東北育才高三上學(xué)期五校聯(lián)考期末英語試題遼寧省東北育才2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期五校聯(lián)考期末英語試題

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“Number7,JennyWalker,takesthelead,"criedtheannouncer.“Justonemorehurdle(欄)and—JennyWalkerfromMountLawleyHighSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls’100-meterhurdles!”ThecrowdwentwildasJenny’steammateswhooped(大叫，吶喊)(狀從),“Goodforyou,SweetSpikes(釘鞋)!"SweetSpikeswasJenny’snickname.

“Countychampionship,herewecome!”shoutedJenny,pattingherneon-greentrackspikes(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Theywerealmostwornout,butshedidn’tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.“NextSaturday,we’retakinghomethegold,"Jennywhisperedtoherspikes.

“Don’tforget,SweetSpikes,”chirped(v.愉悅的說話)Marisol,oneofherteammates.“MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatLakesidePark."“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar(過去分詞做后置定語),”jokedJennyinherbestrobotvoice.

Nextweekendcouldn’tcomesoonenough.Jennybrimmedwithexcitementallweeklong.Attrackpractice,sheleapedoverthosehurdlesfasterthaneverbefore.Sheworeherspikesallday,andeverythinginherpathwasahurdle:flowerpotsinherfrontyard,sidewalkcracks,andevenherlittledog!

ThedayofMarisol’sparty,Jennyputonherfavoriteblueshorts,atrackT-shirtfromherdad,andofcourse,herluckyspikes.“Perfect."Shesmiledatherselfinthemirror(動(dòng)作描寫).InLakesidePark,musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair(環(huán)境描寫).ButJennystoppedbythetrackfirst,planning(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動(dòng)作)todoacoupleofsprints(沖刺).“SweetSpikes!”Twoofherteammatesrushedover,breathlessandbarefoot(adj做狀語).“Youhavetotrytheslide!"Jenny’seyesglancedacrossthepartyarea.“SlideWhatsli—”

Suddenly,shesawit.TheBIGGESTinflatableslide(充氣滑梯)she’deverseen(定從).Withoutthinkingtwice,Jennykickedoffherspikesandchargedtowardit.Sheconqueredtheslideagainandagainandagain,untilitwasfinallytimetogohome.Assheunwillinglymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe’dleftherspikes(定從，主要事件轉(zhuǎn)變),panicsetin.

Jennypickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot(獨(dú)立主格復(fù)合themore...themore...結(jié)構(gòu)).Whenshegottotheplace(狀從),herheartstopped,“Myluckyspikesaregone!"Jenny’steammateshelpedhersearchthepark.Noluck.“Farewell,gold,”Jennymurmured.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

2.請按如下格式作答。

Paragraph1:

Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes.

Paragraph2:

“Justonemorehurdleand—Number52,JennyWalker,takesthegold!"

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

47.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“Number7,JennyWalker,takesthelead,”criedtheannouncer.“Justonemorehurdle(欄)and—JennyWalkerfromMountLawleyHighSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls’100-meterhurdles!"ThecrowdwentwildasJenny’steammateswhooped,“Goodforyou,SweetSpikes(釘鞋)!”SweetSpikeswasJenny’snickname.

“Countychampionship,herewecome!"shoutedJenny,pattingherneon-greentrackspikes.Theywerealmostwornout,butshedidn’tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.“NextSaturday,we’retakinghomethegold,”Jennywhisperedtoherspikes.

“Don’tforget,SweetSpikes,"chirpedMarisol,oneofherteammates.“MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatLakesidePark.”“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar,"jokedJennyinherbestrobotvoice.

Nextweekendcouldn’tcomesoonenough.Jennybrimmedwithexcitementallweeklong.Attrackpractice,sheleapedoverthosehurdlesfasterthaneverbefore.Sheworeherspikesallday,andeverythinginherpathwasahurdle:flowerpotsinherfrontyard,sidewalkcracks,andevenherlittledog!

ThedayofMarisol’sparty,Jennyputonherfavoriteblueshorts,atrackT-shirtfromherdad,andofcourse,herluckyspikes.“Perfect.”Shesmiledatherselfinthemirror.InLakesidePark,musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair.ButJennystoppedbythetrackfirst,planningtodoacoupleofsprints(沖刺).“SweetSpikes!"Twoofherteammatesrushedover,breathlessandbarefoot.“Youhavetotrytheslide!”Jenny’seyesglancedacrossthepartyarea.“SlideWhatsli—"

Suddenly,shesawit.TheBIGGESTinflatableslide(充氣滑梯)she’deverseen.Withoutthinkingtwice,Jennykickedoffherspikesandchargedtowardit.Sheconqueredtheslideagainandagainandagain,untilitwasfinallytimetogohome.Assheunwillinglymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe’dleftherspikes,panicsetin.

Jennypickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot.Whenshegottotheplace,herheartstopped,“Myluckyspikesaregone!”Jenny’steammateshelpedhersearchthepark.Noluck.“Farewell,gold,"Jennymurmured.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

2.請按如下格式作答。

Paragraph1:

Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes.

Paragraph2:

“Justonemorehurdleand—Number52,JennyWalker,takesthegold!”

1.續(xù)寫類型與構(gòu)思分析

分析角度內(nèi)容

續(xù)寫類型該續(xù)寫屬于“情節(jié)推進(jìn)型”，即通過發(fā)展情節(jié)推動(dòng)故事向前發(fā)展。原文以主角遺失幸運(yùn)釘鞋作為情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，續(xù)寫部分需要解決她如何克服心理障礙，最終取得勝利。

構(gòu)思思路①銜接原文：承接Jenny丟失幸運(yùn)釘鞋后的焦慮心情，展現(xiàn)她的心理變化。

②沖突與轉(zhuǎn)折：比賽當(dāng)天，Jenny對缺失釘鞋的憂慮，以及她如何在比賽中克服心理障礙。

③高潮部分：比賽進(jìn)行中，她逐漸找回自信，不依賴“幸運(yùn)物”，用實(shí)力贏得比賽。

④結(jié)局：Jenny獲勝，明白真正的幸運(yùn)來自自己的努力，而不是釘鞋。

布局框架-第一段（鋪墊+沖突）：Jenny在賽場上回憶釘鞋，感到失落，懷疑自己是否能贏。

-第二段（高潮+結(jié)局）：比賽開始，她逐步調(diào)整心態(tài)，最終憑借實(shí)力贏得冠軍。

承接原文事項(xiàng)1.保持人物性格一致性（Jenny熱愛比賽，自信但有些迷信）。

2.延續(xù)原文的關(guān)鍵元素（如釘鞋、隊(duì)友的支持等）。

3.銜接原文時(shí)間線（比賽前的焦慮→比賽中的心理斗爭→最終勝利）。

巧妙設(shè)計(jì)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容1.心理描寫深化Jenny的成長（從依賴釘鞋到相信自己）。

2.運(yùn)用環(huán)境渲染比賽氛圍（觀眾的歡呼、比賽的緊張感）。

3.合理安排情感轉(zhuǎn)折（從緊張、焦慮到堅(jiān)定、自信）。

2.StoryMountain思維導(dǎo)圖分析

StoryMountain結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

開端（Introduction）：Jenny在之前的比賽中獲勝，信心滿滿，期待縣冠軍賽。

上升情節(jié)（RisingAction）：在生日派對上玩耍時(shí)丟失了幸運(yùn)釘鞋，她感到慌亂，開始害怕自己無法贏得比賽。

高潮（Climax）：縣冠軍賽當(dāng)天，Jenny感到焦慮，但在比賽中逐漸找回自信，意識到成功依賴的是自己，而非釘鞋。

下降情節(jié)（FallingAction）：Jenny奮力沖刺，超越對手，即將贏得比賽。

結(jié)局（Resolution）：Jenny奪冠，意識到真正的幸運(yùn)源自努力與信念。

3.文章銜接點(diǎn)、情緒、動(dòng)作、關(guān)鍵轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)、伏筆、沖突點(diǎn)、隱含線索、解決方案分析表

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反映句

人物刻畫Jenny堅(jiān)韌不拔，善于調(diào)整心態(tài)，逐步成長?！癋arewell,gold,"Jennymurmured.（她因丟鞋感到絕望）

情感層次由信心滿滿→焦慮不安→逐漸找回信心→沖刺勝利?！癑ennypickedupthepace,herheartpoundingloudertheclosershegot.”（她開始慌張尋找鞋子）

關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點(diǎn)①Jenny丟失釘鞋；

②比賽前她懷疑自己；

③比賽中找回信心；

④她最終奪冠。“Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes."

語言特色生動(dòng)的心理描寫、動(dòng)作描寫與環(huán)境渲染。“Herheartstopped.”（夸張表現(xiàn)情緒）

關(guān)鍵詞分析luckyspikes,confidence,determination,competition,hurdle-

心理描寫①擔(dān)憂：害怕失去幸運(yùn)；

②迷茫：懷疑自己能否贏；

③堅(jiān)定：專注于比賽本身?！癉oubtcreptintohermind."

動(dòng)作描寫①搜索鞋子時(shí)的緊張；

②賽前的忐忑站立；

③沖刺跨欄的動(dòng)作?！癑ennypickedupthepace,herheartpoundinglouder.”

環(huán)境描寫觀眾歡呼、賽場氣氛、炎熱天氣等渲染比賽緊張感?！癟hecrowdwentwild."

隱含主題自信源于自身努力，而非外在物品?！癐t’snottheshoesthatwinraces.It’sme.”

情感轉(zhuǎn)折由焦慮到自信，再到勝利的滿足?！癝hetookadeepbreathandfocused."

空間轉(zhuǎn)換派對場地→賽場→終點(diǎn)線

時(shí)間過渡周五派對→周六比賽日

4.適用于續(xù)寫的動(dòng)作、心理、環(huán)境描寫英文例句

（1）動(dòng)作描寫（8句）

Sheclenchedherfists,determinationflickeringinhereyes.

Herlegstrembledslightly,butsheforcedherselftostayfocused.

Shetookofflikeanarrow,herbreathsteadyandcontrolled.

Shepumpedherarmsfuriously,herstrideslengtheningwitheachstep.

Herfingersdugintoherpalmsasshepreparedtosprint.

Shegrittedherteethandlaunchedherselfforward.

Shecroucheddown,readytopushoffthestartingblock.

Hermusclestensedassheclearedthefinalhurdle.

（2）心理描寫（8句）

Anxietytwistedinherstomachasshesteppedontothetrack.

Awaveofdoubtwashedoverher—couldshewinwithoutherluckyspikes

Sheshookherhead,forcingawaythecreepingfear.

“It’sallinmyhead,”shetoldherselffirmly.

Asurgeofconfidencerushedthroughherveinsasshefocusedonthefinishline.

“I’vetrainedforthismoment.Idon’tneedluck,"shereassuredherself.

Herheartpounded,butsherefusedtoletfeartakeover.

Asthewhistleblew,allhesitationdisappeared—onlytheracematterednow.

（3）環(huán)境描寫（8句）

Thesunblazedoverhead,castinglongshadowsonthetrack.

Thescentoffreshlycutgrassfilledtheair.

Theroaringcheersoftheaudienceechoedthroughthestadium.

Thewhistlepiercedthesilence,markingthestartoftherace.

Heatradiatedfromthetrack,makingtheairshimmer.

Flagsflutteredinthebreeze,addingtotheelectricatmosphere.

Therhythmicpoundingoffootstepscreatedanalmosthypnoticbeat.

Sweattrickleddownhertemplesasshecrouchedatthestartingline.

5.高級單詞替換（分類）

普通單詞高級替換適用場景

fastswift,rapid,fleet-footed描述奔跑速度

nervousanxious,jittery,tense心理描寫

tiredexhausted,drained,fatigued比賽后狀態(tài)

happyelated,jubilant,overjoyed獲勝情緒

strongresilient,sturdy,robust形容意志

PossibleAnswers

官方:

Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes.Devastatedasshewas(讓步狀語從句倒裝),sheknewshehadtocompete(賓從).Asshesteppedontothestartingline(狀從),Jennytookadeepbreathandfocusedontheraceahead(動(dòng)作描寫).Shecouldfeeltheenergyandexcitementofthecrowdaroundher,withherteammatescheeringforher(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)),whichgaveherarenewedsenseofdetermination(定從).Thegunshotsoundedthroughthestadium(賽場環(huán)境描寫)astheracebegan(狀從),andJenny’sheartpoundedwitheachstride(心情描寫).Shepushedherselfharderthaneverbefore,jumpingoverhurdleafterhurdlewithprecisionandspeed(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作)(with復(fù)合不定式做狀語).

“Justonemorehurdleand—Number52,JennyWalker,takesthegold!”Theannouncer’svoiceechoedthroughthestadium(賽場比賽描寫)asJennycrossedthefinishlinefirst(狀從).Thecrowderuptedincheersandapplause,andJenny’steammatesrushedtoembraceher,celebratingherincrediblevictory(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).“Ididitwithoutmyluckyspikes!"Jennyexclaimed,tearsofjoystreamingdownherface(獨(dú)立主格情緒描寫).“That’sright,girl!”saidMarisol,“Youprovedyouaretherealdeal(賓從)!"Jennyrealizedthatitwasn’ttheshoesthatmadeherfastandstrong,butherowndeterminationandhardwork(賓從)(強(qiáng)調(diào)句+遞進(jìn)語序).Fromthatdayon,shecontinuedtobreakrecordsandachievegreatness,proving(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作)thattruesuccesscomesfromwithin(賓從).

Version1

Paragraph1:Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes.Herusualdeterminationwasreplacedwithasenseofhelplessness(情緒描寫)asshegazeddownattheshinynewspikes(狀從)giventoherbyhercoach(過去分詞做后置定語).Althoughtheywerenice(狀從),theydidn’tcarrythesamememoriesasherluckyspikes.Astheracestarted(狀從),hermindwandered,andherlegsfeltheavierwitheachstep(動(dòng)作心理描寫)."Focus,SweetSpikes!"shewhisperedtoherself(動(dòng)作心理描寫),tryingtosummonheroldconfidence(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Butthecrowd'scheersgrewfainter(賽場環(huán)境描寫),andJennyfeltherchanceslippingaway.

Paragraph2:Justonemorehurdleand—Number52,JennyWalker,takesthegold!Thewordsranginherearslikeadream.Shecouldn’tbelieveit.Asshecrossedthefinishline(狀從),herheartpoundedwithexhilaration(心理描寫),andherteammatesrushedtocongratulateher.Jennylookeddownathernewspikes,stillnotthesameasSweetSpikes(對原文的銜接),buttheyhadcarriedhertovictorytoday."Maybeit’snotabouttheshoesafterall,"shethought,smilingthroughhertears(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).

亮點(diǎn)語法與詞匯

情緒描寫:

"Herusualdeterminationwasreplacedwithasenseofhelplessness"(描述失落情緒)

"Jennyfeltherchanceslippingaway"(描述焦慮情緒)

"Herheartpoundedwithexhilaration"(描述興奮情緒)

動(dòng)作描寫:

"Herlegsfeltheavierwitheachstep"(強(qiáng)調(diào)身體的疲憊感)

"Shecrossedthefinishline"(動(dòng)作的最終結(jié)果)

積累語料:

“Focus,SweetSpikes!”:Expressingdetermination,"Focus,it'syourtime!""Staystrong,wegotthis!"

“herheartpounded":Couldbereplacedwith"herheartraced,""herpulsequickened."

高級詞匯替換:

"Senseofhelplessness"(替換為:"feelingofdespair")

"Exhilaration"(替換為:"ecstasy")

Version2

Paragraph1:Thenextday,Jennystoodatthetrackofthecountychampionship,stillsadaboutherlostspikes.Despitewearingadifferentpair(介詞短語做狀語),shecouldn’tshakethefeelingthatsomethingimportantwasmissing(同位語從句).Astheracebegan(狀從),shetriedtoblockoutthethoughtofheroldshoes,buttheyseemedtohaunthereverymove(心理描寫).Thecrowdcheered(環(huán)境描寫),butJennyfeltaloneinherstruggle(心理描寫).Shestumbledslightlyatthefirsthurdle,butshequicklyregainedherfocus.“Justonemorehurdle,youcandoit,”sheencouragedherself.

Paragraph2:Justonemorehurdleand—Number52,JennyWalker,takesthegold!Shecouldn’tbelievehereyeswhenshesawthefinishlineahead(狀從).Withnewfoundenergy(介詞短語做狀語),shesurgedforwardandclearedthelasthurdleeffortlessly(動(dòng)作描寫).Themomentshecrossedtheline(狀從themoment一...就...),ahugecheereruptedfromthestands(環(huán)境描寫).Jennyraisedherarmsinvictory,feelingamixtureofreliefandtriumph(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作)."Ididit,SweetSpikes,"shewhispered,feelingproudofherself(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動(dòng)作).Itwasn’tabouttheshoesafterall;itwasherspiritthatcarriedher.(遞進(jìn)句式+強(qiáng)調(diào)句)

亮點(diǎn)語法與詞匯

情緒描寫:

"Jennyfeltaloneinherstruggle"(孤單感)

"Amixtureofreliefandtriumph"(喜悅與釋然)

動(dòng)作描寫:

"Shesurgedforwardandclearedthelasthurdleeffortlessly"(突出了動(dòng)作的快速和輕松)

"Sheraisedherarmsinvictory"(勝利的姿勢)

積累語料:

"Ahugecheererupted"couldbereplacedwith"Aloudroarfilledtheair."

"Shesurgedforward"couldbereplacedwith"Shedashedahead."

高級詞匯替換:

"Newfoundenergy"(替換為:"rejuvenatedstrength")

"Triumph"(替換為:"victory")

Version3

Paragraph1:The