專題04應(yīng)用文寫作滿分技法及一句多譯50句150例原卷版技法1錘詞煉句——精準(zhǔn)表達(dá)，亮點(diǎn)提分語言規(guī)范是滿分作文的特點(diǎn)?？忌跊]有錯(cuò)誤的基礎(chǔ)上，增添亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)。首先，要規(guī)范拼寫，規(guī)避簡單錯(cuò)誤；其次，詞匯基礎(chǔ)要扎實(shí)，能夠靈活使用高級(jí)詞匯及語塊；再次，語法知識(shí)要系統(tǒng)，確保正確使用各種語法結(jié)構(gòu)。增分亮點(diǎn)1錘詞煉句，地道準(zhǔn)確一、精準(zhǔn)多樣的動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞分為及物動(dòng)詞和不及物動(dòng)詞。精準(zhǔn)的動(dòng)詞能夠有效勾畫交際場景，多樣化的動(dòng)詞能夠增加文章的生動(dòng)性，恰如其分地傳遞信息和態(tài)度。1.(普通表達(dá))Lastly,theemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,suchaselectriccars,hascausedreducingpollutionandpromotingsustainabledevelopment.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Lastly,theemergenceofnewenergyvehicles,suchaselectriccars,has___________reducingpollutionandpromotingsustainabledevelopment.(2024·全國甲卷)2.(普通表達(dá))TheseadvancementsshowChina'sprogressincreatingamodern,efficient,andenvironmentallyfriendlytransportsystem.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Theseadvancements___________China'sprogressincreatingamodern,efficient,andenvironmentallyfriendlytransportsystem.(2024·全國甲卷)3.(普通表達(dá))TodayIwanttofocusonsomemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,highspeedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Today______________________somemajordevelopments,whichincludesharedbicycles,highspeedtrainsandnewenergyvehicles.(2024·全國甲卷)二、充滿表達(dá)力的名詞靈活使用一些充滿表達(dá)力的名詞，包括抽象意義的名詞、常見動(dòng)詞的同根名詞形式或名詞詞組，能夠出眾脫俗，為文章增色，成為得分的亮點(diǎn)。1.(普通表達(dá))Thesunlightandthelightwindmadethewholesceneetolife.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Thesunlightandthe___________madethewholesceneetolife.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)2.(普通表達(dá))KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty,FanZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehedidalotforsociety.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))KnownasaChinesewriterandpoliticianintheSongDynasty,FanZhongyanwashighlyappreciatedbecausehe_________________________________society.(2023·全國甲卷)三、豐富多彩的形容詞形容詞是用來描述人或者事物的特征、性質(zhì)、屬性或狀態(tài)的修飾性詞匯，最主要的功能是修飾或者限定名詞或代詞。形容詞的恰當(dāng)使用能夠?yàn)槲恼略錾?.(普通表達(dá))ItwassuchagoodexperiencethatIwouldalwaysrememberitinmymind.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Itwassuchan___________/a___________experiencethatIwouldalwayskeepitinmymemory.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)2.(普通表達(dá))Ichosetopaintalandscapefeaturingacalmlakesurroundedbylivelyflowersandthicktrees.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Ichosetopaintalandscapefeaturingacalmlakesurroundedby___________flowersandthicktrees.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)四、靈活多變的副詞副詞指在句中表示行為或狀態(tài)特征的詞匯，主要用來作狀語，修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞、其他副詞或句子。副詞的恰當(dāng)使用能夠提高得分的檔次。(普通表達(dá))Firstly,sharedbicycleshavebeeapopularchoiceincities,providinganecofriendlyandcosteffectivewaytotravelshortdistances.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))___________,sharedbicycleshavebeeapopularchoiceincities,providinganecofriendlyandcosteffectivewaytotravelshortdistances.(2024·全國甲卷)增分亮點(diǎn)2豐富表達(dá)，妙筆生花高考評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的“復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用及較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)”指句子結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合性和句型的多樣性。復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、復(fù)合句及含有非謂語動(dòng)詞的高級(jí)句式，能彰顯考生豐富的語言內(nèi)涵。但是，在使用這些句式時(shí)，應(yīng)遵循以下原則：高級(jí)但不造作，多變但不離譜，復(fù)雜但不晦澀?？忌綍r(shí)要注重有意識(shí)地積累和背誦原汁原味的英語句子和文章，有意識(shí)地嘗試使用或模仿。一、非謂語動(dòng)詞，神采飛揚(yáng)1.(普通表達(dá))TheStudents'Unionwantedtosparktheinterestintheplantsaroundus.LastSaturdaytheStudents'Unionorganizedanactivitycalled“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))______________________intheplantsaroundus,lastSaturdaytheStudents'Unionorganizedanactivitycalled“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”．(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)(2023·浙江卷1月)2.(普通表達(dá))Iwasinspiredbythefantasticsceneryanddecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spondwhichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))______________________,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,______________________.(過去分詞短語作狀語、定語)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)3.(普通表達(dá))Besides,China'shighspeedrailwaynetworkhasconnectedvariouscitieseffectivelyandhasgreatlysavedtraveltimeandpromotedeconomicdevelopment.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Besides,China'shighspeedrailwaynetworkhasconnectedvariouscitieseffectively,___________traveltimeandpromotingeconomicdevelopment.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語)(2024·全國甲卷)二、三大從句，綻放精彩1.(普通表達(dá))Ipaintedthesceneryoftheparkandintheparkthewillowbranchesweredancinginthebreezeandseveralduckswereswimmingintheriverpeacefullyandhappily.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Ipaintedthesceneryofthepark,___________thewillowbranchesweredancinginthebreezeandseveralduckswereswimmingintheriverpeacefullyandhappily.(定語從句)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)2.(普通表達(dá))Weallknowthatchangesintransportationwillbringgreatchangestopeople'slives.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))______________________,changesintransportationwillbringgreatchangestopeople'slives.(定語從句)(2024·全國甲卷)3.(普通表達(dá))WhenIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbsup.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))___________Iputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbsup.(時(shí)間狀語從句)(2023·全國乙卷)4.(普通表達(dá))We'reoverwhelmedwithexcitementtoknowthatanoralEnglishclasswillbearrangedforus.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))We'reoverwhelmedwithexcitement______________________anoralEnglishclasswillbearrangedforus.(同位語從句)(2023·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)5.(普通表達(dá))Itwasverymeaningfulandinterestingandyoucannotimagineit.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Youcannotimagine______________________！(賓語從句)(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)6.(普通表達(dá))It'sasimpleandinexpensiveactivityandyoucandoitanywhere,eveninasmallspace.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))It's___________asimpleandinexpensiveactivity_________________________________.(結(jié)果狀語從句)(2024·浙江卷1月)三、妙用it，巧做點(diǎn)睛1.(普通表達(dá))Oceansplayakeyroleinourworld,soIconsideritisimportanttoprotectthem.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))Oceansplayakeyroleinourworld,soIconsider___________significanttoprotectthem.(it作形式賓語)(2022·全國甲卷)2.(普通表達(dá))Toimproveyourcoordination,flexibility,andbalanceisalsohelpful.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))______________________yourcoordination,flexibility,andbalance.(it作形式主語)(2024·浙江卷1月)四、倒裝句式，更勝一籌1.(普通表達(dá))Itnotonlyprovidedmewithanopportunitytoconnectmyartisticcreationwithnature,butalsoenhancedmywillingnesstotakeinspirationfromnatureinthefuture.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))______________________mewithanopportunitytoconnectmyartisticcreationwithnature,______________________mywillingnesstotakeinspirationfromnatureinthefuture.(2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)2.(普通表達(dá))FanZhongyanissucharolemodelthathealwaysencouragesmetobeamanofnoblecharacter.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))_________________________________healwaysencouragesmetobeamanofnoblecharacter.(2023·全國甲卷)五、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，詞若千鈞1.(普通表達(dá))However,Ihavesomesuggestionsforthepresentgroupingscheme.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))However,I___________someremendationsforthepresentcategorizationscheme.(強(qiáng)調(diào)謂語)(2023·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)2.(普通表達(dá))ThroughthisexperienceIhavegainedadeeperappreciationforChinesecuisine.→(高級(jí)表達(dá))___________throughthisexperience___________IhavegainedadeeperappreciationforChinesecuisine.(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)(2023·全國乙卷)技法2銜接過渡——構(gòu)建邏輯，完美行文滿分作文的最大特點(diǎn)就是清晰流暢，一氣呵成。巧妙的銜接與過渡就是其中的關(guān)鍵。用過渡銜接詞把句與句、段與段巧妙地連接在一起，文章才會(huì)更加連貫、自然和緊湊，段落或文章的發(fā)展脈絡(luò)也會(huì)更清晰，中心思想也會(huì)更明確。用法過渡詞典例用在段落起始的過渡詞generallyspeaking,tobeginwith,firstofall,inthefirstplace,asweknow,asisknowntoall,in...shownin...等___________,onlinelearninghasincreasinglybeeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.一般來說，在線學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)日益成為人們獲取知識(shí)和解決問題的一種重要方式。用在段落結(jié)尾進(jìn)行總結(jié)的過渡詞tosumup,inconclusion,inaword,inthelongrun,insummary,allinall等___________,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience,leavingalastingimpressiononallofus.總之，這是一次寶貴而充實(shí)的經(jīng)歷，給我們所有人留下了深刻的印象。用以表達(dá)時(shí)間順序的過渡詞現(xiàn)在:nowadays,atpresent等最近：lately,recently等首先/:atfirst,firstofall等后來:after,lateron,soon等與此同時(shí):atthesametime等最后:finally,intheend,atlast等Seeingpeopledoingwarmupexerciseswithgreatenthusiasm,wecouldn'twaittojointhem.___________,thesignalfired,webeganourcrosscountryrace.看到人們熱情地做熱身運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們迫不及待地加入他們。不久之后，信號(hào)響起，我們開始了越野比賽。用以表達(dá)空間順序的過渡詞ononeside...ontheotherside...,ontheoppositeside,infrontof,inthecenterof,inthedistance,atthebackof等___________thevalleyrunsaclear,faststreaminwhichonemayfish.Inthelowlandalongthestreamarethefarmlands;beyondthemisthegrassland.___________thefirsthillsarethebigmountains.一條清澈湍急的溪流沿著山谷的中部流淌著，人們可以在溪中釣魚。沿溪而下，低地處是農(nóng)田；越過農(nóng)田是草原。一群小山的山頂后面是一座座大山。用以表示因果的過渡詞because,becauseof,asaresult,dueto,owingto,thanksto,therefore,nowthat,consequently等Ourprogrammeisdesignedtoenhancestudents'awarenessofenvironmentalprotection.___________,thetopicoftheingshowwillbeenvironmentalprotectioninourdailylife.我們的節(jié)目旨在增強(qiáng)學(xué)生們的環(huán)境保護(hù)意識(shí)。因此，即將到來的演出的主題將是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械沫h(huán)境保護(hù)。用以表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞undoubtedly,certainly,indeed,aboveall,definitely,surely,totellthetruth等___________,neverhaveIseensuchanexceptionalcitywithsomanyhistoricsites.毫無疑問，我從未見過一個(gè)如此獨(dú)特并擁有如此多的歷史遺跡的城市。用以表示遞進(jìn)或補(bǔ)充的過渡詞inaddition,additionally,furthermore,also,moreover,what'smore,besides,notonly...butalso...,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,lastbutnotleast等Thisactivityholdsgreatsignificanceasit___________fostersculturalunderstanding___________allowsmetosharemyowncultureandlearnfromothers.這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)具有重要意義，因?yàn)樗粌H促進(jìn)文化理解，而且讓我分享自己的文化并了解其他的文化。用以舉例的過渡詞including,forexample,forinstance,suchas等Therearevariousthemesforustochoosefrom,___________calligraphy,martialartsandpapercutting.有各種各樣的主題供我們選擇，包括書法、武術(shù)和剪紙。用以表示讓步或轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡詞but,however,nevertheless,although,though,yet,onthecontrary,otherwise,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof,insteadof,unfortunately,等___________frustrated,Ididn'tloseheart.Instead,Isoughtadvicefrommyteacherandpracticedmore.盡管很沮喪，但我沒有喪失信心。相反，我向我的老師尋求建議并多加練習(xí)。用以表示比較和對(duì)比的過渡詞like,unlike,inthesameway,similarly,asfor,incontrast,whereas,ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,while等Tobemoreexact,thosewhomakegooduseofthesmartphonesbenefitgreatly___________thosewhocannotresistthetemptationgetaddicted.更確切地說，那些恰當(dāng)?shù)乩弥悄苁謾C(jī)的人受益匪淺，而那些無法抵制智能手機(jī)的誘惑的人則會(huì)上癮。用以表示觀點(diǎn)的過渡詞personally,Ithink,inmyopinion,I'mafraid,asfarasI'mconcerned等___________,theabsolutemostimportantthatIlearnwhenIplaysportsishowtostaystrongevenintoughsituations.在我看來，我從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)中學(xué)到的最重要的東西是如何在困難的情況下保持強(qiáng)壯。[高考典例](2024·新高考全國卷Ⅰ)假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：(1)你完成的作品；(2)你的感想。注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。DearChris，I'mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua?滿分作文第一步：“五定”審題，“三段”謀篇定體裁電子郵件定時(shí)態(tài)陳述過去的經(jīng)歷用一般過去時(shí)；表達(dá)感受可用一般過去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)定人稱第?一□二□三人稱為主定要點(diǎn),定結(jié)構(gòu)三段謀篇第一段開篇點(diǎn)題表明寫信的目的：分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷；概括介紹這次經(jīng)歷第二段3個(gè)要點(diǎn)缺一不可1．簡要介紹背景；2．詳細(xì)介紹自己完成的作品；3．表達(dá)自己的感想第三段巧妙收尾表達(dá)希望及期待?滿分作文第二步：斟酌詞句，話題表達(dá)成就亮點(diǎn)1．我們被要求畫出給我們留下最深刻印象的東西。(被動(dòng)語態(tài)＋what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)_____________________________________________________________________________2．我的繪畫主要是關(guān)于一個(gè)開心的場景，孩子們?cè)诰G草地上玩得很開心。(where引導(dǎo)定語從句)Mypicturewasmainlyabout_________________________________________________________________.3．孩子們又跑又跳，臉上掛著燦爛的笑容。(with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))Thechildrenwererunningandjumping,________________________________．4．運(yùn)用所學(xué)的各種繪畫技能，我不僅展示了生命的活力，還展示了人與自然的和諧關(guān)系。(動(dòng)詞ing形式作狀語＋“notonly...butalso...”結(jié)構(gòu))______________________________,Ishowed___________________________________________．5．這堂美術(shù)課給我留下了深刻的印象，它總是提醒我生活充滿了美好。(which引導(dǎo)定語從句)Theartclassleftalastingimpressiononme_________________________________________________．?滿分作文第三步：巧妙過渡，完美成篇高考英語高頻句式一句多譯50句150例一句多譯(1)1.我叫李華，來自中國，一名在倫敦參加暑期課程的交換生。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________2.我能勝任這個(gè)職位，理由如下。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________3.比賽將于周五下午三點(diǎn)舉行,五點(diǎn)結(jié)束。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________4.比賽的細(xì)節(jié)如下。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________5.比賽機(jī)會(huì)難得你可不容錯(cuò)過。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(2)6.盼望你積極參加比賽。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________7.很高興得知你要參加這個(gè)漢語成語大賽。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________8.首先，建議你從現(xiàn)在起多練習(xí)說漢語。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________9.咱們何時(shí)何地見面切磋表演的細(xì)節(jié)？①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________10.祝愿你演講比賽獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(3)11.如果你能考慮我的申請(qǐng)不勝感激。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________12.如果有什么我能幫忙的，請(qǐng)隨時(shí)告訴我。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________13.為了激發(fā)學(xué)生對(duì)英語的興趣，將舉辦一場英語演講比賽。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________14.三歲以下孩子是否需要買票？①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________15.得知貴公司招聘英語導(dǎo)游，我特此寫信應(yīng)聘該職位。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(4)16.當(dāng)我以為我把鑰匙弄丟的時(shí)候，我嚇?biāo)懒恕＂賍____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________17.我們?cè)趺茨芸朔@些困難呢?①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________18.我成為醫(yī)生的夢(mèng)想終于實(shí)現(xiàn)了。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________19.現(xiàn)在，我的家鄉(xiāng)再也不是10年前的景象了。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________20.老師的一席話深深地打動(dòng)了我,我決心更加努力地學(xué)習(xí)英語。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(5)21.他不僅是我們的老師,還是我們的朋友。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________22.他的成功歸功于他受過良好的教育。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________23.他把一生都獻(xiàn)給了那些貧困的孩子。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________24.海洋的味道，讓我想起了童年。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________25.不知道該如何跟同學(xué)們相處，她感到有些迷茫。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(6)26.她驚奇地發(fā)現(xiàn)幾乎所有的鄰居都來了。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________27.聽到這個(gè)消,息,她陷入極度的悲傷之中。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________28.凱西一看到熟悉的字跡,便熱淚盈框。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________29.能代表我校學(xué)生在這里發(fā)言,我感到非常榮幸。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________30.我們應(yīng)該采取行動(dòng)來保護(hù)環(huán)境，這是至關(guān)重要的。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(7)31.良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣有助于提高我們的學(xué)習(xí)效率。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________32.我們要鼓勵(lì)青少年培養(yǎng)自己的興趣愛好。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________33.我們要關(guān)注社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問題，增強(qiáng)社會(huì)責(zé)任感。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________34.由于沒有公共汽車，我們只好步行回家。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________35.他們馬上動(dòng)身去尋找那失蹤的孩子。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(8)36.你應(yīng)該為你那些無禮的話向她道歉。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________37.在強(qiáng)光下讀書會(huì)對(duì)你的眼睛造成傷害。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________38.我們要倡導(dǎo)綠色生活方式，減少能源消耗。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________39.我寧愿呆在家里也不愿去電影院。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________40.眾所周知，臺(tái)灣是中國的一部分。①_____________________________________________________________________________②_____________________________________________________________________________③_____________________________________________________________________________一句多譯(9)41.英語演講比賽結(jié)果很成功。①_____________________________________________________________________________②____________________________________