2025年初中三年級下學(xué)期英語寫作強化訓(xùn)練試卷（含答案）考試時間：______分鐘總分：______分姓名：______寫作部分假設(shè)你是李華，你的學(xué)校最近組織了一次關(guān)于“志愿者活動”的辯論賽。你的同學(xué)王明不同意參加這類活動，他認為學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)太重，而且志愿者活動沒有實際意義。請你根據(jù)以下要點，給他寫一封郵件，說服他參加：1.你簡要介紹辯論賽的情況，并說明你贏了比賽。2.解釋為什么你認為志愿者活動很有意義，例如：幫助他人、學(xué)習(xí)新技能、了解社會等。3.鼓勵王明參加下一次的志愿者活動，并承諾可以幫助他。注意：1.郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2.詞數(shù)100左右。DearWangMing,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthedebatecompetition...Yours,LiHua試卷答案寫作部分DearWangMing,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthedebatecompetitionwehadlastweek.I'mgladtoinformyouthatourteamwonthefirstprize.Duringthecompetition,wediscussedtheimportanceofvolunteeractivities.Inmyopinion,Ibelievevolunteeractivitiesareverymeaningful.Theynotonlyallowustohelpothersinneedbutalsohelpuslearnnewskillsandgainvaluableexperiences.Moreover,participatinginsuchactivitieshelpsusunderstandthesocietybetteranddevelopasenseofresponsibility.Iknowyouthinkyouhavetoomuchacademicpressureandvolunteeractivitiesarenotworthwhile.However,Ithinkthebenefitsoutweighthetimespent.It'sagreatchancetorelaxanddosomethingmeaningful.What'smore,Ipromisetohelpyousignupandguideyouifyoudecidetojointhenextvolunteerevent.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua解析思路1.審題與要點覆蓋：*解析：首先明確郵件格式和稱謂。核心任務(wù)是圍繞辯論賽獲勝和說服王明參加志愿者活動展開。必須包含所有給定要點：介紹辯論賽及獲勝情況、解釋志愿者活動意義（幫助他人、學(xué)技能、了解社會）、鼓勵王明參加并承諾幫助。注意開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。2.內(nèi)容組織與邏輯：*解析：文章結(jié)構(gòu)應(yīng)清晰。開頭點明寫信目的（告知辯論賽結(jié)果）。接著詳述辯論賽獲勝情況。然后自然過渡到解釋志愿者活動的意義，這是說服的核心。最后表達對王明的鼓勵并提出幫助承諾。段落之間需有邏輯連接（如"Duringthecompetition","Inmyopinion","However","What'smore"）。3.語言表達與詞匯運用：*解析：使用恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)（一般過去時描述辯論賽，一般現(xiàn)在時闡述觀點和活動性質(zhì)）。詞匯選擇應(yīng)準確、恰當，如用"wonthefirstprize","helpothersinneed","learnnewskills","gainvaluableexperiences","understandthesocietybetter","developasenseofresponsibility","academicpressure","worthwhile","benefitsoutweighthetimespent","relax","meaningful","guide"。避免中式英語和過于口語化的表達。4.語法準確性：*解析：注意主謂一致、時態(tài)、冠詞、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、介詞、連接詞等語法規(guī)則的正確使用。例如，確保句子結(jié)構(gòu)完整，動詞形式正確，如"ourteamwon","wediscussed","volunteeractivitiesallowustohelp","participatinginsuchactivitieshelpsus","Ithink...beneficial","it'sagreatchancetorelax"。過渡詞使用恰當，使行文流暢。5.格式與細