英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫高分詞句一、激動(dòng)1.勝利/成就（Victory/Achievement）shewasoverewithprideandacplishment她被自豪與成就感淹沒(méi)沖線瞬間hiseyessparkledwithpride他的眼睛閃爍著自豪比賽勝利Ifeltawaveofjoyandacplishment一股喜悅與成就感涌上心頭完成挑戰(zhàn)theycheeredourteamtovictory他們?yōu)槲覀兊年?duì)伍歡呼勝利球場(chǎng)shehuggedFudgetightly,overjoyed她緊緊抱住Fudge，欣喜若狂贏得比賽2.驚喜/意外（Surprise/Delight）hereyeswidenedindisbelief她難以置信地瞪大眼睛看到失而復(fù)得的搖馬Ishouted,"＄1,000?!"我驚呼：“1000美元？！”銀行通知theybeggedwitheagereyes他們用渴望的眼睛懇求看到玩具aflashofwhitecaughtmyattention一道白光突然吸引我發(fā)現(xiàn)信封thewholeplacefellsilent全場(chǎng)突然安靜奶奶現(xiàn)身舞會(huì)3.緊張/期待（Anticipation/Nerves）myheartraced我的心跳加速發(fā)現(xiàn)劃痕（搖馬）herheartpounded她的心怦怦直跳火山爆發(fā)逃生Iheldmybreath我屏住呼吸結(jié)賬時(shí)hischesttightened他的胸口發(fā)緊等待考試shefeltsickandherkneeswereshaking她感到惡心，膝蓋發(fā)抖考試前4.情緒爆發(fā)（EmotionalOutburst）Iyelled,"STOPIT!"我吼道：“夠了！”對(duì)父親憤怒shescreamed,"No!No!No!"她尖叫：“不！不！不！”禮物被毀heexplodedoutofme他爆發(fā)出來(lái)情緒崩潰tearswelledupinhereyes她的眼眶涌出淚水感動(dòng)/委屈sheburstintolaughter她突然大笑化解尷尬5.群體激動(dòng)（CrowdExcitement）thecrowdlinedthestreets,cheeringuson人群沿街站立，為我們歡呼馬拉松everyonewasstaringather所有人都盯著她作弊被抓thewholeclassmirroredhismood全班都模仿他的情緒比賽失利theyrushedtothewatertogether他們一起沖向水邊游泳theaudiencewentwild觀眾沸騰了球場(chǎng)6.動(dòng)物/擬人化激動(dòng)（AnimalExcitement）thedogwaggeditstailfuriously狗瘋狂地?fù)u尾巴見(jiàn)到主人thebearroaredagain熊再次咆哮威脅thepuplickedMilo'sface小狗舔米洛的臉親昵RascaljumpedinandateupallthecookiesRascal跳進(jìn)來(lái)吃光所有餅干搶食thedeercircledthetree,roaringinfrustration鹿圍著樹轉(zhuǎn)，沮喪地吼叫被困7.隱喻/夸張（Metaphors/Hyperbole）awaveofanxietywashedoverme一股焦慮感淹沒(méi)了我緊張myheartskippedabeat我的心漏跳了一拍驚喜timestoodstill時(shí)間靜止了關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻thegroundrumbledbeneaththeirfeet地面在他們腳下震動(dòng)火山爆發(fā)thesilencecontinuedasIskatedtowardtheexit我滑向出口時(shí)，沉默持續(xù)著尷尬【使用建議】1.勝利場(chǎng)景：用overewithpride/sparkledwithjoy。2.驚喜場(chǎng)景：用eyeswidened/shoutedindisbelief。3.緊張場(chǎng)景：用heartpounded/chesttightened。4.群體激動(dòng)：用crowdcheered/audiencewentwild。二、身體部位1.頭部/面部（Head/Face）hiseyeswidenedindisbelief他難以置信地瞪大眼睛震驚tearsrollingdownthesideofhisface淚水順著他的臉頰滾落悲傷herfacefell她的臉沉了下來(lái)失望afaintblushcreepinguphisneck一絲紅暈爬上他的脖頸尷尬/羞澀h(huán)ereyessparkledwithpride她的眼睛閃爍著自豪喜悅hisforeheadwaswrinkledwithworry他的額頭因憂慮而皺起焦慮2.手/手臂（Hands/Arms）tremblinghands顫抖的雙手緊張/恐懼hestretchedouthishands他伸出手救助/給予herhandswerecoveredinpaint她的手上沾滿顏料創(chuàng)作hegraspedherhandwiththeotherhand他用另一只手抓住她的手安慰shewavedaspoon她揮舞著勺子憤怒/驅(qū)趕hishandstrembledasheheldtheletter他拿信時(shí)手在發(fā)抖激動(dòng)3.腿/腳（Legs/Feet）hisskinnylegsbleeding他瘦弱的腿在流血受傷sherandownthestreet她跑上街急切hetrippedandrolledoutofthesideline他絆倒并滾出邊線失誤herlegsfeltlikelead她的腿像灌了鉛一樣沉重疲憊hemadehiswaytowardstheharbor他朝港口走去堅(jiān)定shejumpedoutofbed她跳下床驚訝/匆忙4.心臟/胸部（Heart/Chest）herheartpounded她的心怦怦直跳緊張/恐懼hischesttightened他的胸口發(fā)緊焦慮awaveofguiltwashedoverher一陣?yán)⒕胃杏可纤男念^內(nèi)疚herheartskippedabeat她的心漏跳了一拍驚喜/驚嚇hefeltapangofsympathy他感到一陣同情共情5.眼睛（Eyes）hereyeswelledup她的眼眶濕潤(rùn)了悲傷hiseyessoftened他的眼神柔和下來(lái)同情shelookedathimwithwideeyes她睜大眼睛看著他驚訝tearswelledupinhereyes她的眼中涌出淚水感動(dòng)hiseyeswerefixedonthenewspaper他的眼睛盯著報(bào)紙專注6.嘴巴/嘴唇（Mouth/Lips）shewhisperedintothephone她對(duì)著電話低聲說(shuō)秘密/恐懼hemurmuredanapology他低聲道歉羞愧herlipstrembled她的嘴唇在顫抖激動(dòng)hesmackedhislips他咂了咂嘴渴望shestammeredareply她結(jié)結(jié)巴巴地回答緊張7.皮膚/毛發(fā)（Skin/Hair）herrosycheeks她紅潤(rùn)的臉頰健康/寒冷histhick,shinyblackhair他濃密閃亮的黑發(fā)外貌描寫sweatpoureddownherface汗水從她的臉上流下疲憊herhairwasdampwithsweat她的頭發(fā)被汗水浸濕運(yùn)動(dòng)hisfacewaspale他的臉色蒼白虛弱/恐懼8.全身動(dòng)作（FullbodyActions）shefrozeinhertracks她僵在原地驚嚇hedashedtothepond他沖向池塘緊急shecurleduponthefloor她蜷縮在地板上悲傷hestoodfrozenbesidehim他僵直地站在他旁邊震驚sherushedoutsidecarryinghismedicalbag她提著醫(yī)療包沖出去急切9.特殊狀態(tài)（Pain/Injury）oneofhisskinnylegsbleeding他瘦弱的腿在流血受傷herwingswerebleeding她的翅膀在流血?jiǎng)游?比喻hewastooweaktomove他虛弱得無(wú)法動(dòng)彈虛弱hisheadinjuryandbloodflowing他的頭部受傷流血事故sheclungtothetreetightly她緊緊抱住樹求生10.動(dòng)物身體部位（AnimalBodyParts）itswingsweretorn它的翅膀被撕裂了受傷thebearstoodonitsbacklegs熊用后腿站立威脅thedogwaggeditstail狗搖著尾巴開心thecatpounced貓撲了過(guò)去攻擊thedeer’sleftlegwashurt鹿的左腿受傷了救助【使用建議】1.動(dòng)作描寫：多用動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)（如froze,dashed,trembled）。2.情緒描寫：結(jié)合身體反應(yīng)（如heartpounded,tearswelledup）。3.細(xì)節(jié)增強(qiáng)：加入觸覺(jué)/視覺(jué)（如rosycheeks,damphair）。三、外貌【頭發(fā)】（hair）1.…withlong,untidyhair.…留著又長(zhǎng)又亂的頭發(fā)。（31?Elsathedog）2.…h(huán)adorderlyblackandwellbedhair.…一頭整齊的黑發(fā)，梳理得一絲不茍。（19?Rexthestreetsweeper）3.…h(huán)ersilkyfur……她絲綢般柔滑的毛發(fā)…（11?Mollythedog）4.…h(huán)isdarkskin…（與頭發(fā)顏色形成對(duì)比）…他深色的皮膚…（32?Kuko?）5.…h(huán)isbroomwasinhishands;ifnot,Smithwouldthinkthathewasoneofhisstudents.…他手里拿著掃帚；若非如此，史密斯會(huì)以為他是自己的學(xué)生——暗示學(xué)生式整潔發(fā)型。（19?Rex）【眼睛】（eyes）1.…h(huán)isdeterminedeyes……他堅(jiān)毅的雙眼…（32?Kuko?）2.…h(huán)erbig,sadeyespleadingforhelp.…那雙大而悲傷的眼睛祈求著幫助。（26?lostpuppy）3.…h(huán)ereyessparkledwiththeinnocenceofyouth……她的眼睛閃爍著童真…（64?Lily）4.…h(huán)iseyeswerecautiousbutcurious.…它的眼神謹(jǐn)慎卻好奇。（34?straydog）5.…h(huán)ereyeswidewiththegravityoftheknowledge……她因深知其重大而睜大的雙眼…（39?nurseMary）【面部整體/表情】（face&expression）1.…Chambers’facewasapictureoffearandconfusion……錢伯斯的小臉上寫滿恐懼與迷?！?5?subwayscene）2.…h(huán)isfaceredwithpanic……他因驚慌而漲紅的臉…（25?studentJamie）3.…h(huán)ergentlesmileandwarmmanner……她溫和的微笑與親切的神態(tài)…（10?Mrs.Petrucci）4.…h(huán)isfacelitup,awidesmilestretchingfromeartoear.…他滿臉?lè)殴?，笑容從一只耳朵咧到另一只。?5?Johnselectedformatch）5.…h(huán)isfacefullofgenuineregret.…他臉上滿是真誠(chéng)的遺憾。（35?coach）【身形/姿態(tài)】（build&posture）1.…asmall,shiveringpuppy……一只瑟瑟發(fā)抖的小狗…（26?lostpuppy）2.…theelderlywoman…h(huán)ersmallfistspoundingagainstthewindow……老婦人…她的小拳頭敲打著車窗…（25?Chambers’grandma）3.Mr.ThompsonMr.Thompsonstandingafarwithabigsmile……他看見(jiàn)湯普森先生站在遠(yuǎn)處，笑容滿面…（12?Jasongardening）4.…h(huán)isshouldersslumpedforwardwithtiredness……他因疲憊而向前耷拉的肩膀…（6?Dadbackfromwork）5.…shesataloneonaweatheredbench……她獨(dú)自坐在一張經(jīng)風(fēng)雨侵蝕的長(zhǎng)椅上…（64?Margaret）【服裝/隨身物】（clothing&accessories）1.…inneatuniform……穿著整潔的制服…（19?Rex）2.…h(huán)isdarkglassesaddinganairofmystery……深色墨鏡為他增添一絲神秘氣息…（25?manonsubway）3.…amandressedinblackleather……一位身穿黑色皮夾克的男子…（25?sameman）4.…theyputonournewcowboyhats……我們戴上嶄新的牛仔帽…（43?farmride）5.…h(huán)ispaintboxexplained:“SelectiveMutism…”…他的顏料盒上寫著：“選擇性緘默癥…”（21?Liam）【綜合描寫】（多要素合并）1.…aboy,aro