閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。IcouldfeeltheexcitementrisinginmeasIheldthebeautifullywrappedpresentinmyhands.Itwasanewlaptop（筆記本電腦）.Ihadalwaysenviedmyfriendswhoweresharingnewsabout“chatrooms”and“emailing”.NowIwasgoingtofindout.Itstartedoutsimplyenough.IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossasocialnetworkingsite.SoonIbecamegluedtomynewfoundonlinefriend.IbegantospendmoreandmoretimeontheInternet.WheneverIwasnotvisitingthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthroughgossipwebsites.Astimepassed,IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet.ItcametoapointwhereIchosetolockmyselfinmyroom,refusingtoeoutandtakepartinfamilydiscussions.SoonIwasspendingtheearlymorningontheInternet.Sleepwasreducedtonapsandmygradesatschoolalsobegandeteriorating（惡化）.Itwasaboutthistimethatmyparentsstartedvoicingtheirdisapproval.IwasaskedtocutdownonmyuseoftheInternet.Yet,howeverhardItried,Iwasunabletopullmyselfawayandunabletofocusonmylessons.Thenoneday,myfathertookawaymylaptop.Ishoutedangrily,buttonoeffect.ThatwaswhenIdecidedtotakethebigstep—tooveremyInternetaddiction.QuittingwasharderthanIexpected.ButIpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewpageandfindwaystobreakawayfromtheInternet.Istartedbycreatingalistofthingstobefinishedduringtheday.Then,Isetasidesometimeeachdaytoworkonthesetasks,whichhelpedmestayfocusedthroughouttheday.Withthehelpofmyfamily,myInternetaddictiongraduallyfadedaway.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.____________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.____________________________________________________________________________________________一、文本分析?1．角色：：____________________________________________________________?2．視角：第___人稱?3．時(shí)空線：根據(jù)文中場(chǎng)景變化，補(bǔ)充完整時(shí)空發(fā)展脈絡(luò)：from“我”拿到新筆記本電腦（家中）_______

_______?4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮惺崂黻P(guān)鍵線索，思考并回答以下問題（可結(jié)合原文內(nèi)容概括）：?Whydid“I”feelexcitedaboutthenewlaptop?：______________________________________________________________?Howdid“I”getaddictedtotheInternet?：____________________________________________________________?Whatchangeshappenedto“I”duetoInternetaddiction?：____________________________________________________________?Howdid“I”parentsreactto“I”Internetaddiction?：___________________________________________________________?Whatstepsdid“I”taketoovereInternetaddiction?：________________________________________________________________________?5．情節(jié)線：根據(jù)故事發(fā)展順序，用簡(jiǎn)潔語言補(bǔ)充完整情節(jié)節(jié)點(diǎn)：“我”拿到新筆記本電腦，因向往網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交而興奮→_______

→_______

→→（續(xù)寫）一天晚上“我”去媽媽房間進(jìn)行難得的談心；“我”承諾會(huì)開啟新生活。?6．情感線：結(jié)合“我”的經(jīng)歷與心理變化，梳理“我”的情感發(fā)展過程：I：excited（拿到新電腦時(shí)）→______________________→________________________→________________________→（續(xù)寫）→（續(xù)寫）?綜合以上信息，嘗試用34句話概括文章大意（中英文各寫一段）：?中文：_____________________________________________________________________?英文：_____________________________________________________________________?8.句式：從文中找出符合以下類型的句式（各舉12例，可摘抄原句）：?賓語從句：______________________________________________________?非謂語：__________________________________________________________?感嘆句：___________________________________________________________?同位語：___________________________________________________________?完全倒裝句：______________________________________________________?比喻：___________________________________________________________?夸張：_____________________________________________________________（若文中無，可標(biāo)注“無”）?本文屬于“人與他人”主題范疇，請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)要概括文中體現(xiàn)的“人與他人”關(guān)系核心：?____________________________________________________________________________二、情節(jié)構(gòu)造?第一段提示句：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.?銜接句1———對(duì)“rarehearttoheartedconversation”提問“‘我’會(huì)和媽媽聊些什么關(guān)于網(wǎng)癮的事？”：Whatwould"I"talkaboutwithMumregardingInternetaddiction??過渡句推演：銜接1→←銜接2?銜接句2———對(duì)“conversation”提問“這次談心讓‘我’有什么感受？”：Howwouldthistalkmake"I"feel??第一段：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.→①（提示：可思考“我”是否會(huì)為之前的行為道歉，或分享戒網(wǎng)的感受）→②_______（提示：可想象媽媽的回應(yīng)方式，是安慰、鼓勵(lì)還是分享她的擔(dān)憂）→③_______（提示：可描述“我”在談心后的心理變化）；?英文：_______（提示：根據(jù)中文思路，用簡(jiǎn)潔英文表達(dá)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和句式正確）?第二段提示句：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.?銜接3———對(duì)“turnoveranewpage”提問“‘我’會(huì)具體承諾做些什么來開啟新生活？”：Whatspecificthingswould"I"promisetodotostartanewlife??過渡句推演：銜接3→←主題?主題：（提示：可圍繞“成長(zhǎng)”“改變”“家庭支持”等核心提煉）?第二段：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.→④_______（提示：可思考“我”會(huì)從學(xué)習(xí)、生活、家庭互動(dòng)等方面提出具體承諾）→⑤_______（提示：可想象“我”踐行承諾時(shí)的場(chǎng)景，以及家人如何配合支持）→⑥_______（提示：可描述承諾兌現(xiàn)后“我”和家庭的變化）；?英文：_______（提示：根據(jù)中文思路，用簡(jiǎn)潔英文表達(dá)，注意邏輯連貫）?三、續(xù)寫（思路啟發(fā)，可自主創(chuàng)作）?Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案一、文本分析?1．角色：“我”（曾沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)，后決心并成功克服網(wǎng)癮的人）；“我”的父母（關(guān)注“我”的狀況，反對(duì)“我”過度上網(wǎng)，最終幫助“我”擺脫網(wǎng)癮）?2．視角：第___一___人稱?3．時(shí)空線：from“我”拿到新筆記本電腦（家中）“我”沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)的房間（家中）、學(xué)校

“我”與父母溝通、努力克服網(wǎng)癮的場(chǎng)景（家中）?4.請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來。?Whydid“I”feelexcitedaboutthenewlaptop?：“I”hadalwaysenviedfriendstalkingabout“chatrooms”and“emailing”，andnow“I”couldexperiencethemtoo.?Howdid“I”getaddictedtotheInternet?：“I”firstcameacrossasocialnetworkingsitewhilesearchingforinformation,thenbecamegluedtoonlinefriends,spentmoretimeonsocialsitesandgossipwebsites,andgraduallycouldn’tpullaway.?Whatchangeshappenedto“I”duetoInternetaddiction?：“I”lockedmyselfintheroom,refusedfamilydiscussions,reducedsleeptonaps,andmyschoolgradesdeteriorated.?Howdid“I”parentsreactto“I”Internetaddiction?：Theyvoiceddisapproval,asked“I”tocutdownInternetuse,andfathertookaway“I”laptopwhen“I”couldn’tcontrolmyself.?Whatstepsdid“I”taketoovereInternetaddiction?：“I”promisedparentstochange,createdadailytasklist,settimetofinishtaskstostayfocused,andgothelpfromfamily.?5．情節(jié)線：“我”拿到新筆記本電腦，因向往網(wǎng)絡(luò)社交而興奮→“我”偶然接觸社交網(wǎng)站后沉迷，花大量時(shí)間上網(wǎng)，生活和學(xué)習(xí)受嚴(yán)重影響

→父母反對(duì)“我”過度上網(wǎng)，父親沒收電腦后，“我”決心克服網(wǎng)癮

→“我”制定計(jì)劃、在家人幫助下逐漸擺脫網(wǎng)癮→（續(xù)寫）一天晚上“我”去媽媽房間進(jìn)行難得的談心；“我”承諾會(huì)開啟新生活。?6．情感線：I：excited（拿到新電腦時(shí)）→addictedandindulgent（沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)）→anxiousbuthelpless（無法自控、成績(jī)下滑時(shí)）→angryatfirst,thendetermined（父親收走電腦后，決心戒網(wǎng)癮）→gratefulandresolute（與媽媽談心、承諾改變時(shí)，續(xù)寫）→persistentandhopeful（踐行承諾時(shí)，續(xù)寫）?綜合以上信息，請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。（中英各一個(gè)）?中文：“我”得到新筆記本電腦后，因接觸社交網(wǎng)站而沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)，導(dǎo)致生活作息混亂、學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)下滑。父母反對(duì)“我”過度上網(wǎng)并沒收電腦，“我”因此決心克服網(wǎng)癮，通過制定每日任務(wù)計(jì)劃、在家人幫助下，逐漸擺脫了網(wǎng)癮的困擾。?英文：Aftergettinganewlaptop,"I"gotaddictedtotheInternetbecauseofaccessingsocialnetworkingsites,whichmade"I"dailyroutinemessyandschoolgradesworse."I"parentsopposed"I"excessiveInternetuseandtookawaythelaptop,so"I"decidedtoovereInternetaddiction.Withadailytasklistandfamilyhelp,"I"graduallygotridoftheaddiction.?8.句式：賓語從句；非謂語；感嘆句；同位語；完全倒裝句；比喻；夸張?賓語從句：IrealizedthatIwasaddictedtotheInternet./IpromisedmyparentsthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.?非謂語：IwassearchingforsomeinformationonlinewhenIcameacrossasocialnetworkingsite./WheneverIwasnotvisitingthesesocialnetworkingsites,Iwouldbegoingthroughgossipwebsites.?感嘆句：QuittingwasharderthanIexpected!?同位語：Itwasanewlaptop（筆記本電腦）.（括號(hào)內(nèi)中文為“l(fā)aptop”的同位語，補(bǔ)充說明物品名稱）?比喻：Ibecamegluedtomynewfoundonlinefriend.（將“沉迷于網(wǎng)友”比作“被粘住”，形象體現(xiàn)沉迷狀態(tài)）?夸張：無明顯夸張句式?9.本文屬于人與他人：家人對(duì)“我”的關(guān)愛與引導(dǎo)，以及“我”在家人幫助下自我成長(zhǎng)、克服困難的過程?二、情節(jié)構(gòu)造?第一段提示句：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.?銜接句1———對(duì)“rarehearttoheartedconversation”提問“‘我’會(huì)和媽媽聊些什么關(guān)于網(wǎng)癮的事？”：Whatwould"I"talkaboutwithMumregardingInternetaddiction??過渡句推演：銜接1→媽媽會(huì)如何回應(yīng)“我”的傾訴？←銜接2?銜接句2———對(duì)“conversation”提問“這次談心讓‘我’有什么感受？”：Howwouldthistalkmake"I"feel??第一段：OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.→①____“我”向媽媽道歉，承認(rèn)之前因沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)忽略家人、讓他們擔(dān)心，還說起自己戒網(wǎng)時(shí)的困難____→②____媽媽輕輕抱住“我”，說知道戒癮不易，家人會(huì)一直支持“我”，還提起“我”以前專注學(xué)習(xí)的樣子____→③____“我”聽后眼眶發(fā)熱，更加堅(jiān)定了要徹底擺脫網(wǎng)癮、回歸正常生活的決心____；?銜接3———對(duì)“turnoveranewpage”提問“‘我’會(huì)具體承諾做些什么來開啟新生活？”：Whatspecificthingswould"I"promisetodotostartanewlife??過渡句推演：銜接3→“我”如何踐行承諾，家人又如何支持？←主題?主題：“我”通過實(shí)際行動(dòng)兌現(xiàn)承諾，在家人支持下徹底擺脫網(wǎng)癮，實(shí)現(xiàn)自我成長(zhǎng)?第二段：IpromisedthatIwouldturnoveranewpage.→④____“我”承諾每天先完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，再用少量時(shí)間合理上網(wǎng)，還會(huì)主動(dòng)參與家庭活動(dòng)、多和父母溝通____→⑤____之后“我”每天按計(jì)劃執(zhí)行，遇到想上網(wǎng)的沖動(dòng)時(shí)，媽媽會(huì)提醒“我”任務(wù)清單，爸爸會(huì)陪“我”去散步轉(zhuǎn)移注意力____→⑥____漸漸地，“我”不再依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)，成績(jī)慢慢回升，家庭氛圍也變得溫馨融洽____。?三、續(xù)寫段落?Paragraph1:OneeveningIcametoMum’sbedroomforararehearttoheartedconversation.?Isatbe