Unit1HappyHolidaySectionB3a~3cwritingAfterclass,youwill...LearningAims

熟練運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)描述假期經(jīng)歷（動詞過去式：went/visited/took/felt）。

準(zhǔn)確使用地點(diǎn)、活動、感受類詞匯（如beach/palace,relaxing/wonderful,takeaboattrip）。

掌握時(shí)間順序法（inthemorning→atnoon→intheevening）組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)。

運(yùn)用五要素寫作框架（Where/Who/What/Weather/Feeling）完整敘事。

通過對比范文（Vincent/Gina/范文），分析細(xì)節(jié)描寫技巧（如形容詞clearbluewater,感嘆句Whata...!）。

理解不同國家假期文化（如俄羅斯勝利博物館、蘇格蘭森林探險(xiǎn)），尊重文化多樣性。Part1Part1Revision1.ReviewVincent’sholidaytriptoMoscow.1）Fillintheblanksaccordingtotheinformation.17JulyInthemorning:__________________________Atnoon:__________________________Duringdinner:__________________________TheRussianpeoplebuiltitto______________________________________duringtheWWⅡ.Iatetoomuch________I_________becauseeatingtoomuch_______atnoon.wenttotheVictoryMuseumhadlunchatthereataurantdidn’tfeellikeeatingremembertheirfightagainsttheNazisicecreamfeltsickicecream1.ReviewVincent’sholidaytriptoMoscow.1）Fillintheblanksaccordingtotheinformation.18Julyinthemorning:hewentto_____________.intheafternoon:hearrivedata_____________.HethinkstheMetrostationsareasbeautifulasa___________.?Theyplayedandcommunicatedtogether.?Hethinksthisisagood____________forhim.RedSquarepalaceRussianschoolexperience1.ReviewVincent’sholidaytriptoMoscow.2）TrytoretellVincent’striptoMoscow.On17July,Vincentvisitedthe__________________inthemorning.TheRussianpeoplebuiltitto_______________________________________duringWWⅡ.Atnoon,Vincenthad_______atarestaurantnearthepark.Duringdinner,he___________becauseheatetoomuch____________before.On18July,Vincenttookthe_________________totravelaround.Hethinksmetrostationsareasbeautifulasa________.Hewentto____________anditwasfantastic.Intheafternoon,hearrivedataschoolandmetRussianstudents.Theyplayedandcommunicatedwith______________.Itwasagood______________forVincent.VictoryMuseumremembertheirfightagainsttheNazislunchfeltsickicecreamMoscowMetropalaceRedSquareeachotherexperiencePart2Part2Gina’sholidayexperience1.Readthetextandanswerthequestionsbelow.MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.

WheredidGinagoonholiday?1.Readthetextandanswerthequestionsbelow.MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.

WhodidGinagowith?1.Readthetextandanswerthequestionsbelow.MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.

HowwasGina’strip?2.Readandfillintheblanks.(WhatdidGinado?)took_________________________stayed_________________________wentto________________________saw_________________________ranhomeand_______________atraintoScotlandacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidetheforesttoexploreadeersurprisinglytoldmyparets3.ReadandanalysewhatGinamainlytalkaboutinthetext.MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.1.Whendidithappen?2.WherewasGina?3.WhatdidGinado?3.ReadandanalysewhatGinamainlytalkaboutinthetext.MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.4.HowdidGinafeel?5.WhatdidGinalearnfromthetrip?4.Concludehowtowritedownone’sholidaystory.

Whattensedidthewriterusetowriteholidaystory?17JulyTodaywasourfirstdaytovisitMoscow.TheweatherwasfineandeveryonefeltexcitedtovisitsomefamousplacesinRussia.Inthemorning,wewenttotheVictoryMuseum.TheRussianpeoplebuiltthismuseumtoremembertheirfightagainsttheNazisduringWorldWarII.Aswewalkedthroughthehalls,thetourguidetoldusstoriesaboutthewar.Inonehall,Isawanartworkwiththousandsofglass"tears"fallingdown.Itremindsusthatwaristerribleandpeacedoesnotcomeeasily.Weshouldnotforgetthat.Atnoon,wehadlunchatarestaurantnearthepark.Ilikedtheicecreamthere,soIatealotofit.But,duringdinner,Ididn'tfeellikeeatingbecauseIfeltsick.Sonow,Ijustwanttogetagoodnight'ssleep.Vincent’sholidaytripSimplepasttense18JulyItrainedlastnight,sothismorningtheairwasfreshandcool.Ifeltmuchbettertoday.WetooktheMoscowMetrototravelaround.Themetrostationsarereallybeautiful.SometimesIfeltlikeIwaswalkinginsideapalace.Afterthat,wewenttoRedSquare.Itwasfantastic!Intheafternoon,wearrivedataschoolandmetagroupofRussianstudents.Weplayedgamesandsoonbecamefriends.Later,someonetookouthisaccordion,andsooneveryonegottogethertosinganddance.Weweresohappythatwedidn'tnoticethetime.Itwassuchagoodexperience!MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.Gina’sholidaytrip4.Concludehowtowritedownone’sholidaystory.

Whatorderdidthewriterusetowriteholidaystory?17JulyTodaywasourfirstdaytovisitMoscow.TheweatherwasfineandeveryonefeltexcitedtovisitsomefamousplacesinRussia.Inthemorning,wewenttotheVictoryMuseum.TheRussianpeoplebuiltthismuseumtoremembertheirfightagainsttheNazisduringWorldWarII.Aswewalkedthroughthehalls,thetourguidetoldusstoriesaboutthewar.Inonehall,Isawanartworkwiththousandsofglass"tears"fallingdown.Itremindsusthatwaristerribleandpeacedoesnotcomeeasily.Weshouldnotforgetthat.Atnoon,wehadlunchatarestaurantnearthepark.Ilikedtheicecreamthere,soIatealotofit.But,duringdinner,Ididn'tfeellikeeatingbecauseIfeltsick.Sonow,Ijustwanttogetagoodnight'ssleep.Vincent’sholidaytripTimeorder18JulyItrainedlastnight,sothismorningtheairwasfreshandcool.Ifeltmuchbettertoday.WetooktheMoscowMetrototravelaround.Themetrostationsarereallybeautiful.SometimesIfeltlikeIwaswalkinginsideapalace.Afterthat,wewenttoRedSquare.Itwasfantastic!Intheafternoon,wearrivedataschoolandmetagroupofRussianstudents.Weplayedgamesandsoonbecamefriends.Later,someonetookouthisaccordion,andsooneveryonegottogethertosinganddance.Weweresohappythatwedidn'tnoticethetime.Itwassuchagoodexperience!MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.Gina’sholidaytrip4.Concludehowtowritedownone’sholidaystory.

Whatdidthewritertowriteabouthisholidaystory?17JulyTodaywasourfirstdaytovisitMoscow.TheweatherwasfineandeveryonefeltexcitedtovisitsomefamousplacesinRussia.Inthemorning,wewenttotheVictoryMuseum.TheRussianpeoplebuiltthismuseumtoremembertheirfightagainsttheNazisduringWorldWarII.Aswewalkedthroughthehalls,thetourguidetoldusstoriesaboutthewar.Inonehall,Isawanartworkwiththousandsofglass"tears"fallingdown.Itremindsusthatwaristerribleandpeacedoesnotcomeeasily.Weshouldnotforgetthat.Atnoon,wehadlunchatarestaurantnearthepark.Ilikedtheicecreamthere,soIatealotofit.But,duringdinner,Ididn'tfeellikeeatingbecauseIfeltsick.Sonow,Ijustwanttogetagoodnight'ssleep.Vincent’sholidaytripwhen,where,what,how,lesson18JulyItrainedlastnight,sothismorningtheairwasfreshandcool.Ifeltmuchbettertoday.WetooktheMoscowMetrototravelaround.Themetrostationsarereallybeautiful.SometimesIfeltlikeIwaswalkinginsideapalace.Afterthat,wewenttoRedSquare.Itwasfantastic!Intheafternoon,wearrivedataschoolandmetagroupofRussianstudents.Weplayedgamesandsoonbecamefriends.Later,someonetookouthisaccordion,andsooneveryonegottogethertosinganddance.Weweresohappythatwedidn'tnoticethetime.Itwassuchagoodexperience!MyHolidayinScotlandLastautumn,myfamilytookatraintoScotlandforaholiday.Westayedinacomfortablehouseinthecountrysidewithbeautifulscenery.Iliveinabigcity,soeverythingseemedsodifferent.Forexample,besidethehouse,therewasahugeforest.Onthelastday,earlyinthemorning,Iwenttotheforesttoexplore.Whilethere,somethingmadeanoise.Iturnedaroundandwassurprisedtoseeadeer.IranhomeandtoldmyparentswhatIsaw.Mymumsmiledandsaid,“Thedeerisprobablylookingforfoodandhopingtogetsomefromyou.”WhatawonderfulexperienceIhad!IreallyhopeIcangobackagain.Gina’sholidaytrip4.Concludehowtowritedownone’sholidaystory.SimplepasttenseTimeorderWhatdidithappen?Wheredidyoudoonholiday?Whatdidyoudo?Howdidyoufeel?Whatdidyoulearnfromthetrip?AholidaytripordertensecontentPart3Part3Writingyourownholidaystory1.Readwhatwewillwritecarefully.AnUnforgettableHoliday作文題目：寫作要求：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：?你去了哪里度假？(Wheredidyougo?)?你和誰一起去的？(Whodidyougowith?)?你們在那里做了什么？（至少寫兩項(xiàng)活動）(Whatdidyoudothere?Atleasttwoactivities.)?天氣怎么樣？(Whatwastheweatherlike?)?你對這次假期的感受如何？(Howdidyoufeelabouttheholiday?)詞數(shù)：80詞左右。時(shí)態(tài)：

主要使用

一般過去時(shí)(SimplePastTense)。結(jié)構(gòu)：

建議分段（開頭、主體活動描述、結(jié)尾感受）。2.WritingTipsforStudents審題是關(guān)鍵：

仔細(xì)閱讀題目要求，確保覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)(Where,Who,What,Weather,Feeling)。時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確：

描述過去發(fā)生的事情，主要用

動詞的過去式。詞匯要豐富：

盡量使用本單元學(xué)過的描述假期活動和感受的詞匯(如：wonderful,exciting,relaxing,delicious,beautiful,goswimming,takephotos,visitplaces,havefun等)。句子要多樣：

嘗試使用簡單句和并列句(用and,but,so等連接)，也可以嘗試一兩個(gè)復(fù)合句(如

whilewalking)。分段要清晰：

開頭引入，中間描述活動，結(jié)尾抒發(fā)感受。每段有明確的中心。書寫要工整：

保持卷面整潔。3.ASampleCompositionAnUnforgettableHolidayMysummerholidaywaswonderful!IwenttoSanya,Hainanwithmyparents.Theweathertherewashotbutsunnyandperfectforthebeach.Wedidmanyfunthings.Inthemorning,weoftenwentswimmingandplayedvolleyballonthebeautifulbeach.Thewaterwassoclearandblue!Intheafternoon,wesometimesvisitedinterestingplacesortasteddeliciouslocalfood.Oneday,wetookaboattriptoasmallislandandsawmanycolorfulfish.Intheevening,weenjoyedthefreshseaairwhilewalkingalongtheshore.Everythingaboutthisholidaywasexcitingandrelaxing.Ireallyhadagreattimeandwillneverforgetit!→where,who→weather→what(3activities)→feelingsimplepasttensetimeorder4.Theanalysisofthesamplecomposition★緊扣單元主題與要點(diǎn)：?

地點(diǎn)(Where):Sanya,Hainan(典型的度假地，關(guān)聯(lián)單元詞匯如beach).?

同伴(Who):parents(常見搭配).?

活動(What):→wentswimming,playedvolleyball(海灘活動，用一般過去時(shí)動詞).→visitedplaces,tastedlocalfood(觀光與飲食，核心動詞visit,taste).→tookaboattrip,sawfish(拓展活動，核心動詞take,see).→enjoyedtheseaair,walkingalongtheshore(感受環(huán)境，動詞enjoy+動名詞).?

天氣(Weather):hotbutsunny,perfect(運(yùn)用單元描述天氣的詞匯