandotoday.今天能做的事絕不要拖到明天。

35.Liveandlearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。

36.Killtwobirdswithonestone.——石雙鳥o

37.Itneverrainsbutitpours.禍不單行。

38.Indoingwelearn.經(jīng)一事，長(zhǎng)一智。

39.Easiersaidthandone.說起來容易做起來難。

40.Anounceofpreventionisworthapoundofcure.一分預(yù)防勝似十分治療。

41.Industryisfortune'srighthand,andfrugalityherleft.

勤勉是幸運(yùn)的右手，節(jié)約是幸運(yùn)的左手。

42.Geniusisonepercentinspirationand99percentperspiration.

天才一分來自靈感，九十九分來自勤奮。

43.Hewholaughslastlaughsbest.誰笑在最后，誰笑得最好。

44.Hewhopaysthepipercallsthetune.誰負(fù)擔(dān)費(fèi)用，誰加以控制。

45.Hewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.

身體健壯就有希望，有了希望就有了一切。

46.Nomanisbomwiseorlearned.人非生而知之。

47.Actionspeaklouderthanwords.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。

48.Courageandresolutionarethespiritandsoulofvirtue.

勇敢和堅(jiān)決是美德的靈魂。

49.Unitedwestand,dividedwefall.合艮［J立，分艮口垮。

50.Thereisnosmokewithoutfire.無風(fēng)不起浪。

51.Manyhandsmakelightwork.人多好辦事。

52.Readingmakesafullman.讀書長(zhǎng)見識(shí)。

53.Thebesthorseneedsbreeding,andtheaptestchildneedsteaching.

最好的馬要馴，最伶俐的孩子要教。/好馬需馴，好人需教

54.Learnyoung,learnfair.學(xué)習(xí)趁年輕，學(xué)就要學(xué)好。

55.Wisdominthemindisbetterthanmoneyinthehand.

胸中有知識(shí)，勝于手中有金錢。

56.Oncebitten,twiceshy.一次被咬，下次膽小。

57.Soundinbody,soundinmind.有健全的身體才有健全的精神。

58.Seeingisbelieving.百聞不如一見。

59.Dogswavetheirtailsnotsomuchin,lovetoyouasyourbread.

狗搖尾巴，愛的是你的面包。

60.Moneyisagoodservantbutabadmaster.要做金錢的主人，莫作金錢的奴隸。

61.It'shardsailingwhenthereisnowind.無風(fēng)難駛船。

62.Thepathtogloryisalwaysrugged.通向光榮的道路常常是崎嶇的。

63.Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.

沒有目標(biāo)的生活如同沒有羅盤的航行。

64.Qualitymattersmorethanquantity.質(zhì)重于量。

65.Theon-lookerseesmostofthegame.旁觀者清。

66.Wisdomisagoodpurchasethoughwepaydearforit.

為了求知識(shí)，代價(jià)雖高也值得。

67.Joyssharedwithothersaremoreenjoyed.與眾同樂，其樂更樂。

68.Happinesstakesnoaccountoftime.歡樂不覺日子長(zhǎng)。

69.Timeandtidewaitsfornoman.歲月不等人。

70.Ifyouwantknowledge,youmusttoilforit.若要求知，必須刻苦。

71.Learntowalkbeforeyourun.循序漸進(jìn)。

72.Knowingsomethingofeverything,andeverythingofsomething.

通百藝而專一長(zhǎng)。

73.Fromwordstodeedsisagreatspace.言行之間，大有距離。

74.Skillandconfidenceareanunconqueredarmy.技能和信心是無敵的軍隊(duì)。

75.Habitisasecondnature.習(xí)慣成自然。

76.Lifeless,faultless.只有死人才不會(huì)犯錯(cuò)誤。

77.Abookisthesametodayasitalwayswasanditwillneverchange.

好書千載常如新。

78.Books,likefriends,shouldbefewandwellchosen.

讀書如擇友，宜少且宜精。

79.Abookthatremainsshutisbutablock.書本不常翻，猶如一塊磚。

80.It'snotthegaycoatthatmakesthegentleman.君子在德不在衣。

81.Twoheadsarebetterthanone.三個(gè)臭皮匠頂個(gè)諸葛亮。

82.Birthismuch,butbreedingismore.出身重要，教養(yǎng)更重要。

83.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.世上無難事，只怕有心人。

84.Youcan'tmakesomethingoutofnothing.巧婦難為無米之炊。

85.Nothingventure,nothinghave.不入虎穴，焉得虎子。

86.Nothingfornothing.不費(fèi)力氣，一無所得。

87.Ofnothingcomesnothing.無中不能生有。

88.Hewhomakesnomistakesmakesnothing.不犯錯(cuò)誤者一事無成。

89.Bettersaynothingthannothingtothepurpose.話不中肯，不如不說。

90.Nothingsucceedslikesuccess.一事如意，萬事順利。

91.Nothingstake,nothingdraw.不頂千里浪，哪來萬斤魚。

92.Nothingisasgoodasitseemsbeforehand.期待比現(xiàn)實(shí)更美好。

93.Nothingisgivensofreelyasadvice.勸人最容易。

94.Nothingissocertainastheunexpected.天有不測(cè)風(fēng)云，人有旦夕禍福。

95.Nothingseek,nothingfind.無所求則無所獲。

96.Alittleofeverythingisnothinginthemain.每事淺嘗輒止，事事都告無成。

97.Agreatshipasksdeepwaters.大船要走深水。（蛟龍要在海中游。）

98.ThebestphysiciansareDr.Diet,Dr.Quiet,andDr.Merryman.

節(jié)食博士、精心博士、快樂博士，三人都是最好的醫(yī)生。

99.Hethatoncedeceivesiseversuspected.騙人一次，受疑一世。

100.Emptywagonsrattleloudest.空車響聲大。

101.Nothingsobadbutmightbeablessing.塞翁失馬，焉知非福。

102.Barkingdogsseldombite.吠犬不咬人

103.Bettergotoheaveninragsthantohellinembroidery.寧可窮而有志，不可富而失節(jié)

104.Betterlatethannever.遲做總比不做好

105.Betweentwostoolsyoufalltotheground.腳踩兩條凳，早晚要墜地（意同：腳踏兩條船）

106.Birdsofafeatheroflocktogether.物以類聚，人以群分

107.Bloodisthickerthanwater.血濃于水（意指：親人總比外人親）

108.Beggars4bagsarebottomless.乞丐永遠(yuǎn)不知足

109.Themosttragicblowforoneisthedeathofhismind.哀莫大于心死。

110.Hewhodoesnothaveastrongwillcanneverachievehighintelligence-.

志不強(qiáng)者智不達(dá)。

111.WhenHeavenisabouttoplaceagreatburdenonaman,italwaystestshisresolutionfirst,

exhaustshisbodyandmakeshimsuffergreathardships,frustrateshiseffortstorecoverfrom

mentallassitude.ThenHeaventoughenshisnatureandmakesgoodhisdeficiencies.

天將降大任于斯人也，必先苦其心志，勞其筋骨，餓其體膚，空乏其身，行拂亂其所為，所

以動(dòng)心忍性，曾益其所不能。

112.Howcanasparrowknowthewillofaswan?燕雀安知鴻鵠之志哉！

113.AmongthreepeopleImeetontheway,therewillbeatleastontfromwhomIcanlearn

something.Imayfollowhisgoodnessorcorrectmyownmistakesbylearningfromhim.

三人行必有我?guī)熝?。擇其善者而從之，其不善者而改之?/p>

114.EducationshouldbeforalLirrespectiveoftheirsocialstatus.

有教無類。115.Toomanycooksspoilthebroth.廚師多壞一鍋湯。

116.Wewouldratherbeshortofbooksthanbelieveallthattheysay。

盡信書則不如無書。I

117.LongasthewayisIwillkeeponsearchingaboveandbelow.

路漫漫其修遠(yuǎn)兮，吾將上下而求索。

118.Whenabookisreadahundredtimes,itsmeaningswillnaturallybecomeclear.

讀書百遍，其義自見。

119.Heownsagiftedpen,whoreadstremendously.讀書破萬卷，下筆如有神。

120.Agentlemanwouldratherbequickinactionthantalkalot.

君子欲訥于言而敏于行。

121.Donotdoevilthingsthoughtheymaybeinsignincant.Donotgivenupgoodthingsthough

theymaybeminormatters.

勿以惡小而為之，勿以善小而不為。

122.Onemuststandbyone'swordsandmustnotstopone'sactionuntilsuccessisachieved.言必

信，行必果。

123.Neverdotootherswhatyouwouldnotlikethemtodotoyou.己所不欲，勿施于人。

124.Tosurpassothers,apersonhastosurpasshimselffirst；tocriticiseothers,hehastocriticise

himselffirst；tomakecommentsuponothers,hehastomakecommentsonhimselffirst.

欲勝人者，必先自勝；欲論人者，必先自論；欲知人者，必先自知。

125.Wherethere'ssmoke,there'sfire.無風(fēng)不起浪。

126.Nofishc